Ⅰ 英语作文点评【七年级水平】
the Great Wall.Wall大写,是打错了吧.
I am second. am改成was
They were so clelicious.我没见过这么拼delicious的......
And some people talked with our about Great Wall.应该加the 吧......
know 的过去式专是knew
think 的过去式是throught
我也属7年级^-^
Ⅱ 英语作文点评 谢谢
功底是有但是少些套路，建议背些模板和常用句型如议论文一般采用三段式模板好点正反对立观点分类阐明最好终结表达自己观点·····
Ⅲ 初中英语作文，求老师纠正点评下~， 谢谢~
I make my mind to study harder for going to Peking University. "下定决心做某事"应该是make up one's mind to do.在原句中加个up.
I'll study harder at school ,read more good books at home,and to make my brain runs more quickly 从语法的角度说，这句有问题。因为回and 是并列连词答，前后要连接相同的结构。要么把 and 后面的to 去掉。要么把and 及前面的逗号去掉。在"at school" " read more good"中间加and.
Ⅳ 英语作文评语大全
依式行文,文笔素源朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
Ⅳ 点评一篇英语作文
1.They thought it was not good for me to watch TV too long.此句应该把too long改成for long time
2.I was angry,I thought they didn't understand me at all.逗号后边应该加and
总体上来说语法没有多少错误 但是句法过于简单 单调
Ⅵ 英语作文点评
建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)
Ⅶ 英语作文教师评语
Teachers’ Remarks
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after
final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of
mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the
school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a
good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good
evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a
nice remark.
Ⅷ 英语作文请求点评
以下是你的错误：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正确：started
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正确：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正确：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正确：believe
5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建议：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.
6. They are helpful.
建议：They are indeed helpful to me.
7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建议: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.
8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建议：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.
9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建议: I wish I could master this language in the future.