❶ 托福小作文题型有哪些
新托福由四部分组成，分别是阅读(Reading)、听力(Listening)、口试(Speaking)、写作(Writing)。每部分满分30分，整个试题满分120分。阅读(Reading)：
有三篇文章, 每篇文章对应有12-14道试题，均为选择题。除了最后一道试题之外，其他试题都是针对文章的某一部分提问，试题的出现顺序与文章的段落顺序一致。最后一题针对整篇文章提问，要求考生从多条选择项中挑选若干项对全文进行总结或归纳。新一代托福阅读文章的篇幅比老托福阅读文章的篇幅略长，难度也有所增加。这部分持续时间为1小时。听力(Listening)：
由两篇较长的校园情景对话和四篇课堂演讲组成，课堂演讲每篇长约5分钟。由于是机考，考生在听录音资料之前无法得知试题。在播放录音资料时，电脑屏幕上会显示相应的背景图片。考生可以在听音过程中记笔记。考生不能复查、修改已递交的答案。这个部分持续大约50分钟。 听力水平无疑是新托福成功与否的关键，除阅读外，无论哪一部分都离不开“听”。对于中国考生来说，听力却正是薄弱环节。目前中国考生提高听力的其中一条有效途径是“听写法”，即把相关听力材料拿来精听，并把听到的内容逐句写下来。也有专门用来练习新托福听写的软件，如新托福听写王软件。“听写法”提高听力的一个缺点是，刚开始练习时可能比较费时。 口试(Speaking)：
把TSE(Test of Spoken English)融合在新托福中。然而与现行的TSE相比又有较大改动。这个部分共有6题，持续约20分钟。 第一、二题要求考生就某一话题阐述自己的观点。 第三、四题要求考生首先在45秒内阅读一段短文，随后短文隐去，播放一段与短文有关的对话或课堂演讲。最后，要求考生根据先前阅读的短文和播放的对话或课堂演讲回答相关问题，考生有30秒钟的准备时间，然后进行60秒钟的回答。例如，短文中描述了对学校体育馆进行扩建的两种方案，对话中一位同学阐述了自己的立场，即赞成哪种方案，反对哪种方案，并列举了若干理由。要求考生叙述对话中同学的立场并解释他/她列举了哪些理由支持这一观点。第五、六题要求考生听一段校园情景对话或课堂演讲，然后回答相关问题。考生有20秒钟的准备时间，之后进行60秒钟的回答。例如，先播放一段市场学课堂演讲，演讲中教授列举了两种市场调查的方法，然后要求考生使用课堂演讲中的观点和例子描述教授列举出的两种市场调查的方法。 考生可以在听音过程中记笔记以帮助答题。在准备和答题时，屏幕上会显示倒计时的时钟。写作(Writing)：
要求考生在1小时内完成两篇作文。 其中一篇类似于老托福的写作，要求考生在30分钟内就某一话题阐述自己的观点，字数要求为300字以上。另一篇则要求考生首先阅读一篇文章，五分钟以后，文章隐去，播放一段与文章有关的课堂演讲。课堂演讲列举了一些论据反驳文章中的论点、论据。随后要求考生在20分钟内写一篇作文，总结课堂演讲的论点、论据，并陈述这些论点、论据是如何反驳文章的论点、论据的，字数要求为150字到225字之间。在写作时，文章会重新显示在屏幕上。这篇作文不要求考生阐述自己的观点。 加试：
一般实际考试中，考生往往会在听力或阅读部分碰到加试试题，也有可能阅读、听力两部分同时被加试。加试部分不算分(有人说会算分,说是抽几题给分)，但考生事先并不知道哪一部分是加试部分(有的时候经典加试是能判断出来的)，所以应该认真对待。 题目可以去留学党论坛找一下。
❷ 托福185作文练习题 10~20题 的 例子
给你几篇高分范文，希望有一定启发
Topic: 10
There is a humorous saying in English – “The grass is always greener on the other side of the
valley”. The saying is used ironically to point out that there is a temptation in us all to insist that
others are more fortunate than we are. This is nowhere more true than on the question of luck and
hard work. When faced with the “bad times”, we often find comfort in the idea that we are
special in our degree of misfortune. I feel that such an attitude is negative, and that it can bring
only further misfortune.
Many famously successful people have begun from small origins. Mao was the son of a (modestly
prosperous) peasant; the explorer Captain Cook was so poor that, as a child, he had to work by
day and study by night; many of the affluent Americans of today are the children of the poor
immigrants of yesterday. Beethoven, it should be remembered, became deaf before the end of his
career. There are many, many more people who have also made genuine, though Jess spectacular,
successes against the odds.
Within his own terms, a person who is born into poverty in India is a great success if he manages
to own a house in later life. Poverty cannot be reced by merely complaining and blaming
others: no matter how guilty other people are, each indivial must reach out to success for
himself. Indeed, some economists believe that the world operates by what they call “the rule of
the jungle”. They believe that in economics a person a1ways attempts to gain profit from his
neighbor: that given the chance the poor man would quickly make himself rich by trading to his
own advantage.
Also, it is presumptuous to judge another according to his or her apparent fortune. No man can
ever truly understand the sufferings of his neighbor. A man who appears comfortably rich may
have suffered elsewhere in his life - through the death of a loved one, for example. Retired
businessmen have often worked long hours in their youth. Surely, it must be wiser to respect
achievement than to deny that anyone has achieved good in the world.
To rely on notions of luck - to believe that life is a kind of lottery - is an attempt to escape reality.
Paradoxically, the only time a person can claim that luck is more important than work is when he
reflects on his own success. Because of that modesty, the great man then becomes even greater.
Topic: 11
Both libraries and sports activities are welcome in the universities. Students could study in the
libraries to build up their knowledge. They could get the information that they cannot get in the
class. But knowledge is not all for the students. They are willing to have sports frequently.
Anyone cannot go on his study without a healthy body. Unfortunately, if we have limited
resources to put on the construction and operation of libraries or sport activites, how could we
make a decision? I disagree with the statement that universities should give the same amount of
money to sports activities as libraries.
The librarie is necessary part of a university. We cannot imagine a university without any library.
Student would like to find books in the library to facilitate their study. The time in the class is very
limited. So they could get more academic information in the library. On the other hand, students
could enjoy sports outside the campus. Many people just like running, which doesn't need any
investment.
Considering the operation of the establishments, we should certainly pay more to run a library
than the sports activities. With the developement of the informationalization of the world, more
and more books are published. In order to possess those books, universities must pay a lot money
on them. While running a stadium is much more easier.
Because university is a place to study, it is natural that more students go to the library. Whenever
you go to the library, you will see diligent students studying there. Especially in the examination
period, you can hardly find a vacant seat.
To sum up, sports activities are very important to students health, but if there is limited money, we
have to spend more money on libraries than on sports activities. Because libraries are necessities
of a university, which need a large amount of money to run, and many students enjoy them.
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 12
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. By visiting museums, one can learn
as much as possible about those places where one visit in a shout time.
First of all, one can learn about the history of the places in museums. Today, almost every town in
the world has realized the importance to set up their own museums to exhibit historic items which
belong to their past. When we visit a new place, we can get almost everything we need about its
history in the museums. Last summer vacation, I and several classmates traveled to the city of
Taian. At the foot of Mount Tai located a museum about General Feng Yuxiang. After visiting it,
we knew a lot about Mr. Feng and what he did to the local people. He was respected by there
people, and so did us.
Second, visiting museums gives information about local culture. After a long exhausting journey,
what a good thing to sit in the museum theatre watching a performance about local culture. When
we travel to a new place, especially for a limited time when you cannot go everywhere, so you
can get as much information as possible about local culture by visiting museums.
What is more, visiting museums gives us a good chance to make new friends. Surely, there are a
lot of people will visit museums like us. We can chat with them about what we see and what we
hear. At the end of visiting, we sit together to have a cup of coffee and we become good friends.
By exchanging telephone number, we can also keep in touch with each other late. What a good
experience!
In a word, more and more people visit museums when they travel to new places because they
want to get more pleasure from their journey.
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 12
Do you like to visit a museum when you visit a new place? I'd love to. Because it's an easy way to
know the history, the custom, the people, the culture and natural environment there.
When you arrive at a place, ask which kind of museum they have. To do this you can know what
the people there like. For example, if there are a lot of are museums, the people must like art very
much. So you can enjoy an atmosphere of art there.
If there is a history museum, it's the best way to know the history of this area. It can tell you when
the area was built, whether it has a long history, who came here first, what happened in this
area—maybe a revolution or a war, what changed the people's life there, and so on. If you want to
know the people there, you must know the history there. Because it's history what affect people's
behavior, emotion and custom. If there is a special festival, maybe it's related with a historical
affair.
Want to visit a nature museum? It's a good idea. There must be introction about the natural
environment there. Why to know that? We can get information about why people there eat this
kind of food, maybe it's because of the weather. And where is the best place to visit in this area.
Go to visit an art museum. Which kind of art you find there? Modern art? Then it may be a
modern place. Classical art? It may be a city with a long history. Maybe you can enjoy an old way
of life there.
Don't forget the science museum. It can tell you how the people developed their technology,
whether the science there is well developed. Do people use new technology to develop this area?
If not, it's the best explanation to the question why people there fall behind with people in other
areas.
So go to a museum, it can tell you about a new place more than you think.
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 13
In the modern life now, more and more people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. They
think that will save time so that they can have enough time to do their jobs. But I still prefer to
prepare and eat food at home.
There several reasons. First of all, you can save money if you eat at home. In general, to get
profit, the restaurants ask for more money on the same food you cook at home. That is the waste
of money. To save money, you may prefer to prepare you food at home with less money.
The second, usually, the food in the restaurants is not what you are expecting. you may dislike the
way the restaurant cook the same dishes as you do at home. For example, the other day, I asked
for potato in a restaurant. After the first bite, I thought it was so awful. My mom never cooked
such potato for me! The bad lunch even destroyed my mood in that day.
The third, if you prepare food by yourself, you will have a happy mood when you eat it, regardless
of the real savor of the food. It goes a saying well "labor brings happiness".In addition, you can
change your method of cooking considering your taste on that day.
The reasons above may can answer why I prefer to eat food at home. Cooking even has become
my hobby now. Come back and have your delicious food, I'm sure you will like it!:)
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 13
Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food for themseves, but others have a
negative attitude that they prefer to eat out side in restaurant or at foodstands. As far as I am
concerned, it is better to eat at home. There are numerous reasons why I hold on, and I would
explore only a few primary ones here.
I t cannot be denied that there is some advantage to the first points. Firstly, the condition of the
restaurant is more comfortable and the food of there is more delicious usually. Then eating in
restaurant become a good choice of getting together with friends. In addition, eat out side take
people convenience and shortcut. For the people who are busy on working, prepare food for
themseves will make troubles and waste time. For the young person who are not able to cook for
themseves, eat at foodstands resolve the problem.
The main reason for my propensity for eating at home is that eat at home and prepare food for
themseves can enhance the emotion among the member of family and bring pleasure to everyone.
In modern society, everyday, parents are busy on working and sociality, and children are busy on
study and playing. For convenience and saving time, they offten chioce eat out side. Then there
left so few time of them to share. Sharing the dinner at home is not only eating but also provide a
chance to talking, making joke and exchange feeling with each other. Maybe someone think that
make dinner is a heavy burden. But I believe prepare food with family is also a happy, likely have
dinner with family is a pleasure. With your sisters and brothers help your mother do a meal in
weekend, and enjoy the food ,and you will feel everything is so nice.
Another reason is that I think that eat at home is more economical than go to restaurant and save
money. Using the same number of money you can buy more and better food from shop than from
restaurant. You can do nourishing meal for your children rather than the junk food from
foodstands. And you can spend the saved money on many the other way, such as buy new clothes
and see a movie.
General speaking, eat out side is comfortable and convenience to our live, while eat at home can
share happy with family. Taking into account of all these, I prefer to prepare food for ourseves
and eat at home.
Topic: 14
Nowadays, it becomes a heatedly debated topic whether a student should be required to attend
classes or not. Some people hold the opinion that the university students should be required to go
to classes. However, others have a negative attitude. If I were forced to agree with one of the two
positions, I would stand behind the latter. My Arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that going to classes should be optional for university students without
reservation since I believe a student is supposed to attend those classes he or she is interested in.
Naturally, interest is the mother of study. When attracted by a wonderful class, you will attend it
unforcedly and immediately. Nevertheless, not all classes are so popular in reality and no one has
interest in every class. Consequently, you should select the classes you like to attend for a higher
efficiency of studying. It can be given a good example, in current universities, many excellent
students almost have the record of skipping some boring and undesirable classes.
Another reason that can be seen by every one is that it contributes to build a university student's
ability of learning by himself or herself. Obviously, by choosing good and meaningful classes,
giving up those undesirable, or studying these classes you can not attend somehow by yourself,
you will learn how to distribute your study time and acquire the capability of learning by yourself,
which is tremendously important to modern university students. Many celebrities, such as Bill
Gates, have such powerful ability by not attending some classes when they were in university.
Admittedly, being required to attend classes has advantages of disciplining the student, however,
considering most university students can discipline themselves on their own, I believe it is
sagacious to agree with that going to classes should be optional for college or university students.
Topic: 15
Neighbours are the people who live near us, and their behaviour influence our daily life. Good
neighbours can make us feel comfortable and give us many help, and everyone will benefit from a
good relationship among neighbours. In my point of view, these are three conspicuous aspects of
the qualities of a good neighbours.
One of the most important characteristic of good neighbours is that they have a good living habit
and are friendly to others. A person with bad habit will affect your daily life. For example,
children are most likely to be influnced by bad neighbors and carry on bad habits. On the other
hand, being friendly is also an important nature of good neighbors. If neighbours are unfriendly,
they are hard to approach and difficult to get along with.
Another important aspect of of good neighbors is that they should be willing to help others. In our
daily life, emergency situations may happen, and we may encounter difficulties which can not be
resolved by ourselves. At this time, the quickest help we can get is probably from our neighbors.
To some degree, neighbours are as important as relatives to us, because they could provide the
immediat help. In the same way, a neighbour who likes to help others will get help in return. Help
each others can form a friendly and harmonious relationship among the neighbours.
All in all, a good neighbour is someone who have a good living habit, is friendly and is willing to
help others. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that a good
relationship among neighbours need the maintenance from us.
Topic: 16
I can see both advantages and disadvantages to having a new restaurant built in our neighborhood.
I'm worried about traffic and how it will affect our neighborhood. However, I think that it will
benefit local businesses and increase appreciation for our neighborhood. Overall, I think it is a
good idea.
Traffic congestion is always a concern when you build something new. Our streets are narrow,
with parking on both sides. More cars traveling through the neighborhood could cause a lot of
congestion. Traffic means parking problems, too. Our neighborhood has very few garages
attached to the houses. Most of us depend on finding a space to park on the street. If the new
restaurant is built, we'll be competing for those spaces with the restaurant's patrons. Plus, if the
restaurant offers valet parking, it'll be even worse. Valet parkers work in teams to grab every
possible space available on the street.
I'm also concerned about the type of patrons this new restaurant will bring into our neighborhood.
A family restaurant wouldn't be a problem. However, if it's going have a bar and dancing, then
there could be problems. The restaurant would stay open later, and people leaving the restaurant
might be drunk. Who wouldn't worry about rowdy customers staggering around our neighborhood
in the early morning hours, looking for their cars?
I have to admit, though, there are advantages to a new restaurant. Our neighborhood could
certainly use the jobs the restaurant would provide. Not only that, the money neighborhood
residents would earn there would likely be spent at other neighborhood businesses. This would
give a boost to those businesses and make our neighborhood more prosperous.
A new restaurant would also attract a lot of people to our neighborhood. They could see what a
nice area this is to live. That might attract new residents to the neighborhood. That would be a
good thing, because we've been losing residents to the suburbs the last couple of years.
There are a lot of details to consider, but all in all, I support the idea of this new restaurant in our
neighborhood.
❸ 托福作文怎么练啊
被描述的对象可能是极其普通的，比如一个事件，一个人或是一个动物，也可能是虚构的事物。对于这一类型的文章，写的时候应该讲求生动，注意挖掘平凡事物中的有趣的，新奇的地方，选取一些特别的东西来写，给出足够确切的描述性细节。如果描述一件事情，你就要“看见”他们在动，“听到”他们在说，这样会让你的描写栩栩如生。组织结构要清晰。介绍部分应从总体到细节，最后以主题句收尾。用几段来开展和描述你的主题，结尾再次点题或结束这件事。
解释事物是什么的文章就是定义文。有些事物有具体明确的意义，例如玻璃、书本或树木。 但有一些文章就很抽象，比如城市，尊敬，爱等等，不同的人会有不同的观点。这样的主题就比较适合新托福考试你可以按照以下步骤定义：功用----解释它能做什么，或者它怎样做；结构----它是怎样构成的；分析----将它与其他事物做比较，说明他们的不同之处。
类比文和对比文开篇讨论两个观点或两个事物那些方面是相似的，然后讨论两个观点和两个事物为何不同 对于这一类的文章，可以按照以下步骤来写：第一段：引入；第二段：哪些相似；第三段：哪些不同；第四段：结尾；先说明第一个观点，然后说明第二个。首先将两种观点进行对比和比较，然后再完整地解释第一个观点，然后是第二个。这也是很多学生首先尝试的写法。
议论文旨在发表一个观点，然后运用论据去论证这一观点使读者信服。同时，驳斥对立观点使读者相信你的确说的有道理。议论文可以是理性的论证，也可以是感性的呼吁。但这两个方面不应该混淆，全文要保持统一的论述风格。你的所有论证都应得出一个符合逻辑的结论。 如果你论证的主题倡导做一些改变，就提供一些可行的解决方法。论点就是你的个人观点，长度为一句话。 它是你这篇文章的基础，引导你的全篇文章，并引领读者去理解你的文章。在没有清晰的主题之前不要动笔。 将所有可能的论证方法都考虑到，并按照重要性和与文章主题相关性进行排序。
❹ 托福写作题目大概有几种题型呢
托福写作题目大概有两种题型：Agree/disagree的类型或者是prefer的类型。
1）Agree/disagree的题目特点：
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement?
Itis often not a good thing to move to a new town or a new county because of thelost of old friends.
Usespecific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
这类题目包括三部分的要求：①是否同意以下观点（文章要表明观点）；②题目的主要内容要表达出来（切题）；③文章要解释原因，并且有充分的论据支撑。
2）prefer类型的题目特点：
Somepeople think to watch a movie in a cinema (theater) is better, but others thinkat home is better, which one do you prefer?
这样的题目其实是一种对比的类型，想要突出自身的正确性的话，可以从突出自身有点出发，或者是突出对方的缺点。
❺ 托福写作怎么进行练习
1.托福写作中必会出现“某某某事很重要”的句子，然而很多同学在描述时，却只能想到important....
原句中“It is inevitable for .... to do sth.
”的形式主语句式真的再简单不过了，初中我们都学过，但却一定比你用important高大上了很多~
2.这句话中的inevitable还可以换成如下形容词：
significant， indispensable，crucial.... 它们都是用来表示重要性的~
3. 给到大家两句仿写的句子，一个是关于环保的，一个是关于沟通的，这都是托福写作热门话题：
A. It is crucial for people to take steps to keep theenvironment from
deterioration, like taking public transportation instead ofdriving
cars.(人们必然要采取些措施来防止环境恶化，如多乘坐公共交通工具而不是去开小汽车)
B. It is inevitable for the old to havegeneration gap with their
children.(对老年人来说，不可避免的会和他们的孩子之间有代沟。)
Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on adesert
island.
(许多人对在荒岛上的生活产生了不合实际的看法。)
1.这样简单的句子，当我们看过后翻译成中文自然是手到擒来，而若给你这样一个汉语，你是否能够想到如此翻译呢?
该句中，用picture一词显得十分生动形象，这点是我们可以运用到今后写作中去的~
2.仿写的时候我们直接将 of 后面跟的名词换成我们所写作文的主题相关词即可~
也可将unrealistic换成恰当的形容词
❻ 我想练习托福作文，smartpigai的托福作文练习怎么样
独立写作和综合写作部分smartpigai都提供了不少题目，有推荐的，有自选的。
❼ 托福作文题目
. Some people think that parents should plan their children's leisure time carefully. Other people believe? that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.
2. People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree? with the statement. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
3. People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or? something different Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your choice.
4. Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young alts. Other people think? that friends are the most important influence on young alts. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to) support your position.
TOEFL（The Test of English as a Foreign Language，简称TOEFL），是由美国教育测验服务社（ETS）举办的英语能力考试，全名为“检定非英语为母语者的英语能力考试”，中文音译为“托福”。TOEFL有三种，分别是：纸考、机考和网考，新托福满分是120分。托福复习主要资料为托福机经（又称民间托福答案题库）。TOEFL考试的有效期为两年（从考试日期开始计算）；例如：2003年1月18日参加考试，这次考试成绩的有效期是从2003年1月18日到2005年1月18日。2014年4月5日，英国内政部与美国教育考试服务中心（ETS）合约到期后，不再续约，而英国大学也不将承认其机构下托福和托业的英语语言成绩。
TOEFL，Test of English as a Foreign Language，由美国教育测验服务社( ETS, Ecational Testing Service)在全世界举办，是一种针对母语非英语的人进行的英语水平的考试。TOEFL是出国留学(美国、加拿大)的必备考试成绩，美国和加拿大已有超过2400所大学和学院承认这项考试成绩，规定了申请者的最低TOEFL录取分数线。TOEFL成绩与奖学金的成功率是相关的。
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国外许多政府部门，私人或机构奖学金计划，执照证明机构等也是依据TOEFL成绩来评审接受人的英文程度。在中国，TOEFL亦是英语水平的一种证明，有一些单位(特别是三资企业)采用它衡量应聘者的英语水平。从一九九八年七月起，托福考试在许多国家从传统的纸笔方式转变成电脑方式。但亚洲一些国家，如中国大陆、台湾和香港澳门地区等仍采用原来传统的纸笔方式，暂时不作改变。预计2002年下半年实现计算机化考试。
纸笔考试是由正确答案的数量总和来决定成绩总分，而不管问题的难易。电脑考试则不同，它根据回答问题的质量来给出下一个问题，如果考生回答得正确，电脑将提高问题的难度；如果考生回答错误，电脑将降低问题难度。因此成绩是由正确答案的难度来决定得分，而不是由正确答案的数量。电脑考试的写作一项，考生可以选择打字或书写。 电脑考试的费用：美国及其属地和加拿大为USD，所有其它国家为USD。
❽ 练习托福综合写作的材料
我自己托福考过两次89 和 107
我可以负责任的告诉你总和写作只需要按照OG上那专篇范文，MEERCAT（MEERKAT)那样写，属绝对是GOOD。
综合写作的听力已经很简单了，如果你综合写作的听力你听不懂那你听力怎么做？我第一次听力21分，我都觉得我听综合写作完全没有障碍。去做听写吧，每天90分钟听写老托福的段子，20天你就会有很大的飞跃。
听力的时候笔记是要记的，但是按点记就可以，真的，相信我模仿OG范文就足够了。听力材料肯定是反驳阅读的，按点写，加些关键词就OK了
至于材料，Barron是用来做阅读和听力的，口语写作不要理他。其他材料主要用老托福原来的题。托福不是做题的考试，提高自己英语能力是正道。
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❾ 自己写的一片托福的独立写作，TPO1上的题目，求改！
我没事给你评评吧。
首先，第一段的作用是点题，这个题就是在考什么，sport和social activity是否也需要财力支持，和其他的一样重要，说白了就是sport和social activity很重要，学校要重视还是不重视。
你要做的让考官明确你的观点，其次要简略的说一下为什么，其实就是后面几个小的支持论据的总括。
上来之后可以废话一句引入正题，然后很快说你认为大学应该给学生什么，打个比方，让学生成为一个全面发展的人啦，让学生以后好就业啦，等等。
接着亮自己观点，选择应该用财力支持运动和社会活动，你不需要详细阐述为什么，来个两句就够，比如社会活动可以给学生增加社会阅历，运动对健康有益，这些和classes以及图书馆一样重要，然后总括，学校支持运动和社会活动才会让学生全面发展，或者学习的更好，以后好就业，之类，所以我支持。
评价：说的不客气点，你这个第一段，绕来绕去，基本都是废话，考官看完第一段不知道你要说啥，When people enjoy the benefits brought by the strong financial support of classes and libraries, isn't it necessary that they give some consideration to the disproportionate financial support of sports and social activities? 打那么多字都占用时间，托福考试作文争分夺秒，每一句话都要成为刀子和武器。
第二段大体没什么，就是你写从social facilities中得到健康（直翻），不知道你是笔误还是什么，social facilities是公共设施的意思，我不知道你想说什么，运动馆？还是什么？你要写出来，游泳馆啊，网球场之类的词可以用啊，social facilities范围太大，包含邮局医院银行超市等等，当然也包含运动馆，但是你这里应该是在说学校建立运动场地吧，所以还是直接说的明白点，一目了然了。
后面你在写因为健康所以支持，然后说健康很重要啊，缺少运动设施就怎么样啦……在前面补充一下，学校这么做，是对学生好，是提高学生的健康，不是we should pay more attention in ourselves，是学校应该关注学生的健康，给投资，然后说一下，学生健康就怎么样了，学习更有效率，做运动更开心，等等等，扣住题。
第三段，你说什么公共设施是可以提高学生的交流能力社会能力，你你要说public facilities就得说有什么，还是跟上面那一段的毛病，图书馆也是public facilities，也是social facilities。
然后你要说的是sports和social activity，social activity不仅是社交活动，也是社会活动的意思，范围很广阔，校外实习也算是social activity， 参观图书馆也是social activity，举办晚会也是。
你要说学校建立广场给了学生social activity的场所，也可以，说明白，不要直接写什么Without available places, many passionate events could not be put into effect，然后人家要看你的例子才知道你要说啥，考官阅卷很快的，不看你的例子你这段就废了。
回来，其实这一段最开始，你得先说学校为什么要帮助学生提高这些交流或者social skill？记住，后面的三个小段是用来支持你的观点的，你说了一大堆好处，没有这些设施，学生就学不到，但是一直没说，为什么要提高交流能力社会能力啊？作为中国人你肯定觉得说为什么是废话，因为这不明摆着么，但是写作文，你要有逻辑，你不说就等于没有，学校干嘛要帮助学生提高这些啊，加一句学校支持社会活动可以让学生提高交流的能力，让他们毕业后更有竞争力，更好在职场和人沟通，或者这样帮助学生交到更多朋友，使他们生活更好，或者什么，随便，你自己想，然后说，这对学生来说最重要，所以支持这个和图书馆之类的一样重要，扣题，扣题，一定要绕回中心。
最后一段不说啥了，你这个有点单薄，可以再加一段，用让步来说，在最后一段和第三段中间加一段，说假如学校不给予这些东西财政支持，假如一个学校没有这些东西，只有class和图书馆，那么，学生会变成什么样，比如身体不好，影响学习，比如没有活动场所，鸭梨很大，心情不好，这里可以扯点，最后来一句，没有投资这些既然这么不好，所以投资这个是必须的，为了学生的健康成长balabala……
我觉得，你的写句子能力基本是没有问题的，可以说比一般托福学生的句子还强，基础应该是不错的，也会用连接词和例子，但是你的作文明显是没有逻辑主线，你还不太懂怎么扣题，抓题，怎么写主线。
慢慢来吧，真心的推荐你，直接去拿机经作文练习，TPO上的题目有点过时，有问题还可以问，当然不接受我的评论也是可以的～