Ⅰ 英语作文写作重点
1 好的开头,网上有很多范文
2好的句型结构,背下来15个句型,反复用,用专熟。这些句型要不是属太简单,人用得少,让老师眼前一亮的那种。
3通顺流畅的语言,减少时态,人称,数字等基本表达的失误
4结构,最好是三,四段式,不要分太多或太少,主旨(原因)开门见山,内容,总结或感想
5将一些词用短语代替,比如agree=in favour of,尽量不要用太简单的单词,用词要准,当然,这需要你有很大的单词量,推荐沪江网的开心词场背单词,如果你不想看书的话
6表达内容,要表达题目给出的要点,条理清晰,不可遗漏,顺便加点个人感情
其实就是背,练,用,希望能帮到你
Ⅱ 英语作文技巧
作是本人的老本行,高中一般都是21-23这个级别,大学英语作文被老师在班上推介为范文!!
对于作文,我说的最多的就是:不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!
要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇(越高级越好),写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……(我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分)
首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!
其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!
再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面:尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如:
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子。
Ⅲ 一篇英语作文,要点如下。
I have a pet dog . Its name is Lucky. It has white and soft furs with two small ears and a long tail. It is given by my aunt as my birthday. It is so friendly and lovely that we all love it very much. It likes playing balls outside so I often take it our for a walk. It also likes to be clean so I wash it and make it clean twice every week. I often feed it with dog food and saussages. It likes one of my best friend. I often play with it after school.
Ⅳ 英语作文要点,例文
英语作文要紧扣题目所给信息,加以自我阐述,同时时态、人称正确,无拼写语法错误,题目要求所写内容完整,语句流畅通顺。正确使用定语从句、同位语从句等;一些特殊句式,倒装句,强调句之类的,适当使用生单词!
一篇描写雪的文段:
With a graceful gesture,the failling snow like white petals whirled and drifted in the air ,giving people a sense of quietness.The ground was dressed in an article of silver clothing as if it was a magnificent crystal world with thousands of scenes,which captured people's unlimited nice imagination as well!
段落大意:雪像洁白的花瓣从天宇漂浮而下,姿态从容,给人以恬静之感。大地银装素裹,如宏丽的水晶世界,景象万千,又引起人们无限美好的想象!
分析:giving people a sense of quietness现在分词作状语
be dressed in 短语
which captured people's unlimited nice imagination as well!非限制性定语从句
一篇英语日记
Sunny 31th,July
Today was sunny and i was in a good mood.Tired of studying and the bustle of city life,I came to ecology park to enjoy the gorgeous scenery and get relaxed in the afternoon。
when I arrived at the park ,the first thing came into my sight were the thick green trees,therefore,the air was fresh,in addition, i could clearly see a path skirting along the pond。laying on the lawn which was decorated by a various of followers and seeing the blue sky,I felt at ease because all I wanted was some peace and quiet。All thing formed a beautiful landscape, and you couldn't imagine how romantic they were!
However,with the time passing so quickly,The day(不是sun) was dying in the west. So i had to go back home! I would never forget such a memorable experience, which was really beyond description!
今天阳光普照,我的心情也很好,厌倦了学习和城市的繁忙景象,我在下午来到了生态公园去享着美丽的风景,来得到放松。
当我来到公园时,首先进入我视线是浓绿的树木,因此,这空气新鲜,除此之外,我可以清楚地看到沿池塘边蜿蜒的小路。躺在有各种花儿点缀的草坪上,看着蓝色的天空,我感到十分惬意,因为我想要的就是是一些和平和宁静,所有的一切都形成了一道亮丽的风景线,你无法想象他们是多么浪漫!
然而,随着时间的快速流逝,日薄西山。所以我不得不回家了!我永远不会忘记这样一个难忘的经历,这是真的无法用言语来形容!
分析:Tired of studying and the bustle of city life,正确使用分词结构
in addition除此之外,therefore,因此 用于文章过渡,增强文章可读性
i could clearly see a path skirting along the pond现在分词作作定语,修饰path
laying on the lawn which was decorated by a various of followers and seeing the blue sky,现在分词作状语,从句中包含定语从句修饰lawn
which was really beyond description!非限制性定语从句
with the time passing so quickly with的复合结构,
with +n./pron. + 现在分词、过去分词、介词短语、形容词和副词
Ⅳ 写英语作文的要领有什么
很多人学英抄语都有个误区
老把英语当汉语学
所以写英语作文的时候要把思维换成英语思维
写之前找好一个中心围绕着他写
注意主语是第几人称,and、but等转折链接词要用恰当
内容不要太空洞,要丰富,主题鲜明
大概就是这样了
多找几篇范文背一背,学会他的结构
最好问你们老师
Ⅵ 写英语作文的基本要领是什么
一、措辞
1、选择生动准确的词
词是语言的基本单位,人们要表达思想,就要选择适当的词语,这是写作的基本要求。
词可分为一般概念的词(general words)和具体概念的词(specific words)。表示一般概念的词含义模糊;表示具体概念的词含义明确,表达准确,生动形象。写作时合理地使用具体概念的词能够使句子表达的意思准确,内容生动,更富有感染力。试比较下面各组句子:
(l) a few houses were destroyed yesterday (general)
five houses burnt down yesterday (specific)
(2)his relatives gave him two gifts(general)
his aunt and uncle gave hima watch and a pen as the birthday gifts。(specific)
(3) jack went to the window and looked at the crowd outside(general)
jack tiptoed to the window and peeped into the room(specific)
上面各组句中,第一个句子抽象概括,给人以空泛的感觉:第二个句子用词具体,有个件,使人感到意思确切,生动逼真。
2、使用英语成语和习语
人们在长期使用语言的过程中,积累了大量的习惯表达法。这些成语、习语内涵丰富,语言生动活泼。文章中适当地使用这类短语,可避免语言的单调贫乏,使句子生动而富于内涵。如:
(l)george has lost his social position since his business failed.
可改为:george has come down in the world since his business failed
(2).maybe you have time to go to the cinema,but i have more importavt businessto attend to.
可改为:maybe you have time to go to the cinema,but i have other fish to fry.
3、用词的宽度
用词的宽度可以反映出写作者所掌握的词汇量。如果一个人掌握的词汇量大,那么当表达同一概念有不同的表达方法时,则可以换一种说法。如:
the teachers maintained that the students should give up love for the sake ofleaming students,however,hold that fordidding love among college students is nogood.
这两句话里,谓语分别用了maintain和hold。如果将它们换为think,所表达的意思相同,但用词宽度则不如原文。这两句话中for the sake of,give up,is no good等都是用词宽度的表现。
所以在英语写作中有意识地适当增加用词宽度既能体现学以致用的原则又能使文章取得良好效果。
Ⅶ 做英语作文的要点是什么。
写作中应注意以下几点:
1. 内容是否紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点。(审专准题)
2. 作文结构层次是否清属晰。(引言段,扩展段,结尾段)
3. 语言表达是否流畅,有无重大语病,有无逻辑错误 (其实,在作文中考生自己同意哪种观点并不重要,用什么方法来解决问题也没有“标准”答案,只要言之有理、自圆其说即可,当然立意新颖会得高分)
4. 是否能恰当得使用过渡性词语,注意句子与句子之间,段落与段落之间的衔接。
5. 作文字数是否达到要求
6. 卷面是否整洁,书写是否漂亮。
Ⅷ 英语作文中要点是什么
bFor man is man and master of his fate.
Ⅸ 英语作文要点
语言流利,符合作文题目就OK啦
Ⅹ 写英语作文有哪些技巧
许多人把写英语作文当作英语考试中最头痛的一件事,因为英语作文的分数像是定型了一样总是提不上去.我以前也有这个迷茫,在高一和高二时,满分30分的英语作文,每次总是徘徊在20左右,提不上去.可是进入高三后,我用了另一种特殊的写作手法,使得我的英语作文水平提高了将近5分,也就是说,我每次总能把英语作文的分数保持在25分左右,最低也不会低于23分,而且这方法是屡试不爽.在今年的高考中,虽然其他几门课我考的不怎么样,但是我的英语还是过得去的,我想在这看这篇文章的今年应该没有英语考到139的吧,实话说吧,今年的英语作文我得了23分,这是我有史以来,英语得的最低分,但据我所知,今年英语作文分数普遍偏低,一般都只有10多分,上20的都没几个,我这个英语作文分数应该很过得去了.这也暗示着我写英语作文的成功之处,呵呵. 写英语作文,当然基本功很重要,好的英语作文中肯定必不可少的得有长句和复合句,这只能靠自己大家平时自己的练习,我帮不上忙.但是,有些同学可能会发现,有时候即使句子写得很好,但分数最多也只有21,2分,还是不够高.其实,说到底,是因为你的英语作文中缺少闪光点,句子写得很好,但是嚼之无味,很难把作文提上去.说实话,我的作文中也没有多么复杂的句子,句子可能比一般得21分的同学还要简单,但是每次我分数都不会太低,现在细细想来,可能是我的闪光点起了作用吧. 至于如何创造闪光点嘛,嘿嘿,就是我接下来要讲的重点啦.首先我给大家介绍一些段首的万能公式,你在每次写作时100%能派上用场. 段首万能公式一:名人名言.嘿嘿,有些人肯定会说啦,我又没有这个闲工夫去记住名人名言.说得好,我们确实没这个闲工夫.但是,我有一妙计,嘿嘿,去编!名人名言不也是名人自己造出来的么,所以只要你造的句子读起来有滋有味,你就是那个名人!而且没准将来我们自己就会成为一个大大的名人呢!有这样一些经典句型可供你参考:A proverb once said,"."在引号里加上你自己认为很有哲理的句子.或者:it goes without saying that.../as everyone knows,no one can deny that...我想更多的人可能倾向于用后面两句,因为这两句字数多嘛,呵呵. 段首万能公式二:用数据.要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明问题.原则上在议论文中不应该出现虚假数字,可是在考试时鬼才晓得你的数字到底真不真实了,反正能够使字数增多就行了,比如说我们可以用这个:according to a recent survey,about 78% of the students wanted to futher their study after their graation. 刚才我讲了用名人名言,现在想起来还有一点遗漏之处,有些人可能不太会编,太老实.在这里,我给大家总结出一些名人名言,不出意外,在考试时肯定能够派上用场,下面就是英语写作时必备的英语成语啦. 1.practice makes perfect--熟能生巧 2.god helps those who help themselves--天助自助者 3.easier said than done--说起来容易做起来难 4.where there is a will,there is a way--有志者事竟成 5.one false step will make a great difference--失之毫厘,谬以千里 6.slow and steady wins the race--稳扎稳打无往不胜 7.a fall into the pit,a gain in your wit--吃一堑,长一智 8.experience is the mother of wisdom--实践出真知 9.all work and no play makes jack a ll boy--只工作不休息,聪明孩子会变傻 10.beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance--无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,图有其表 11.more hasty,less speed--欲速则不达 12.it's never too old to learn--活到老,学到老 13.all that glitters is not gold--闪光的未必都是金子 14.a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step--千里之行始于足下 15.look before you leap--三思而后行 16.Rome was not built in a day--伟业非一日之功 17.great minds