① 英语作文教师评语
Teachers’ Remarks
In my school,our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after
final exam.And then I have to bring it to my parents.Our head teacher will put our scores of
mid-term exam and final exam on it.And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the
school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct.In order to have a
good winter holiday,I have to make my parents happy.So I always try my best to earn a good
evaluation from my head teacher.In front of him,I am always a good boy.So,I always have a
nice remark.
② 英语作文点评 谢谢
功底是有但是少些套路，建议背些模板和常用句型如议论文一般采用三段式模板好点正反对立观点分类阐明最好终结表达自己观点·····
③ 英语作文评价大全
说真的，我很讨厌淅沥的小雨，它们是那么的缠绵，总会使心烦涌入心头，惊涛拍浪，挖心的难受．因此在这样的雨天我没有在雨中漫步的情怀．但在北方由于在黄河以北降雨量少，注定淅沥的小雨会是夏天的常客．于是我也有些厌恶夏天，好在夏天还有一位代言人——暴雨，使我对夏天有了一丝的眷恋．
我喜欢暴雨有种近似痴迷的程度，因为暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，给人一种亲切感．下暴雨时我喜欢将窗子开到最大，将手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨点落下时针扎般的痛，那时却感觉不到疼，有的只是毅力的考验．张大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一种久违的香气，它会使我想起曾今那充满鸟语花香的大自然．
今天又一场暴雨过后，我遥望天际发现天空是那么美，头顶的一片天是那么的湛蓝，蓝的没有一丝杂质，它又是那么的飘渺，好像是七仙女抛下的一件蓝色的薄纱在空中飘舞．不远处还是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黄色，那种颜色给人一种压抑的感觉．于是我寻找蓝灰的交界处，那里本应是逐渐的过度色，而大自然却巧妙的嵌进去一朵还未完全舒展的云，刹那间我感受到了活力，那是生命的诠释．突然明白再阴的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出现的那一刹那．
那是一幅美丽的油画，是大自然给予人类的享受，更是自然给我们敲响的警示钟，如果没有人类保护大自然，恐怕以后连那雨过天晴的后的一丝感动也会一去不复返，至少我们会失去对生命的另一种诠释
④ 帮我点评一下英语作文
我给12分，六年级写这样已经不错了的。
My
Favourite
Sport
Hello,everybody!do
you
like
sport?If
you
insist
on
it,it
will
be
good
for
your
health.
what
is
your
favourite
sport?
My
favourite
sport
is
swimming
and
it
is
very
interesting.otherwise
I
can
play
water
with
my
friends
in
the
swimming
pool.
I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.
点评：1.注意句子之间的分段，
2.在写swimming的时候，注意可以用it代替的，否则会因为重复觉得啰嗦了。
3.既然可以快慢自如的游泳了（I
can
swim
fast
or
slowly），就不要说我游的不好了（I
can't
swim
very
well
now），所以可以用be
good
at
的短语来说，虽然我不擅长（专业）游泳，但是我非常喜欢它。（I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.）
呵呵，没有改太多，希望你能学到东西哦！！！
⑤ 关于英语作文的点评，100字左右的英语点评即可
Michael Jackson's death, I am very sorry. I believe that many people like him, will. But like you said, because he is a shining star. His case will affect many people. I believe that many years later, when people mention the name Michael Jackson, he will become a much-told story.
⑥ 求高中英语作文佳作及详细点评
Olympic Games English Composition
The Olympic Games (often referred to simply as The Olympics or The Games) is an international multi-sport event subdivided into summer and winter sporting events. The summer and winter games are each held every four years. Until 1992, they were held in the same year. Since then, they have been celebrated two years apart.
The original Olympic Games began in 776 BCE in Olympia, Greece, and were celebrated until CE 393. In 1896, the ancient Olympic Games were revived at the initiative of a French nobleman, Pierre Fré, Baron de Coubertin, thus beginning the era of the Modern Olympic Games.Since the first modern games, in Athens, Greece, participation in the Olympic Games has increased to include athletes from nearly all nations worldwide.
With the improvement of satellite communications and global telecasts of the events, the Olympics are consistently gaining supporters.The most recent Summer Olympics were the 2004 Games in Athens and the most recent Winter Olympics were the 2006 Games in Turin. The upcoming games in Beijing are planned to comprise 302 events in 28 sports. As of 2006, the Winter Olympics were competed in 84 events in 7 sports.
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Internet
The following aspects could best illustrate the advantages of Internet. Netsurfers in different countries can share interesting knowledge and the latest information. Besides, Internet has provided a major opportunity to buy and sell merchandise . What is more, people may get medical help or even vote on Internet. Its advantages seem countless.
Behind all this glowing talk, however, are some problems. Internet makes people passive by stopping them making their own entertainment. So much so that when there is a breakdown or jam, people may find that World Wide Web turns into World Wide Wait. What is worse, some children have access to the scenes of violence and sex. Apart from these, it can be affected by viruses and hackers.
We should handle its problems, meanwhile we should exploit its potential as well. With proper management of Internet people ought to experience more fruits of the information revolution. All the wisdom of the ages, all the information that has enlightened mankind for centuries, should be available to us with the healthy development of Internet.
The Strength of Belief
On January 29th, the first day of the Chinese year, grandma took me to the Yade Buddha Temple to pray for being able to have a lucky year.
The whole city was dipped in warm light, when we arrived. God! I hardly made out this temple because the whole block was filled with people. We could move our feet just a little at a time. Now you may have the idea how many people there were. But it was amazing that the crowd was so quiet. Worshippers, one by one, seriously knelt down before the statue of the Buddha.
I thought that I hadn’t done anything as earnestly as them when I saw those worshippers praying so devoutly. Everyone kept quiet, closed his eyes. I seemed like that there was only him in this world. I was shocked. From them, I felt the strength of belief. I learnt that not only the belief of the Buddhism, but also the beliefs of all the beautiful things can enable us to be successful. Once we get our belief, the eternal spirit shall help us overcome all the difficulties we might meet with.
I raised my head and saw the Buddha smiling to me so mystically
⑦ 英语作文请求点评
以下是你的错误：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正确：started
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正确：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正确：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正确：believe
5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建议：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.
6. They are helpful.
建议：They are indeed helpful to me.
7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建议: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.
8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建议：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.
9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建议: I wish I could master this language in the future.
⑧ 英语作文点评
建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)
⑨ 英语作文评语大全
依式行文,文笔素源朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
⑩ 英语文章点评与赏析
中文
：母亲是最伟大的，俗话说‘‘母爱是世间最伟大的力量。’’是他内们在呵护我们茁容壮成长。
英文
：Mother
is
the
greatest,
as
the
saying
goes,
'
'
a
mother's
love
is
the
greatest
force
in
the
world.
'
'
They
are
in
the
care
of
us
grow
sturdily.