『壹』 20篇英语作文加意思评语
英语一的小作文考了一篇告示,Directions表示假设,Suppose表示假设。后面这个词表示图书馆的一个馆员。假设你是一个图书馆的馆员,在你们大学,写一个notice告示,大约一百个词,提供给这些新晋被录取的留学生,enrolled表示录取的意思。这个词2006年MBA作文就出现过。工程硕士招收录取情况,新晋被录取的留学生提供一些关于图书馆相关的信息,你应该整洁的写在答题卡上,不要签你的名字,在结尾使用李明代替,不用写地址。
这道题目考的是告示,很多同学可能写成了书信,还有同学反应上了考场,一看李明就写成书信了。很多人在微博上问我,说写成书信会不会不给分?这点大家放心,不会的。书信和告示只是格式有些区别,老师主要还是看的你语言和内容,即使你完全写成书信的方式,最多扣一两分,甚至不一定会扣,还是关键看你的语言写的怎么样,所以大家不过太用担心。
告示题型考过两次了,研究生考试从2005年开始考小作文,其中十年都是书信,2010年英语一考的是告示,招募志愿者。英语二2015年考的是告示,招募志愿者。所以小作文英语一、英语二加起来,一共考了17次,其中15次是书信,两次是告示。这种题型大家应该不陌生,比方在新东方面授班、强化班我们讲过2010年那篇告示,在精讲精炼班,我们讲过2015年英语二那篇告示,在最后的冲刺班、点题班我都提供告示的范文,大家如果认真听过课,不管是面授班还是网络课程,应该觉得不难写。
这篇文章我们知道告示的格式,首先第一行应该写一个Notice,放在第一行正中央,第一个字母大写,不要点点,因为这不是一个句子。下面应该写日期,像今天是12月26号,如果基础不太好的话,你可以使用缩写,12月可以使用Dec.,第一个字母D大写,后面来一个点表示缩写,26逗号2015,2015不要点点,中间正文,正文写一段到三段都可以。但是建议大家最好还是写成三段,最后来一个落款,题目要求落款写李明,就写李明就可以,不能出现自己的真实姓名。
告示的格式包括四个部分,就是标题、日期、正文、落款,上文说过,即使你格式写错了也没关系,最多扣一到两分,关键还是看你的语言,你的内容和题目是不是沾边。这道题目首先write之后是提纲。第一点提纲,就是提供一些关于图书馆相关的的信息,关于图书馆,考研作文考过。2007年考研作文,考的就是给图书馆写一封信,关于改进服务,提出你的建议,很多同学背了那篇作文,这篇文章其实可以使用,不是很难。
这个题目表面上看只有部分提纲,但你应该展开,首先第一段可以做一个声明,说我是一个图书馆的管理员。下面说明自己的写作目的,其实还是可以按照书信的那种方式去写,后面写这个告示就是为了告诉大家我们图书馆的一些相关信息。
『贰』 英语作文教师评语
Teachers’ Remarks
In my school,our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after
final exam.And then I have to bring it to my parents.Our head teacher will put our scores of
mid-term exam and final exam on it.And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the
school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct.In order to have a
good winter holiday,I have to make my parents happy.So I always try my best to earn a good
evaluation from my head teacher.In front of him,I am always a good boy.So,I always have a
nice remark.
『叁』 小学英语作文的评语跟小学语文的评语有什么不同
这个,英语作文一般不想语文写得那么详细。
『肆』 英语作文点评
建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词,there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)
『伍』 英语作文评语大全
依式行文,文笔素源朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
『陆』 请评价一篇英语作文(小学六年级)
A fire
At about 10p.m.When the fire broke out at Grand View Court on Caine Road. We don't KNOW the cause of the fire .200 firemen helped TO fight the fire. Two of firemen were hurt and two of residents were killed. They used Three helicopterS and nine ladders.The firemen put out the fire at about 1:00am
(Good.)
『柒』 小学生优秀英语作文精选(5篇)
英语作文是学好英语关键,小学阶段是培养英语写作能力的关键期。因此,小编为大家准备了10篇小学英语的范文,大家要记得收藏哦!
1
My dog 我的狗
I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years.(简单介绍) DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth.(外观)My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?(表明态度,反问)
【参考翻译】
我有一只狗。我的狗的名字叫嘟嘟。嘟嘟9岁。嘟嘟胖。它穿着一件白色外套。嘟嘟有两个大眼睛和两个小耳朵。它有一个短嘴。我的狗是聪明的。我喜欢我的狗。你喜欢吗?
2
City 城市
This is Beijing .It’s in the north of china .It’s got fourteen million people .It’s very big .There is a very famous wall in Beijing .The Great Wall.
It’s about six thousand seven hundred kilometers. And there is a famous square in the middle of Beijing it’s beautiful .(There be 句型,需记忆)It’s Tian’an men square .
I like Beijing .I want to go to Beijing one day.(I want to句型,需记忆)
【参考翻译】
北京,在中国的北方,它拥有一千四百万人口。它是一个大城市。有一个非常有名的墙,是长城。
它有六千七百公里。在北京的中心有一个非常漂亮的广场,它是天安门广场。
我喜欢北京,希望有一天我可以去那里。
3
My home 我的家
My home is on the first floor. There are two bedrooms, a kitchen and a living room. I’m a child. I have a nice bedroom. In my bedroom, there is bedroom, a closet, an air- conditioner and so on. My closet is green. My bed is blue. I love my bedroom very much.(总分的结构,先写大环境再写小环境)
【参考翻译】
我家是在一楼。有两间卧室,一间厨房和一间客厅。我是一个孩子。我有一个很好的卧室。在我的卧室里有衣柜,空调机等。我的衣柜是绿色的。我的床是蓝色的。我非常喜欢我的卧室。
4
My Classroom 我的教室
My classroom is nice and big . There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What color are the fans? (设问句形式好)They are blue. At the corner, there is a shelf, many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much.
This is my classroom, it is very nice.(首尾呼应) I like my classroom very much. Do you have a nice classroom, too?
【参考翻译】
我的教室很舒适很大。有40套课桌椅在教室里。墙壁上的两块黑板。并有两张图片。我的教室有11盏灯和12个风扇。是什么颜色的风扇?他们是蓝色的。在角落,有一个架子,很多书都在架子上。我喜欢的书非常多。
这是我的课堂,这是非常好的。我喜欢我的课堂非常多。你是否也有一个很好的教室呢?
5
My bedroom 我的小卧室
I have a small bedroom, it's on the third floor in my house. There is a small bed, a nice wardrobe and a small table in my room. The bed is on the left side of the table. The wardrobe is on the right, it is very beautiful. there is a lamp and a clock on the table, the lamp is green, the clock looks like an orange, it’s smart.(注意空间的描述)
My bedroom is small, but it’s very comfortable.
【参考翻译】
我有一个小卧室,它在我家的三楼。房间里有一张小床,一个非常好的衣柜和一个小桌子。床在桌子的左边。衣柜在房间的右边。房间非常的漂亮。桌子上有一个台灯和一个闹钟。台灯是绿色的,闹钟是橘黄色的,非常时尚。
我的房间很小,但是它很舒适。
『捌』 关于英语作文的点评,100字左右的英语点评即可
Michael Jackson's death, I am very sorry. I believe that many people like him, will. But like you said, because he is a shining star. His case will affect many people. I believe that many years later, when people mention the name Michael Jackson, he will become a much-told story.
『玖』 英语作文教师的评语
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.