英语评论作文四级

1. 4级英语作文要范文和评析

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2. 如何提高英语四级作文水平

一、“功能段落”突破CET写作。
“To be or not to be: that is a question.”莎士比亚如是说。冲刺阶段，背模板还是不背？我的答案：背，但绝不是盲目的背。
整篇背诵模板不是最有效的方法，因为模板的写作思路是固定的，然而很多时候试题的命题思路可能与所背模板思路不同。因此，可能导致“所背非所考”，甚至导致文不对题，生搬硬套。
但是，无论英语四六级写作话题如何变化，一般都对应三个或两个汉语提纲。只要按提纲要求去写相应的内容段落，就做到了紧扣主题。历年写作提纲可以总结为六种功能段落：现象描述、危害分析（弊）、原因分析、建议措施、观点阐述（观点的本质为利弊：支持方观点等于分析“利”，反方观点等于分析“弊”）、意义阐述（利）。
下面，本人结合近年真题展示功能段落内容：
2011-06：Online Shopping
1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3．我的建议
解析：本次英语四级对应四个段落分别是：现象、观点（利、弊）和建议。该类作文可以被称之为：观点对比型作文，对比的内容重点在利弊分析上。
2010-12：How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
解析：该题目只有两个提纲：现象和建议，可以添加一个功能段落：原因。这样这篇作文就是“三段论”的形式：提出问题（负面现象描述）、分析问题（原因）、建议措施段。2010年6月CET也属于该种那类型。
2009-12：Creating a Green Campus
1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……
解析：该段对应提纲如下：意义阐述（即分析：利或好处）、现象描述（解释绿色校园环境之外的因素）、建议措施段。
综合以上分析，六种功能段落已经涵盖住了以上考试的所有提纲。因此，如果能够掌握住六种功能段落的写作实际就掌握了四六级考试写作考题的最本质特征。那样的话，无论题目如何变化，我们准备都是有的放矢的。反观，死背模板容易导致生搬硬套，甚至文不对题。
二、写作短期提分方略
在了解了英语四级考试在命题特点的基础上，考生在冲刺阶段最需要准备的是两个内容：思路和表达。思路解决怎么写的问题，表达解决写什么的问题。如果拿到一个作文题目，你知道应该按照什么思路去写，又知道应该写什么表达，这篇作文就已经成功了一半。
思路点拨：在本人所讲授的基础班、强化班、精品班等不同班型上都曾讲授到现象、原因、建议、利弊、观点分析时的逻辑：“一个中心，四个基本点”。具体内容：“以孩子（学生、事件）为中心，以家长（老师、相关人员）、家庭（学校、管理机构）、社会、法规（道德意识）为基本点”
试举例说明：以2010年12月真题为例，主题为子女教育话题。谈到子女，必然涉及到家长，孩子和家长组成家庭，千千万万的家庭组成社会，是什么在维护着社会稳定？法规和道德意识。这样我们就找到了可以入手去分析的五个方面：孩子、家长、家庭、社会、法规道德意识。如何使用这五个方面？如分析家长溺爱孩子原因时至少可以从家长意识、家庭结构变化、社会背景角度去分析。
同理，2010年6月话题为学生英语学习，可从学生自身、教师教学、学校教学政策角度去分析。那么，如果主题不是孩子也不是学生，怎么分析？2011年6月主题为网络购物，分析时就以该事件为中心，可以想到相关人或物（买方：customers/ clients /shoppers;卖方：online shops/ stores;中间方：支付宝、淘宝等），其管理机构（政府）、社会背景，相关法规是否健全等。
“一个中心，四个基本点”的分析逻辑形成一种立体化网状结构，考生运用该思维模式，只要能想到其中两到三点，思路问题即可迎刃而解。建议所有有缘相识与北京新东方课堂、四级写作模板班、四级翻译突破班的童鞋们首先将该思路背诵下来，以备将来可以在考场上灵活应用。
表达积累：表达分为四个层次：词句段篇。
其中篇章层面只要按照提纲要求去组织文章即可，因此篇章方面不足为虑。段落方面按照“功能段落”的六种形式去识别，也小菜一碟。
词和句是表达的基本元素，也是语言质量的根本体现。在新东方教书的这四年中和三次参加四六级考试阅卷的经历中，看过无数学生的作文，深感学生词句方面能力的薄弱。同时结合过往教学中的成功案例，提出冲刺阶段表达积累的高效途径。
1. 背写：思路+表达。
很多同学考前也在背，背的滚瓜烂熟，脱口而出，觉得自己水平很牛！上了考场也顺利将文章写了出来，却得了一个很低的分数，为什么？因为单词都拼错了。冲刺阶段，请牢记：口头背诵的再好不等于能够写对。背写是提高写作和翻译唯一，也是最有效的方法。
那么背写什么内容哪？答案是思路和表达。思路上文中已有论述，遣词和造句的表达方面应该紧密结合功能段落来背诵有效句式和用词。考生不必刻意追求适用难词，但可以将常见词汇稍作替换：如，
exceedingly, extremely, intensely替换very；an army of/a great many/a host of替换a lot of；advancement替换development; positive, favorable, promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior替换good; give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替换cause; harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,替think; beneficial, rewarding替换helpful; bear in mind that替换remember; enjoy, possess替换have; shopper, client, consumer, purchaser,替换customer
表达精彩体现在三个方面：遣词、造句、连贯。大家可以结合以下例文感受这三个方面：（声明：试题命制、范文均为笔者原创，谢绝转载！）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of To Help or Not to Help?. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1. 帮助别人是一种美德
2. 但是帮助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻烦
3. 我的看法
首段阐述意义：In contemporary society, it should be a virtue for indivials to offer help to those who are in need. Without this morality, it is impossible for the society to be named “Harmony”. Apparently enough, it is of great importance/ significance/ value/ benefits for people to help each other, especially in difficulties.
二段描述负面现象：However, a host of people find it hard or troublesome to offer helps to strangers. We have been frequently informed that（A typical example is that）a warmhearted man --who lends a hand to an old lady—gets himself in trouble. Since helping others may trigger trouble, a few people refuse to offer help timely. And if we let/allow this situation to continue as it is now, we would not know where civilized society will be in the forthcoming future.
尾段我的看法(或建议)：As college students, we should bear in mind this virtue. However, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to support this virtue. In addition, it is suggested that we should offer aid to strangers in a safe way, such as dialing 12o or110 for help. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our society/ civilization will be promising, hopeful and rosy.(以上范文字数为202词，请自己酌情删减即可)
三、冲刺复习安排建议。
总体原则：先背再写、阶段总结、适当模拟。
先背再写：基础较差同学一定要先背一些东西，然后模仿该作文的思路和表达去写。可以背诵的内容有：本人上课时讲义上要求大家背诵的功能句式和教材相关范文。背写的目的是积累语言表达实力，同时练习书写的公正和优美。建议书写较差的考生买本英语字帖练一下书写，也许你会有意外的惊喜。
阶段总结：每过一周就要问自己几个问题：所背诵的表达可以用来写什么类型的文章？该类文章的相关词汇或表达有什么？关键词如何避免重复？如果解决不了，请参照讲义上给大家总结的各类功能段落的功能句式和表达。请记住：没有复习，没有巩固。
适当模拟：在熟练掌握背写了六种功能段落的思路和表达之后，可以结合适当题目在写作中运用所讲所背所总结提分词汇、句式。建议大家能够灵活运用，做到一例多用。如我在多个班上讲过的关于英语学习的话题作文，可以写13次四级考试的作文。
题目：On English Learning
提纲：1.英语学习很重要；2.英语者所面临的困难；3.如何学好英语
In contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance. (主题句) Firstly, based on a survey, a majority of tourists acknowledge that they prefer to speak English when traveling around the world. (调查法表述)Secondly, compared with the poor English speakers, good English-speakers are superior in many ways. (比较模板句式)
However, English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in their learning.(主题句) For example, it can be noticed that a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words. Sometimes, it is difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they can not express themselves freely in English.
Then, how to get a good command of (学好) this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can enable one to speak and write fluently. And it is also through practice that one can master the rules of grammar and remember words, and there is no other way. (强调句式）

3. 英语四级作文150字最佳6篇

距离2015年12月的大学英语四级考试越来越近，新东方在线为大家整理了英语四级作文预测：希望可以为大家带来帮助。
1、晕屏症—Cybersickness
随着智能时代的到来，越来越多的人不自觉的成为了新科技的奴隶，智能手机的使用尤能说明这一点。无论是上下班的路上，还是赋闲在家，无论是休闲娱乐，还是聊天购物，智能手机总是与我们形影不离，对于智能手机带给人们的便利之处我们不可否认，但是其弊端也日益显现，看看“低头族”“僵尸族”这些网络热词吧，从中我们不难发现无时无刻使用智能手机给我们造成的危害，但这些危害常常为沉迷于智能手机的人们所忽略。分析利弊，是英语四级作文的关键，只知其利，不知其弊，也不是一篇完美的作文。下面我们就来分享一篇文章——刷屏刷到吐你得“晕屏症”了(Do you suffer from cybersickness It causes nausea while scrolling on phones)，认识到智能手机可能会带给我们的危害，希望它能警醒我们，让我们能够更加合理的使用智能手机。
Do you suffer from cybersickness It causes nausea while scrolling on phones
The rise of mobile phones has been blamed for a number of social ills, but your smart phone may also be making you physically sick as well. Scientists have identified a condition called “cybersickness”, which they say is the digital version of motion sickness. The phenomenon, which affects up to 80 percent of the population who own smartphones or tablets, leads to feelings of nausea and unsteadiness. It is caused by seeing fast motion on a screen and covers anything from a car chase in a film to scrolling through web pages on your phone. The more realistic the visual content is, the higher your chances of getting cybersickness. The condition was identified in a piece in the New York Times in which British and US experts said that it needed addressing. Cyriel Diels, a cognitive psychologist and human factors researcher at Coventry University’s centre for Mobility and Transport, said: “It’s a fundamental problem that’s kind of been swept under the carpet in the tech instry.” “It’s a natural response to an unnatural environment.” Motion sickness leaves sufferers feeling ill because they feel movement in your muscles and your inner ear but do not see it. The mismatch in digital sickness is the opposite—you see movement on the screen but do not feel it. The effect is the same and the symptoms include a headache, wanting to throw up, confusion and the need to sit down. Often cybersickness manifests itself in a subtle way and sufferers put it down to stress or eyestrain.Steven Rauch, a professor of otolaryngology at Harvard Medical School, said: “Your sense of balance is different than other senses in that it has lots of inputs.” When those inputs don’t agree, that’s when you feel dizziness and nausea “Some studies that have been carried out into cybersickness found that women are more susceptible than men, the New York Times reported. Those who have Type A’ personalities—meaning they are confident and assertive—are more likely to suffer from cybersickness as well. Among those who have reported experiencing the condition have been video gamers who spend hours playing fast paced games. Cinema-goers have struggled with some scenes in action movies which have quick cuts and fast editing—and virtual reality has made the problem even worse. Jonathan Weinstein, a professor at the Kanbar Institute for Film and Television at New York University’s Tisch School of the Arts, said: “The idea is to get audiences to feel like participants in the action rather than outside observers of the action. Engineers at Oculus VR, the virtual headset manufacturer, have admitted that digital motion sickness is one of their biggest problems.
【词汇积累】
cybersickness 晕屏症
scrolling on phone 刷屏
smartphones 智能手机
tablets 平板
nausea 眩晕，恶心
sweep sth. Under the carpet 掩盖错误
susceptible 易受影响的
【译文】
移动电话的广泛使用被指引发了诸多社会弊端，不仅如此，手中的智能机也会让你觉得身体不适。科学家们把这种状态称为“晕屏”，是晕车的电子版。80%的手机和平板用户会晕屏，他们会有恶心、眩晕的感觉。造成晕屏的原因是浏览了含移动内容的屏幕，可能是看了有追车镜头的电影，也可能是浏览了手机上滚动的内容页。视觉内容越真实，晕屏的发生率就越高。《纽约时报》的一篇文章报道了这种症状。英美专家在文章中称，这个问题需要着手解决。认知心理学家、考文垂大学移动运输中心的人为因素研究员西里尔·蒂尔斯表示：“对弊端置之不理算得上是科技产业一个最根本的问题了。”“这是对非自然环境作出的自然反应。”晕动症会令患者感到肌肉和内耳在移动，但实际上并没有看到它们在移动。而晕屏症恰恰相反——你看到屏幕在移动，实际上却感受不到。二者的影响却是相同的，其症状为头疼、想吐、思绪混乱，需要静坐下来。晕屏症状通常不易察觉，患者会以为是因为压力大或者视觉疲劳引起的。哈佛医学院耳鼻喉科教授史蒂芬·劳奇表示：“与其他感官不同，当有大量信息输入时，人的平衡感会发生改变。”“当这些信息输入没有被感官接受，你就会觉得头晕、恶心。”《纽约时报》称，一些有关晕屏的研究发现，女性比男性更容易晕屏。A型人格，即果断自信的人，也更容易晕屏。“有晕屏症状的通常是连续几小时玩快节奏视频游戏的玩家。看动作片的观众在看到快速剪辑和切换的镜头时会不舒服，这是因为虚拟实境会加重晕屏。纽约大学提斯克艺术学院康贝尔影视研究所的教授乔纳森·温斯坦说：“动作片就是想让观众身临其境，而不是当一个局外人。”虚拟实境游戏头盔制造商“欧酷拉”公司的工程师们坦言，晕屏也是他们面临的最大问题之一。

4. 英语四级作文范文多篇

1、北京奥运

The Beijing 2008 Summer Olympics logo has a single Chinese character on a traditional red Chinese seal. The English words "Beijing 2008" are written with a Chinese brush below it. At the bottom of the picture, there are the five rings of Olympic Games. The figure in the logo resembles a runner or dancer and the Chinese character "jing" which means "capital".

The image carries the message that today's China is not only a nation with a long and glorious history, but also one full of modern dynamics. First and foremost, this logo is a journey to the future, the emblem for China moving towards the 2008 Olympic Games. What is more, it is a symbol of the city's promise to make the Games a success. Accordingly, this emblem represents the heart of an ancient culture embracing the modern world, the spirit of a people moving towards a new destiny.

In my view, first of all, the Olympic Game represents the spirit of sports. Arms flung wide, it invites all people and the world to share in the city's history, beauty, energy, and its future. In addition, it is a gesture of friendship and hope that the community of nations will unite in peace through sports.

参考译文

北京2008年夏季奥运会会徽在传统的红色中国印章上刻着一枚汉字。汉字下方用中国毛笔书写了“北京2008”的英文字样。图画底部是奥运的五环标志。会徽中的人物象征了一位跑步者或舞蹈者，而汉字“京”的意思是“首都”。

这一会徽表达了当今的中国不仅个拥有悠久灿烂的历史国度，更是一个充满了现代活力的国家。首先，这一会徽是一次奔向未来之旅，是中国迈向2008年奥运会的象征。其次，它是北京承诺将成功举办奥运的标志。因此，这一会徽代表了一种悠久文化拥抱现代世界的信心，以及中国人民迈向新征程的精神。

在我看来，奥林匹克运动会首先代表了体育的精神。它伸展了双臂邀请全世界及其人民分享北京的历史、魅力、能量及未来。此外，它是友谊的象征，以及希望国际社会通过体育运动进而和平共处。

2、留学

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1)目前很多中国学生出国留学，

2)出国留学的好处，

3)我的看法。

Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents. Importance should be attached to studying abroad.

There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.

Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is concive to the growth of adolescents.

3、网络

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1、 互联网使用的现状，

2、 大学生是否应该使用互联网，人们的看法不同，

3、 我的看法。

In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.

On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.

Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overinlgence. After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.

4、考试

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1)大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩，

2)考生可能带来的副作用，

3)我对考试的看法。

In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.

To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.

In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?

5、老师

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Teacher I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1)我生活中最难忘的老师是……

2)为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀，

3)结论。

In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher.

What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.

Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.

6、求学信

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for admission into a college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1、 入学条件，

2、 学费和奖学金，

3、 住宿情况。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?

I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

7、邀请信

Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them indivially:

1) 邀请参加晚会，

2) 说明举办晚会的原因，

3) 将安排哪些活动。

Dear Snoopy,

I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Huang Rong to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2007.

As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.

If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

8、投诉信

Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college.

1)要求下学期换一个新房间，

2)解释原因，

3)要求单间。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next semester. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.

I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

9、致辞

Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words. In your speech, you should:

1) 进行自我介绍，

2) 详细介绍大会内容，

3) 结束语。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introction to myself. I am the president of Motorola (China) Electronics Ltd.

The following is my introction to the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be proctive.

I wish all of you enjoy yourselves ring this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.

10、告示

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1) 比赛目的、时间、地点，

2) 参赛者的要求，

3) 裁判和奖励的细节。

You should write about 120 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.

Chinese Speaking Contest

February 3, 2008

To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.

The Students’ Union

Department of Chinese Language and Literature

5. 英语四级作文关于赞美的

你好，很高兴为你解答，答案如下：

On Praise
wants to be appreciated and praised by others for what they do and what they say. For instance, children want to be praised by their parents. Students want to be praised by their teachers. Employees want to be praised by their employers. It seems that praise is like sunlight to us, we can‘t flower and grow without it.
But it is a pity that while most of us are only too ready to blow the cold wind of harsh criticism on others, we are somehow reluctant to give people around us the warm sunshine of praise. For example, most mothers are always not satisfied with the progress their children made at school Most teachers always drown their students compositions in critical red ink, instead of commenting favorably on them.
Most employersarealways criticalabout what their employees have done instead of giving encouragement to them. proces may be great. So, let‘s be alert to the small excellence around us and comment on them. We will not only bring joy into other people’s lives, but also, very often, add happiness to our own.
希望我的回答对你有帮助，满意请采纳。

6. 英语四级考试的作文类型有哪些

1、中文提纲作文

通常提纲作文都是给出三个提纲，每个提纲即是一段，正好符合四级作文“三段论”的布局，同学们可以根据提纲进行描述。例如：A、许多人考证书。B、其目的是什么。但这种作文由于比较简单，现在已经很少进行考查了。

2、素材评论作文

给出一段背景素材，让考生表达对该段素材的看法。素材未必一定是某个事件，也有可能是引语评论作文，引用的内容可能是名人名言，也可能是生活中的谚语，让考生评论其内在含义，并进行相应的文章写作。

3、图画评论作文

根据给定的漫画，通过观察漫画场景，对漫画内容发表评论。这类作文一定要先对漫画场景进行基本描述，然后通过其蕴含的哲理，对现象主旨进行提炼。

4、图表评论作文

根据给定的某事件相关数据，进行数据分析，并对图表中数据反映的直观现象和深层含义进行评论。这类题同图画评论作文一样，要先对图表进行描述，然后再对内容进行探讨和评论。

5、应用文

应用文考的比较多的是书信或电子邮件的书写。2013年12月的六级考试作文中有要求考生写求职信的题目，这类题目虽然考试几率较低，但是同学们也一定要了解书信的格式。

(6)英语评论作文四级扩展阅读：

报名条件

1、考试对象限制在普通高校内部四年制或以上根据教育大纲修完大学英语四级的在校大学本科生或研究生；

2、同等程度的大专生或硕士研究生经所在学校同意，可在本校报名参加考试；

3、同等程度的夜大或函授大学学生经所在学校同意，可在本校报名参加考试；

从2007年1月的考试开始，大学英语四六级考试将不再对社会考生开放，只对在校大学生开放。

报名方法

以学校为单位自愿参加，集体报名； 考试日若考生在外地实习，仍应在所在学校报名；

报名截止后，不再接受报名。

大学英语作文在整个四级卷面（满分为100分）中占15分，考生在这一部分的得分直接决定其四级成绩。近年来国家教委又明确规定，四级考试中，如果学生作文得零分，那么即使前面得了满分（即85分），其总成绩仍将视为不及格。

写作结构

1、Organize your thoughts before writing: brainstorm、make an outline、etc.下笔前整合思绪：脑力激荡，写出纲要等。

2、Write clearly. Be concise. Avoid wordiness.写作清晰，务必精简，避免赘言。

3、Use good grammar and write complete sentences.使用好的文法，写出完整句子。

4、Write simple sentences. Avoid a fancy style.en211尝试简单句，避免花俏的句法。

5、Avoid slang、cliche and informal words.避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字

6、Avoid use of the first person (i.e. I/me/my) unless necessary to specific piece.除非必要，避免使用第一人称：如“我/我的”。

Does it sound natural? Does it flow?自然挥洒，大声朗诵。整篇文章听起来自然吗？通顺吗？

8、Move logically from one idea to the next. Don't skip steps.上下句意要合乎逻辑。别毫无章法乱跳。

英语四级各档的分数分布是：听力（35%）249分、阅读（35%）249分、综合（10%）70分、写作和翻译（20%）142分。

7. 英语作文:对英语四级的看法

In most schools and colleges the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.
The most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. Examinations do not motivate a student to seek more knowledge, but to restrict his reading; they do not enable him to study consistently throughout the semester, but to ince cramming ring exam week.

8. 英语四级作文怎么评分

简单来说，是以下几条：
14分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。
11分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。
8分 基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
5分 基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。
2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。
详细具体的定义为:
考生在考试时应该明确作文的评分标准，根据大纲规定，短文的评分标准是：

1．正确表达思想；
2．意义连贯；
3．无重大语法错误。
这三者是互补的，但又各有侧重。为评分的方便，国家考题组又将评分原则归纳为八个字，即“总体评分”和“综合评判”，并作了相应的解释。前者指的是“阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分”。后者指的是“要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍，用词和造句是否清楚确切地表达思想”。根据这八个字，又将阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下：
2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分--基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。
11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。
除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑以下三个因素：
l．白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。
2. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。
3．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。