『壹』 求中考英语满分作文!!!
示范:My Hobbies(爱好)
I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary.
In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to one's health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five o'clock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy.
At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up. In order to attain these goalsI go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy.
My Family(家庭)
My name is Li Hua. I am from a worker's family. There are six people in my family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my sister and I.
Every member in my family works for his or her own trade①. My grandfather and grandmother are peasants. They do farm work every day in my hometown. My father is a senior engineer. He is now working in Africa, helping to build a power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a middle school. My sister, five years older than I, is a doctor in the People's Hospital of our county. She loves her work and does it well. I am a middle school student.That is my family. All the members in my family live in harmony
SPERRTS(运动)
Sport plays an important role in our daily life. Most of us begin our day with some kind of exercise or sport. Athletics is part of our university curriculum. Many students play on either the departmental or university sports team after a hard day of class.
Some people take sports far too seriously. Some people are only interested in how their favourite sports team does: they don't care much about their country or the rest of the world. These people often get into fights if their team loses.
When I have time for sports there is one that I like more than any other. I find bas ketball both a physical and a mental challenge. Runing, jumping, and shooting, are also enjoyable and healthful sports.
邓亚萍(著名人物)
Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player f table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the 1 l th Asian Games nd the 41st World Table Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic ames she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant chievements with the disadvantage of her Short figure? Her hard work and etermination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
An Interesting Story(有趣的经历)
Long long ago, there was a kind girl living in a small village. Her family was very poor but the girl was happy and she was friendly to everyone.
One day, she met a frog on her way home. The frog was ill and it would die soon. The girl took the frog home and looked after it until the frog got stronger and stronger.
Very soon, the frog grew very very big. So the girl had to build a house for the frog. After a few days, the house was built and it was beautiful. The frog was very happy. The girl and the frog lived happily together.
But one evening, a robber went into the girl's house and he wanted to kill the girl. When the frog knew it, it was very angry. It jumped onto the girl's bed and woke her up. The girl wasn't afraid of the robber. She shouted and when her neighbours heard it, they ran into the girl's house and drove the robber away. The girl was thankful to the frog for saving her.
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『贰』 中考英语满分作文带翻译. 80词左右
all
of
the
children
in
china
like
spring
festival
very
much,但是中国孩子必须在寒假里做作业,以便他们能够记住他们以前学的东西,每个孩子都喜欢寒假!
14中考满分作文the
winter
holiday
we
are
going
to
have
the
winter
holiday.ring
the
holiday
we
will
have
the
spring
festival.so
all
of
the
families
in
china
are
having
a
busy
time.but
children
in
china
have
to
do
the
homework
for
winter
holiday.so
that
the
could
remember
what
they
have
learn
the
year
before.each
of
the
children
likes
winter
holiday.
我们即将放寒假,在寒假期间,我们将要过春节,所以所有中国家庭都十分忙碌,所有的中国孩子都十分喜爱春节,因为他们可以吃很多好吃的食品和得到很多的压岁钱,because
they
can
eat
many
delicious
food
and
get
many
money
『叁』 中考英语满分作文格式
这个的话建议多看一些作文格式,然后背一些经典例句,便于套用的那种。加油。。。
『肆』 中考英语作文怎样才能满分,有没有什么要求或者是评分标准(现在是九年级上) 希望能给一些满分范文
许多考生都有这样的疑问,中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分主城区的同学都能得到分以上,13、14分也稀松平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解
关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是“几家欢喜几家愁”。上海中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着“生活化、学校化”来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如:
2009年题目“I Want to Do something for my School”(我想为学校做的一件事)
2010年题目“I’m Proud of myself”(我为自己感到自豪)
2011年题目“I am a member of _____”(我是…的一员)
2012年题目“A letter to Joe”(给Joe的一封建议信)
2013年题目“How to protect myself”(如何保护自己)
2014年题目“The time next year”(明年此时)
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤(如下图所示),遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
总之,上海中考英语写作的不断变化对于每个同学来说也算是一种福音,因为这种改革的趋势无疑会在某种程度上会促进学生们的英语学习和思维的训练,使考生的英语写作水平和思维能力更上一层楼。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;
简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
小结:了解中考写作部分评分标准,可发现上海中考着重考查的是考生用英语表达意思的能力,其中语法,拼写,大小写和标点符号是扣分要点。要注意的是,根据上述评分标准,即使整篇文章形式上错误连篇,语法,拼写等出错再多,最多扣分也只有总共4分。只要字书写够,三项要点均能覆盖到,写作至少能拿6分。一下也就占到了总分的1/3,由此可见,中考写作拿分其实并不是一件难事。但是想要拿高分也不是一件易事。
中考英语满分作文经典谚语
110. Knowledge makes humble, and ignorance makes proud.
博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。
111. Learn and live.
活着,为了学习。
112. Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.
好人越学越好,坏人越学越坏。
113. Learn not and know not.
不学无术。
114. Learn to walk before you run.
先学走,再学跑。
115. Let bygones be bygones.
过去的就让它过去吧。
116. Let sleeping dogs lie.
别惹麻烦。
117. Let the cat out of the bag.
漏天机。
118. Lies can never changes fact.
谎言终究是谎言。
119. Lies have short legs.
谎言站不长。
『伍』 中考英语满分作文,,要原文主要看字体
『陆』 中考英语满分作文
中考英语满分作文
When I chose to study further, it is because I want to avoid the job pressure, now three years will pass, I come to my cross road again, at this time, I must make my choice, I can’t avoid the pressure anymore. I have already made my future plan, it has two parts。
当我选择深造的时候,是因为我想要避开工作的压力,如今三年即将过去,我又来到了十字路口,这一次,我必须做出决定,我再也不能逃避压力了。我已经制定了将来的计划,那有两部分。
One part of my future plan is that I want to be a teacher. This is my career plan, being a teacher is always my dream, I can pass my knowledge to students, I like to talk to them, I want to lead them to the successful road. So now I must pay attention to the recruit message, I should seize every chance to be a teacher。
我将来计划的其中一部分就是我想要成为一名教师。这是我的职业计划,成为一名教师一直以来都是我的梦想,我能把我的知识传递给我的学生,我喜欢和他们聊天,我想要把他们引导到成功的路上。所以现在我必须要关注招聘信息,应该抓住每一个成为教师的机遇。
The other part of my future plan is that I want to travel around the world. Being a teacher can make me have many vacations, so I can make used of these vacations and to carry out my travel plan. I have heard about many interesting foreign things, so I want to go out and have a look at the world。
我将来计划的另一部分就是我想要环游世界。成为一位教师能让我有多点假期,这样我就可以充分利用这些假期来实现我的旅游计划。我已经听说了很多国外有趣的东西,我想要走出去看一看这个世界。
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『柒』 中考十大英语满分作文,
第一篇:
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题,写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括:
1.地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
【优秀满分范文】
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and rece pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can rece air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
第二篇:
【写作要求】
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享受幸福,请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,可以围绕主题适当展开,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
【优秀满分范文】
Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.
『捌』 近几年中考英语满分作文
中考作文必备的10句谚语
1. Every coin has two sides. 每个硬币都有两面,比喻事物的两面性。
2. The winter is coming and the spring is not far. 冬天已版经临近了权,春天还会远吗?
3. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
4. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
5. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
6. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
7. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
8 Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。
9 Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
『玖』 中考英语满分作文
08年四川乐山中考英语满分作文
从2008年6月1日起,国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋,掀起全国"拒塑"的环保运动。假如你是李华,准备以"What Can We Do for the Environment" 为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含:1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋; 2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本; 3.离开教室应关灯;
4.最好走路或骑自行车上学; 5.简述理由:保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等
注意:1.词数:80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可根据要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名,否则以零分处理。
3.参考词汇:布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello,everyone. I'm Li Hua. It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
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In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening!
参考作文: What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello,everyone. I'm Li Hua. It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best rece pollution and waste.
In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening!
One Possible Version:
Good morning,everyone! Today I'm going to talk about inventions.
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.There are famous inventions like the TV and the bicycle.TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world.We watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves.Besides some learning programs help us with our study.
The bicycle is very useful,too. We go to school or work by bike.It's not expensive that most of us can afford it.It makes no pollution,which is good for our environment.What's more ,bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sports which is quite good for our health.
Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly.When we meet problems in doing our homework or taking exams,it will tell us how to solve them.
That's all .Thank you very much.
『拾』 中考英语满分作文
只找到不同地区的 不过万变不离其宗 看看也不错 2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文 假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久,你和来自英国的一位中学生Allen一起讨论了一个话题:the ways to learn English better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点,用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。注意:1.开头和结尾部分已写好。2.可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使所写内容连贯。3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。4.词数:70个左右。His ideas1. reading English newspapers2. talking with friends in English3. seeing English films2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文 Mr Nunan,Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.Liu Mei点评:本文结构非常清楚,第一段阐述了Allen的观点,第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来,显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式,比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等,避免了重复,增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功,比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑,读来一气呵成。 2007年重庆市中考英语满分作文范文 随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展,“每天锻炼一小时,健康工作50年,幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心,校园里出现了可喜的变化:运动时间延长了,运动项目增加了,学生体质增强了,校园生活丰富了。请以Sports in Our School为题给校刊写一篇报道。内容要点提示:1. time for sports2. kinds of sports3. change of students’ health and study4. change of school life要求:1.80词左右,可适当发挥。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。 2007年重庆市中考英语满分作文范文 Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games,running,and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more? A healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.点评:本文要点非常齐全,三段话分别叙述了题目中要求的四个方面,层次清楚,段与段之间的连接也很自然。第一段主要讲我们学校的运动课和运动时间发生了很大的变化,第二段是讲同学都很积极地参加运动,第三段主要讲运动给校园生活带来的变化。本文最大的特点就是每一个的开头都是一个中心句,这样使得文章大意非常明了,结构也很清晰。
2005年北京中考英语满分作文 根据中文大意,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。 假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, 2007年昆明市中考英语满分作文范文 提示:阅读理解B篇文章的情节使我们感动。你一定也收到过许多礼物,其中你最喜欢的礼物总会不断地呈现在你的记忆中,它可能来自于你的亲人,朋友或老师,在礼物中有他们对你的爱和期待,请你以“A Gift”为题,用英语写一篇小短文,叙述你收到礼物后得到的启示和你的感动之情。要求:1. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60字。2. 文章中不得出现你的真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计。3. 短文必须写在答题卷上,如在本卷中作答,一律不得分。2007年昆明市中考英语满分作文范文 A GiftI have received so many gifts on my birthdays. But I love the book named Beautiful English best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help each other, understand each other and love each other. I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love.点评:作者开门见山地点出了自己最喜欢的礼物,然后详细地阐述了这份礼物的来源和为什么喜欢这份礼物的原因。最后作者表达了自己的希望。本文内容很完整,作者层层深入,娓娓道来,展现了一位中学生的叙事功底。在语言方面,本文长短句结合,增加了语言的多样化。 2007年沈阳市中考英语满分作文范文 The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school,because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters.The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard,because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.点评:同样,这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章,作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅,基本无语法错误,作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇,如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。 2007年天津市中考英语满分作文范文 “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.点评:作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚,表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时,常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀,没有连续性,而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题,运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。