初中英语作文分析

㈠ 初中英语作文满分是多少分

按照中考的标准来看，初中英语作文满分是20分。

其中给分的标准为：

1、整内篇作文满分20分，容其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分2、内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分；不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

2、所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分；每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分；语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(1)初中英语作文分析扩展阅读

注意切勿出现中式英语：

翻译错误的出现不仅是因为水平有限，而且往往出于思维的惰性。把汉语原文的词语都变成英文词语，按一定顺序串成句子，确实已经让初学者费了不少脑筋。

这时尤其要认识到，写作过程远远没有结束。你还需要注意:词语是否译得恰当，要避免虚假对应，词语间搭配是否合适，要避免照搬汉语搭配，句子结构是否自然，要避免中式英文和翻译腔。

需要说明的是，有一类常见错误这里没有列举，那就是英语单词的拼写问题。因为它属于英语学习的基础内容，与汉译英本身没有直接关系。但大家还是要充分意识到正确拼写的重要，勤查词典，避免此类错误的发生。

㈡ 关于初中英语作文

1、你得单词过关。
2、语法你得理解。
3、多背一些经典的好的句子。
4、多看一些好的写作文章，把大体的轮廓记住，然后写作时进行套用。

㈢ 常考的初中英语作文

我是帮你从文库找的。比较全面，第一份是热点话题，第二份是经典类型。
但是我这些太多了，你邮箱留下我发给你电子稿吧。

第一份：
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要
典型例句
1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in Wenchuan.
2. It’s our ty to do sth It’s our ty to help them.
3.As….as possible We should help them as much as possible.
4.here be….. Here are lots of things we can do.
5.We should keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb+ 形容词 It makes many people homeless.
7. too …..to They are too young to look after themselves
1、汶川大地震:5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。
要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右；词汇参考：地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感动be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自愿做某事volunteer to do sth
参考范文：
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sad. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪灾
去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn’t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：一．询问: 1.他的健康状况；2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他们是否还上学。
二．建议: 1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；2.勤洗手；讲卫生3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜；
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、“5.12”汶川大地震后，某校将开展“人人为灾区孩子献爱心”的主题班会活动，现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：
1.许多孩子地震后不能上学 2.。没有足够的学习用品和衣物 3.每个孩子都应该有上学的权利
4.我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们，比如…… 5.希望他们能尽快重返校园…….
注意：1.可根据要点，适当发挥，（参考词汇：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can） 2.词数：70词左右
参考作文：
Dear students，
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless. Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don’t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
Students’ Union
健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样。典型例句
1. It is very important to keep healthy。 2. How can we keep healthy?
3. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late。
4. We should eat the food healthily。 5. We should do more exercise。
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。
7. I didn’t feel like eating anything。 8. I decided to see the doctor。
9. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
例文： 简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考答案：
All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep ring the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
保持健康的重要性 保持健康的方法 保持健康的结论 (你的看法?)
1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯
How to stay our health /fit?
范文1: Dear boys and girls :
I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle school student, first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games, running ,swimming and jumping rope. Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy. Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thanks!
范文2:Dear boys and girls:
I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food don’t have enough time to sleep. If we want to keep fit, we must keep taking exercise every day .Eat lots of fruit and vegetables .Sleep for about 8 hours a night. Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品 .Early to bed early to rise/get up .Breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air. Keep happy every day. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
3、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用） . 有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
范文：
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
关于环境保护问题: 环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。
典型句子
1. It’s our ty to save waste. 2. As we know , water is very important to man,
3.we can’t live without water. 4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. 5.But some people don’t care about it . 6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution
7. It’s our ty to protect our environment。 8. It is very important to take care of our environment。 9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a stbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。 15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It’s everyone’s ty to love and protect the environment.
例文
1.假如你是新华中学的学生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日，我国已经禁止使用塑料袋，你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?
I’m Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their proction. And they can’t decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It’s good for our environment.
So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment.
Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.
2 、 6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛，要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1—3方面进行说明，字数80左右。
Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment ? For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.
“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!

㈣ 初中英语试卷分析

一：考试基本情况
本学期我总共担任四个年级的英语老师，其中五六年级学习的是人教版的第三册，即都是五年级的英语课程。虽然，五六年级的学生已经接触英语学习有两年半的时间了。但是，由于他们的底子不好，对英语的学习态度不够端正不够积极。再来就是平常也很懒的记单词，上课的过程，也不主动获取知识，状态不好，所以，这次的考试的成绩很不理想。五年级参加考试人数为28人、及格率21.4%，平均分41.6分。六年级参加考试人数有28人、及格率比五年级稍微好点46.6%、平均分55.5分。
二、试题分析
本次试题只有读写部分。试题紧扣教材，贴近学生实际生活，很好的考察了学生的运用能力和交流能力，并兼顾了对学生的实践创新能力的考查。题型中有对词汇、句型结构的考查，又有对日常交际用语及初步语法知识的考查。笔试部分没有了纯单词拼写的题目，而是结合实际生活，注重学生对单词在句中运用能力的考查；不同的题型结构有不同的考查目标，各题型的比重适度，赋分合理，保证了在整体上体现考查目标突出语境，照顾知识覆盖面。
三、试卷答题情况分析
通观学生试卷答题情况，学生对于单词的认比句子的应用好。可以看出平时学生在应用句子上下的工夫及少，课堂句型的训练还是不够。因此，学生在选择单词这一项完成的比较理想。但是在涉及到语法点的时候，学生就很容易犯错误了，特别是第三大题的指出一项错误并加以改正。对于上游的学生来说是比较得心应手的，但是中下游的学生基本上不能判断出来，即使是知道哪个地方出现了错误，也不能改正。因此，这是失分率最高的一道题了。第五大题的连词成句，是平时训练最多，但也是学生最容易犯错误的体型了，即使是上游的同学也不容易拿满分。第七和第九道题都属于阅读判断、选择。 从答卷的情 况来看，大部分的学生，都能基本理解文章提供的信息，进行正确的选择，完成的还算不错 。总的来说，就是学生在学习上还不够主动，积极。从另一个方面说也是知识的掌握不牢靠。这也说明了我在教学上还必须做很大的改进，学习运用更多有效的教学方法，帮助学生更好的获取知识，巩固知识。
四、改进措施
1、 教学中要继续突出学生的主体地位。小学五年级还处于英语学习的起始阶段，所以一切教学活动的设计和开展应符合学生的心理和生理特点，遵循语言学习的规律，用多种手段激发学习兴趣，力求使学生在生动活泼的课堂活动中掌握英语基础知识，提高听、说、读、写能力
2、继续加强语音、词汇及句型教学训练。在起始阶段教师一定要使学生过好语音关，使他们牢固掌握音标和英语字母的读音规则，以提高独立学习单词的能力。在词汇教学中教师应灵活多样地运用情景教学法、词义对比法、动作演示法、形象介绍法等方法，使学生将单词的音、形、义有效结合起来，活学活用，在轻松的氛围中学好词汇和句型，为今后进一步的学习
3、 在教学中，把交际能力的培养放在十分突出的位置。小学生模仿能力强，记忆力好，但是活泼好动，教师要利用这一特点，努力激发学生的学习兴趣，采用角色表演、游戏、情景对话、教唱英文歌曲等直观形象的教学方法，结合图片、简笔画、动作表演等教学手段，培养和发展学生的英语
4、深钻教材，充分利用教材，把握教学内容的深度与广度，培养学生的参与意识和语言交际能力;适当进行知识拓展,积累知识，及时巩固，强化训练，有效提高成绩，在积累知识的基础上提高学
5、 教学中尊重学生的个体差异，不放弃任何一个学生，实行分层次教学，根据不同的学情因材施教，在抓两头带中间，使成绩差的学生有信心能“吃好”，尖子生有提升能“吃饱”。
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㈤ 一篇初中英语作文

My Favourite TV Programme
Nowadays the 26th Olympic Games are being held in AtLanta. It is the most popular program all over the world and also my favourite progamme.
In 1992 I was watching the 25th Olympic Games on TV with my schoolmates in China. We cheered at every success the Chinese athelets had. As the Chinese national flag was rising and the national anthem ringing in my ears I was moved to tears just as the medalists. It is the happiest moment for them and for me. I am proud of being a Chinese.
Now that I am in America, things are different. I am so near to the games yet so far away emotionally from those watching around lite. Whenever the Chinese made a mistake, the Americans cheered, which angered me greatly. Each country wants every gold medal. That is understandable. The problem is that they have so much prejudice against our motherland.
I admired Wang Yifu's courage and stamina. He lost his gold medal because of his illness. As soon as he regretfully put down his gun, he fell unconscious and was earried away on a stretcher.
Mo Huilen also lost her gold medal painfully. The young girl was not satisfied with a silver and braved for the gold at the risk of losing it. She showed the true spirit of sportsmanship. I sing in praise of them even if they lose. In my opinion we should praetice what we preach and stick to the Olympic creed that the most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the triumph but the struggle. The essential thing is not to have conquered but to have fought wen.
我最喜欢的电视节目
第26届奥运会正在亚特兰大举行。这是世界上最受欢迎的节日，也是我最喜欢的节日。
1992年，我和同学在中国看了第25届奥运电视节目。我们为中国运动员的每一成就而欢呼。当中国国旗升起、国歌在耳边奏响时，我和获奖者一样激动得流泪。那是我们最幸福的时刻。我为自己是中国人而骄傲。
现在到了美国，情况就不同了。我离比赛那么近，可在感情上却与周围观看的人离得那么远。每当中国人一出错，美国人就叫好，这使我很生气。每个国家都想得金牌，这是可以理解的。问题是他们不应对我们的祖国抱有如此的偏见。
我敬佩王逸夫的勇气和毅力。他因病而痛失金牌。他遗憾地一放下枪，就晕倒了，被人们用担架抬走。
莫慧兰也痛失金牌。这个年轻的姑娘不满足于已到手的银牌，而冒着可能失去奖牌的风险勇敢地去争夺金牌，表现了真正的运动员风格。
我赞美他们，尽管他们没有成功。在我看来，我们应实践奥运精神，重在参与，就像在生活中最重要的不是成功而是奋斗一样。关键不是打胜而是打得好

I like the program"Animal World" . First of all, I like animals, especially small animals. Secondly, the host is able to make the program lively and interesting. Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I haven't known before. I gain some knowledge about animal life, such as, different lives of various kinds of animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the importance of animal protection.
I want to say that animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans. We must keep nature in balance.
Please give your love to animals. Stop killing them.

我喜欢“动物世界”这个节目。首先，我喜欢动物，尤其是小动物。第二，主持人把节目办得既生动又有趣。另一方面，通过这个节目，我知道了许多以前不知道的关于动物生活方面的事情，例如不同动物的不同生活习惯，人与动物之间、人与自然之间的关系，还有保护动物的意义。
我想说的是，动物是自然的一部分，它们与人类不可分割，我们必须保持生态平衡。
请把你们的爱给它们吧，不要杀害它们。

"Animal World" is my favorite program. First of all, I like animals,especially small animals. Secondly, the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting. Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I haven't known before. I gain some knowledge about animal
life such as different lives of different animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the meaning of animal protection.
Now I understand animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans. We must keep nature in balance so that we will have a good life in the future.
Let's love animals. Never do any harm to them.

“动物世界”是我最喜欢的电视节目。首先，我喜欢动物，尤其是小动物；第二，主持人把节目办得既生动又有趣；第三，通过这个节目，我知道了许多以前不知道的事情，获得了一些动物生活方面的知识。例如，不同动物的不同生活习惯，人与动物之间、人与自然之间的关系，还有保护动物的意义。
现在我懂得了，动物像我们一样是自然的一部分，它们与人类不可分割。我们必须保持生态平衡，才能使我们将来的生活更好。
热爱动物吧，不要再伤害它们。

Sports in Our School
Everyone in our college goes in for sports. Every morning after we get up we do morning exercises and we do exercises again ring the long break. We only have one P.E. class a week, but we do physical training every afternoon. The most popular sport seems to be basketball. Another popular game is football. The girls like playing badminton. And volleyball is also liked by many of us when the weather is warm.
Besides ball games, many of us are keen on track and field events. Every term we hold a sports meet.
We have school teams of basketball, volleyball and football. We often have friendly matches with teams from other schools. Whenever there is an important match at the Nangchang Stadium, you ’ re sure to find many of our schoolmates and teachers among the spectators. In short, we all love sports, and we train regularly to keep fit for work, study, and the defence of our country.

第一个：Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention
近来，...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。

第二个：Along with the rapid growth of ...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.
随着...的快速增长，...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

第三个：From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that...
综上所述，我们能得出如下结论...

第四个：In summary, we can draw the following conclusions ...
考虑到所有的因素，我们意识到...

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㈥ 初中英语作文格式及范文

一、书信格式

1 .信头。指发信人的地址和日期。从信纸的上端中央往右写。第一行写单位名称，第二行写门牌号和路名，第三行写市名、省名、国名，第四行写发信日期。学生写信时第一行写班级名称，第二行写系科名称，第三行写学校名称，第四行写市、省名称，第五行写国家名称，第六行写发信日期。如果是国内信件，国名可以不写。要特别注意英文地址写法顺序是从小单位到大单位。日期的写法有美英之分。英国的写法是：日，月，年，如 10th of October ， 2002 .美国的写法是：月，日，年，如 October 10 ， 2002 .例如：

Xiangyang Middle School （向阳中学）

No . 120 ， Xinhua Road （新华路 120 号）

Cangzhou ， Hebei Province 061001 （沧州市河北省 061001 ）

P . R . of China （中华人民共和国）

October 20 ， 2002 （ 2002 年 10 月 20 日）

2 .信内地址。指收信人的姓名和地址。低于信头 1 — 2 行，从左边开始写。第一行写姓名、头衔，第二行写单位名称，第三行写门牌号及路名，第四行写市、省名称，第五行写国名。写往学校的信，第一行写姓名、头衔，第二行写系科名称，第三行写学校名称，第四行写市名、省名及邮政编码，第五行写国名。商业往来信件及公函必须写信头和信内地址。亲友、熟人之间的信可以不写信内地址，信头处写发信日期就行了。它与信封上收信人姓名、地址完全一样。

3 .称呼。就是对收信人的称呼。信内地址下隔一、二行写称呼，其左侧与信内地址第一行对齐，称呼后面一般用逗号，但正式函件称呼后多用冒号。对不相识的男子，单数常用 Sir ， Dear Sir ，或 My Dear Sir ；复数常用 Dear Sirs 或 Gentlemen .对不相识的女子，单数常用 Madam ， Dear Madam ，或 My Dear Madam ；复数常用 Madams 或 My Dear Madams .对比较熟识的男子，普通称 Dear Mr .。。即可。对比较熟识的女性，普通称 Dear Mrs （或 Miss ）。。。即可。

4 .正文。是书信的主要部分，一般从称呼下方隔一至两行处开始写正文。每段的第一个字母一般要缩进 3 — 5 个字母的空格。正文的内容要表达清楚，语言要简单明了，态度要诚恳礼貌。如果信中涉及的事情不多，可以一段到底，如果要讲的事情多，则可以分成几段，段与段之间常隔 1 — 2 行。

5 .结束语。是写信人对收信人的谦称，写在正文的下面 2 — 3 行处，从信纸中央偏右的地方写起，一般用 Yours （第一个字母大写）。若是亲戚（包括家人），可以写 Your loving son ／ sister ／ brother ／ daughter 等之类的表达法，若是对朋友，可以写 Your friend ；若是对老师，可以写 Your student .

6 .签名。一般写在结束语之下。

二、信封

英文信封的写法与汉语不同。收信人的姓名及地址应写在信封中下部，且先写姓名后写地址。寄信人的姓名及地址应写在信封的左上角，若是普通书信，也可写在信封背面。邮票贴在信封的右上角。在信封上常见的附加说明有“ Urgent （急件）， Express （快件）， Registered （ Regd ）（挂号信）， Airm ail （航空信）等”，要根据实际情况选用。下面是信封的格式：

怎么样，同学们？会用英语写信了吗？做一道中考题练练吧。

（ 2002 河北省）根据提示和要求完成下面短文。

假如你（ Li Lei ）在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友 Jim 从英国给你寄来一件礼物—一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信（ 100 个词左右）表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容：

①向 Jim 问好并对他表示感谢。

②礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。

③告诉 Jim 你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问 Jim 的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。

注意：①信的格式已经给出。②信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。

65Zhonghua Street

Shijiazhuang 050000

Hebei ， China

June 21st ， 2002

Dear Jim ，

How are you ？ ____________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________
范文..
Your friend ，

Li LeiMy dearest Mother,
The mother‘s day is coming and I would like to say "Happy mother‘s day" in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day, I will stay away and can‘t give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself, so don‘t worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can‘t be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother‘s day.
Love,
Your so写作知识辅导——记叙文
Hi ， dear friends .前几次讲的内容你们掌握了吗？这次我要给大家说说初中阶段常见的几种文体——记叙文、描写文、说明文的写法。咱们先说说记叙文吧。

记叙文是以写人、叙事为主要内容的一种文体，也是英语作文中最普遍、最基本的文体。它一般包括两种：事实记叙文和想象记叙文。事实记叙文是写真实事情，常用一般过去时；想象记叙文是写虚拟的故事，常用一般现在时。它们的特点都是通过对人物、事件和景物的描写，表现文章的主题和作者的思想感情。

记叙文写作的基本要求是什么呢？

①要有明确的中心思想。②记叙要清楚明白。③线索要清晰。④要有恰当的叙事角度。⑤选材要详略得当。

具体地说，记叙文写作要把握以下几点：

1 .记叙文所记叙的事件必须相关连。要有开头（ beginning ）、中间（ middle ）和结尾（ end ）。在必要时加入冲突（ conflict ），以使情节曲折，跌宕起伏。一般说来，写记叙文应把握好六个要素： who （何人）、 what （何事）、 when （何时）、 where （何地）、 why （何因）、 how （怎么）。初中阶段多为叙事短文，一般应包括 where ， who ， what 这三个最基本的东西。

2 .写作时观点的掌握非常重要。记叙文常用第一人称或第三人称两种人称记述。用第一人称的角度记叙，使人感到亲切，读者很容易产生身临其境之感，相信真有其事。这种形式常用在写自传、本人的经历或记叙耳闻目睹的事件；用第三人称的角度记叙，使人感到客观。这种形式常用在对重大事件的客观报导，以及记叙他人的经历或事迹。

3 .常见的叙述方式有：①顺叙。按事情发展的顺序或时间顺序进行叙述。②倒叙。把事情的结局或某个突出的片段提到前面叙述，然后再按照事情的顺序叙述下去。③插叙。在叙述过程中，由于某种需要，暂时把叙述的线索中断一下，插入有关的另一叙述。④夹叙夹议。一方面叙述事情，一方面对这件事情加以分析或评论。

请看下面的例文。要求：写一篇题为 Planting Trees 的文章。

Planting Trees

It was fine on March 12 ， 2001 . I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .

We arrived at the hill at eight o'clock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging ， planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e . Among us ， Wang Lin ， our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill ， he worked harder . When he finished his task ， he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work .“ I must learn from him ，” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees ， we smiled happily ， forgetting our tiredness .

这是一篇记叙文，记叙了 2001 年 3 月 12 日上山植树的情况。文章主题鲜明，有条有理。 when （何时）、 where （何地）、 who （何人）、 what （何事）等交待的清清楚楚。

描写文是以描写为主要表达方式的文体，所谓描写就是作者用生动、形象的语言对

人物、事物和环境作具体形象的描绘和刻画，描写的主要作用是：①展现美丽的自然景色；②描写人物的外貌和内心世界；③交待人物活动的自然环境和社会环境。 在写作过程中，作者可以按空间位置顺序，由远及近，由上及下，由外到内，由前到后组织材料，也可以按作者视线转移的顺序组织材料，先看到的先写，后看到的后写。描写的基本方法按性质可分为主观描写和客观描写两种。所谓主观描写就是在描写过程中掺入作者自己的感受，寄托自己的主观感情，塑造自己的理想的形象；客观描写就是在描写过程中，作者不带或很少带主观的感情色彩，而只对人物或某物的特征客观地、就事论事进行描写。

请看下面的描述文：

Sunset

In order to see the sunset ， I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill .

At that time ， the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldn't even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill ， the light became a bit yellow . After a short while ， it was completely golden ， then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud covered more and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back .

本文交待了看日落的时间、地点，详细地描写了日落的全过程。文章主要采用了客观描写方法，语言简洁，描写具体、生动。

下面该谈谈说明文了。

说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的文体。它主要用来说明事物的特点、发展变化规律、分析前因后果，目的在于使读者获得必要的信息，使人们对事物有个清晰、完整的了解和认识。说明文分为三种类型：实体事物说明文，包括说明书、广告、解说词等；事理说明文，包括理论性概念解释、书文简介、教材等；文艺性说明文，即要把说明的对象拟人化，进而编成一个故事介绍给读者。

写说明文要注意以下几点：

1 .要抓准特征。对某一事物予以说明，首先要弄清从哪些方面加以说明才能准确地反映被说明的事物。一般说来，说明事物可以从被说明事物的颜色、形状、形态；性质、性能、习性；原因、原理；作用、用途、功能；危害、影响；结构；操作过程；发生、发展的规律等方面着手。但是，每一事物都有它自己的特征，因而显示出了这一事物与其他一事物的根本区别，因此，在说明事物时，不要面面俱到，要抓住事物的特征，这样才能使读者得到具体而深刻的印象。

2 .层次要分明。说明事物要注意条理，否则就不可能说清复杂的事物。例如说明事物的结构，就要按照构造的顺序来说明，或从上到下，或从前到后，或由外到里，或由主到次。又如说明四季的变化，就要按照时间的顺序（ spring ， summer ， autumn ， winter ）来写。

3 .解析要清楚。对各种知识所作的解释，对某种事物所作的说明，都要清楚明白。

4 .表现手法要多样。常见的说明文方法有：①下定义。②举例子。③运用比喻、比拟的方法。④做比较。⑤引用数字。⑥分类别。⑦列图表。

5 .用词要力求准确。引用的数据要绝对可靠，文字要简明扼要，一目了然。这是写说明文在语言文字上的要求：

请看下面的例文：

Hello ， friends ，

You are warmly welcomed to our school . I'm Wu Dong . I'm very glad to be your guide . First ， I'd like to tell you something about our school . It was set up in 1957 . The number of students is over 1200 ， and the teachers about 100 . There are altogether 20classes . Besides the teaching buildings ， we have a library for different kinds of subjects ， and a school-run workshop .

We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon . After classes ， we join in various activities ， such as ball games ， painting ， singing and dancing .

Now let me show you around our school . This way ， please .

本文是一篇说明文，是由学生接待来访的朋友，向人们介绍本校的情况。本文目的明确，材料准确、详实，语言简练，并能按一定的顺序来写，是一篇较好的说明文。

怎么样？会写这几种文体了吗？试着写两篇吧？

1 .记述一次郊游活动（ outing ），包括下列内容：

①时间、地点：上星期六，海边。

②活动内容：去时花了几个小时，到海边后搭帐蓬，在露天生火做饭，讲故事，唱歌，做游戏。

③自己感想：尽管很累，大家玩得很痛快。

要求：用第一人称写，词数 70 左右。

2 .向明中学的“英语角”活动开展得有声有色。请你用英语为一家英文报纸写一篇 80 — 100 字的简讯。

㈦ 如何分析英语作文初中

英语作文初中的很简单吧。
一两个短句加三四个长句。
一般按照总分总
不要语法错误就行了

㈧ 初中英语作文题目

我的初一的所有作文题目：
教科书上和老师布置的，绝对符合你现在的水平。难易适中。

初一上：
1.my favourite star:介绍一位你喜欢的明星（成龙、贝克汉姆、布兰妮）
2.my partner:介绍你的搭档（一般是好朋友）
3.our school:描述你的学校（用写信方式）
4.my family:谈谈你的家庭（有多少人，几个兄弟姐妹，他们的名字，性格.....）
5.Food and drink:make a food and drink poster(写一些健康/不健康食品，还有你喜欢的不喜欢的 蔬菜水果...）
6.self-introction ：自我介绍
7.my weekend :周末做些什么
8.my school day :在学校的一天
9.介绍家庭中的一员
10.my favorite animal
11.my birthday :write about what you usually do for your birthday.

初一下：
1.写一张明信片（格式注意）
2.写一封信告诉你朋友你怎么过节日（格式注意）
3.计划你下个周末
4.my dream school（时态）
5.介绍一个城市
6.my favourite Olympic sport

★7.介绍XX地 到 XX地 的旅程（写乘什么交通工具去的，是否舒服、有趣、流行，票价多少，所用时间。还可以对比 不同交通工具 的“性价比”）——这个比较难。

8.my partner's past life
9.写精卫填海的故事
10.写你祖父母小时的生活
11.a hero
12.write an email to your friend about your holiday.

还有很多可以从上面的基础题目想开去。
这是我的教科书上的。
over.

㈨ 初中英语作文感受

我的感受：初中英语作文能把句子写对就行了，最好多用点短语，至于句型有文采方面，高中作文，大学作文才突出强调！！

㈩ 初中英语作文范文

2013年英语七年级上册作文，请同学们熟读下列范文，然后仿写：
1. My Friend（我的朋友）
I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is 12 years old. Her telephonenumber is 87634966 Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English andChinese. She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening tothe music. Her hobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl.We often help each other. We
are good friends.
2. 假设你是李枚，下面的照片是你的全家福，请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。Hello, everyone! I'm Li Mei. Look! This is myfamily photo. This is my grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is ateacher. He is 36. and my mother is 36, too. Who’s that boy? Oh, heis my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are students.
3. 假设这是TOM的房间，请你用80词左右介绍他的房间。
Look! This is Tom’s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on thebed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. Thecomputer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s baseball? Oh, It’s under the bed. Whatis on the floor? They are Tom’s shoes, socks and computer games. What do youthink of Tom’s room?
4. 介绍你的一日三餐。
Hello, everyone! I don’t like sports, but Ilike eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk,eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I likeFrench fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinner, I like fruits,vegetables and rice.
5. 以My Favorite…为题，写一篇短文
My favorite subject is English. I like itbecause it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a littleEnglish. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk inEnglish. I can see the English movies and read English books. I think it isuseful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
6. My English Teacher（我的英语老师）
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looksvery young. She's about thirty years old, and she wears glasses. She's funny .But she is strict with us. She wants us to study hard, Her lessons areinteresting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons. She isa good teacher, and we all like her.
7. 自我介绍
My name is Wang Ming. My birthday is June 5th.I am Chinese. I am a student. I study very hard. My favorite subject isEnglish. I like it because it is interesting. I can play the piano and thetrumpet, but not very well. I love swimming and I am good at it. Of all kindsof movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. I’m one of thebest students in my class. My teachers all say I am a good student. They alllike me and I like them, too.

七年级英语（下）书面表达
Unit 1
1. 写作话题:本单元以能力为话题，谈论自己或他人的能力。如会干或不会干…….
2.写作题目：假如你们学校幼儿园在暑假期间要招聘临时业余辅导员，请你写一则50词左右的招聘广告。要求：(1)喜欢孩子；（2）会唱，会画，会电脑；（3）工作时间：暑假。
参考作文 Help Wanted
Are you goodwith children? We need help for summer holiday . Can you help kids with sports? Can you help kids with music ?Can you paint ? Can you play computer games ?Come and join us ! Please call Wang Ping at 6367786 . Our e-mail address is [email protected].

Unit 2
1. 写作话题:本单元以日常生活习惯为话题，描述自己或他人的日常生活习惯。
2. 写作题目：根据下面提示写一篇50词左右的短文，介绍自己一天的活动安排情况。
参考作文
I usually getup at 6:30 . Then I have breakfast . At7:10 I go to school . We have fourclasses in the morning ., and three classes in the afternoon . At 4:30 p.m. Igo home . After supper I do my homework . I usually watch TV from 8:00 to9:00.in the evening . Then I go to bed at 10:00 .
Unit 3
1. 写作话题:本单元以如何到某地为话题，描述请某地的方式。
2. 写作题目：根据下面提示写一篇70词左右的短文，张静是我的好朋友，在青岛上学，她的家距离学校约3千米，她通常骑自行车去上学，大约用20分钟，但下雨时她乘出租车，大约5分钟。她的父母在离家8千米的一家医院工作，每天开汽车上班，大约要10分钟。
参考作文
Zhang Jing ismy good friend. She studies in Qing.Her home is about three kilometers from school. She usually rides her bike toschool and it takes her about twenty minutes .But when it rains, she goes toschool by taxi. It takes her only five minutes . Her father and mother bothwork in a hospital. It’s eight kilometers from their home. They take a car towork . It takes them about ten minutes.
Unit 4
1. 写作话题:本单元以规则话题，以祈使句表达规则。
2. 写作题目：根据下面提示写一篇60词左右的短文。Tom 正和他的一个朋友Jim 谈论他所在的学校。Tom 很不喜欢这所学校，原因是这所学校的规章制度太多。要点：（1）保持安静（2）不准吃零食（3）不准乱扔垃圾（4）不准打闹（5）按时上课（6）做好课前准备
参考作文
Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim hedoesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules forus.
1. Keep quiet in the classroom,please.
2. Don’t eat snacks in theclassroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.
3. Don’t throw around.
4. Don’t fight and chase aftereach other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.
5. Please arrive at the class ontime ,don’t be late. Or our teachers will be unhappy.
6. Get ready before the class. Don’tlook for anything after the class begins.
If we break anyone of them, we will be punished.
Unit 5
1. 写作话题:本单元以动物话题，描述自己喜欢的动物及原因。
2. 写作题目：根据下面表格的内容，以A Trip to the Zoo写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下动物园新来的两只动物。

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参考作文
A Trip to theZoo
Welcome to the zoo. There are two newanimals. The panda’s name is Feifei .She is from China .She likes eating bamboo. Sheis lovely and shy. She is only two years old. The other animal is a lion .Hisname is Karl. He is from Africa. He likeseating meat. He is very dangerous and strong. He is three years old .We all like them.
Unit 6
1. 写作话题:本单元以人们正在进行的活动话题，用现在进行时描述自己或他人正在进行的活动。
2. 写作题目：假设你叫魏梅，根据下面提示给你的朋友Helen 写一张明信片，介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么，不少于60词。提示： 现在是星期三晚上八点，你的爷爷和爸爸在下象棋，奶奶和妈妈在看电视，姐姐在房间看书，哥哥在玩电脑游戏。你们很开心。
参考作文
Wednesday
Dear Helen ,
How are you? It’s eight o’clock in theevening now. What are you doing now? People in my family are doing differentthings. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing gamesvery much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my motherare watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having agood time.
See you soon.
Love,
Wei Mei
Unit7
1. 写作话题:本单元人们在各种天气里的活动话题，描述天气情况和人们正在进行的活动。
2. 写作题目：你家乡的气候怎样？你喜欢什么样的气候？以The Weather in My City 为题，写一篇介绍天气的短文。
参考作文
The Weather in My City
Hello, everyone！ I’m from Shengyang. Do you want toknow what the weather is like here? Let me tell you!
Shengyang is in the northeast of China. In spring, the weather ischangeable(多变的).Sometimesit’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold.. Insummer, it’s hot.. But I like it very much because I like swimming. The autumnin Shengyang is very nice. It’s neither too hot nor too cold .In winter, it’svery cold. You can see heavy snow everywhere. I like snow. I like to makesnowman with my friends.
Unit8
1. 写作话题:本单元以问路指路为话题，向他人问路或指路。
2. 写作题目：假设你叫李雷，这个星期天是你的生日，你准备在家举办一个生日聚会，聚会在六点钟开始。你邀请了你的一些朋友参加，Susan 也在其中， 可她不知道去你家的路。你家住在Bridge Street，乘坐六路或八路公共汽车在Bridge Street站下车，下车后直走，然后在第一个十字路口右拐，左边有一个邮局，你家就在邮局的对面，房子是红色的，很容易找到。请根据所给信息给Susan写封邮件。
参考作文
Dear Susan,
ThisSunday is my birthday. I’ll have a birthday at my home. It starts at 6p.m..Would you like to come? I’ll ask some of my friends to come. My home is on Bridge Street. Youcan take a No.6 or No.8 bus, and get off on Bridge Street. Go straight ,and then turnright at the first crossing .You can see a post office on your left. My home isacross from the post office. It is a red house. You won’t miss it..
Yours,
Li Lei
Unit9
1. 写作话题:本单元以外表为话题，描述人的外貌爱好服饰等。
2. 写作题目：根据以下信息用英语写一则寻人启事。Peter,今年四岁，今天在商店和妈妈走散。中等个头，短头发，小圆脸，大眼睛，上身穿白色的T恤，下身穿白裤子，脚穿一双黑色的运动鞋，还背着一个蓝色的小背包，请看到他的顾客把他领到广播室。
参考作文
Ladies and Gentlemen, we are look forPeter. Peter, a four-year-old boy, was missing in the shop. He is of mediumheight, and he has short hair. His face is round, and his eyes are big. Hewears a white T-shirt and white trousers, and a pair of black sports shoes. Andhe has a blue bag. If someone finds him, please bring him into the BroadcastingRoom. His mother is there. Thank you .
Unit10
1. 写作话题:本单元以买东西服务用语为话题，谈论价格数量等。
2. 写作题目：根据以下信息为朱老大饺子屋（ Zhu Laoda Dumpling House ）写一则广告。提示：（1） 本店饺子品种齐全，个大味美（2） 现有两种特价饺子：鸡蛋蔬菜饺子每10
个3元；牛肉饺子每10个5元（3）欢迎光临本店。地址：光明路118号。电话685-8588
参考作文
Zhu Laoda Dumpling House
Would you like to have mplings? At ZhuLaoda Dumpling House ,we have all kinds of mplings and they are all large anddelicious.
Now we have two great specials! Special 1has eggs and vegetables and is just 3 yuan for 10. Special 2 is only 5yuan for10 and has beef and vegetables.
Welcome to our house! The address is No.118 Guangming Road.Our telephone number is 685-8588
Unit11
1. 写作话题:本单元以学校旅行为话题，谈论学校旅行及假期生活，描述过去发生的事情及感受。
2. 写作题目：暑假已经过去，同学们都相互询问时如何度过这个假期的，请你用英语写一封信把你的假期和同学交流一下，向他们描述你的既有意义又充实的假期。提示：（1）坚持运动，锻炼身体（2）多读好书（3）旅游观光（4）当一名志愿者（5）帮助父母。
参考作文
Dear Li Ping,
I had a good time ring my summervacation. Here is my vacation to show you.
First I did sports and learned to ply tabletennis. It’s good for my health. Then I read some books .After that I enjoyedan interesting sight for two weeks. Also, I volunteered to serve in thevolleyball game. Of course, at home I helped my parents do some cooking ,washing and so on.
I think I had a wonderful time ring thevacation . Did you have a nice summer vacation ? P lease tell me !
Tom
Unit12
1. 写作话题:本单元以过去发生话题，谈论学校旅行及假期生活，描述过去发生的事情及感受。
2. 写作题目：根据下面提示写短文：上周星期天，刘明贺他的朋友在山脚下野炊。他们中的一些人正在做游戏，一些在跳舞，他们感到很放松。突然，刘明看到一头山羊正在跑。他对此很感兴趣，平且开始追它跑了很长一段时间。当他想起他的朋友们时，他不知道他在哪儿。他迷路了。在那时，一个农夫过来，在他的帮助下，刘明又找到了他的朋友们。他感谢这位农夫平且向你告别。
参考作文
Last Sunday, Liu Ming and his friends wentfor a picnic at the foot of the mountain. Some of them were playing games, somewere dancing , they felt very relaxed. Suddenly, Liu Ming saw a goat running .He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time . When hethought of his friends again. He got lost. At that time, a farmer came. Withhis help ,Liu Ming found his friends again. He thanked the farmer and said:Goodbye” to him.