㈠ 如何上好高中英语写作课
1、开门见山,揭示主题文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan” (去金山旅游)的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的开头即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介绍环境式的开头即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6、交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
㈡ 如何提高高中英语写作课教学的有效性
英语写作是一个复杂的思维过程,对认知能力、思维能力、语言能力、组织能力和自我监控能力都有相当高的要求。英语写作是锻炼学生较好利用英语思维的一种必要实践,是进行交流的重要手段。
如何有效提高中学生英语写作能力的方法和途径
英语写作是语言的输出形式之一,是考察中学生英语综合应用能力的主要途径,也是中学生在语言学习中沟通、交流的重要途径,而很多中学生在这方面很薄弱,经常错误百出或写出中文式的英语。
1.注重审题,对写的内容做到心中有数
无论提供材料的方式是通过文字、图画还是表格,要求写文章的体裁是确定的,要注重不同的体裁通常都有其特定的格式。其次,应关注动词的时态和语态。在通常情况下,文章中动词的时态和语态错误过多,阅卷老师往往会认为考生的写作水平很差,这会影响到作文的“定档”。
2.注意篇章结构,合理布局
开始部分,说出文中的要点、核心问题;正文部分,围绕主题开展叙述、讨论;结尾部分,对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。
3.确定主题句,紧扣试题考查要点
主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨,应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释、扩展。
4.注重连贯,对所写的文章做到通顺紧凑
使文章通顺连贯最重要的方式就是要合理使用连接词和过渡性词语。恰当运用连接词和过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑,过渡自然,避免脱节现象。恰当运用连接词和变换句式可以收到以少量词表达出丰富意思的效果。
5.注重积累,学会使用复杂结构和高级词汇
英语书面表达评分标准第五档(很好)中有这样一段话:“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少量错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。”这就是说,学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不一定能得高分;相反,即使文章中有少量错误,假如是因为使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,文章仍可按最高档次给分。
6.注重英语习惯,使所写句子准确地道
在写作时要做到准确、地道地表达文章,首先必须要牢记把握一些常用句型或习惯表达,避免中文式英语,在实践中不断总结中英表达差异,养成用英语思维写作的习惯。如要表示“我等待着你的到来”,若译成I’m waiting for you to come,则不准确,也不地道,因为这里所说的“等待”,不是一般意义的“等待”,而指的是一种心理上的期待,若译为I’m looking forwardto your arrival.就好多了。
7.注重思想性,力图提高文章思想内涵
新标准对写作的要求增加了情感因素,在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时,适当增加句子的感情色彩,增加一些人情味,使文章读起来亲切,完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。如:Do you think you’ll like it? If not,I can tryand find another flat for you.
此句表达了作者对朋友尽职尽责的心情,回信由此布满了感情色彩。
8.注重书写,追求卷面美丽
书面表达属主观性试题,阅卷老师的主观印象直接关系到考生的得分高低。主观印象除了词汇、句子用得好外,第一印象就是短文的书写水平。每位阅卷老师阅卷时,因为天天要阅大量的试卷,工作量大,假如碰到书写潦草,卷面乱画,字迹不整的卷面,自然会引起阅卷老师的反感,从而降低短文档次。所以,要优化细节。首先,要注重标点符号的使用。不少考生在考试中把汉语和英语的标点符号混用。其次,要注重字母书写正确。第三,不要把单词拼错,尤其要避免笔误。第四,注重整体,把握好行间距离,字迹秀美,字体大小要均匀。切记:字迹难以辨认的要降一等,就意味着得分要少四五分。
㈢ 谈谈如何上好高中英语写作课
目前,英语写作教抄学仍然以传统的教学模式为主,也就是老师给题目,学生写作文,老师批改,学生修改,整个写作教学以教师为主,学生为辅,普遍存在着教学过程与评价过程相分离的现象。很多教师辛辛苦苦地教学但效果不佳,也有很多学生背过大量的优秀范文,也写了许多作文,但写作水平一直没有太大的提高。在此,本人就如何上好英语写作课发表一些浅显的看法,和大家共同讨论一下。在英语写作课堂上,可以采取“英语写作三步教学法”。所谓“英语写作三步教学法”就是将英语写作教学过程分为前、中、后三个部分,并且在每个部分都融人适时适当的评价方式及评价方法。在“写作前”,教师提出写作任务和评价内容。教师提出的写作任务要紧扣教材知识点并且贴近学生的生活,要具有真实性、可探究性和趣味性。学生要准备好本课的重要词汇,从读音、词形、词性、词义、基本用法和固定搭配等方面为写作做好准备。教师可根据实际情况把学生分成若干小组,分组时要充分考虑到每个个体的不同之处,取长补短,使得每个层次的学生在写作时都有东西可写,都能品尝到成功...... (本文共计2页) [继续阅读本文] 赞
㈣ 高中英语写作有效教学策略的实践与研究 如何有效地
(一)教师以自己为中心, 将自己视为知识的权威和传授者。
1.
没有把写作看做是交际活动。教师没有站在读者的角度去看待学生的作文 , 不去指出学生表达不清或欠妥之处 , 不能明确提出修改建议。
2.
批改作文时只是订正学生所犯的语法错误。可是写作并不仅仅是语法练习 , 好的文章并不只是一些语法正确的句子堆砌的产物。教师应当从两个角度来批改作文 :先从语篇层次上看文章内容是否达到表情达意的目的 , 再在语法层次上进行必要的修改。
3.
没有把写作视为认知活动。许多教师在指导作文时只给学生分析一篇范文
, 却并没有意识到在向学生提供范文的同时, 必须引导学生注意理解范文中可以为我所用的那些知识或语法 ;引导学生剖析自己的文章 ,
发现存在的问题 , 然后改正, 并注意在以后的写作中扬长避短 , 学以致用。
(二)教学方法不合理。长期以来,
结果教学法在英语写作课的教学中占据统治地位 , 教师以讲授传统技法和作品为中心, 片面地强调语言理论知识的输入 , 过于注重写作结果,
轻视写作过程中的诸多环节。这种教学法的理论基础是行为主义理论,认为教学过程就是老师给予刺激—学生作出反应的过程, 因而教师主宰了课堂教学 ,
从运用“教师提问 -学生回答”的单一教学模式 , 到学生参照范文仿写 , 再到教师面面俱到地评讲那些注满红批的作文 ,
学生始终处于思维被束缚、被动接受知识的尴尬境地。建构主义认为 , 知识昀主要是由学习者个体建构的 , 而不是由他人传授的 ,
而且这种建构总是在具体环境中通过互动产生的。语言学习中 , 学习者不应该被简单地视为被动接受者 , 而应积极参与学习活动的计划和学习效率的评估 ,
否则学生就没有机会主动地创造和探索。
二、改善当前高中英语写作教学现状的方法
1.注重对学生写作过程的指导
在英语的教学过程中既要注重对学生的语言输入,
也要注重对学生的语言输出 , 这两个过程都非常的重要 ,
对提高学生综合语言运用能力都起着重要的作用。而写作能力正是这种综合语言运用能力的体现。因此, 在“重结果”之时 ,
更要“重过程”。写作应包括语言知识、语境知识、写作目的和写作技巧等要素。写作目的、语言知识和语境知识可以为写作者提供足够多的输入 ,
使学习者有话说而写作技巧的训练是使学习者知道怎么说。所以 , 写作既是语言输入的过程,
也是学生按一定技巧建构体裁、内化知识的过程。他们强调的是教师在教学写作时要注意情景 , 并帮助学生了解某一体裁的词汇、语法、篇章结构的特点 ,
然后再运用到具体的写作中。从图中可以看出 , 写作过程不是单一的个人行为 ,
而是个人与个人、个人与他人、个人与范文、个人与社会多方位的互动过程。
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㈤ 浅谈如何做好高中英语写作教学
创设趣味教学情境,营造轻松教学氛围在新课改的教学背景下,传统高中英语写作教学的方式已经版不能满足学权生的学习需求了,现阶段,随着信息技术的快速发展以及素质教育要求的不断提升,我国高中英语写作教学已开始向趣味性教学发展,逐渐摆脱了“一刀切”、“满堂灌”这些教学模式的影响。为了更好的提高实际教学的趣味性,教师就可以在写作教学的过程中积极创设极具趣味的教学情境,让学生在轻松和谐的教学氛围中产生对写作学习的兴趣,进而实现高效学习、快乐学习
㈥ 高一英语写作课教案中的教学目标怎么写
Teaching Aims
1.To get the students to appreciating remarks on friendship or friends.
2.To enable the students to write a short story about friends or friendships.
Teaching Proceres
Step 1 Discussion
Now, I found 500 pounds in Roy’s pocket. Did Roy steal the money from the charity? Someone says ‘yes’, someone says ‘no’. If Roy did steal the money from the charity, shall I tell the teacher or call the police? If Roy didn’t steal the money, what should I do?
Discuss it in groups of four .
Collect answers from students. Draw a conclusion; whether Roy stole the money or not, we help him all the same. Because we’re friends. Friends are the ones we can get help from and we can trust.
In this unit, we have talked a lot about friends and friendship, knowing the importance of friends. And what do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?List good qualities and bad qualities a friend may have.
Suggested answers:
Good qualities:
outgoing hospitable considerate enthusiastic friendly kind polite honest loyal brave positive optimistic smart intelligent modest generous determined responsible mature
Bad qualities:
dishonest unfriendly dishonest rude impolite selfish lazy careless pessimistic Brainstorming:
Step 2 Writing
Describe a problem you had with a friend and give advice on how to keep friends.
Suggested expressions:
close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to , considerate, warm hearted, honest,
一些有关友谊的名言警句如:
On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
Sample:
Friendship is one of the most valuable relationship in our lives, it may even last through you whole life. I have a good friend. Sometimes I argue with my friend. For example, once we discussed a problem of our homework, as we held different ideas and wanted to persuade each other, we argued a lot. However, after we found the correct answer, the one that was wrong apologized at once. No matter how often we quarreled and what we quarreled for, we are good friends for ever.
My favourite proverb says ' friend are like stars, you don’t always see them, but you know they re always there.' Thats true, indeed friends are willing to help you all the time. When you are down ,friends raise you up with their hearts .When you lose your way, friends guide you and pull you to the right way. When you have sorrow to complain of, friends are always the best ears for you.
So please cherish your friends, because everyone of them is unique and precious. Getting along with friends is just like growing plants. We must use patience, trust, and honesty as fertilizer to make friendship stonger. And never forget ,plants need sunshine, so do friends. Often give them some warm and you will find your hearts are getting closer.
Friendship stands on both sides , so the more you give and the more you will get . Remember, the key is your sincere heart.
Step 3 Promotion and Homework
1)Assign another writing task based on the following information:
What do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?
2) Instruct the students to write and revise by themselves.
3) Let the students hand in their final copies.
4) Select some good samples to read to the whole class.
Suggested sample:
Friendship is the most important things in life. Good friend would like to help you when you met some troubles. Real good friends could put each other in their hearts. Real friendship is like the spring rivers flowing down the mountains, silently. Everybody is looking forward to meeting real friends.
How to find real friendship and keep it? I think it is like you planting a big tree. You should choose good seeds and take care of it to make it grow. Almost the same thoughts between each other is on base. Maybe fight also will happen. How to do? To make real friend, you don't be shy to explain your thoughts to the other. Try your best to keep friendship forever. It is necessary to tell the truth and respect each other.
教学实施过程:
针对学生这样的实际情况,并受任务型教学法启示“任务型教学理论实际上就是建立在讨论或交流教学思路的基础上的,是交流教学思路的一种发展形态,英语教学要以学生为中心,教师要为学生设计运用语言的环境,通过大量的交流活动总结和掌握语言的规律,并在交流活动中实践,从而达到目的.”我对每模块后的书面表达内容的教学作了调整,这样处理:即把写作课变成讨论和写作并存的活动课,并在活动课中备有相关的多媒体内容或音乐,使学生在真切愉快的情景中搜集写作素材,完成写作内容,最后达到激发学生写作兴趣,提高写作技能并促进其他几种技能的效果。具体教学过程如下:
第一步,确定题目后,教师启发学生思考,回忆写作中所需要的相关词汇,必要时通过多媒体展示相关内容,然后教师在黑板上进行总结或借助多媒体把关键词语呈现给学生.例如外研版教材Book6 Mole3 Interpersonal relationship___ Friendship,该模块的写作任务讲述朋友之间所产生的矛盾问题,并提出建议如何保持友谊:Describing a problem you had with a friend and giving advice on how to keep friends教师可先展示一些有关友谊或本班同学相处的图片、幻灯片、音乐等,以激发学生的学习兴趣。然后教师可引导学生说说自己的好朋友,尽可能用到本模块所学过的词汇:close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to, considerate, warmhearted, honest, 等等。
第二步,分组讨论(均匀分配不同程度的学生),要求学生围绕写作话题借助有关词汇,人人动口,积极思维:1.Who is your good friend? 2. How do you become good friends? 3. Have you ever quarreled with each other? 4.What’s the problem? 5. Have you made up? 6. What should you do to keep your friendship? 等, 并让学生各抒己见,提供出不同的词语句型,如1.I’ve known him/her for ... 2.We first met six years ago...I remember meeting him/her for the first time 3.We have much in common. 4. I not only...but also... 5.I suggest that... 6.Why not...? 7.Can’t we ...? 8. What about...? 9. Friendship is both... and... 10. If we... , we can...等也可提供一些有关友谊的名言警句如:On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. (---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship. (---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
同时教师提醒学生在讨论中尽量使用正确的时态、语态并用英语交流。这一步也是学生英文写作收集写作素材的过程。教师可参考与到各个组中,帮助学生解决疑难问题,并根据不同的写作内容和各小组的实际水平适当给他们提供一些新的词汇,同时鼓励那些平时不善于言谈的学生开口交流和帮助基础较差的学生。通过不断的教学实践,我发现:在这种活动或情景之下,学生无拘无束,大胆热烈讨论,加之教师的指导,写作的素材自然获得不少。最后每组选一位代表执笔完成书面表达,并在时间允许内在全班朗读;
第三步,教师进行总结归纳: Friendship is a kind of human relations. It is a human instinct to make friends. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. .Long live friendship! 同时再次强调写作中所需的时态、语态和学生写作过程中容易犯的错误等关键问题。而后要求学生课后完成各自的写作内容并上交作业。
第四步,作文评价是个意义重大的环节,可采用以下评价机制,包括学生自评→学生互评→教师评价→全班反馈→范文共赏五个环节。
学生参与情况:
运用这种教学方式,我所教的班级学生普遍反映:这种讨论和写作的方式更适合他们,因为气氛活跃,让人觉得轻松,通过小组的讨论、互相帮助和老师的指引,较容易搜集到写作素材,而且参考小组素材再结合自己的观点,就更容易下手写作了。每个小组都能写出较为优秀的文章,而且,学生完成作业情况非常好,能充分运用课上所讲的相关词汇和表达方式,有些同学的文章写得相当好,可以作为范文展示学习。总而言之,这种写作教学法既激发了学生的写作兴趣,又提高了他们的口语表达能力,同时还培养了他们的群体合作精神,而且也达到了师生互动交流。