㈠ 英语 英语作文 语法错误
你好，
首先，第一句没有什么问题，只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思专。“Prevention of the mountain”可改成“属impediment of the mountain”，不过意思差不太多，我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧，有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。
第二段第一句把“but”改成“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥，你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”？“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了！我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站，还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的点。
如果有帮助到你请采纳一下，谢谢！
㈡ 英语作文，找一下错误说明一下
第6行hunt 后加 for。hunt 后面接猎物，如hunt deer/ birds/ rabitts 等。hunt for food 觅食。
㈢ 英语作文找错误
1. 第一行 Mike为人名要大写
2. 第二行第二句开头，than表示比较，估计你是想说then（接着），可是then放在这里也很怪，最好改成and：I am glad to hear from you, and i would like to tell you something about myself.
3. 我已经写出来了，把第二句的me改成myself.
4. 第三句句首大写，并把answer后的to去掉，可以把you改成your question，改为：To answer your question...
5. 从about a friend开始，句子就全错了。应该改为：I want to tell you about a friend of mine, who I think is my role model.
6. I call him "Xiao Gu".另起一句话，不要和上一句连在一起，因为它们没有并列关系。
7. 文章第六行：He don't like to study应改为He didn't like to study
8. 文章第七行：and always be terrible in his school test.
错1: be，改为behave
错2: in，改为on
错3: test，改为tests
9. 文章第八行：be改为became：but when he became a middle school student.
10. 文章第九行：every things改为everything
11. 文章第十行：I think前面逗号改句号
12. 文章第十一行：去掉also
13. 文章第十一行：it's a big change是单独一句话，前后都用句号。
14. 倒数第四行：had改为have；learn改为learned；the man改为a man
15. 倒数第二行：he is very kind前加and
16. 倒数第二，三行: And now, 去掉and；或者把and now改为in fact，更好。
17. 倒数第二行：that's all是单独一句话，后面可加“of him”
以上是语法错误。
㈣ 英语作文不能出现错误！
如果是通知事情的话
第一句的规范表述是attention,please!专
attention,please!there
is
going
to
be
an
magic
show
in
the
sun
teater
on
friday,and
the
famous
magicain
liu
qian
will
be
there.
if anyone
want
to
get
to
the
show,youcan
come
here
to
register.that's
all,thank
you
!
有疑问属请追问
㈤ 英语作文《犯错误》
Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.
still remember how my spoken English got improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak up regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would cheer me up and then point out him I could have avoided them. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black.
Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.
请采纳 谢谢
㈥ 以“人生中最大的一次错误”为题怎么写英语作文
人生中处处有选择，虽然一个选择不能决定人的一生，但在很大程度上影响了一个人的心情。当我们面对选择时，心态往往是不同的。而我，则是当机立断。
清晨，没有听到小鸟的叫声，它们都好像没睡醒似的。阳光带着一丝惬意射入窗中。我朦胧地睁开眼睛，急忙洗漱穿戴完毕。出了门，家中的小狗照例跟在身后，依依不舍般地，直到走出大门外。它的两只眼睛眨巴眨巴地望着我，似乎有什么想说的话，我也没多在意它。它忽然停下了脚步，我想它也许已回家了，便径直走开了，可是回头瞧瞧，它似乎迷路了，走的不是回家的路，我本想上前拉住它的，可是看了看钟表，还有十几分钟的时间，担心上课迟到，也就没有搭理它，狠心的丢下了它。
一个人做了一次错误的选择，应该分析自己的对与错，发展好的一面，舍去不好的一面，当面对更多的选择时，才不会畏惧，才会冷静做出最好的选择。
活着是美丽的,工作着是美丽的,必要时,犯错误亦不失为一种美丽.正如一辈子不离开地面,自然避开溺水的危险.但只有经历呛水和疲惫,才能领略另类生活的风采和快乐. 保留错误也是一种美 在漫漫人生旅途中,很多时候,我们是在错误中成长,在成长时犯错.错误,在某种意义上讲,是成就人生的必然因素.
从我们"惊天动地"来到这个世界,我们就开始犯错,在一个又一个错误中,我们逐渐让这个陌生的世界成为我们所熟悉而温馨的家园.错误中,我们会跌跌撞撞走路;错误中,我们会咿咿呀呀说话;错误中,我们用稚嫩的双手,写字画画;错误中,我们会用我们浅薄的智慧去赢得老师家长的夸耀;错误中,我们便会用手指敲打键盘,我们可以用我们的腿脚博得阵阵喝彩;错误中,我们学会用属于自己的知识步入竞争的行列.
㈦ 英语作文错误
You asked me what my favorite things are except study(应该用besides而不是except;what my favorite things are, besides study.)
now,(一个句子的首字母要大写应该为:Now,)
let me tell you.
One thing is surf(ing) on the internet.Because (In that case,)I can play computer games,talk with my friends and study for(in) this way,(.)
It is so interesting and relaxing(comfortable).The second,(Another thing )is collect(ing) stamps.And I like listen (to the) music.Pop music(music是不可数名词,不能加s) are(is) very cool,and lassical(classical) music make(s) me relax.
Yours.(,应该用逗号,而且,要另起一行)
最后属名
㈧ 英语作文――错误信息的危害
网络误导性信息的危害
The harm caused by misleading information online
It is true that the internet has brought us great convenience and efficiency, however, as the data grows at an exponential rate, the severity of misleading information arises.
Deceptive news or tips travel fast online, and worse still, they may shadow our routine life or even hinder the progress of our society. Lack of enough consideration, we are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the webpage. Some will alter their plans to deal with the so-called disaster but only affect their normal life; a few may even go further to violate social security and economic trend. Moreover, if the misleading news isn’t corrected soon, there may be a trust crisis between indivials and the government. For example, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt can prevent radiation, and ended in a turbulence in the domestic market.
To prevent misleading information spreading, government should set up laws to regulate online news while indivials need to judge independently. Only when they work in hand will the harm of false information be diminished to the end.
㈨ 英语作文找错误
原文好像复手机不能复制呢，制你可以去grammar这个网站上把文章放进去，它会跳出来所有错误的地方。
我这边看到大小写的问题，你再检查一下，比如最开始的scholar Li 这种头衔应该都首字母大写哦。还有时间具体某一天介词用on吧。