A. 各类型高考英语作文经典范文
高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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译:
我很高兴收到你的信,我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街,不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达,前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间,其中一个是卧室,其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床,一个沙发和一个办公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望,但我会尽我所能,满足您的需求。如果还不够,给我写信,我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里!
就到这里啦!
此致,
李华
B. 高考英语作文字数
高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得0-5分。高考英语作文,不管是全国卷,还是地方卷,都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分,字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下:1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.概要部分少于20词或多于40词;全文少于130词或多于180词的,从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如字迹难以辨认,以致影响表达,将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档:(21—25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。l覆盖所有内容要点。l语法结构和词汇有个别小错误,但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。l有效地使用了衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档:(16—20分)完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一、二个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确,少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。l应用简单的语句间的衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档:(11—15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一些内容,但基本覆盖主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。l应用简单的衔接手段,内容基本连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(6—10分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇有限。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对所写内容的理解。l较少使用衔接手段,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(1—5分)未完成试题规定的任务。l明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇不当。l有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响内容理解。l缺乏语句间的衔接手段,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分:未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。
C. 关于高考英语作文
英语的连词也有很多,在选取了一些适合高中生学习和掌握的连词和连接语后,也大致的归结为以下三类:
一. 表明事件发生的时间顺序:
这一类连词不多,大致有以下这些,也是最为我们学生所熟悉的,主要适用于第一类叙述类题型:
then, first, at once, next, after that, previously, while, when, the following day, etc.
二. 表明文章的组织结构:
这一类的连词和连接语最多,也最为实用,适用的范围也广,能够灵活广泛的应用后四类题型。
1)渐进类(Listing): firstly, in the first place, secondly, thirdly, my next point is, last/finally, etc.
2)举例类(Illustrating): for example/ for instance, to illustrate, an example/ instance of this is, let’s take….., take…. for example, etc.
3)重申类(Re-stating): in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, let me put it this way, or rather, namely, etc.
4)旁引类(Referring): in this respect, in that connection, as we said, apart from this, etc.
5)重述类(Resuming): to resume, to return to the previous point, getting back to the argument, etc.
6)总结类(Summarizing): to sum up, in short, it amounts to this, what I have been saying is this, etc.
7)强调类(Emphasizing): it is worth noting, I would like to direct your attention to, let us consider, we must now turn to, I shall begin by, etc.
三. 表明作者的观点、态度
这一类连词和连接语对于表达主观观点用极大的促进作用,适用于后三类题型。
1)看法类 (opinion expressing): in my opinion, I think/believe/suppose, I agree with…, as I think, it is said, people think, etc.
2)补充类(Introcing): further evidence: moreover, furthermore, in addition, what’s more, as well, etc.
3)原因类(Cause): because (of), since, owing to, on account of, e to, as a result of, etc.
4)结果类(Effect): as a result, hence, therefore, consequently, thus, so, etc.
5)对比类(Contrasting): in / by contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, whereas, while, yet, however, but, etc.
6)比较类(Comparison): in like manner, likewise, in the same way, similarly, in comparison with, etc.
7)目的类(Purpose): to this end, for this purpose, with this in mind, in order to, so that, etc.
8)递进类(Intensification): indeed, in fact, in any event / case, at no time, to tell the truth, etc. (上述连词分类参考自“PETS阅读中需熟练掌握的连接词”一文)
熟练的掌握上述有限的单词对于高中阶段的学生来说要求并不高,相反其中很多单词和短语都是学生的课本和练习中经常出现的,学生虽然经常读到看到,但真正能在自己的写作中运用的却少之又少。现在按照上面的分类重新梳理上述连接语的作用和分类,把它们记住,就完成了我们高考作文进步的第一步。
高考作文评分的特点和应对方法
首先让我们来看看高考对考生写作能力的要求:
1) 灵活运用语法与词汇、组句成文,正确表达的能力;
2) 审题准确、组织语言材料有序的能力;
3) 能使用好适当的过渡性词语使上下文承接有序,自然通顺的能力。其实以上三点合到一起就是检测学生的英语综合能力。上文已经说过,英语综合能力的提高还是需要学生靠平时脚踏实地的积累。本文所要提出的,是在有限的迎考时间内有效的提高英语写作得分的学习方法和迎考策略。因此,上面的第三点才是本文所要对症下药的症状。接着我们来看看高考阅卷的评分标准。
自从2001年开始,高考书面表达启用了新的评分标准,规定书面表达按5个档次给分。主要的评分原则有:评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分;词数少于80和多于120的从总分中减去2分。评分中应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性;如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。上面这一段话中的黑体字部分明确的表明连接语的运用得当对作文分值的影响。另外从高考阅卷的老师处也了解到:行文连贯是阅卷教师比较看重的一个方面。最后我们再来看看每一档次的作文分值中对连接语的要求:
第五档(很好):(21~25分):有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
第四档(好):(16~20分):应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
第三档(适当):(11~15分):应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
第二档(较差):(6~10分):较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
第一档(差):(1~5分):缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
从上面的评分标准可以看出,无论是英语水平处于哪一个档次的学生,在写作的过程中,如果想要交出令自己满意的答卷,要想为自己的作文加分,都不能忽视下面这一条:要有适当的连接成分,即连接词和连接语的使用。为了使文章在整体上结构严密,浑然一体,增强文章的说服力和感染力,考生应该在句子与句子之间,甚至段落与段落之间,恰当地使用一些过渡性词语。
另外,考生很容易犯的一个错误是,在写出若干个句子以后不使用连接词或连词,出现“run-on sentence”(连续句)现象,这是英语写作的大忌。考生一定要牢记,在英语书面表达中一定要用一个连词或连接词连接两个句子(当然,有时用一个分号要连接两个句子),两个连词连接三个句子,三个连词连接四个句子,依次类推。
要想让学生最后能有针对性地应付高考中的作文题,一定先要熟识上述所有的连接语及其使用的语境,教师在平时可以多采用联句成段的教学方式来培养学生使用连接语的习惯和语感,再加上平时的写作练习,使学生能充分重视和体验到连接语对于写作的重要性。在进行写作练习的过程中,可以给学生看一些经典范文,指出其中连接语对于文章结构的妙用,然后让学生进行模拟练习,最后还要及时批改,对使用了连接语的作文进行表扬和点评以起到鼓励学生的作用。
最后在考试时,学生在拿到作文题目后首先要明确写作要求,即我们常说的审题,判断题目到底属于哪一类文体,然后在脑海中搜索适用的连接语,对于该用到哪些连接语一定要有一个清醒的思路,然后挑出有用的记录在旁。从阅卷的情况来看,很多考生没有认真思考,动笔就写,之后在写作的过程不断出现一些错误,这是严重影响实际成绩的鲁莽的做法。
实例论证
我们首先看一看高考中的一篇满分作文。
Sample Writing I (2001)
I'm very pleased to(强调类) tell you the changes of my life since(原因类) rection of learning load was brought in. But before that(比较类),I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening(时间顺序类),I was often forced to do my boring homework and(结果类) I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since(原因类) the program of recing learning load was introced,my life,however(对比类),has been much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums,drop in at computer rooms and(时间顺序) draw pictures in my leisure(=spare)time. After lunch(时间顺序),I watch TV,read stories and(时间顺序) look through newspapers to enrich my horizon. No longer do I stay up;on the contrary(对比类),I go to bed at about 10p.m. In short(总结类),I am quite satisfied with my life now.
上面这一篇作文,是一篇叙事性的文章,因此其时间顺序类连接语也用得最多,在总共用到的13个连接语中,就有4个,但是每一个都不相同,因此通读整篇文章,不仅不让人觉得累赘,反而使文章结构合理,行文流畅。另外类型连接语的合理运用,就更使得整篇文章语言灵活,材料组织有序。相反,如果去掉文章中的所有连接词,那么这篇文章的分值就要掉两个档次。
再来看一篇高考范文:
Sample Writing II(2006)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think(看法类) that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that(原因类) it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides(补充类), the film is usually more interesting, and(递进类) it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion(对比类). They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile(对比类), the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with(看法类) the second view. Actually (递进类)I have more reasons for it. I think(看法类) I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more(补充类), I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word(总结类), to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. (2006浙江省高考参考范文)
这篇文章属于议论文,因此,在其中用于表达主管看法类的连接语最多,其它的连接语也多是第三大类中适用于议论文的词组。一篇范文是老师阅卷的标准,范文既然如此,可见连接语的熟练使用对一篇作文有多么的重要了。
综上所述,希望可以通过本文的叙述,使学生认识到连接语在英语写作中的重要性,并通过学习和掌握连接语的使用使学生的英语作文写作水平能够得到一定的提高。
D. 30篇各地的高考英语作文
书面表达
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。
参考词汇:中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
【参考范文】
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。
E. 高考英语作文怎么写
看到上面的回答,抄你估计也很头大吧,至少我现在我看到这么多条条框框我都受不了了
下面是我英语作文没有下过20分的原因,仅供参考,我说的都是从实际出发,并没有引用别人的,都是我在一次次和老师聊天中,老师所说的,毕竟他参加过好几次高考的英语改卷,因此还是比较有效的
首先我们要知道一件事:高考改卷的时间非常有限,几乎要不了一分钟你的作文成绩就下来了,因此第一感觉非常重要。
其实想写好高考英语作文很简单,1是字体好看不要犯简单的错误,2尽量使用有些难度的复合句,特别是第一句话很重要,建议用定语、状语重句或者强调句开场。
这样会给人一种高水平的感觉,只要第一感觉有了,分数也自然上去了,在考试中写错了不要紧,只能用笔在上面清清的划道斜线 但是要注意不要影响到卷面的清洁度 我建议你先打个草稿,用自己能看动的字体飞速的写好 然后重新修改一下 最后再抄到卷面上 虽然有点费时 但是你的英语字体工整卷面干净 可以至少多拿3分 这是我多年的经验 按照这中方法 你必须练英语字体 尽量优美点 开头再配上一个复杂点的句子 只要后面再出现3个复合句并且没有错句和表达意思上的错误出现 整体绝对在20分以上 我可以保证
F. 高考英语作文范文!急!!!
08四川
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
08陕西Notice
Our monitor suggests that we have “Friday News Hour”. But some classmates do not agree. We will have a class meeting in English tomorrow afternoon to discuss this suggestion. Please prepare your talk and take an active part.
May 6th, 2008
Dear fellow students,
Our monitor suggests that we have “Friday New Hour”. I think that it is a good idea.
Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think “Friday New Hour” can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What’ more, it will help us improve our reading skills.
As for my suggestion, I think it’s better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we’ll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.
08福建Dear sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life ring the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
08安徽Dear David,
I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.
As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.
I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.
Yours,
Li Hua
08湖南Sample 1: Thomas Edison
Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He once thought to be a boy who was not worth ecating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.
I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his little time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Meio Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions.
What impresses me most is his famous saying, “genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.
Sample 2: Helen Keller
Every time I read “…if I had the power of sight for three days;, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.
I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sulliven, Helen learned to read and write, and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder.
Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
Sample 3: William Shakespeare
Do you know Hamlet? Have you read the Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!
Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little ecation, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies gring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!
Since “life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well.
08湖北Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China,it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that.How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
08北京 One possible version:
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二节 开放作文 (15分)
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show e respect for them.
08全国2June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able
to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV
and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes
Li Hua
08全国1Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings from Chian!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
08辽宁We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
08 江苏Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. (151)
Thank you for your listening!
5月12日四川汶川发生大地震。很多人丧生,大量房屋倒塌,当地工厂、企业遭受很大损失,请你根据下面提纲和要求写一则英语短文。
提纲:
1、根据以上信息简要描述5.12汶川地震
2、你所经历(或从媒体得知的)这次地震当时的情况
3、你打算(或已经)为地震灾区做什么
要求:1、单词量120左右
2、语意连贯,合乎逻辑
3、书写工整、整洁
范文:
A powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province on May 12, which killed so many people. Due to the earthquake, a large quantity of factories and firms have suffered a big loss. At the same time, tens of thousands of houses have collapsed.
When the earthquake happened, I was attending class. Suddenly I together with my teacher and classmates felt continuous shaking All the students in our class rushed down stairs at top speed. Soon our school playground got crowded. I saw many schoolmates tried to connect their parents or friends but they failed to have phone calls on the fixed line or the mobile.About an hour later, we got the news that a powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province.
Immerdiately after the earthquake, people throughout the country took actions spontaneously(自愿地), offering their help, donation,and support to the rescue efforts. As a Chinese, I also tride my best to offer my help to the disaster areas. Besides praying for people in the disaster areas I donated money and blood. Moreover, I intend to be a volunteer in the disaster areas after the college entrance examination this summer.
G. 高考英语作文范文(带翻译) 高考英语满分作文(带翻译) 谢谢
Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang’e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe “Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
梦想和现实
嫦娥奔月的美丽传说暗示着中国人民探索月球的梦想。几千年来,我们中国人一代又一代地 为这个梦想努力着。嫦娥一号月球探测器就是以这个神话故事命名的。嫦娥一号的成功发射标志着中华民族实现探月梦想的第一步。
的确,我从这个历史事件中学到了很多。首先,我们的生活需要梦想,因为梦想是一切事情的原动力。然后我们要坚持梦想,永远不要放弃。同时我们必须认识到通往任何成功的路并不是平坦的。然而,不论我们做什么,我们应该相信“有志者,事竟成”,进我们所能使我们的梦想成为现实。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
请戒烟吧
现在我们经常会看到年轻人在公共场所抽烟。他们认为抽烟是一种乐趣。他们多么愚蠢呀!
报道显示全世界每年有几百万人死于吸烟。抽烟会引起许多疾病。
H. 高考英语作文例文带翻译
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括:
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书 K
3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours, Li Hua
译文:威尔逊太太,我要出去购物,直到下午5点才能回来。我已经把你要我还给城市图书馆的两本书带走了。今天下午大约1点钟,特蕾西打来电话,说明天早上她不能在博尔顿咖啡屋与你见面了,因为她有重要的事情要处理。对此她深感抱歉,不过,她说你可以安排其他时间会面。她想让你一到家就尽快给她回电话。她已经把这个变更告诉了苏珊。此致,李华[名师点评]
本文属于提纲式要点作文,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确,各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。
I. 高考英语作文
2010年高考英语作文万能模板系列
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
演讲及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). /It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、图画类写作模板:1.开头
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.衔接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.结尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
一,英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
如何高兴收到你的来信了。
让我告诉你一些有关活动。
我很高兴收到你的4月9日的信。
我很高兴地听到你要来中国进行访问。
我写信来感谢你的帮助我在美国逗留期间,你。
结尾部分:
有了良好的祝愿。
我期待着您的答复。
我很感激,如果你能回答刚才。
二,口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
女士们,先生们,我把你的注意力,好吗?我有一个要发布的消息。
正文部分:
所有的老师和学生都必须参加的。
请把你的笔记本电脑和做笔记。
请仔细听,我们将有一个小组的讨论。
请准时,不迟到。
结束语部分:
请大家踊跃参加它。
大家都在欢迎出席。
我希望你有一个很好的时间在这里。
这样就好了。谢谢。
三,议论文模板
1。正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:最近我们已经讨论了关于是否应... (导入话题)
我们的意见分歧就这一议题。(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:大部分学生都予以支持。(正方观点)
在这里,其中的原因。第一...第二...最后...(列出2〜3个赞成的理由)
第3段:但是,其他人则强烈反对。 (反方观点)
他们的理由如下。在第一个地方...更重要的是...此外...(列出2〜3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:个人而言,超重的优点的缺点,因为我们会做弊大于利,所以我支持它。(个人观点)
2。“甲或者乙”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:有些人的看法,一个是优于B在许多方面。另一些人则认为,B是好多了。就个人而言,我宁愿A,因为我觉得有更多的优势。
正文:
第2段:有,为什么我喜欢甲的原因很多,最主要的原因是...另一个原因是,...(赞同甲的原因)
第3段:当然,B也有一定程度的优势... (列出1〜2个乙的优势)
结论:
第4段:但如果所有这些因素考虑,甲比乙更从什么上面的讨论,我们可以得出这样的结论...(得出结论)
3。观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
作为一名学生,我强烈赞成这一决定。 (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
这可能会列出的理由如下。 (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:首先...其次...除了...(列出2〜3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:最后,我相信... (照应第1段,构成“总 - 分 - 总”结构)
4。“如何”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:许多方法可以帮助解决这一严重问题,但下面可能是最有效的。首先...另一种方法来解决问题是...最后...(列出2〜3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:这是不是最好的,但只有2 / 3,我们可以采取的措施。但是,应该指出,我们应采取行动,...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四,图表作文写作模板
图表给了我们一个整体的图表主题图片。首先我们看到的是,图表最大特点。这意味着,作为(进一步说明)。
我们可以看到从给定的统计数据,图表细节一。动词后,安泰细节一中的第一个变化,是动词- ED镜头+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。这些数字也告诉我们,图表细节二。在专栏中,我们可以看到,占(进一步描述)。
从这些数字来看,我们可以得出这样的结论(结论)。这样做的原因,据我所知是(给出原因)。 /现在是时候,我们(发出倡议)。
五,图画类写作模板:1。开头
看看这个picture. /图为/从这张图片,我们可以see... /由于在picture...显示/正如图片中看到that... ...
2。衔接句
提醒大家都知道,... /由于众所周知,.../众所周知that... /在我看来,.../据我所知,.../这景象我的东西在我的日常生活。
3。结尾句
在conclusion... /在brief... /在whole... /在short... /在word... /一般speaking... /正如已经指出...
J. 高考英语作文范文
03北京的 http://www.eol.cn/article/20030617/3087003.shtml
全国 http://www.eol.cn/article/20030609/3086343.shtml
全国2 http://www.eol.cn/article/20030609/3086344.shtml
05上海的 http://xzc.2000y.net/mb/2/ReadNews.asp?NewsID=339848
06上海的 http://..com/question/9661423.html
07上海的 http://news.xinhuanet.com/e/2007-06/15/content_6247182.htm
08上海的
June 8th
Dear Haiqing,
I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.
To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?
Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?
Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.
Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?
Keep in touch.
Yours
Huangping
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