❶ 初一下册英语作文
1.Dear friend,
My name is Sally.I am from China.I want a pen pal in
Australia.I am 14 years old.I have no brothers or sisters in
my family.My favorite subject in school is science,
because I think it’s very interesting.I like playing the piano
and playing basketball on weekends.How about you? Can
you write and tell me about yourself?
Yours,
Sally
2.My favorite animal is a cat.I have a cat in my family.Her
name is Mimi, I think she is from China.She is two years
old now.She likes to eat fish every day.She is kind of lazy,
but she is very cute.I like playing with it after school.
3.Last summer I went to the beach.My vacation was pretty
good.I went there by bus and my bus trip was
relaxing.The beach was very beautiful.It was sunny, cool
and humid.the people were friendly and the food was
delicious.I enjoyed my vacation very much and I hope to
go there again.
4.描写方位的短文
My home is on Center Street.On Center Street, there is a
restaurant, a post office and a library.The post office is
between the library and the restaurant.Across from the
post office is a pay phone.A bank is next to the pay
phone.The supermarket is on Fifth Avenue.A hotel is in
front of the supermarket.
5.It is Sunday.The Turners are staying at home.They are
doing different kinds of things.Mr Turner is washing his
car.Mrs Turener is sitting at the table.She is drinking
tea.Bob is talking on the phone.Nancy is sitting near the
pool.She is watching the dog swimming.They are having a
good time.
6.It’s Sunday morning.My mother and I are going to the
park.There are a lot of people in the park.Some children
are running.A dog is running after them.Four women are
sitting there They are talking.Three old men are standing
under a big tree.They are watching the children.Many
young people are dancing.Everyone is having a good
time.We are having a good time, too.
1.亲爱的朋友, 我叫莎莉。我来自中国。我想在澳大利亚有一位笔友。我今年14岁。在我家里我没有兄弟姐妹。我在学校最喜欢的科目是科学,因为我觉得它很有趣。在周末我喜欢弹钢琴和打篮球。你呢?你会写信来告诉我有关你自己的情况吗? 此致,莎莉 2.我最喜欢的动物是猫。在我家里我有一只猫。她的名字叫咪咪,我认为她来自中国。她两岁了。她喜欢每天吃鱼。她是那种懒惰,但她很可爱。放学后我喜欢和它一起玩。 3.去年夏天,我去了海滩。我的假期很不错。我坐公共汽车去那里,我的公交出行很令人放松。海滩非常漂亮。阳光普照,凉爽和潮湿。人们都很友善,食物很可口。我很喜欢我的假期,我希望再去那里。 4.我的家就在中心街。在中心街,有一家餐厅,一个邮局和一个图书馆。邮局在图书馆和餐厅之间。邮局对面是一个公用电话。公用电话的旁边是一家银行。超市在第五大道。酒店在超市的前面。 5.今天是星期天.特纳一家正在家里.他们正在做不同的事情。特纳先生正在洗他的车。特纳夫人正坐在桌子旁边。她正在喝茶.Bob正讲电话。南希正坐在游泳池附近.她正在注视着狗游泳.他们正过一段愉快的时光。 6.这是星期天的早晨.我的母亲和我去公园。有很多很多人在公园里。有些孩子正在跑步。一只狗正在追赶他们。四名妇女正坐在那里,她们在聊天。三位老人正站在一棵大树下。他们正在看孩子。许多年轻人在跳舞。每个人都过得很愉快。我们也正享受着一段愉快的时光。
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7.天气预报的短文
Good morning ! Here’s the weather report for some big cities in the world.Beijing is cloudy.It’s very cold, so wear warm clothes when you go out.It is sunny in New York , but there’s a strong wind in the afternoon.It will be rainy in Sydney but very hot.The day after tomorrowwill be sunny.That’s the weather report for today.Thank you for listening.
8.描写人物的短文
There are three people in Jim’s family.Mr.Green is his father.He is heavy and he has short straight hair.He wears glasses.He is watching TV.His mother is Mrs.Green.She is of medium height.She has curly hair.She is cleaning the room.Jim is very thin.He is playing with the ball.They are all happy.
9.I am Sally.Every day I am very busy.I have too many rules in my house.I have to get up at six o’clock every morning.I have to eat my breakfast at 7:00 o’clock.I can’t meet my friends after school.I can’t watch TV on school nights.And I have to be in bed by 10:00 o’clock.On weekends, I have to clean my room.Then I have to wash my clothes.Later I have to go to the Children’s Palace to learn the guitar.I love music.But I can’t listen to music at home.I never have any fun.My life is so boring.What can I do ?
10.日记 Thursday, August 1st
Today I went to the Palace Museum.It was cool.Then I went to the Great Wall.It was fantastic.There were many people there.In the afternon, I visited Tian’an Men Square.There were many beautiful flowers.It was really great.I went to a Beijing Hutung.It was really fun.I had a good time there.
❷ 七年级下册英语作文大全
(1)Liuxiang made a perfect fly in the olympic games in 2004, and won not only the gold metal but also the respect in the world!
His fly knocked all the suspicions and discriminations down completely!
"It is so perfect! I never expect to run so fast! Oh it is a dream to me, and it seems I am still in a dream!", he said!
But it is just true, and it is himself who made the dream into truth!
Xiuxiang, our hero, has been regarded as a flying man all of the world!
刘翔-世界飞人
刘翔在2004年的奥林匹克运动会上完美的冲刺,不仅赢得了金牌,而且赢得了世界的尊重。
他的飞翔打破了所有的怀疑和所有的种族歧视.
”太完美了.我从来没想到跑这末快.哦,对我来说就像做梦,看起来我好像还在梦中。“他说到。
但这是真的。是他自己使得美梦成真。
(2)The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15.He works all night.
People love to lisen to him!He gets home at 7:00,and hewatches moring TV. He goes to bed at 8:30.Can you think what hisjob is?
九点一刻时他经常乘公交车上班。他工作整晚。
人们喜欢听到关于他的事。他7点起床,看早间新闻。他8点半睡觉。
你认为他的职业是什么?
(3)My family
I love my family, because I have a happy family.
My father is an English teacher. His name is Jacky. He is thirty-eight. He likes playing basketball. What’s my mother job? Is she a teacher? Yes, you’re right! My mother is very kind and nice, she is thirty-seven. My mother is always laborious work. I love my parents!
On Saturday and Sunday, I often go to the library and play the piano, My father go to play basketball. Sometimes, we watch TV and listen to music at home.
I love my family. Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together!
我的家庭
我爱我的家庭,因为我有一个快乐的家庭.
我的爸爸是一名英语教师,他的名字叫Jacky.他今年38岁.他非常喜欢打篮球.我的妈妈是赶什么呢?她是一名教师吗?是的.你说对了!我的妈妈是一个很亲切、友善的人,她今年37岁.我妈妈总是勤劳的干活.我爱我的父母.
在星期六和星期天里,我经常去图书馆和弹钢琴.我爸爸去打篮球.有时侯,我们都在家看电视和听音乐.
我爱我家.因为我和爸爸妈妈一起生活得很开心!
(4)Lan and Fred
Lan and Fred were boys. They were both twelve years old, and they were in the same class in their school. Last Friday afternoon they had a fight in class, and their teacher was very angry. He said to both of them, “Stay here after the lessons this afternoon, and write your names a thousand times.” After the last lesson, all the other boys went home, but Lan and Fred stayed in the classroom with their teacher and begin writing their names.
Then Fred began crying.
The teacher looked at him and said,” Why are you crying, Fred?”
“Because his name’s Lan May, and mine’s Frederick Hollingsworth,” Fred said.
易恩和富雷得
易恩和富雷得都是男孩,他们都十二岁了。他们在学校里是同班同学。上周五下午他们在学校里打了一架。为此老师很生气。老师对他们说:“下午下课后留在着把你们的名字写一千遍。”
最后一节课下课,所有的学生都回家了。只有易恩和富雷得被他们的老师留在教师里抄写他们的名字。
接着富雷得哭了起来。
老师看了看他问:“富雷得,你为什么要哭呢?”
“因为他的名字是Lan May, 而我的名字确是Frederick Hollingsworth,”富雷得回答道。
(5)Ann’s Diary
Today was Sunday. Today was September 30th, 2004. It was a boring day. It was hot. I was not a work.
I watched TV all morning. The shows were boring. Then I called my friend, Nancy. She wasn’t at home. I didn’t know where she was.
At twelve I was hungry. There was not any food in the fridge. I was lazy. I was tired. Then I ate lunch outside. At one o’clock. I was in bed. In the afternoon I was at the movies. The film was boring. I'm glad tomorrow is Monday. I can go to school and see my friends.
安的日记
今天是星期天,2004年9月30日。这是令人厌烦的一天。今天天气很热,我呆在家里,不用去上学。
我看了一上午的电视。电视节目和无聊。于是我给好朋友南西打电话,可她不在家。我不知道她去哪里了。
十二点我饿了,可是冰箱里什么食物都没有。我很懒惰,也很劳累,于是我出去吃了午饭。一点我上床睡觉。下午我去了电影院。电影很无聊。很高兴明天就是星期一了,我有可以返回学校见到我的好朋友了。
(6)Do you know fish ?Let me tell you something about it !fish have many kinds,and they are have many colour. some fish is big ,some fish is small.some fish is live in sea and some one is live in rivevr.of course, fish is also health food,so eat more it is better for ourbody!
你认识鱼吗?让我来告诉你有关鱼的一些知识吧!鱼有很多种类,也有很多颜色。有的大,有的小。有的生活的海里,有的生活在河里。因为鱼是一种有益于健康的食品,所以多吃一些鱼对我们的身体是有好处的。
(7)Talking clock
While proudly showing off his new apartment to friends, a college student led the way into the den. "What is the big brass gong and hammer for?" one of his friends asked. "That is the talking clock," the man replied. "How's it work?"
"Watch," the man said and proceeded to give the gong an ear shattering pound with the hammer. Suddenly, someone screamed from the other side of the wall, "Knock it off, you idiot! It's two o'clock in the morning!"
会说话的钟
一个学生带他朋友们参观他的新公寓,甚是得意。“那个大铜锣和锤子是干什么用的?”他的一个朋友问他。“那玩意儿厉害了,那是一个会说话的钟”,学生回答。“这钟怎么工作的”,他的朋友问。“看着,别眨眼了”,那学生走上前一把操起铜锣和锤子,拼命地敲了一下,声音震耳欲聋。突然,他们听到隔壁墙那边有人狂叫,“别敲了,你这白痴!现在是凌晨两点钟了!”
(8)speeding
A speeding motorist was waved down by a police patrol car. “I'm going to give you a ticket for speeding,” said the policeman, writing his note. “You've been driving over 60 miles per hour.”
“Would you mind making it 100, officer?” was the reply. “You see, I'm going to sell the car.”
超速行驶
一名超速行驶的驾驶员被巡逻警车拦住后,警察一边做记录,一边说:“我要给你开一张超速罚单,因为你刚才的车速已经超过了60英里。”
“警官,请你把时速写为100英里好吗?你知道,我正要打算卖这辆车。”
(9)My Sister's Fingers
Teacher: Kevin, why are you late this time?
Kevin: Please sir, I bruised two fingers knocking in a nail at
home.
Teacher: I don't see any bandages.
Kevin: Oh, they weren't my fingers! I told my little sister to
hold the nail.
我妹妹的手指头
老师:凯温,这次你怎么又迟到了?
凯温:对不起,老师,我在家钉钉子,砸坏了两个手指头。
老师:怎么没有扎绷带呀?
凯温:噢,砸的不是我的手指头,我叫小妹妹扶着钉子的。
(10)That is not my dog
A woman walks into a pet shop and sees a lovely little dog. She asks the shopkeeper, "Does your dog bite?"
The shopkeeper says, "No, my dog does not bite."
Then the woman bends down and tries to touch the dog. the dog bites her.
"Ouch!" she crys, "You said your dog did not bite."
The shopkeeper replies, "That is not my dog."
那不是我的狗
一位女士走进一家宠物店,看见一只很可爱的小狗.她问店主:"你的狗咬人吗?"
店主说:"不, 我的狗不咬人."
于是这位女士弯下腰想去摸摸这条狗. 狗咬了她.
"哎哟!"她叫道,"你说过你的狗不咬人的."
店主回答说:"那不是我的狗."
❸ 初一下册英语作文题目3篇
A seven day long holiday has flown away. Mourning my happy hours ring the vacation, I've been looking forward to winter holidays. People around me seemed to have enjoyed the vacation, too. Then, is it fair that people have the same amount of holidays regardless of their occupations? Nevertheless, divergent views emerge on the matter in question. Some people are of the opinion that laborers should have the same length of holiday. They hold the view that people are born equal and should be treated equally. The same amount of leisure time may eliminate the unfairness among people who might be upset psychologically if otherwise. At first sight, it may seem to be an attractive idea, but it doesn't bear much analysis. To begin with, people do different kinds of jobs featuring different labor intensity and so the time needed to refresh their physical condition varies. For example, blue collar workers may work longer hours before they get tired physically, while white collar workers such as doctors and teachers are more mentally stressed. Unable to work continuously as long as those physical labor workers, white collars need more time to pull through the mental weariness than physical tiredness. All in all, people in different jobs assume different responsibilities and have different degrees of pressure. Secondly, different tasks and ties are required for different professions, resulting in the variety of holiday periods for people in different walks of life. Some employees cannot have their legal holidays and even have to work overtime, such as policemen, construction workers and people in the service line.Those professions just can't be interrupted for a mornent;other wise the society will be in a mess. Even for some people in the same occupation, they cannot have the same holidays entitled to them e to many factors out of human control, such as special assignments, and health conditions etc, then not to say people in different fields. Suppose we, as teachers do, all have three months' holiday in a year. Then factories have to employ considerably more workers because some of them are enjoying happy holiday.That's obviously against the principles of doing business at lower cost and efficiency. If we have only three days off in a year, then all the people in our country will be working day after day. No one can squeeze time to visit those tourist resorts leisurely. It goes without saying that the tourist trade and catering instry thus cannot develop rapidly and healthily. 有什么问题 请随时提问 有问必答 这篇作文希望对你 有帮助 没有的话 我 在去英语作文大全 里面帮您找找看 一定会有你喜欢的作文哈 不过希望 找和自己水平差不多的 你找的太好了 老师以为你英文很好了 到考试 时候 就没那么理想了 所以建议 不要和自己水平差太多的
❹ 初一下册英语作文
经典作文选
作文类型一:某人度过的一天 (考查概率90%)
写作要求:介绍自己如何度过一个繁忙、快乐的周末,例如你早上、中午、下午各做了哪些事情,要求用一般过去时描述。(注意:下面有三种类似的范文,【】里的内容可以互换,套用时个别地方需要修改)
记叙文格式:1. My great weekend
How was your weekend? I had a great weekend. It was sunny on Saturday.【 I stayed at home and watched TV in the morning. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my parents. They bought some new clothes for me. I felt very happy. On Sunday morning, I met my classmates and we played basketball. In the afternoon, I visited my good friend Jim. He helped me with my English. In the evening, I did my homework and read a magazine. I enjoyed my weekend.】
书信格式:2. A letter from Jim to Mary
Dear Mary,
I’m very happy to get your letter. You asked me about my life on weekends. Now I’d like to tell you about my last weekend.
【On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I watched TV with my family for two hours. After supper I did some sports and then I went to English club to practice my English. On Sunday morning, I visited my uncle. In the afternoon, I studied for the history test. In the evening, I played chess with my father. I had fun over the weekend.】
How about your weekend? Write to me soon, OK?
Best wishes
Jim
日记格式:3. A diary
Wednesday, June 10th
It was cloudy today. I was busy all day but I was happy. 【In the morning, I cleaned my room, and then I washed my clothes. At about 7:00, I had breakfast. After that, I went to the movie with my friend Jim. It was an exciting action movie. In the afternoon, I went to the library. There were many people in it, but it was quiet. After supper, I watched sports shows on TV. Then I went to bed at about 9:30.】
写作要求:介绍自己如何度假,包括具体地名、天气状况、具体做了哪些事情,要求用一般过去时描写。
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4. How did I spend my vacation?
I went to Hainan on vacation. It was May Day. The weather was sunny and hot. I went to the beach with my parents. I went swimming and played volleyball. It was really fun. At dinner, we had a delicious seafood (海鲜) at a restaurant. We also went to some stores. They were always crowded and the things were too expensive. We took lots of photos. Some of them were very beautiful. We had a good vacation. I enjoyed myself very much.
作文类型二:介绍自己有关情况(考查概率75%)
1. A letter from Lily
Dear Kate,
Hi! I’m your new pen pal. My name is Lily. I am 14 years old, and I’m from Sydney, Australia. In Australia, we speak English. I have a good friend Li Lei. He is from China. And now he is my neighbor. We like playing the guitar very much. We both want to be pop singers. Please write to me soon.
Lily
写作要求:介绍自己的名字、年龄、来自哪里、喜欢的动物及食物,长大后想当什么等相关情况。
2. About me
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I am tall and thin and I have short curly hair. My favorite animals are tigers and pandas. And my favorite food is beef and tomato noodles. I am a student, and I want to be a doctor. I have many rules at home. I can’t go out at night and I have to get up at 6:00 am. I am reading a story-book now. it is fun.
作文类型三:进行时特定场面描写(考查概率55%)
1. In the park
It’s eight-thirty on Sunday morning. It’s very fine today. Dave and his friends are in the park. There are many people here. It’s very busy in the park. Look! What are Dave’s friends doing? Well, Dave, Jim and Kevin are playing soccer over there. Kate and Sally are dancing under a tree. Linda is playing the violin behind the tree. Near the tree, Julie is reading a book. Where are Tom and Ken? Oh, they’re swimming at a pool. They swim very well. Brad is listening to the music near the pool. He likes music very much. They are all happy. (Everyone is happy.)
2. On the playground
Today is Friday. The weather is fine. Our school is having a sports meeting. It’s very exciting, and all the students are busy. Look! Peter is running. Amy is playing volleyball. Tom is playing ping-pong. They are trying their best to win. Lots of students around are cheering them. Some students are taking photos. 类型四:介绍家人(考查概率45%)
写作要求:介绍自己或他人的家人,包括多少人口、爸爸妈妈的职业以及其他家庭成员的相关情况。(注意:如果要求写自己家人,下文里的主语稍微改下就行了)
Mr. Smith’s family
There are four people in Mr. Smith’s family. Mr. Smith is a driver. He works in a company. He works very hard. Mrs. Smith is a worker. She works in a shop. She is friendly and works hard, too. Their son, David Smith is a middle school student. He is at No. 14 Middle School in Beijing, China. He studies hard. He likes making friends. He likes playing basketball. He is learning Chinese. He can speak a little Chinese. Joy Smith, a 6-year-old girl, is Mr. and Mrs. Smith’s daughter. She likes playing with toys. They all like China. They like Chinese food and the people, too.
I wish you a good summer vacation and a good result!
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❺ 七年级下册英语作文8篇
一般现在时
My Favorite Season
My favourite season is summer. I like summer because it's a season of enthusiasm. In summer, everything turns energetic. We are the most efficient to do things at this period of time. What's more, we are able to do a lot of sports and activities in summer. The trees and grass become very green and beautiful and I like that colour for what it represents. It is a symbol of hope. And with hope, we are motivated and creative. So summer is also the season of hope. We are able to take cold drinks in summer which is my favourite as well. In a word, I like summer, because it makes me energetic and gives me hope.
My favourite teacher
I like my English teacher Miss* best.Miss * is tall and thin,she has long straight hair and big eyes,her voise is light,and she's very kind,so we all loves her.
Yesterday morning,I slept late and missed the bus,so I was late for school.When I arrived school,it was 10am.I thought that Miss * will be angry with me.However,she didn't be annoyed with me anymore.She just said don't be late again to me.How kind Miss * is!
There is another thing I can't forget.One day in her Ehglish class,she asked me to spell accountant.I am not good at Ehglish anymore,and I don't like to remember the words.So I stood and answered nothing.To my surprise,she only said that memorizing the words is important for our study.
Miss * is really kind,isn't she?So she is my favorite teacher.
般将来时
if i have enough money
if i have enough money,i will travel for seven days.the fitst day,i will go to beijing.because beijing is the capital city of china.first,i will go to tian'anmen square.and then,i will go to the palace museum.then,i will go to my grandparents'house .i miss them very much.from the third day to the sixth day,i will go to qing with my friends.i will go to swim in qing.at the last day,i will go on a trip to my city. i want to know my city carefully,
I think i will have fun.
Our life will change greatly in the future.
In the future, every family will own at least one computer, with which we can shop online without going out. That is really fantastic. Also, robots will be employed by every family. They can help do much of the housework. Therefore family members will have more free time to spend time together. In the future, kids don't need to attend school any more. There is internet access in every family, with the help of which kids can study by themselves.
现在进行时
Spring is coming,in the park,there are so many chilren and old men playing in the park.Lision,many birds are singing the song of Spring.The grasses are very green and soft.The flowers are very beautiful,most of them have come out.The park is very lively.I like this,I like Spring!
一般过去时
It was Sunday. I got up at seven o'clock. After breakfast I cleaned my room. Then I did my homework. I went shopping with my mother by bike in the afternoon. I met one of my best friend Li Lei and talked with her for a while. Before supper I played table tennis with my father. In the evening I surfed the internet and read books. I really had a busy and meaningful day.
After the Yushu earthquake ,our school held an Earthquake Safety Ecation Week . There were a lot of meaningful activities ring the week.On Mondey ,the whole school met in the playground and mourned for the dead in the quake .On Wednesday ,an expert was invited to give a lecture on how to escape from an earthquake .And on weekends,students came to the streets to raise money for Yushu.The Earthquake Safety Ecation Week was a big success.We have learnt how to protect ourselves in an earthquake and help others in trouble.Many students said they would do more things to help Yushu's people rebuild their homes.
I had a terrible last summer vacation.I had to get up early in the morning.Then I had to do my homework.It was boring and a little bit difficult.I can't stand it. In the afternoon, I had to go to the Children's Palace to learn English. Later, I had to help my mom clean the bedroom. I never had any fun in the vacation.How about you? How was your vacation?
翻译:我有一个可怕的暑假。我必须每天早上起床很早。然后,我必须做我的作业,它很无聊和有点难。我无法忍受它。在下午,我必须去少年宫学英语。接着,我必须帮助我的妈妈打扫卧室。在暑假我从来没有快乐。你呢?你的暑假怎么样?
❻ 初一下,英语作文30篇,带翻译
①This summer holiday I plan to go to the beach.I will go there with my parents and cousins.We'll stay there for three days at the local hotel.The trip will be the most wonderful one that I have ever had.Because we will do a lot of things there,such as playing volleyball ,windsurfing ,having barbecue at night.I'm really looking foward to it.
②With Time past, our summer holiday is nearly over. But I don't regret, because I did a lot of significative things ring the holiday.
First, I did all of the homework quickly.Then the rest of days, I went back to my hometown to visit my relatives. We had a good time there. When I came back to my home, I did some sports every day to make my body healthy, such as football, basketball, swimming, badminton and so on. And I also went to happy valley. I really enjoyed my summer holiday!
Though I miss my summer holiday, I am a student. I can't forget to study. I will work harder in the new term and have a higher grade.I believe I can do that.
③I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school ecation and would after graation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.
④I often go to see my grandma and grandpa ring my summer vacation.They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily. Summer view of the countryside is very beautiful. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning, breathing the fresh air,listening to the birds singing, and enjoying the green trees, red flowers and the river. I like fishing with my friends. When night comes, I sit under the tree with my grandma, listening to her telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back,I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.
⑤I like the summer holiday every year. Last summer I went to Beijing for my holiday, Beijing is our capital city. I went to the Summer Palace, climbed the Great Wall and went to many places of interest. I had a very good time. During this summer holiday, I went to Putuo and Xiangshan. I saw the beautiful sea. I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the moonlight. It's really "cool".
When I at home, I do my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I practise playing the piano. But in the evening I can watch TV after a long walk with my parents.
If you ask me what my favourite summer holiday will be like, traveling around the world is the only answer. I like travelling so much that l often meet different people and visit different places of interest in my dream. I wish I can have two summer holidays in a year.
⑥The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.
⑦Summer can be very hot in southern Taiwan where the temperature usually goes up to 32"C or more. Because of the heat it is a trying experience to go to school or do anything else in a place that is not air-conditioned. Also because of this I stay at home most of the time ring the summer vacation and only occasionally go to the beach to plunge myself into the cool water as a way to keep my body less sticky. Actually I like swimming and think nothing is more refreshing than a swim. In the summer vacation that has just ended I went swimming many times with my classmates and we all had a good time. This summer vacation, however, was not spent entirely in seeking fun. As a second-year senior student I had to prepare myself for the college entrance examinations that were only a year away. In other words, I must find time to study, too. So I divided my time between work and play ring the summer vacation and derived much benefit from this arrangement.
⑧I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school ecation and would after graation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.
送你几篇
My Summer holidays
I love holidays,because ring holidays ,I can do everything I like,and study something new.Now the summer holidays is coming,I'm going to do something meaningful.
I like English,I spell words well,but I can not speak English very well.So I want to improve my English in the holiday.I will read English every moring,and then I think my English must be improved.
I will also learn to swim.I think it is very helpful.
There are too many things to do,I believe in myself can do them well!
My summer holiday must be a good one !
This is my summer vacation. I intend to finish the operation. Then, take a look at China’s famous novel. Look at some day. Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch TV. Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other sports. But it is concive to our body! But one thing should not be forgotten. must help parents do the housework!
总抄作业还是不好的,快开学了,也帮你一把,毕竟我自己以前也赶过作业,很辛苦的,要记得下次放假早点把作业写完哈。
❼ 七年级下册英语作文
经典作文选
作文类型一:某人度过的一天
(考查概率
90%
)
写作要求:介绍自己如何度过一个繁忙、快乐的周末,例如你早上、中午、
下午各做了哪些事情,
要求用
一般过去时
描述。
(
注意
:
下面有三种类似的范文,
【】里的内容可以互换,套用时个别地方需要修改)
记叙文格式:
1.
My great weekend
How was your weekend? I had a great weekend. It was sunny on Saturday.
【
I
stayed at home and watched TV in the morning. In the afternoon, I went shopping
with my parents. They bought some new clothes for me. I felt very happy. On Sunday
morning, I met my classmates and we played basketball. In the afternoon, I visited my
good friend Jim. He helped me with my English. In the evening, I did my homework
and read a magazine. I enjoyed my weekend.
】
书信格式:
2.
A letter from Jim to Mary
Dear Mary,
I’
m very happy to get your letter. You asked me about my life on weekends. Now
I’
d like to tell you about my last weekend.
【
On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I
watched TV with my family for two hours. After supper I did some sports and then I
went to English club to practice my English. On Sunday morning, I visited my uncle.
In the afternoon, I studied for the history test. In the evening, I played chess with my
father. I had fun over the weekend.
】
How about your weekend? Write to me soon, OK?
Best wishes
Jim
日记格式:
3.
A diary
Wednesday, June 10
th
It
was
cloudy
today.
I
was
busy
all
day
but
I
was
happy.
【
In
the
morning,
I
cleaned my room, and then I washed my clothes. At about 7:00, I had breakfast. After
that, I went to the movie with my friend Jim. It was an exciting action movie. In the
afternoon, I went to the library. There were many people in it, but it was quiet. After
supper, I watched sports shows on TV
. Then I went to bed at about 9:30.
】
写作要求:介绍自己如何度假
,
包括具体地名、天气状况、具体做了哪些事
情,要求用一般过去时描写。
初高中海量作文大全
小升初 中考满分 高考满分 高考零分
4.
How did I spend my vacation?
I went to Hainan on vacation. It was May Day. The weather was sunny and hot. I
went
to
the beach with my parents.
I went
swimming and played volleyball.
It
was
really fun. At dinner, we had a delicious seafood (
海鲜
) at a restaurant. We also went
to
some
stores.
They
were
always
crowded
and
the
things
were
too
expensive.
We
took
lots
of
photos.
Some
of
them
were
very
beautiful.
We
had
a
good
vacation.
I
enjoyed myself very much.
作文类型二:介绍自己有关情况(考查概率
75%
)
1.
A letter from Lily
Dear Kate,
Hi!
I’
m
your new pen pal.
My name is
Lily.
I am
14
years old,
and
I’
m from
Sydney, Australia. In Australia, we speak English. I have a good friend Li Lei. He is
from China. And now he is my neighbor. We like playing the guitar very much. We
both want to be pop singers. Please write to me soon.
Lily
写作要求:介绍自己的名字、年龄、来自哪里、喜欢的动物及食物,长大后想当
什么等相关情况。
2.
About me
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I am tall and thin and I have short curly hair.
My favorite animals are tigers and pandas. And my favorite food is beef and tomato
noodles. I am a student, and I want to be a doctor. I have many rules at home. I can
’
t
go out at night and I have to get up at 6:00 am. I am reading a story-book now. it is
fun.
作文类型三:进行时特定场面描写(考查概率
55%
)
1.
In the park
It
’
s eight-thirty on Sunday morning. It
’
s very fine today. Dave and his friends are
in the park. There are many people here. It
’
s very busy in the park. Look! What are
Dave
’
s friends doing? Well, Dave, Jim and Kevin are playing soccer over there. Kate
and Sally are dancing under a tree. Linda is playing the violin behind the tree. Near
the tree, Julie is reading a book. Where are Tom and Ken? Oh, they
’
re swimming at a
pool.
They
swim
very
well.
Brad
is
listening
to
the
music
near
the
pool.
He
likes
music very much. They are all happy. (Everyone is happy.)
2.
On the playground
Today is Friday. The weather is fine. Our school is having a sports meeting. It
’
s
very exciting, and all the students are busy.
Look! Peter is running. Amy is playing
volleyball.
Tom
is
playing
ping-pong.
They
are
trying
their
best
to
win.
Lots
of
students around are cheering them. Some students are taking photos.
类型四:介绍家人(考查概率
45%
)
写作要求:
介绍自己或他人的家人,
包括多少人口、
爸爸妈妈的职业以及其他家
庭成员的相关情况。
(注意:如果要求写自己家人,下文里的
主语
稍微改下就行
了)
Mr. Smith
’
s family
There are four people in Mr. Smith
’
s family. Mr. Smith is a driver. He works in a
company. He works very hard. Mrs. Smith is a worker. She works in a shop.
She is
friendly and works hard, too. Their son, David Smith is a middle school student. He is
at No. 14 Middle School in Beijing, China. He studies hard. He likes making friends.
He likes playing basketball. He is learning Chinese. He can speak a little Chinese. Joy
Smith, a 6-year-old girl, is Mr. and Mrs. Smith
’
s daughter. She likes playing with toys.
They all like China. They like Chinese food and the people, too.
❽ 急求初一下册英语作文10篇!!!
七年级下 英语作文
unit 1
Dear friend,
My neme is Wang Ping I come from China. My frist name is Ping and last name is Wang. I'm 14 years old. I can speak Chinese and a little english. I like palying vollerball. I like going to the movies. My favorite movie is Rush Hour because I like Cheng Long very much. I have a brother,Wang Qiang and a sister,Wang Li. Ther like going to the
movies, too.
unit 2
dear mike,
i konw you're arriving next sunday.let me tell you the way to my house.take a taxi from the airport. you pass a bank on your right and then go down long street. you go through sixth avenue and seventh avenue. then you see a big supermarket,turn left at new park. then go down and my house is on your right.
unit 3
there is a new zoo in our city. the zoo is really interesting because there are all kinds of animals in it. people all like them very much. i like going there on sundays. i like koalas very much because ther're very cute. but they're kiof lazy. they sleep ring the day and get up at night. they're also very friendly tu us.
unit 4
i'm a student now and i study in no.2 middle school. i like study. i study every day . i think it's very interesting. in the future. i want to be a reporter. i think it's an exciting job. i like talking to people. i like going to many different places. i like meeting lots of interesting people. but sometimes it's a little dangerous. i like exciting work.
unit 5
look! this is a happy family. this is bruce's family. bruce is playing computer games. he likes it very much. his grandmother is watering the flowers.his father is reading a book. his mother is watching tv. she likes the tv show very much. his sister mary is doing her homework. everyone is having a good time.
unit 6
dear frank,
i'm a middle school student in mengzi. it's a beautiful city. and i like the weather here. it's warm in spring. it's a little windy so we can fly kites in the park. it's hot in summereople like swimming in this season. it's cool in autumn. people like palying sports outside. in winter, it's very cold and it often snows. people like wearing scarfs and go skiing. people have a good time all the year.
yours,
mike
unit 7
dear mike
we have a new english teacher this term. her name is julia. she's very good-looking. she's tall and of medium build. her hair is long and curly. she likes teaching english very much. her class is very interesting. she often plays games with us. she likes reading very much. she always goes to the library on weekends. she's really friendly. we all like her and her class
yours,
peter
unit 8
my neme's xiao li. i'm a chinese girl. i like mplings best. because ther're our chinese treditional food. i'd like mplings on some festivals. i like mplings with beef best. i usually have porridge and an egg for breakfast. for lunch, i usually have rice, vegetables and pork. i like noodles and fish fmy sypper. i eat fruit every day. i'm very healthy.
unit 9
mike is my good friend. he had a busy weekend because he did lots of things on sa=taurday and on sunday. let me tell you what he did. on saturday morning, he did homework. he studied hard. in the afternoon, he cleaned the room. in the evening, he helped his parents wash the dishes. on sunday morning, he was very happy. in the evening, he studied for the english test. he liked english very much. mike had a busy but interesting weekend.
unit10
last saturday, tom got up at 6 o'clock, then he walked in the park. and he did exercise. at noon, he ate in KFC with his parents. he enjoyed the food very much. in the afternoon, he played soccer with his classmates on the school playground. they played from 2 pm to 4 pm. tom had a really fun day.
unit 11
peter and liam are talking about some tv shows. peter loves talk shows and he thinks they're really interesting. liam likes them, too. liam loves sports shows very mu because he likes sports. peter likes them, too. peter doesn't like soap operas because he think ther're too boring, but liam doesn't mind them. peter doesn't mind game shows but liam doesn't like them.
unit 12
my school rules
there are many rules in our school. we have to wear school uniforms every day. we have to boring our school id cards with us. we can't talk loudly at anytime. we can't run or jump in the hallways. we can't listen to music in the classroom. we can't eat snacks at school. we can't eat in the classroom. we have to eat in the dining hall.
热 嗯的 年少轻狂
ps:错误的请不要介意,更何况本来就没有错误
ther're too boring, but liam doesn't mind them. peter doesn't mind game shows but liam doesn't like them.
unit 12
my school rules
there are many rules in our school. we have to wear school uniforms every day. we have to boring our school id cards with us. we can't talk loudly at anytime. we 't run or jump in the hallways. we can't listen to music in the classroom. we can't eat snacks at school. we can't eat in the classroom. we have to eat in the dining hall.
❾ 初一下学期英语作文 30篇 人教版
1.Traveling to Dalian
Summer holidday is coming.I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with mw.Tom is 17 years old ,he like China very much.One week ago,I wrote him a letter,inviting him to come to Dalian for the holidays.Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then we'll show him around the city.We'll go to the beach to watch the sea first.Then we'll visit some insteresing places.Tony will live in my house ring the holiday.I hope we'll have a good time.
2.My Summer Plan
I am glad that summer holiday is approaching.I'll be able to enjoy and relax myselve,which is not easy for me,a pre-graated student.In order to have a meanningful holiday,I made a plan.First,I would like to do some housework at home.such as cleaning the room,washing the dishes,watering the flowers.Then I am going to do some exercises,including ball games,running.Finally,I want to work at my study.I'll go over my lessons and pratise my English.
3. .Traveling to Dalian
Summer holidday is coming.I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with mw.Tom is 17 years old ,he like China very much.One week ago,I wrote him a letter,inviting him to come to Dalian for the holidays.Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then we'll show him around the city.We'll go to the beach to watch the sea first.Then we'll visit some insteresing places.Tony will live in my house ring the holiday.I hope we'll have a good time.
4.It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
5.It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
6.It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother’s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother’s company. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.
7.It is a special day today. My mother sent one hundred basket of red bayberries. I like to eat red bayberries. It tastes nice. When they arrived in Shanghai, they were still fresh. But most of them would be sent to my mother’s business friends. I chose the best basket of red bayberries to eat. I put the rest in my refrigerator. Red bayberry is my hometown’s special proct. It is well-known in china. Many people like to eat it.
8.Today, I still went to my mother’s office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I can’t do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It’ time for me to begin to learn how to work.
❿ 初一下学期所有的英语作文
英语作文 英语作文的基本要求:
首先,一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想,该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic),这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次,一个段落必须有若干推展句,使主题思想得到充分展开,从而给读者一个完整的感觉,这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者,一个段落不是杂乱无章的,而是有机的组合,句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑,从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth),这就是连贯性(coherence)。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例:
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主题句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences,一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,这一段是讲的是Joe and I ,中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子:
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有两个irrelevant sentences,一个是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出,native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了,造成偏题或离题,那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样,一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现,如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实,就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样,虽然有推展句,但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待,给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如:
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”(心境不平静)Physical work又如何能改变这种情况?为什么它能起therapy的作用?读者得不到明确的答案。因此,要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如:
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法,必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释,整个段落内容空洞,简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话,就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段:
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、连贯性(coherence)
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。
1)、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段从“rose”(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐(“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”),然后是“close to noon”,一直写到这一天结束(“By nine——”)。
B. 按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如:
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的写法是由远及近,从远处(“from a distance”)写起,然后“get closer”,再到(“ten feet away”),最后是“inside the pagoda”……当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。
C. 按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
a. 按重要性顺序排列(arrangement in order of importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”,最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness,先给出一个general statement作为主题句,然后通过5个 ”perhaps”加以例证。
c. 由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主题句是段首句,它仅提出一个问题:为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较,末句才下结论。
2)、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语:
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是转换词语(transitional words or phrases),另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有词汇105个,所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流(smoothness)有益,而且对于学生在半个小时内写120个词也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的”it”之外,没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样,文中出现许多重复的词语,全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话,这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
4、有损连贯性的几种情况:
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误:
1、不必要的改变时态,比如:
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改变单复数,比如:
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改变人称,比如:
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此写作中,一定要注意时态,人称以及数的变化是否正确,要注意保持一致。
英语作文的书写格式
英文书写应符合书写规范,英文字母要写清楚、写整齐、写美观,字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。书写应做到字形秀丽漂亮,通篇匀称和谐。
写英文字母要掌握正确笔顺。如字母i,应该先写下面的部分,然后再打点。有的学生却按写汉字的习惯从上到下写,写快了,就会把点和下面的十笔连在量起,显得十分别扭。字形t应为两笔。不少人却将两笔合成一笔,看上去不像t,倒像l或是e,难以辨认。另外,把r写成v,把q写成把g,把k写成h等等,都是中学生书写中常见的毛病。
不少人在四线三格的练习纸上书写尚有规矩,能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求书写,但在白纸或横线纸上书写,却显得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下,或一律写成同一高度,占上中两格的字母与占中下两格的字母完全没有高低之别。这些现象都要防止。
另外,书写时还要注意词与词之间要保持一定的距离,不能紧靠在一起。字母之间的连写也应该按照习惯,不能随意乱来。
在一篇字数有限的作文里,我们还要注意尽量不把一个单词拆开移行。万一要移行,则必须以音节为单位进行,如revolution这个词,依照音节移行的原则可以按re-,revo-, revolu-这几种方法移行。在移行时,我们还应特别注意以下几点:
1. 单音节词不能移行,即使是字母较多的单音节词,如through等也不能例外。
2.缩略词如Mr.,Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆开移行。
缩略的专用名词如U.K.,U.S.A等也不能拆开移行。
3.时间、量度及货币单位应视为一个整体;不能分开移行。如;
11:00P.M.应写在一行内,不能将11:00和P.M.分开移行;写38℃时,不能将36和C分开移行。
4.由“年、月、日”表示的日期,如果必须分开移行只能将“月、日”与“年”分开。如January 6,1980不能将January和6分开移行,但可以把January 6,和1980分成两行。
5.含双写辅音字母的单词,在移行时要将辅音字母拆开。如better可拆成better,necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果双写辅音字母属于词根,后面又加了后缀,就不能将两个辅音字母拆开。如drill加上-ing后构成了drilling,就不可以将它拆成成dril-ling,而只能拆为drilling。