『壹』 商务英语作文范文+中文翻译（1000字左右）
Dear xxx,
Hope you everything goes well.
Recently, the price of wheat is rising rapidly, which proces a negative effect on the sales. And there is no sign of lowering in the near future. Thus, we would like to decline our order of the wheat. Hope you take into consideration of our situation. We will discuss with you futhur about the details of exact quantity if you agree with it.
Your immediate reply will be appreciated.
Best regards.
Yours,
亲爱的，，，希望万事顺利近来，小麦的价格不断在上涨，在生产销售的时候出现了负面的影响，在不久的将来，这些没有标志的货物会降低成本，因此，我们愿意降低我们的成本，希望你们能顾及到我们的情形，如果你同意这样，我们将进一步详细的正确的数量你方立刻答复我方将不胜感激。诚挚的问候你们
『贰』 怎么写商务英语的作文啊 求例文
例：The Internet provides an amazing forum for the free exchange of ideas. Given the relatively few restrictions governing access and usage, it is the communications modal equivalent of international waters.
题目：Alienation and the Internet （网络，你“离间”了人群？）
你是一个每日无网不成欢的“网虫”、“网蝶”？ 抑或是一个问世间网为何物的“网盲”？网络正潜移默化地改变着现代人的生活，而现代人也就其与自身的关系进行着深深的思索。
The Internet provides an amazing forum for the free exchange of ideas. Given the relatively few restrictions governing access and usage, it is the communications modal equivalent of international waters.1 It is my personal belief that the human potential can only be realized by the globalization of ideas. I developed this position2 years before the Internet came into wide spread use. And I am excited at the potential for the Internet to dramatically alter our global society for the better. However I am also troubled by the possible unintended negative consequences.
There has been much talk about the "new information age." But much less widely reported has been the notion that the Internet may be responsible for furthering the fragmentation of society by alienating its indivial users.3 At first this might sound like an apparent contradiction: how can something, that is on the one hand responsible for global unification by enabling the free exchange of ideas, alienate the participants?
I had a recent discussion with a friend of mine who has what he described as a "problem" with the Internet. When I questioned him further he said that he was "addicted,"4 and has "forced" himself to go off-line. He said that he felt like an alcoholic, in that moderate use of the Internet was just not possible for him.5 I have not known this fellow to be given to exaggeration, therefore when he described his internet binges,6 when he would spend over twenty-four hours on line non-stop, it gave me pause to think. He said, "the Internet isn't real, but I was spending all my time on line, so I just had to stop." He went on to say that all of the time that he spent on line might have skewed7 his sense of reality, and that it made him feel lonely and depressed.
The fragmentation of society has been lamented for some time now. It seems to me that it probably began in earnest after World War II when a generation returned from doing great deeds overseas. They won the war, and by God they were going to win the peace. Automobile ownership became commonplace and suburbs were created. "Progress" was their mantra.8 So even prior to the Internet's widespread popularity, folks were already becoming distanced from their extended families and neighbors. And when we fast-forward to today we see an almost cruel irony in that people can and often do develop on-line relationships with folks on the other side of the globe, without leaving their homes. But at the expense of the time that would have otherwise been available for involvement in other activities which might foster a sense of community in their villages, towns and cities.
Last weekend my wife and I invited our extended family to our home to celebrate our daughter's birthday. During the celebration my young nephew spent the entire time on my computer playing a simulated war game. My brother-in-law and I were chatting near by and it struck us that in generations past, his son, my nephew, would have been outside playing with his friends. But now the little fellow goes on line to play his games against his friends in cyberspace.
It seems to me that the Internet is a powerful tool that presents an opportunity for the advancement of the acquisition and application of knowledge. However, based on my personal experience I can understand how, as they surf the web some folks might be confronted with cognitive overload.9 And I can also understand how one might have his or her sense of reality distorted in the process. Is the Internet a real place? Depending upon how a "real place" is defined it might very well be. At the very least, I believe that when we use the Internet, we are forced to ask fundamental questions about how we perceive the world about us—perhaps another unintended consequence. Some would argue that the virtual existences created by some users who debate, shop, travel and have romance on line are in fact not real. While others would argue that, since in practical terms, folks are debating, shopping, travelling and having romance, the converse is true.
All of this being said, I believe that the key to realizing the potential of the Internet is in achieving balance in our lives. This would allow us to maximize its potential without losing our sense of place.10 However like most things that is easier said than done. It seems to me that we are a society that values immediate gratification above all else, and what better place to achieve it than in cyberspace, where the cyber-world is your cyber-oyster.11 The widespread use of the automobile forever changed our society and culture, and perhaps a similar sort of thing is occurring now. I am not at all certain where the "information superhighway" will lead us: some say to Utopia,12 while others feel it's the road to hell. But I do know that we all have the ability to maintain our sense of place in the world. Whether we choose to take advantage of this ability is another matter.
1．上网的途径及网络的应用所受到的限制相对还比较少，就这点来说，网上交流相当于在国际海域行驶。
2．position：立场，观点。
3．由于网络使个人用户之间彼此疏远，从而有可能导致社会的进一步分化，这种观点却没有得到广泛报导。
4．addict：使沉湎、使入迷。
5．他说自己就像一个酒鬼，适量控制上网时间对他来讲是不可能的。alcoholic：饮酒过度的人，嗜酒者。
6．binge：无节制的狂热行为。
7．skew：歪曲，曲解。
8．mantra：（印度教和大乘佛教中的）曼特罗，祷文。作者用以喻指发展是当时社会的主题，是被经常提及同时又是人们所推崇的。
9．有些人上网时可能还会面临一个认知超载的问题。意思是网上的资料太多了。cognitive overload：认知的超载。
10．place：位置，地位。
11．在我看来，我们所生活的社会重视即时利益高于一切，而没有什么地方能比网络空间让人更快获得即时利益，因为在网络世界里你可以随心所欲。
gratification：可以从中获得利益或乐趣等的事物。oyster：满足，给人快意的物(原因)。
12．Utopia：乌托邦，理想中最美好的社会。
『叁』 商务英语作文怎么写
商务英语中的书信的格式有三种，我们最常用的是齐头式。它与一般书信的格式是回不同的，开头顶答格写称呼Dear sir /madam, 第一段与称呼的那行空一行r然后顶格写内容，写第二段时 ，要与第一段空一行的距离，然后顶格写内容，第三段同样与第二段空一行的距离，然后写内容。即段与段之间空一行的距离，开头顶格写。这是与一般书信最大的不同，结尾署名也与最后一段空一行的距离，然后顶格写Sincerely,再起一行顶格写上你的名字
Dear Sir,
Thank you fou your letter.
Our procts will be shipped in July.
I will appreciated if I can get your offer!
『肆』 写商务英语作文
Business English communication is a professional international trade doors vocational skills classes, English as a means of communication for business activities also represent the graates who work in the most widespread application of business English knowledge. After a semester of learning, I have basically mastered the international business English communications basic knowledge, the use of skilled foreign trade messages in the various language methods and formats, the correct use of professional terminology, from the establishment of business relations, credit investigation, the site, offer, counter-offer, orders, payment, transport, insurance, claims, settlements and other trade links to the letters of credit, invoices, bills of lading and other documents of the foreign trade of the proction, and also included confirmation, agreements, contracts, etc. set. With China's accession to the World Trade Organization, as well as a growing number of enterprises to enter the international market, foreign trade practitioners social needs constant development. This vast number of job-seekers to create good jobs. Cross-border between different countries commodity trading. As a result of the transaction the parties belonging to two different countries or regions, and therefore engaged in such business activities more than domestic complex, difficult, and thus more challenging. This requires a solid business personnel in the basic knowledge and highly operational capability in the modern international business activities, the use of skilled foreign trade and business English knowledge of English letters. The class will study the contents of a full integration practice work.
『伍』 商务英语作文
Dear xxx,
Hope you everything goes well.
Recently, the price of wheat is rising rapidly, which proces a negative effect on the sales. And there is no sign of lowering in the near future. Thus, we would like to decline our order of the wheat. Hope you take into consideration of our situation. We will discuss with you futhur about the details of exact quantity if you agree with it.
Your immediate reply will be appreciated.
Best regards.
Yours,
xxx
『陆』 商务英语作文大全
. 现在网络资源这么丰富，只要好好利用，一定对写作有帮助的，你没有必要去花钱买书啊，毕竟版书权本上的东西也只是编者从其他地方找来的。你可以自己去找一些资源比较丰富的学习论坛啊，里面不仅仅有学习方法和经验的分享，而且还有网络资源的共享以及下载，还可以找一个志同道合的伙伴一起练习一起奋斗，这样学习下来动力也比较大，也比较持久吧，另外比如爱词霸论坛，chinadaily的学习论坛也是不错的选择。
就像我之前学的那个网络写作班，它也是有一个资料的免费获取，报名还赠送语法讲座视频和电子英语杂志，挺好的啊~ http://justsaythreewords.blog.163.com/blog/static/19729426420119174371754/
『柒』 急求商务英语写作文章例文
The Internet has changed a lot of things within the business world, including business correspondence. here once traditional, formal business letters were normal, quick business e-mails now rule the day. The ease and informality of the Internet often makes it seem we can write business e-mails poorly and get away with it; yet, it’s actually the contrary. Because e-mail is so accessible, people receive that much more of it and disregard anything less than perfect. Your business e-mails must stand out from the junk. The following tips will help you to create concise, engaging business e-mails for any purpose.
网络改变了商务世界的很多方面，商务信函便是其中之一。曾经，传统且正式的商务信件很常见，而今，快捷的商务电邮成为主流。网络的便捷性和随意性常常让我们觉得，似乎商务电邮写得糟糕没什么大不了的。然而，事实恰好相反。因为写一封电子邮件太轻而易举了，所以人们收到那么多之后，便只处理那些写得好的——你的商务电邮必须从电邮堆中脱颖而出才行。以下要点能帮助你写出适用于任何目的的简洁、抢眼的商务电邮。
STYLE
The human eye reacts differently to a computer screen than a piece of paper, so how you format your e-mail is vital. Use short, succinct sentences that get to the point immediately; remember, your goal here is to dispense important information, so give that to the reader right up front. Always include a greeting and a signature, and use as many line and paragraph breaks as possible; this makes the e-mail easier to read. And resist the urge to write a book. Business e-mails are better off short; the equivalent of a page or so is sufficient.
风格
人眼对电脑屏幕和纸张的反应不同，所以如何安排电邮的格式非常重要。使用短小简洁的句子直奔主题；记住，写电邮的目的是为了传达重要信息，所以要让读邮件的人首先看到要点。不管什么情况都要包含问候语和署名，并且尽量多折行多分段——这能使邮件更易读。还有，要抑制长篇大论的冲动：商务电邮最好简短；相当于一页纸左右的量就足够了。
TONE
For better or worse, the Internet breeds a nasty habit of informality. It’s okay to be slightly informal with your e-mail (people tend to expect it lately), but don’t write as if you’re talking to your mother or best friend. You need to strike a balance between traditional formality and e-mail informality. Think about your recipient and how they’d most likely write an e-mail. What words would they use? Would slang or jargon offend your readers? Use these considerations to create a concise, customized e-mail.
语气
暂不论其好坏，网络滋生了“非正式”交流的恶习。电邮稍微非正式一点没有关系（人们最近开始接受了），但是不要写得好像是在跟妈妈或最好的朋友谈话一样。你需要在传统意义上的正式和电邮的非正式中找到平衡。想想收件人的风格，以及他们最可能怎样写电邮。他们会使用什么词汇？俚语或行话会不会冒犯到读邮件的人？将这些因素考虑在内，才能写出一封有针对性的简洁邮件。
GRAMMAR
Informality, whatever its root, does not excuse grammatical errors, and these can damage your e-mail. Grammatical errors show that you didn’t put much time into your business e-mail and you probably don’t care much about your message. Go through your e-mail carefully to make sure you have spelled correctly, and you have fixed all grammar and punctuation mistakes. Remove all rendancies and get rid of any clichés. Recipients, especially professional business people, will appreciate your attention to details and they will respond better to your message when no errors exist in your e-mail.
语法
不管“非正式”如何发展而来，这都不意味着允许犯语法错误—这些错误会毁了你的电邮。语法错误说明你没有在商务电邮上下多少功夫，而且你很可能不太在乎你所传达的信息。仔细通读电邮，以确定拼写正确，并且修订了所有的语法和标点错误。删除所有的多余信息和陈词滥调。收件人—尤其是那些职业商人—会很欣赏你注重细节，而且，如果你发给他们的电邮里没有错误的话，他们会态度更好地回复你的消息。
RESPONSE
Since e-mail is an immediate medium, and a highly accessible one at that, it’s far easier than in paper letters to request a response – and far more likely that you’ll get one! Before signing off with your signature, be clear about what you want the recipient to do. Need a response via phone or with certain information attached? Say so! Your recipient will have a difficult time responding if they have no idea what you want from them. But remember: be polite when requesting action. There’s little worse than an overly forward or pushy ending.
回复
电邮是即时媒体， 也因此是一个高度普及的媒体。和纸质邮件相比，通过电邮要求对方回复更便捷—而且，你更有可能收到回复！在落款之前，一定要清楚你期望收件人做什么。需要电话回复还是附上特定的信息？ 说出来！ 如果收件人不知道你想要什么，他们答复你的时候就会很费神。但要记住：要求回复时一定要客气。几乎没有什么比在邮件结束时过度催促或强求更糟糕了。
『捌』 求商务英语的作文模板
BEC当中，我的写作是最高分，如果你不好好准备写作，那么久很吃亏。英语写作思维方式跟我们不太一样，尤其还是商务英语的写作。那么怎么才能写好呢？写作你主要是把句型记住，所谓句型，就是一些套话。不管是小写作还是大写作，每句都有各自的套话。你把4本真题的作文都看了，保证每天都写2编，我当时是一点都写不出，然后就看着答案，然后自己有点改动，把句子写成自己容易记住的句子，这样使句子好记住又不乏地道感。并且反复的练，每天都会有些，虽然有点麻烦，但是上手后，很简单。我去年考试的时候题目还跟真题的题目有类似情节。大，小作文都有。写的也很顺手，成绩单上是execellent.所以你只要把真题的作文变成自己的作文就可以了，当然不是照抄那种，也不是死记硬背。把范文的句子写成自己容易记住的句子，在原句中增加或是舍掉一些自己总是忘掉或是写不好的个别单词，剑桥商务英语中写作部分也是重点,我觉得剑桥商务英语要想拿到高分,应该把需要注意的问题牢牢记在心里,考试时用这些条条框框的东西去套一下，就可以把错误及时纠正了。比如，尽量使用客观中立的用语，避免加入个人感情色彩；如果分析得出几个结论要拣最有把握的写；注意文章的时态，有时用现在时，有时用过去时，但一定要选择同一个时间基准……需要总结的东西很多，大家可以自己去体会。希望你准备考试的过程中努力，注意：考生写作时，务必充分理解题目要求，明白写作者的身份，看懂并结合提供的信息。格式上不要一会儿英英单词一会儿美英单词，保证它的统一性。没有固定的应试写作模板的，网上的模板也不适用于应付BEC考试的，所以这个LZ就不用纠结了，按我的方法可以做得很好。希望能帮到你。
『玖』 大学商务英语作文万能模版
我以前用的模板，十句作文法。
原因模式：给出一个图表或现象，要求说明其原因。
1. In the last few years,there has been a growing tendency in……
2. According to the chart, the percentage of ……has nearly increased by……percent compared with last year.
3. There are several of reasons for this significant increase.
4. First,……
5. 一句话具体阐述第一点原因
6. Second,……
7. 一句话具体阐述第二点原因
8. Perhaps the fundmental reason is……
9. 一句话具体阐述第三点原因
10. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that……
比较模式1：要求比较两个事物，能区分优劣。
1. In recent few years,……
2. Although ……（事物有某优点）,I believe……( B事物更好)
3. To be sure,……（承认A事物有优点，一句话具体说明）
4. But,there are also some disadvantages.
5. Just think…..(一句话说明A事物缺点)
6. It also affects……(一句话说明A事物第二个缺点)
7. On the other hand,……（承认B事物优点）
8. 一句话说明B事物优点
9. Besides……（一句话说明B事物另一优点）
10. The advantage is more than……,
比较模式2：要求比较两个事物，不能区分优劣。
1.…….are the two basic ways in which……
2.There are advantages and disadvantages to both ways.
3.the biggest advantage of ……is……
4.For example,……
5.Another advantage is……
6.But the disadvantage is……
7.By comparison,……
8.一句话说明另一事物优点
9.There is again a disadvantage:……
10.In my opinion,a balance of the two ways……
阐述模式：阐述评论事物的意义，重要性等。
1. With the advance in……,more and more……
2. In my opinion,……plays an important role in……
3. ……will exert a harmful effect of both……and……
4. To have a full appreciation of……,we may first look at……
5. Recent statistics have showed that……
6. Second,……
7. A typical example of this is that……
8. Perhaps the most remarkable advantage is that……
9. I can think of no better illustration of the effect than the fact that……
10. The consequence of ……cannot be overstressed,for……
评论模式：评论某一事物，从正反面分析。
1. In recent years,the phenomenon has been brought to public attention.
2. People’s views on……vary widely.
3. As is often pointed out……
4. There is no doubt that……
5. 一句话具体说明其优点。
6. Despite all the advantages,……,it may also bring its own problem
7. The main problem with……is……
8. ……pose a serious problem for……
9. In addition……
10. Whether it is good or not,one thing is certain:……
『拾』 求商务英语作文2篇
第一篇：
Gentlemen,
I would like to report to you a matter, that my subordinate Bob has left the laptop on train on his way home, and he has contacted the railway station for this omission, but it is not that likely to get it back. Bob has wrote me a letter to explain the entire details, I will update you latter.
Best Regards,
Jack
第二篇：
According to the diagram, we can know more about the unemployment trend of US, EU and Japan from 1950 to 1995. During the past 45 years, the unemployment rate of Japan had presented a stable curve with an approximate value 2% and despite those two oil price shocks, that indicates, in this period, the economy and employment of Japan were in a prime time as well as not subject to the international oil price. On the contrary, the unemployment curve of US exhibited to us a more variable status, which had a distribution with a maximum more than 8% and a minimum less than 4%, and remarkably, after those two oil price shocks on both 1975 and 1980, US unemployment rate rocketed twice on the two crisis years. All of these, showed that the economy and employment of US were changeful and especially subject to the international oil price. For EU's curve, we can see it is also stable as Japan before the first oil price shock, however, being attacked by the shock, the unemployment rate of EU rocketed just like US from 1975, and this increase had even been continueing untill 1985. In a sense, the economy and employment of EU largely depended on international environment and difficultly recovered once being in winter.