① 2010年江苏省高考英语作文范文
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’ a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabully is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more Englsih activities, such as English contests and festvals.
Thank you for listening. (150 words)
More and more people attach great importance to relationship in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationship among friends. Politewords can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.
Always saying please and thank you will make your friends feel more comfortable and more willing to offer help when necessary.We all know that one man's success is based on how he deals with people! Always be grateful to other people's kindness and show your gratitude through the words you speak. The more support you win from other people, the faster you will move towards your goal.
Although some people may easily ignorance the importance of being polite,we students should form good habits and behavior in good manners. First,learn to be friendly to your parents and relatives at home. Then at school, listen respectfully when your teachers instruct you. Follow and accept their advice to improve yourself. You will make further progress if you express your gratitude in time. Remember, being polite costs nothing but it's worth of million dollars.
② 求2010全国高考1卷的英语作文的范文一篇。
Dear Ms. Smith,
I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students’ Union of Yucca Middle School , which is close to your university . I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15 . It will start at 2: pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you . Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions .
I am looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes,
Li Hua
③ 2007~2010高考英语满分作文 10篇(含题目)
北京卷
【试题回放】
第一节情景作文
假设你是李华,要给英国笔友Harry写封信,介绍你班两位同学竞选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。
注意:
1.信的开头已为你写好;
2.词数不少于60。
提示词:竞选班长monitor election
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
第二节开放作文
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
【满分范文】
第一节情景作文
满分文(一)
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between two students really. First, the two candidates, Liu Dong and Wang Hong, gave their election speeches respectively. Then other students wrote a name of the candidate on paper and put it into a box. The teacher counted the number of pieces of paper voting for the two candidates fairly. Finally, Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. So Wang Hong became our monitor. It was an interesting election, isn
④ 2010高考英语作文范文
天津卷
Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.
I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!
Thank you!
【思路分析】
这是一篇很实用的演讲稿。旨在考查学生在实际生活中在某个具体场合下灵活使用英文来表达自己思想的能力。考查学生学以致用。本演讲稿有三个写作要点:1. 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习惯等;2. 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言流利,发音准确等;3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。然后自由发挥写出适当的结尾。
【较高级的结构和短语】form/develop a good habit of doing…; take part in; The first thing we can do is to make…; pay attention to 等。
希望你能满意。
⑤ 2010上海高考英语作文范文
高考英语高考作文评分标准
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
⑥ 2010年天津卷高考英语作文范文
从话题角度来看,和往年一样,社会类和教育类仍然是主要考查话题分别占到11次和6次,当然这里社会类的话题包括工作,生活,城市建设等,内容涉及多个层面,这也是数量偏多的一个原因;教育类包含学科教育, 教育方式, 家庭教育, 学校教育等一直是高频话题,科技类和环境类上半年考频正常,犯罪类和政府类考查偏少,各出现了一次。值得注意的是,新闻媒体考题一般出现在上半年,今年考频加大,上半年出现了2次。
重点考题分析
Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While other think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2019/04/13)
4月13日考的这道题是整个上半年构思难度极高的一道题目,也是一道老题,很多有望上6的考生都因为这道题的构思问题,变成5.5分。有些学生对题目的理解有一些偏差,题目的意思是:名人对国际援助组织的捐助使得人们关注到问题,然而另一些人认为名人使得问题不那么重要。第一方面比较好理解,名人利用自身的影响力使得问题得到关注,比如尘肺病对于大众来说不是很常见,是煤矿工人得的一种病,很多明星通过公益活动,让更多的人关注到这部分需要帮助的群体。另一方面,淡化问题的原因是大众或者粉丝只关注名人的行为而忽视问题本身,对问题没有后续跟进,也就最终解决不了问题。
The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work and hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2019/05/04)
这道题审题很容易跑偏, 很多同学把重心会放在科技让年轻人简单地获得工作,或者错误理解成科技让年轻人的工作简单化,忽视了后半句hard for old people。题目中含有并列关系and,需要两者都要提及,所以后面论证只证明对年轻人的好处是偏面的。
总而言之,上半年题目以老题重现居多,同学们还是要多刷机经,有可能就碰到自己写过的题目,下半年大作文犯罪类,政府类考题可能会增加,可以增加这两类话题的练习。另外,要注意审题常见的坑,乍一看不太懂的题目不妨多读几遍,不要贸然下笔。
⑦ 2009、2010年高考全国卷1卷2英语满分作文
2010年全国卷名家满分作文
根据漫画内容写一篇作文漫画内容:餐桌,许多猫吃鱼,就一只猫捉老鼠,别的猫说:“有鱼吃还捉老鼠?”
餐桌上的“变化”
【考生姓名】郭雅陈 【考号】005
【考生档案】1998年出生,郭灿金之女,开封市金明小学6年级学生。
小时候,我最爱看的动画片就是《猫和老鼠》,每一次看到的,总是那只“笨猫”要么被老鼠戏弄,要么尾巴被烧焦……所以,“笨猫”总是生活在老鼠的嘲笑之中,这让我也总是对那只猫充满同情和惋惜。那只“笨猫”的“笨”也就印在了我的心里。
可是,时代在飞速发展。像汤姆一样的“笨猫”在猫家族中越来越少,它们餐桌上的食物也发生了变化:
原来难以捕捉、味道也不敢恭维的老鼠已被人类所供给的味道鲜美的鱼所取代。
猫们享受着美味,餐桌上充斥着不劳而获的味道。
但依然有一些“冥顽不灵”的猫在捉老鼠。比如,这幅漫画,别的猫都在餐桌上享受美食时,有一只猫却承受着别的猫的耻笑,挥汗追逐老鼠。
这幅漫画让我对快乐有了新的看法。快乐就是春耕秋收,虽然又苦又累,但心里却是收获的充实。而窝在家里不去工作,在家里看电视、玩网络游戏,为自己的不劳而获悠然自得,这种所谓“快乐”的背后却是一种精神上的空虚。
现在的一些独生子女,从小娇生惯养,从不去奋斗。父母拼搏的成就,造就他们餐桌上一盘美味的鱼。他们就不再想着去劳动,“笨猫捉老鼠”的那种不放弃的精神也真的只留在了动画片里。
人们看到猫捉老鼠也只是嘲笑猫的笨拙与顽固,而劳动的快乐、精神世界的富足却被搁置一旁。
收获的快乐,吃苦奋斗的精神,也都随之荡然无存。
抓老鼠有千般的苦与累,还有旁人的嘲笑,却会有收获的喜悦。尽管在抓老鼠的过程中也会有失落,但既然劳动了、工作了、努力了,又有什么可遗憾的呢?不断的拼搏与努力,一定会收获一颗充实的心与一种不断提高的能力。
而那些只会依赖人们给食物的猫,由于忘记了奋斗,它们的生存能力在退化,餐桌上的鱼就成了它们懒惰的象征。
在现今社会中,肯吃苦奋斗的人越来越少,不劳而获的人却越来越多。那些不知上进的人一生必然碌碌无为,等到年逾古稀回首一看,自己的一生没有做什么事;而那些肯吃苦的人,却会成就辉煌。
餐桌上的“变化”象征着人精神、追求的改变,原来那只笨拙的猫也有值得我们学习的地方。
原来,通过劳动得来的美味是那么香。
原来,拼搏的人生是那么美!
2010年全国卷名家满分作文
根据漫画内容写一篇作文漫画内容:餐桌,许多猫吃鱼,就一只猫捉老鼠,别的猫说:“有鱼吃还捉老鼠?”
要求选准角度,明确立意,自选文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文,不得套作,不得抄袭。
满身花雨又归来
沧海霁月,落崖惊风。一花一世界,一叶一菩提。在灯红酒绿的都市中,在余音绕梁的低回处,在清风送爽,点点星光之下,人,如同窗外的帘燕,在归途中几度徘徊。
能见证人类在现代化的大路上越来越远的一个代表性群体之一便是猫。曾几何时,猫已经从肩负重任的卫家战士蜕变成养尊处优的宠儿。当我们高唱“老鼠爱大米”的时候已激不起猫的半点儿斗志——它早已转变了习性,爱上了鱼。是什么使猫失去了捉老鼠的本能?又是什么使猫从猎人变成猎物?我想说“不”,猫决不是坐享其成的观望者,它的体内还潜存着奋斗的本能。
随着历史的飞跃和时代的变迁,人类用双手创造出生生不息的文明。文明的力量是伟大的,它不仅存在于精神,更渗透进政治、经济等物质生活的各个领域,这不仅仅大幅度提高了人类的生活水平,也在很大程度上改善了人类的生活环境。我们不否认这种变化带给人类的优越,但伴随着进步而来的种种矛盾也日益突显。而对优越的物质环境,人们失去了奋斗的本能,越来越不愿劳动,甚至耻于劳动。各种高端科技产品及机器都以代替人类劳动为主要目标。殊不知,双手的解放引发了思维的惰性。奋斗与劳动是大自然赋予的本能,而自然的本能在逐步褪去了,也标志着人类作为一种自然的生物却脱离了自然,离自然越来越远。
春来花自青,秋至叶飘零,这便是自然留给我们的本能。情感也是如此。
“住在布达拉宫,我是雪域之王。
走在拉萨城中,是世间最美的情郎。”
这是仓夹嘉措留下的诗句,也是他对于人性本能不可抗拒的写照。他充满传奇色彩的一生,全是为这种本能而活。他不贪恋权位,更不为财富而诱惑,他的心,时时刻刻寻找人间最真实的情感,他把人间的至真至爱,把人间最美好的天性释放得淋漓尽致。
问佛:为什么总也遗憾?
佛曰:没有遗憾,无法体味幸福。
问佛:为什么下雪总在夜里?
佛曰:美好的东西总在不经意间流走。
仓夹嘉措这样问,人类也这样问,因为我们总是在美好中留下遗憾,正如我们已淡去的本乱。
猫被诱惑蒙蔽了双眼,忘记了本能。但我相信,人不会在科技的溺爱下失去追逐真性情的天性,更不会失去奋斗的本能。人是一只帘燕,在自然的窗前徘徊,依然如泉般清澈,依然如茶般香醇,也依旧满身花雨又归来……
⑧ 求10篇2010 英语 高考满分作文
高考英语满分作文
作文题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。
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Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
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作文:
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
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2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动,志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外,志愿者或做家教,教小孩子阅读、算术,或打扫公园与街道,或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。
One possible version
I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:
First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.
In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.
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不同人都有着不同的习惯,个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求,写一篇120字的英语短文,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
1. 介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。
2. 习惯与卫生的关系:习惯是卫生基础; 不好的习惯,会导致一些传染疾病传播,如AIDS,SARS, H1N1流感等。
3. 你的看法……。
One possible version
It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.
It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.
Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.
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假如你是李华,你学校内有人得了猪流感,正在接受治疗,你校学生非常害怕,请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?
1. 平时外出戴口罩,少去人群集中的公共场所, 避免接触病人等。
2. 勤洗手,保证充足睡眠,多锻炼多运动等。
3. 词数: 120字左右
4. 文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 猪流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?
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Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?
We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.
We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.
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注意:1.信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计算在总词数内。
2. 字数要求: 120左右。
人口膨胀population expansion;过度开发overdevelopment。
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
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Yours truly
Li Hua
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Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
With the development of instry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
Yours truly
Li Hua
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低碳经济下的环境保护之一
“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念,最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来:创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态,是指在不影响经济发展的前提下,通过技术创新和制度创新,降低能源和资源消耗,尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放,实现减缓气候变化的目标,促进人类的可持续发展。
Protection of Environment
1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。
2. 为了保护环境,3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。
4. 我的看法。
One possible version
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through ecation. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
⑨ 2010年全国二卷英语高考作文翻译
你说的是这篇吗?
In my life, I prefer fairy tales to other tories. I think they are very fun and sometimes make me happy. One of the moving fairy tales is a great story named "The Little Mermaid”. It was so sad that I almost cried along with it as I read . I like the feminine because of her kind and love. And when she died, she changed into a bubble.To love her prince she choose suffering.How great she is ! Although this story had a sad ending, this little girl who has true love moved everyone . She live inmy heart forever!
⑩ 2010高考英语作文评分标准
2010高考英语高考作文评分标准
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
2009年高考英语评分细则
第一档是极优档,30分。标准为:书写规范;覆盖所有要点,内容充实;词汇丰富,有修辞意识。
第二档是优秀,26分至29分。标准为:紧扣主题;覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,显示出较强的语言运动能力;语言小错不超过4个。
第三档是良好,22 分至25分。标准为:紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容较充实,语言有少量错误,但基本不影响意思表达。
第四档是一般,18分至21分。标准为:紧扣主题,基本覆盖所有要点,能够表达基本内容;语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达,但多数句子基本正确。
第五档是较差,13分至17分。标准为:内容不完成,要点不全,行文不连贯,语言错误较多,多数句子基本正确。
第六档是差,6分至12分。标准为:内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题,能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。
第七档是极差,0分至5分。只能写出与内容相关的词语,没有有效信息;抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容。
评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线。根据百分制计算,英语作文的及格线是18分。