① 高考英语作文提分
首先不要灰心,因为高考作文给你评分的改卷人并不是你的老师,而是多个有经验的改卷者打出的较为客观的结果,所以也许会和你的老师打分有所偏差。并且大多数老师(自)认为打的分数偏低会刺激学生更加努力的学习。
以我自己去年参加高考为例,英语作文平时在20分左右,语文作文在50分左右,结果高考少估了20分,以至于报志愿失手,原因就是少估了英语语文各十分。你也知道英语前面的客观题是不可能估得有太多偏差的,也就是说我的英语和语文作文实际上都接近满分。正是因为老师的不信任和我的不自信造成了估分失误。
其次英语作文也是有一定的格式的。我不知道你具体是哪个省的卷子。比如议论文就需要掌握规律和格式,字体美观整洁也很重要。固定的句型要背,各种套路的内容也要心中有数,比如环保类,学习类,道德类,介绍祖国大好河山类,字条类等。同义词需要替换,将一些简单的低级词汇改成高级词汇或短语,不要一形容好就写good,但一定不要将高级词汇使用的太过生硬或太过频繁。开头结尾多加一些名言警句,要地道的英文句子,不要写什么毛主席说......但如果是北京的那种看图说话题就要靠你真正的英语底子了。
最后注意,因为是写在答题卡上的缘故,建议你平时就经常用0.5黑笔写卷子。如果你们学校有经常用答题卡可以写在用过的答题卡背面练手感。因为据说字体扫描进电脑时连笔容易出现黑块,建议你不要写花体字,接近印刷体的手写体为佳。考试时注意速度,同时尽量落笔无悔,不要修改。当你作为一个一天要改几千份卷的老师时,美观可能会变成极其重要的标准。
② 13到17年陕西高考英语作文范文
这个简单,你直接搜索陕西历年高考英语作文
比如14年的
(2014)假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。 写作要点:
1. 表示对客人的欢迎; 2. 介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等); 3. 表达对客人的祝愿。 写作要求:
1. 词数不少于100; 2. 称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文; 3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear American guests,
Dear American guests, On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities. As scheled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence. I sincerely with you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
欢迎词经典句型:
1. 我很荣幸地代表„„向来自„„地方的„„表示热烈的欢迎。
On behalf of sh., I have the honor/ I feel greatly honored to express/ extend warm welcome to sb. from sp.
2. 请允许我向远道而来的贵宾表示热烈的欢迎和亲切的问候。
Please allow me/ Permit me to express/extend these warm welcome and gracious greetings to our distinguished guests coming from afar.
3. 我很愉快地以我个人的名义,向某某表示热烈的欢迎。
I am very delighted to extend/express this personal warm welcome to…
③ 17年河南高考英语作文多少分值
河南使用全国卷 I卷,英语作文25分。
④ 马上就要高考了 但是我的英语作文只有17 18分的样子 求帮助
高考英语写作必背句子
(1)用于描写漫画、图表的常用句型
①As the graph depicts , …
②From the cartoon /picture , we can see that …
③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,
④The table shows / indicates / reveals that …
⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that …
(2)用于句首提出论题或现象的句型
①Recently , …has become the focus of the society .
②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life .
③Nowadays there is a growing concern for …
④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …
⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life .
⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of …
⑦It is only ring the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that …
⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes …
⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency …
⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face .
(3)用于比较、阐述不同观点的常用句型
①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to …
②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold …
③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others , however , disagree with it .
④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim …
⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion .
⑥On the one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel …
⑦Some people argue that … Others , in contrast , believe that …
⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that …
⑨On the contrary , there are people in favor of …
⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about …
(4)用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型
①My own experience tells me that …
②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to …
③As for my own idea about … I believe …
④As far as I am concerned , I plan to …
⑤Personally , I prefer …
⑥In my view , both sides are partly right in that …
⑦But for me , I would rather …
⑧My own point of view is that …
⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that …
⑩As regards me , I tend to choose …
(5)用于书信写作的常用句型
①Thank you for your letter of …
②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of … to accept …
③Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived …
④I am writing to you with reference to …
⑤I am writing to you in connection with …
⑥I would be grateful if you could / would …
⑦I would like to know some information on …
⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could …
⑨I would also like to know if you can / could …
⑩I look forward to hearing from you .
(6)用于结尾的常用句型
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that …
②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that …
③It is high time that something was done about …
④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear /obvious that …
⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that…
⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed /presented , I strongly recommend that …
⑦It is clear , therefore , that …
⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to …
⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to …
⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that …
⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is …
⑿ On the whole , it is high time that every one …
⒀ As a result , we should take some effective steps to …
⒁ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that …
⑤ 高考英语作文字数要求
高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得-5分。高考英语作文,不管是全国卷,还是地方卷,都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分,字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下:1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.概要部分少于20词或多于40词;全文少于130词或多于180词的,从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如字迹难以辨认,以致影响表达,将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档:(21—25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。l覆盖所有内容要点。l语法结构和词汇有个别小错误,但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。l有效地使用了衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档:(16—20分)完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一、二个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确,少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。l应用简单的语句间的衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档:(11—15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一些内容,但基本覆盖主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。l应用简单的衔接手段,内容基本连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(6—10分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇有限。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对所写内容的理解。l较少使用衔接手段,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(1—5分)未完成试题规定的任务。l明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇不当。l有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响内容理解。l缺乏语句间的衔接手段,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分:未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。
⑥ 2020高三英语作文 感觉用了挺多高级表达但是分数一直17/25或18/25,请问是什么问题
大致看了下,我觉得你最好直接问你老师,我也不是老师,随便说两句。内首先,语法问题,比如容第一篇store可数,不加a不加the不加复数形式,有问题;第二篇第一段views...这句是句号,some开始是又一句话了,因为你没加连接词,如and。其次,分段问题,高中英语一般都三段论,开头亮观点,二段说原因,最后总结或加上措施。而且25分作文一般也就18-20分,20分以上都是写的很好的了,英语一直都是阅读拿大头,阅读提高分数也比你作文提高简单
⑦ 谁有高考英语作文六大类型的范文!(带翻译)
高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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译:
我很高兴收到你的信,我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街,不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达,前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间,其中一个是卧室,其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床,一个沙发和一个办公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望,但我会尽我所能,满足您的需求。如果还不够,给我写信,我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里!
就到这里啦!
此致,
李华
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘,谬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a ll boy. 只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。
11.More hasty,less speed. 欲速则不达。
12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
18.well begun,half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
20.Out of sight,out of mind. 眼不见,心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
22.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
26.live not to eat,but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭,吃饭为了活着。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
28.East or west,home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
34.An idle youth,a needy age. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
35.As the tree,so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn,to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习,学习为了更好的活着
⑧ 如何写出17分以上高考英语作文
提高高考英语书面表达水平速成五法
一、问题的提出
综观近几年的高考英语发展势态:书面表达旨在训练学生对所学语言知识的实践应用,特别是测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识的活用能力的必考题型,也是高考中重要且难度较大的题型,所占分值为25分,要在30分钟内写出80-100个词左右的短文。
从高考评卷及平时测验题,学生在做书面表达题时,得分率较低,卷面普遍存在的缺点:①文不对题(文体格式不规范)②离题太远(抓不到要点,该说的不说,不该说的说的太多)③词不达意(有的甚至用汉语标注或留空)④病句太多(时态、语态、人称、数等语法)⑤卷面不工整(字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞)。如何指导学生克服上述缺点,少犯错误,提高该题的得分率?笔者通过对近几年高考题分析,结合多年的教学实践认为,采用“五步法”,是提高书面表达题分数有效的方法。
二、五步法
第一步:明确体裁,掌握格式
学生的书面表达往往存在不讲究逻辑、文体和格式的现象,所以很有必要让学生明确常见的几种文体和格式。就中学阶段,最常见的 文体有:应用文(书信、通知、日记、便条)、记叙文和说明文。近十年NMET书面表达内容题材不外乎上述三种文体。我们知道:中学教材的内容,涵盖了所有体裁,教师应该结合课文,分类按题材归纳,详细介绍并具体指导学生掌握各种文体的写作特点及格式。若是记叙文,要弄清事件的时间、地点、人物、原因和结果;若是说明文,要了解说明的主旨以及说明的顺序;若是以图画形式提供情景,即看图作文,首先应看懂每幅图的意思,还要弄懂几幅图之间的关系。
第二步:抓住要点,一一对应。
能否找出覆盖主要内容所有要点是得高分的关键,高考的评分标准一般分五个档次,要点越齐全,得高分 的可能性就越大;反之,若欠缺要点或描述与表达内容要点无关的,得分当然低。一般要求找出5--6个要点,可先用汉语或用keywords列出,
如:
NMET2002书面表达答案内容要点:
1、60%的同学认为不应收门票
2、公园是公众休闲的地方
3、如收门票,需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象
4、40%的同学认为应收门票,但票价不宜高
5、门票收入支付园林工人工资、购新花木
第三步:选词造句,点石成金。
书面表达要求用100词左右写出包含5--6个要点的短文。从近几年高考英语参考答案看,一般都以8-10个句子组成一篇文章。若用较少于8句话来表达,则句子容易复杂冗长,容易失控;若用多于10句话来表述,则句子零乱与琐碎,文章缺乏整体感。且大多数用简单句,少数用并列句和复合句。
因此,在教学中首先应对简单句五种基本句型以及“there be存在结构”等进行强化训练,然后对并列句、复合句进行适当的训练,使学生获得了扎实的句子结构基础知识,从而从根本上为迅速提高书面表达能力打下了扎实的基础。
另外,应提醒学生在做题时,要善于避生就熟,如某个词、某个句型想不起来时,可采用“回避”的方法,在不改变原有意思的前提下,转换为自己熟悉和有把握的词语和句型来表达题中所规定的内容要点。但切忌中文式的英语,或根据英语语法人为地编造一些不地道的语言材料。英语和汉语一样,词汇丰富,表达方式多种多样。当遇到某一难以直接表达的要点时,不妨变通一下,进行“曲线”表达。
如:NMET2002:“公园是公众休闲的地方。”既可用复合句:People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.也可用简单句:People need a place to have a rest and enjoy themselves.或:Park is a good place for people to relax and enjoy themselves in.
又如:“游客纷至沓来”这句话,很多学生不能用英语写出“纷至沓来”这个成语,但是可以用以下几种表达方式:
⑴A large number of visitors come here
⑵There are lots of visitors coming here every day
⑶Many people visit here every day
⑷A lot of people pay a visit here every day
第四步:合理安排,联句成文。
书面表达不仅仅是“句子堆积”,要注意文章的连贯性和逻辑性。如何使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。用好各种连接词,对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要。要求学生按照合理的顺序或按一定的写作线索选用适应的连接词,将句子连珠成串,使各句连成结构紧凑、层次分明、语义连贯的短文。因此,教学时,教师可介绍一些常用连接成分。如下面表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词:
这样,在掌握了以上表中的常用连接词的基础上,学生叙述事件时,就不会杂乱无序,东扯一句西扯一句,前言不搭后语,就知道怎样用连接词来连接所要表达的内容了。
请看NMET2002年的书面表达范文。
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we 've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40 % think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
范文中采用了斜体部分的连接词与短语,不仅使文章具有较强的逻辑性,而且使文章显得更紧凑、连贯、更有水平。
如何通过使用连接词、句子结构及词汇使一个平淡的文章变得丰富起来。可以让学生比较下面三个段落。
I opened the door,I went into the room. I walked to the window. I opened the window. I looked out. There are many old women doing morning exercises. I watched them for some time.
这是一个干巴巴的段落,下面加一些连接词及一些语法结构后就有很大改观。
After I opened the door, I went into the room. It was dark inside the room, so I walked toward the window and opened it. I saw some old women who were doing morning exercises and watched them for some time.
同样这样一件事,下面再加些改动会更精彩。
After opening the door, I went into the room. It was dark inside the room, so I opened a window to let in some light. I saw many old women doing morning exercises. I stood at the window, watching them for some time.
从以上我们可以看出,要使文章写得连贯、流畅,就要准确恰当地使用各种表示时间先后、时间顺序等方面的连接词,以及运用丰富的词汇和得当的句子结构,这些丰富的词汇和得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。
第五步:检查修改,誊写工整。
做书面表达时,力求用词准确。作文写完后应认真阅读,检查文章中的拼写和标点错误、语法错误、逻辑错误等;检查词数是否符合要求;检查内容要点是否全面,删繁就简,使表达更加精炼,措词更加恰当。定稿后应认真誊写,要求书写规范、正确、美观,并保持卷面整洁。从参加高考阅卷者都有这样的体会:要在比较短的时间里,阅读完一篇作文,当看到那些字迹潦草卷面不整洁的,心情就特别烦,评分可能比想象的要低;而看到那些书写规范、卷面整洁的,就倍感爽心悦目,有可能得到比较高的分数,这也是情理之中的事情。因此,在训练时,学生要养成书写工整、规范,卷面整洁的习惯,在做高考题时,才不致书写潦草、卷面不整洁,从而导致丢失本来不该丢的分。
总之,上述“五步法”不仅是做好书面表达题的基本操作流程,也是考生克服普遍存在缺点,少犯错误比较有效的方法。它能指导学生在有限的时间里,进行有效的训练复习,更好地提高书面表达题的成绩。