① 英语作文 我喜欢的城市 泰国高中
如果你需要的话其实在网络文库中是有很多这样的范文，只要自己多多的写一点就可以，或者事模仿写也是可以的
② 麻烦帮忙看下这篇高中英语作文的错误和写的不好的地方，最好是高中英语老师
这位同学好。我认真地反复阅读了你的英语书面表达，给出以下个人看法。
对于高中生的作文而言，总体来说你写得还行的，提升空间很大。行文流畅，书写认真，卷面较整洁。会使用一些连接词或短语将每个段落自然连接，文章基本能包含原文的要点。
不足之处：
整篇文章读起来感到英语句子写得不太地道，主要是很多词汇及短语受汉语的影响用错了。这个问题扣分严重。建议你要多背一些文章常用的短语和句型。
如：1)收到你的来信，习惯和正确表达是hear from you 你却用了receive your letter
2）should do something 应该做某事 你写成should better get.......多了 better should是情态动词，情态动词后面要加动词原形 这一错误扣分较重。因为情态动词是初中阶段就已要求掌握的语法内容。
3） get home 正确 但get the home of .......不正确。 改成get to your friend'home
4.用筷子的用介词 with 你写成 by
文章里高级词汇不多，基本都是简易的词和词组。这个问题有待解决。尽量多用高中课本的词和词组写英语书面表达。老师打分低的原因与这个问题也有关系。例如。到达 你可以
用reach, arrive 去表达。
3. 句子中出现语法错误，个别错误导致扣分很严重。
1）engjoy象表示喜欢，爱好，感觉和拥有的词 like,love/have/own 一样，它不可以用于进行时态。你用了When you are enjoying your meal, 这句扣分会重。可以改为eating your meal 。
2）It needs full of your patience and love. 这句话有点中式英语的感觉了。读者看不懂。
可以改成 You need all your patience do it with love.（前面你提到，你叫你的朋友别忘记买礼物。to do it 意思为买礼物） ）
3）第二段里面有... don't forget to buy ...改为remember to buy 更符合英语的习惯表达。
记得买礼物买比不要忘记买礼物语气显得更有礼貌一些。
4. 在这篇书面表达里，你用了两个并列句，两个简单句，一个祈使句和一个复合句。没有出现使用非谓语动词短语来代替一个从句的句子。高考优秀作文里，常常会看到这类句子。如果你的六个句子把其中一个句子变为含有非谓语动词的短语的简单句会更佳。
非谓语动词有三类： to do sth. 不定式；doing sth.动名词；分词
1） 现在分词doing sth. 2. done过去·分词
如：Hearing the news, she cried.当她听到这个消息时，她哭了。
它是简单句。（现在分词短语做时间状语）
= When she heard the news, she cried.
它是复合句（含有when引导的时间状语从句）
毫无疑问，最后我提到的非谓语动词的运用，对你来说要求太高了，但可以作为今后努力的方向。
世上无难事，只要肯登攀！其实很多学生的作文语法错误比你多，有的甚至连你是，我是，他是都分不清楚的，你的问题是前面的英语基础不够扎实，课后没有把该记的单词，词组和语法要点理解和牢记。建议你一面增加词汇量，复习所学过的语法内容，一面多写多练。你一定会学有所获！
③ 高中英语作文万能模板(带翻译)
作文常用句式总结开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为．．．
People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,…. If we want to do something… , it is essential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.
很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….
Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.
I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….
在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
Why did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
如何连接
强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.
比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example. Except (for), to illustrate.
时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, ring, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
可能
presumably, probably, perhaps.
解释
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.
递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
让步
although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately. whereas
原因
for this reason, e to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.
总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
其他
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,
图表作文常用句型
As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
The graph shows that… 图表显示…
As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…
From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…
All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…
The increase of …. In the city has reached to 20%. ….在这个城市的增长已达到20%.
In 1985, the number remained the same. 1985年,这个数字保持不变.
There was a graal decline in 1989. 1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.
④ 高中英语作文,城市地铁开始运行
Hangzhou Subway Fare 2 8 yuan
Route No. 1 of Hangzhou Subway is finally approaching its official opening. Last week the pricing policy was announced on a press release from Hangzhou Subway with cost ranges from 2 yuan to maximum 8 yuan.
At an initial fare of 2 yuan, you can travel for 4 kilometres, then 1 yuan for every 4 kilometres within a distance of 4-12km, every 1 yuan for 6 kilometres within a distance of 12-24km, every 1 yuan for 8 kilometres within a distance of over 24km. That is, the fare range for Hangzhou Subway will be starting from 2 yuan and having an 8 yuan maximum per person. The pricing policy suits for the route 1 as well as all the oncoming routes of Hangzhou Subway.
Concession fare for the following passengers:
1. Retired Party leaders, incapacitated ex-service personnel (including veterans and policemen), personnel with vision impairment and other severe disabilities can travel for free with a valid concession card.
2. Seniors over 70 can travel for free at inter-peak periods and pay half fare at peak hours (7:00am-8:30am and 5:00pm-6:30pm).
3. Senior citizens of Hangzhou between 60-70 pay half fare at all times with a valid seniors card.
4. Children below 1.3m can travel for free if accompanied by an alt with a valid ticket.
5. Primary and High school students and tertiary students pay half fare at all times with a valid student pass.
All seniors over 60 of Chinese nationality can travel at concession fare on Hangzhou Subway.
Following smartcards can be used on the subway:
Smartcards like Citizenship Card and Public Transport IC card can be used on Hangzhou Subway if the application is activated. 9% discount will be offered each time if you pay by card.
Other cards like Z-card for the rental of public bikes and mobile phone citizen card are not accepted on the subway e to technical reasons.
Public Transport IC cards for regular alt (A-card), student concession (B-card), seniors concession (C-card), normal card (D-card), Chengshitong card (T-card), parking card and seniors free travel card can all be used on Hangzhou Subway.
A new smartcard named “Hangzhou Tong” has been released at the beginning of October for all public transport including Hangzhou Subway, buses, taxis, water-buses and public bikes. It is accepted at car parking and designated commercial outlets like convenience stores or restaurants. Hangzhou Tong Cards can be purchased at Longxiangqiao Interchange, major citizen card sales points and all branches of Agricultural Bank and Instrial & Commercial Bank in the city.
Special cards of Hangzhou Tong such as Transport Only card, student concession, seniors concession, disability concession etc. will be released in the future.
Hangzhou Subway Card offer 9% discount
The service provider of Hangzhou Subway is also selling a rechargeable card for passengers to enjoy 9% discount. Be reminded that all these cards including Hangzhou Tong need to be activated for application on Hangzhou Subway first.
After discount, the actual fare for Hangzhou Subway is starting from 1.82 yuan per person to 7.28 yuan maximum. Compared with the pricing system in Guangzhou and Shenzhen, it’ 0.08 yuan cheaper at the starting rate and 0.32 yuan cheaper at the further distance.
⑤ 高中英语作文的精彩句子
1、Its Chinese name "Qing Ming" literally means "Clear Brightness," hinting at its importance as a celebration of Spring. Similar to the spring festivals of other cultures, Tomb Sweeping Day celebrates the rebirth of nature, while marking the beginning of the planting season and other outdoor activities.
清明节，又叫踏青节，正是春光明媚草木吐绿的时节，也正是人们春游的好时候，所以古人有清明踏青，并开展一系列体育活动的的习俗。直到今天，清明节祭拜祖先，悼念已逝的亲人的习俗仍很盛行。
2、In ancient times, people celebrated Qing Ming Jie with dancing, singing, picnics, and kite flying. Colored boiled eggs would be broken to symbolize the opening of life.
3、One theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.
每年的公历四月五日前后为清明节，是二十四节气之一。今年的清明节是4月4日。在二十四个节气中，既是节气又是节日的只有清明。清明节是我国传统节日，也是最重要的祭祀节日。按照旧的习俗，祭祀(扫墓)时，人们要携带酒食果品、纸钱等物品到墓地，将食物供祭在亲人墓前，再将纸钱焚化，为坟墓培上新土，折几枝嫩绿的新枝插在坟上，然后叩头行礼祭拜，最后吃掉酒食回家。
清明节，又叫踏青节，正是春光明媚草木吐绿的时节，也正是人们春游的好时候，所以古人有清明踏青，并开展一系列体育活动的的习俗。直到今天，清明节祭拜祖先，悼念已逝的亲人的习俗仍很盛行。
Celebrated two weeks after the vernal equinox, Tomb Sweeping Day is one of the few traditional Chinese holidays that follows the solar calendar-- typically falling on April 4, 5, or 6.
Its Chinese name "Qing Ming" literally means "Clear Brightness," hinting at its importance as a celebration of Spring. Similar to the spring festivals of other cultures, Tomb Sweeping Day celebrates the rebirth of nature, while marking the beginning of the planting season and other outdoor activities.
1. Money doesn't grow on trees.
作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)
影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work
产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on
较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one's life
剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity
取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way
采取措施：take effective steps/measures to
控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment
躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge
满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of
补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage
解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon
对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into
把某因素考虑进去：take sth. Into account(consideration), give much thought to
品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth
培养对……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in
经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience
表现出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image
生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice
追求学习/职业：pursue one's academic interest/professional career
学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill
被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example
交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge
发挥/起到重要作用：play an (important/active/great) role/part
逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture
知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience
确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard
到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective
克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty
面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty
阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth
阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of
持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom
发表看法：voice/express one's opinion
持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view
揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of
求得帮助：enlist one's support/help
缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf (between city and country)
把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to
对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to
施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on
重视：assign/attach much importance/significance to
强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on
把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon
提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.
抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity
得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information
有可能：there is (little/much) possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that
展开竞争：compete against/with sb. for the prize/position/control/the mastery of
开展运动：conct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage) a (vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising) campaign (for/against)
对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me
带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint
献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career
大不（没什么）两样：make much(little/no) difference
真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …
改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life
建立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice
进行调查/执行任务：conct/carry out an study/task/experiment
辞去工作/学习：leave/quit one's job/work/school
参加考试/竞赛等：enter (for) the examination/contest, race
参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion
影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude
进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals
实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)
减轻压力/紧张：rece/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension
提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership
提高技术/能力：sharpen (increase/improve/enhance/boost) one's skill/ability
加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of
随着生活节奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society
开阔眼界/兴趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge) one's mental horizons
有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of
有助于解决问题：go a long way to(towards) solving the problem
迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune
把时间花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.
利用机会/技术：make (full/better) use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent
把知识/经验运用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use
取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in
充分发挥潜力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability
充满激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion for
这些都好好的
⑥ 高中英语作文范文关于高中生活与初中的比较
My senior high school life is very lively. i like it very much. The new school is much larger than my junior school. And there are more students, too. The students look much friendier and happier. It seems that they study much harder than those in my junior school. There is another differece here. The teachers here seem to be kind and nice but in fact they are very strict with us. i think i'll have a good time at my senior high school.
⑦ 2篇高中英语作文（120字左右）
我老师介绍的一篇高中英语范文(临时翻译的，献丑了）：
My Neighborhood（我的社区）
My neighborhood is located in the north part of the city. （我的社区在这座城市的北部。）The transportation is convenient as it's only a few minutes' walk to the bus or subway station.（那里的交通非常便利，因为从那里到公交或者地铁站，只需要走几分钟的路。）It's eauipped with a great many facilities for study and entertainment such as the library and the sports centre.（我的社区配套了大量的公共设施用于学习和娱乐，比如图书馆和体育中心。） Besides,（除此之外，）large supermarkets and shopping malls are within the walking dietance of my neighborhood.（我的社区距离大型超市和购物大厦只有几步路的距离。）There are security guards walking around day and night to make sure the neighborhood is safe.（为了保证社区的安全，保安们早晚不停地巡逻。）What impresses me most is that the people living in here are enthusiastic and helpful.（最使我印象深刻的是，住在这里的群众都很热情并且乐于助人。）The only thing I'll complain about is that sometimes it is a little bit noisy as it's close to the city centre.（我唯一能抱怨的就是，因为它靠近市中心所以有点吵。）
To sum up,（总的来说，）my neighborhood is so impressive that once you move in,you"ll never want to move out.（我的社区令人印象很深刻，以至于只要你搬了进来，你就绝不想搬走。）
⑧ 英语作文（高中水准）
susan has been dreaming to take a trip in lijiang for a long time.these days she got a chance by accidence.she was out of joy. she would like invite her good friend mary to go with her,but mary refused at the begining.altough mary is stubborn,she finally be persuaded by susan.ring this trip ,both of them have a good time .besides,they get know each other better.especially for susan ,she find that mary actually is easy to get along with ,