① 驱动型作文万能句子
我记得高中的时候,每次写正直、民族,屈原就要跳几百次江。每次写返璞归真,陶渊明每天就要采花。每次写处理成败得失,项羽就要经常自刎。你都写烦了,你怎么保证老师看不烦?
你要做的很简单,网络“用烂了的作文典故”,看看自己平时都用过多少,以后避免这样的雷区。你会说“这都是老师让我们背的啊!”,那好,一句话回答你“既然都要花时间背,为什么不选个更好的?”
下面我们来分析一下“你为什么写不好作文”。
*审题粗心,写跑题。这是最致命的,第一句就没在点儿上,后面的就更甭提了。
*对所谈论的话题没有正确深刻的认识,或者发表了一些偏激和消极的看法。
*平时阅读量少,生活阅历浅,无法对所谈话题深入主动的议论,说白了就是凑想法。
*典故不新颖,也就是前面我们刚说的那个问题。所有的材料都是千篇一律,老师早就读腻了,看了前几个字就知道你要写什么,完全失去了写作的意义。
*情感不丰富,没有直扎人心的话,都是一些小学生的感慨。
*语言单调变化少,词语不高级,没有让人眼前一亮的感觉。
*书写差,老师一看就晕,甚至看都不想看。
你中了多少条?
听说写记叙文把开头写好分数就高了
为什么说记叙文好写,是因为它的内容更贴近生活,让你的写作范围更广。你的老师是不是总是说要写好作文的开头,她这么说就对了。确实,作文的开头就是一张脸,大家都喜欢长得好看的人,所以你的开头一定要让人觉得“我还愿意继续读下去”。
《母亲节的礼物》中开头是这样写的
那天,鲜花店门口贴了一张大红告示:母亲节鲜花预定。哦!母亲节快到了,我该为母亲准备礼物了。
看完这段话,我的疑问很多。作者是第一次为母亲准备礼物吗?他是大人还是孩子?他口中的礼物是花吗?他和他妈妈的关系好吗?他是想买个东西还是想自己亲手做一个?如果他是孩子的话那他的资金够吗?其实还有很多,就不一一说了。只是想告诉你,开头(第一句话)很重要,它决定着读者对一篇文章的兴趣与期待。
《思念并没有结束》中开头是这样写的
孤星残月,天地仿佛凝固了。星在流泪。人,在静思。月,孤独地挂在天边。弯弯的月牙又勾起我无限的思念。
这篇文章的开头精彩在第一个字“孤”上,和题目很搭配。虽然开头没有说具体是什么事,但是你却能知道是关于什么事儿,这就是它的成功之处。无非就是一件关于思念亲人或故乡的事。
换种写法就厉害了
我先给你出一道题,把下面这段话改成一个有细节、有情节的故事。
公交车刚经过一个站台,上了许多乘客。一位老奶奶刚要做到空位上,却被一个年轻人抢占了座位。
变身后
“现在是乘车高峰,请乘客注意安全,不要拥挤……”公交车刚停靠一站台,“哗啦”一下挤上了许多乘客。乘客们纷纷涌向空座位。一位老奶奶刚颤颤巍巍地移到靠窗户的一个空座位旁,一位染着黄发、嘴里叼着香烟的年轻人,“腾”的一声抢在老奶奶的前面,他翘起了二郎腿,得意地向老人瞥了一眼。老奶奶无奈的站在他旁边,扶着扶手,瘦瘦的身子在车厢内摇晃不停。
怎么样,你现在是不是想揍那个年轻人一顿?这就是写作的魅力,可以让一段没有感情的描述变成让你身临其境的故事。所谓的“变身”就是“升格”,让一段话读起来有感情,有血有肉,而不是单纯的叙述一遍。
我来帮你把万能开头段分类
*排比造势式
成熟是一种明亮二不刺眼的光辉,一种圆润位不腻耳的音响,一种不需要对别人察言观色的从容,一种终于停止了向周围申诉求告的大气,以后总会不留哄闹的微笑,一种洗刷了偏激的淡漠,一种无须声张的厚实,一种并不陡峭的高度。
*比兴入题式
熟透的麦子低着头,那是在叫我们谦逊;一群蚂蚁能抬走骨头,那是在教我们团结;温柔的水滴能穿透岩石,那是再教我们坚韧;蜜蜂在花丛中忙碌,那是在教我们辛勤。
*引用名言式
书是良药,刘向说:“书犹药也,善读可以医愚”;书是益友,臧克家说:“读过一本书,像交了一位益友”;书是窗户,高尔基说:“每一本书,都在我面前打开了一扇窗户”。
*题记
一切生命无所谓卑微高贵,当春天到来时,他们享受着同等的幸福。
现在开始,要知道自己比较擅长用哪一种,不要等到考试的时候再现想,那样的作文质量不会太高,分数也不会太高。记住,考场上只有灵机一动给文章添彩的可能,没有临时凑句子的时间。
议论文凑字数的核心在于论点。
你可以按照“是什么,为什么,怎么办”的思路。“是什么”就是阐释分论点,将你的分论点写到第一句话,这样做可以使阅卷老师一目了然,第一时间找到分论点。“为什么”指的是分析与分论点有关的现状、原因、影响。“怎么办”指的是提出相应的对策。很多时候同一件事情从不同的方面说就有不同的观点。例如限制购买车辆,单独写出来是一件很简单的事情,也不需要很多字数。但是如果从政府、上班族、汽车生产者、汽车销售商等多个角度去考虑和落笔,文章就丰富了,字数也上去了。
咱们来算算,论证一个分论点,你把现状、原因、影响、对策各写上60字左右的话,那字数就有240字左右了。三个分论点写下来就是720字,再加上开头、结尾各写100至150字,那字数很容易就凑够了,你还在愁什么呢?
如果想不出论点怎么办?正说和反说。
一个观点,乃至一件事情,再怎样肯定都会有正反两个方面。一方面是说一个事情的利和弊;另一方面是说人们的态度是支持还是反对。在字数凑不够的时候,如果能够在支持一方的同时,也能给反方向予以分析并进行反驳,那你的文章内容就会更加丰富,逻辑也完整了,字数自然不用担心。
最后,还有一个不是方法的方法,就是注意总结,很多同学在写最后的一段的时候以为就是走个形式,空喊一下就完成。其实不然,总结段更应该是要回顾整个文章,然后强调自己的观点。在回顾整个文章的时候,要比主体段更简略,更有侧重,更加精炼。如果你重视了最后一段的内容,文章不论从完整程度上还是字数上都会大大受益。
传说中的万能句
这应该是你最喜欢的一个环节了吧,别问我为什么知道,我也是这么过来的,因为懒,都想背现成的。
1. 关于……,人们各有不同的观点。一些人认为……,一些人认为……。
2. 俗话说(常言道)……,这是老一辈人的经历,但是在今天,它仍然适用。
3. 现在, ……, 给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。 首先, ……; 其次, ……;更为糟糕的是……。
4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一 面。
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,如果不妥善处理将会变得越来越严重。
8. ……已成为人们关注的热门话题, 特别是在年轻人当中, 将引发激烈的辩论。
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处, 但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
10. 根据图表或数字可以看出……,很显然……,但又是为什么呢?
作文没你想的那么难,如果你连写800字都这么困难,那人家写书的人头发岂不是要掉光了。凡事都要讲究方式方法,掌握不好窍门当然比别人亏。
所以,多点套路,多点分数。来源/网络
② 适合用在作文里的万能句子高中生
给买一份中枢,中枢上有这方面的东西,看看就知道了
③ 高中语文作文万能句子
高中作文万能的句子,我觉得你就是阐明那种有正能量的句子和自己的观点
④ 高考语文作文的优美万能语句
写得很美的作文开头和结尾,还有相应的技巧,高考语文写作用得上。
一:首尾相应结构严谨
例如:
1、(开头)在城市尽头,没有繁华的街市,闪亮的霓虹;在城市的尽头,只有破旧的棚户区,有饱经生活风霜的生命;在城市的尽头、有他们这样一群人。
(结尾)太阳从地平线上升起,照亮了城市的尽头,照亮了他们的生活。
2、(开头)站在塞纳河畔,可以触摸巴黎时尚而又典雅的脉搏;身处第五大道、可以感受纽约华丽而又绚烂的气息;漫步银座街头,可以领略东京古老而又现代的文化;停留黄浦江边,可以体味上海兼容而又独特的精神……
(结尾)我在无限的思考中面对都市,触摸它的外壳,也渴望触摸它的灵魂。但愿有朝一日它的内质可以像外壳一样美丽动人,但愿有朝一日那些虚假与轻浮都会变得真实与坚固,但愿是"云销雨霁,彩彻区明",但愿我们可以重新触摸到都市那由内而外的如花般缩放的美丽。
二:画龙点睛
例如:
(开头)怆然的灾难,古来有之。然而历史由古而今谁可曾见过这般振奋人心,撼天动地的团结?《史记》有云:民与民同心,则家安之,君与民同心,则国兴之。在今天,这是人民与人民,人民与国家,国家与世界的携手,何愁家不安,何愁国不兴?
(结尾)青山一道,我们同历风雨,团聚一处。而将五洲四海的人们集汇在-起的纽带,也许,是这样的期望:为天下立心,为生民立命,为往圣续绝学,为万世开太平!
三:自然收束
例如:
(开头)人生,其实就是一次过程,很多事,很多人,失败过,经历过才会懂,才会成熟。当失败来临的时候,不要伤悲,而应该看作是一次成长的机会,一次锻炼的机会。冲过去,会更美好、更灿烂的生活等着你,更会有一番成就感;如果退而不前,那只能迎来更多的失败,更多人生的遗憾。
(结尾)当我们快要走完人生路时,回首这一生,特别是那些困难和失败时,会觉得,或许正是由于这些,丰富了我们的人生,战胜、克服了它们,才让我们的人生更加完美无瑕。
四:引用诗歌
例如:
流光容易把人抛,红了樱桃,绿了芭蕉。走在自己生命路上,有时很难看清自己是否走了弯路。不妨跳出来,调准焦距,才能照出最好生活。
五:妙用修辞
例如:
我们的生活虽不似李白"人生得意须尽欢,千金散尽还复来"的豪迈,但理想让它明亮,奋斗让它真实,收获让它有一片金黄的款款诗意。
用执着打破命运的锁,把生活活出诗意,种下理想,不懈奋斗,相信终会有"雁引愁心去,山衔好月来"的收获!
6.设问式
设问结尾,发人深思。
《米卢与孔明》结尾——为何千年的文化积淀却让我们越发功利与目光短浅?为何我们在现代社会里沐浴着文明,却在心中滋长着狭隘?米卢与孔明,我们的对待又为何如此不公?我们是否也应该重新审视,该怎样对待忘记与铭记?
某考生高考佳作《人生也是一张答卷》结尾——在人生这张大考卷上,问题看似简单,答案看似丰富多彩,但真要交出一份满意的答案,远非想象中那么简单。你会如何作答呢?
《走不倦的人生》结尾——繁忙的人生中,快乐不少,痛苦不多。心态平了,道路自然平。虽然《潇洒走一回》早已退出了流行歌曲排行榜,但生活中,又何妨潇洒走一回呢?
以上佳作都在文章的结尾采用设问的方式,不仅引起人们的深思,还会产生一种强烈的感染力,达到了较好的结尾效果。
7.抒情式
结尾抒情,能表达作者的情感,表明观点、态度,引起读者的共鸣,增强文章的感染力。
《永远的苏武》结尾——壮哉,那永远的苏武!伟哉,那震撼人心的忘记!奇哉,那惊天动地的铭记!雄哉,那一段忘记与铭记的千载颂歌!啊,我们永远的苏武!
以“壮哉”“伟哉”“奇哉”“雄哉”表达对苏武的敬仰赞美之情,有感染力。
《平凡成就伟大》结尾——大地无语,那青松、鲜花、小草和浪花都在向我们招手,我们应时刻铭记:平凡也可成就伟大。
《该忘记的与该铭记的》结尾——让我们忘记该忘记的,铭记该铭记的吧!这是时代赋予我们的神圣使命。
8.后记式
结尾以后记的形式通过形象生动的比喻来倾诉情感,既文采飞扬,又显得含蓄而富有哲理。
如《那鱼那鹰那人》后记——
鱼,终究离不开给予它生命之源的水。
鹰,终究离不开给予它希望之源的天空。
我,始终逃离不了父母和亲人朋友们用爱心编织而成的幸福网……
9.反复式
相同语句反复出现,一唱三叹,回肠荡气。
《一路同行》结尾——忘记与铭记一路同行,带来的是生活赠予的阅历和经验;忘记与铭记一路同行,带来的是人生美丽的收获和付出;忘记与铭记一路同行,这一路我们感到快乐和幸福!
10.对比式
对比式结尾能在鲜明的对比中彰显文章主题。
《与永恒拔河》结尾——在生命的天平上,有人选择个人的荣辱得失,但更有人选择个性的无碍释放、国家的繁荣太平、民族的坚贞气节。而往往是后面这些人,托起了生命的天平,紧握永恒的绳索,在生命与永恒的拔河中,探索永恒的答案。
结尾的方法还有很多,如:比喻式结尾,语言优美,意蕴隽永含蓄;逆转式结尾,结尾突然逆转,出人意料之外,又在情理之中……
⑤ 万能作文句子高中
万能作文句子
1.如果说友谊是一颗常青树,那么,浇灌它的必定是出自心田的清泉;如果说友谊是一朵开不败的鲜花,那么,照耀它的必定是从心中升起的太阳.多少笑声都是友谊唤起的,多少眼泪都是友谊揩干的.友谊的港湾温情脉脉,友谊的清风灌满征帆.友谊不是感情的投资,它不需要股息和分红.
2.毅力,是千里大堤一沙一石的凝聚,一点点地累积,才有前不见头后不见尾的壮丽;毅力,是春蚕吐丝一缕一缕的环绕,一丝丝地坚持,才有破茧而出重见光明的辉煌;毅力,是远航的船的帆,有了帆,船才可以到达成功的彼岸.
3.美是游荡在寒冬中的几点残雪,美是漫步在蓝天上的几缕浮云,美是跳跃在湖面上的一抹夕一阳一,美是回荡在密林中的几声鸟鸣。美是飘浮在蓝天中的白云,美是缠绕在青山脚下的绿水,美是春天小雨打湿了的浅绿,美是秋天田野上的一片金黄。
⑥ 高中作文万能句子
光阴似箭,日月如梭。
⑦ 英语作文高中万能句子
万能英语作文模板
(I)说明原因型
模块(一)
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ).
Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).
To sum up ,the main cause of XX is e to ( 5 ) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).
On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly rece the number of XX .
注释:
(1)用具体数据说明XX现象
(2)原因一
(3)原因二
(4)原因三
(5)指出主要原因
(6)解决建议一
(7)解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays
, there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children
which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75
percentages of parents often complain their children's unreasonable
behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).
Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?
Maybe
the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two
generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes
and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) .
Besides(e to having little in common to talk about , they are not
willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of
modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with
their work or study that they don/'t spare enough time to exchange ideas
).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is e to ( lake of communication and
understanding each other) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should
respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for
their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .
模块(2)
(I)说明原因型
In
recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ). The factors for (
2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover
, ( 5 ) . Especially when ( 6 ) .Indeed, these unique points can be
collected theo remind people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave
just like ( 8 ).
The impact of Television
In recent years , with
the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in
China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused
a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many
parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.
The factors for (parents' worry is that children are inlge in
television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many
programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as
they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show
that excessive watching of television by millions of children has
lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on
children/'s minds are more serious than the effect on children/'s
bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what
programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these unique points can be
connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to
and responsibilities for supervising their children/'s TV viewing ).In
this way ,children will not be influenced too deeply .
模块(3)
(I)说明原因型
Currently,
XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory ---
nothing is more valuable than XX . It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a
result , your dreams will come true . On the contrary, if you (3).
Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan
falls through . No one can deny another fact that (4) .You don't have to
look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (5).
It will exert a profound influence upon (6).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think (7).
注释:
1:XX的第一个优点
2: 支持XX的做法
3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二个优点
5:举例证明优点二
6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:
The importance of self-confidence
Currently,
self-confidence has been the order of the day . This does demonstrate
the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.
It is
clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities). If you (are
full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power to play ,
arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties ),
as a result , your dreams will come true .On the contrary, if you ( have
no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would
ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out
that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that
(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement
when you are dismayed) .
You don't have to look very far to find out
the truth , in respect that we all know (the secret of Madame Curie
lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular) . It
will exert a profound influence upon ( the achievement of one/'s
ambitions ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).
模块(4)
(I)说明原因型
For most of us today ,( 1). From above ,we can find that the reasons why (2) are as follows.
The primary reason ,i think, is (3). Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore ,(7).
注释:
(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措
(2)归纳现状
(3)第一个原因
(4)第二个原因
(5)第三个原因
(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因
(7)我的建议我写的模块(4)的相应的作文,仅供参考
pollution
Most
of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly
serious problem . lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air
.many fish die of poisonous water . thousands of people die from eating
poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore , environmental pollution
should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling ,or bringing
death not only to human beings , but also to wild life .) From above
,we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and
more seriously) are as follows. The primary reason ,I think , is (the
reason of harmful substances into environment . for example ,to prevent
insects ,farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to
have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land ).
second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make
environment polluted badly ). The third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in
the
world . everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from houses
,also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling
pollution ) noted that it's high time that more effective measures
should be taken .Therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the
amount of pollutants from factories . moreover ,in the households ,there
is an obvious need to rece litter and waste . let/'s make our good
efforts ,and the world will be a safer place to live for us ).
模块(5)
(I)说明原因型
These
days we often hear that ( 1 ). It is common that ( 2 ). Why does such
circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).
For another,( 4 ). What is more, since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).
To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should
do something such as ( 7 ) to improve he present situation ,and i do
believe everything will be better in the future .
(1)提出论题
(2)说明现状
(3)理由一
(4)理由二
(5)理由三
(6)理由三引起的后果
(7)解决方法
我写的模块(5)的相应的作文
pollution of environment
??These
days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and
more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is
common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the
all-important food chain has been destroyed .).
??Why does such
circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the
population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been
so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has
influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since ( the
instrial revolution ) ,it is natural that (a great number of factories
have been springing up like mushrooms .The smoke and harmful chemicals
released from factories also pollute the environment ).
??To solve
the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying .We should do something
such as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control
devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the
present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the
future .
作文的开头
一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。
文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种:
1.开门见山,揭示主题
文章一开头,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty
is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and
respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a
"liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的开头:
The
day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus
ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the
sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4.概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头:
People
often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the
world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else,
because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5.介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:
It
was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was
low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school.
Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6.交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的开头:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.