Ⅰ 剑桥雅思7test2大作文题目意思
备考雅思写作，烤鸭们可以利用雅思写作模板去进行，小编想要告诉烤鸭们，在写作的时候有两个要点需要你们去注意，就是必须要涵盖题目的所有要求，二就是在写作的时候必须要做到结构清楚合理。
涵盖题目所有要求
举个例子，有两幅图分别显示的是1985年到1995年日本民海外游的数量变化，以及还有其中去澳大利亚旅游的人数的变化。在写这篇文章时，建议考生应先将十年来日本民海外游的数量变化趋势以及去澳大利亚的人数变化趋势概括出来，然后再去进行细化，看其趋势的变化到底有没有起伏、如何表现等，然后再对两组数据进行比较，后再去进行总结，这样的话才能充分涵盖题目的要求。如果只是进行简单的罗列堆砌，不做任何的分析、概括和比较，那么扣分就显得难以避免了。
因此，考生在复习备考阶段，切记不要去盲目地练写文章，要多的是要去训练提高信息归类和概括能力，当然雅思写作模板也是少不了的。
二、结构清楚合理
结构清楚，其实从文章整体来说是讲篇文章起码要有开头、中间和结尾，另外每个中间段要有句主题句总整段，下面依次展开，后必须要有句话收尾。结构合理其实主要是指文章的论证结构合理，特别是针对作文，立场定要做到非常清晰。在备考雅思时，考生必须要注意文章结构的建立，力求能够做到结构清楚、以及还有论证比例合理。
想要拿到雅思写作的，那么烤鸭们必须学会利用雅思写作模板去进行备考，同时还要注意以上所讲的两个要点。
Ⅱ 请高人帮我分析一下剑桥雅思7 Test 3 （大作文）考官范文 （从词汇，内容和语法）
简单的用词 流畅的语句 很地道 中国人很难做到的........
Ⅲ 剑7作文求意见和修改，哪怕大致看下给个分也好，不剩感激。
首先，结构方面是没有问题的，开头，body段，结尾都很完整。不过建议你把There are plenty of factors contributing to job satisfaction. Moreover, to different type of people, the dominating factors vary from one to another. Several factors are quite common to the majority and shared by large amount of workers. 这几句话放到第一段去，做一个比较完整的开头背景介绍。
语言方面，大的问题没有，可小问题也不少。你可能自己还需要再看一看，修改一下。
说几个比较明显的吧：
1.另外有些地方是不是太绝对了呢？People enjoy working only when they like talking and cooperating with team members. 把only换成almost time...会不会好一点呢？？
2.有些句子是有问题的。Ideally, everyone would like to have a job with high salary, least pressure and working time, and highest reputation,which is not realistic. ...which指的是什么？this thought or this kind of job?
整篇看下来..洋洋洒洒一大篇...写得还不错...应该是5.5左右。
不过好像现在雅思的作文很少考这种形式了...一般都是agree or disagree吧..
Ⅳ 剑桥雅思7写作范文
Nowadays, examinations and tests seem to be pushing students and their teachers harder than ever. As a consequence, there has been an idea suggesting that emphasis on similar tests in schools should be lessened. However, I believe that it's inevitably necessary to rethink about whether we are overestimating the importance of examinations, though proper attention paid to them could be of great assistance to teachers and students themselves.
Complaints are often made by students about negative effects of tests and examinations, which, as they've usually described, are obstacles in their way to successfully completing their academic objectives. Therefore, a student's overall academic performance should not only be judged on their scores but also in many ways such as their average performance ring the whole year. But such complaints are not only from students but also a number of teachers who think that examinations would put a restriction in terms of their way of teaching. For example, in an exam-oriented country, teachers in schools wouldn't usually be expected to teach anything other than that set by the standard curriculum, which could narrow the views of the students and the way they think about the world.
But are we confident to say that there should be no tests? The answer is clearly negative. As no way of examining one's abilities more objective than exams is yet invented, exams, however,remain an important role in the process of ecation. What is now needed to be done is that a balance should be made between exams&tests and general learning, where exams can bring the most benefits and the least adverse effect.
In conclusion, I generally agree with the idea that emphasis on testing today is way over their expected extent and that it should be lessened. However, proper emphasis is definitely necessary and could have a positive influence on students and teachers.
无忧雅思网上有下载 另外，建议你还是看满分或者考官范文比较好。毕竟7分不是完美作文，而且我们不可能完全模仿。万一学到的刚好是被扣分的地方怎么办？？？
Ⅳ 关于剑7作文的参考价值
我建议你不要一上来就看剑7··毕竟这书刚出来··又只有四篇TASK··要好好利用这宝贵的最新真题
首先我觉得LZ应该去买本稍便宜的剑4来做或者更便宜的剑1··虽然题目老，但毕竟是曾经的真题··做完这些老题至少就对雅思考题有个初步印象了··然后再来做剑7
既然是真题，那么一定要按雅思正式考试的时间标准来做，就拿写作来说一定先自己一小时内把真题大小作文都写完，然后趁自己的思维还热乎赶紧看后面的范文，看看考官的范文到底好在哪里，跟自己的文章思路做下对比，揣摩下考官为什么要这样写，这样的行文思路有什么好处，自己以后能不能这样写。这是思路。
然后看考官的用词，你会发现所有剑系列的范文用词都很简单，偶尔一个大词那也要仔细研究·然后掌握（其实这样的词很少），关键是要掌握考官用词的准确度，这个才是精髓，时间长了你会发现其实有时候考官是在刻意用简单的词汇，但妙就妙在简单的词汇被用的恰到好处，这个是最需要学习的
最后是句型，我想这是整篇范文最出彩的地方，拿自己的文章跟范文比，真的会觉得自己句型的幼稚，范文都是精挑细选出来的，好多句型都太巧妙了，最精炼简洁的句子表达出最完整准确的意思，这是一个好句型的标准，然而范文毕竟很少，我们要做的就是用这些范文来激发我们的思维，举一反三，自己沿着范文的思路来创造自己的文字。
其实不管你要考多少分，实在的讲剑系列这套书就足够了，能把这套书消化好，多少分都没有问题
Ⅵ 剑桥雅思7系列第一模块大作文，麻烦给了修改意见，带中文翻译
1：语法错误就太多了啊。。。if a person does not work hard.:2：还有句子表达也很不清晰。这个第二段没看明内白要表达啥。容。:3：With thedevelopment of society,more and more folks take part in a kind of activitieswhich are sports and music.这个句子忠实英文口味太重了。建议可以该为Economic development provided more opportunities for people to enjoy sports or music after work.(或者这句不是你想要表达的意思)
上面只是大概扫了一眼，这篇作文还有很多要润色的啊
Ⅶ ILETS 雅思 剑7 test2 大作文 求评分 求拍砖！多谢各位高手~~~
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Ⅷ 谁写过雅思剑7tast4大作文跪求！
IELTS剑桥雅思剑4剑5剑6剑7内容：
需要说明是：剑一到剑六是按出版时间命名的版，剑权一最早，剑六最新，至于剑七稍后介绍。
剑一：模拟题，且出版太老，基本无实际指导意义。
剑二：真题，但体型比较老，如听力长句填空这样的题型已经不考，但是仍然有很多经典题型，可以不买，但如果准备时间长推荐购买。
剑三至剑四：真题，题型基本对于雅思考试有所指导。
剑五至剑六：真题，切题型最新，有很强的指导意义，认真练习研究。
剑七：并非真的是剑桥大学ESOL考试委员会编着，而是环球雅思，最多算是模拟指导书，千万别当真题花太多时间研究。
Ⅸ 剑7作文题目翻译，how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers’怎么译
1.如何落实所有工人对工作满意度的期望？