英语作文点评

㈠ 帮我点评一下英语作文

我给12分，六年级写这样已经不错了的。

My
Favourite
Sport

Hello,everybody!do
you
like
sport?If
you
insist
on
it,it
will
be
good
for
your
health.

what
is
your
favourite
sport?
My
favourite
sport
is
swimming
and
it
is
very
interesting.otherwise
I
can
play
water
with
my
friends
in
the
swimming
pool.
I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.

点评：1.注意句子之间的分段，

2.在写swimming的时候，注意可以用it代替的，否则会因为重复觉得啰嗦了。

3.既然可以快慢自如的游泳了（I
can
swim
fast
or
slowly），就不要说我游的不好了（I
can't
swim
very
well
now），所以可以用be
good
at
的短语来说，虽然我不擅长（专业）游泳，但是我非常喜欢它。（I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.）

呵呵，没有改太多，希望你能学到东西哦！！！

㈡ 英语作文点评 谢谢

功底是有但是少些套路，建议背些模板和常用句型如议论文一般采用三段式模板好点正反对立观点分类阐明最好终结表达自己观点·····

㈢ 高中英语作文点评

第二行来that这样引导定从不对，换成about
第四自行sell及物动词，后面要加宾语，前后分局不是因果关系，用so链接不合适，选用however比较好
第八行collect当收集讲，这里要是想表示保留最好使用keep
第九行give away表示赠送的时候需要接to
第十一行sell them to store to exchange

总的来说还是一片比较通顺的文章，从高考角度讲大约在二档中偏下的位置，使用的词组较恰当，但是巨型过于单一并且还有错误，建议引入同位语从句和强调句，单词过于简单，如果你的作文打算求稳这样既基本可以，如果要夺高分，就要使用一些高阶词汇和高级句子，比如提建议可引入虚拟语气，连接词还应更恰当，使文章更紧密。

㈣ 求简短的适合所有英文文章的英语评价 急急急……！

依式行文，文笔素朴，结构严谨。
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富，结构版严谨，体系完备，博大精深权
rich contents, perfect system, broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅， 层次井然，结构严谨，文字生动，颇富幽默，笔调轻松

Simple and smooth, orderly hierarchy, rigorous structure, vivid characters, quite humorous, delightful

㈤ 英语作文点评

建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)

㈥ 帮忙点评一下英语作文。

last summer是过去时态整体作文应该用一般过去时。
里边还有好多小语法错误。比如a change的change怎么加了复数

㈦ 怎样成功点评学生的英语作文

Different people have different views on success. Some hold that making a great deal of money means success. Others argue that holding an important post in the government means success. Still others believe that having a high academic title at a famous university or a research institute means success.
In my opinion, success means brilliant achievement in our work. In other words, no matter what we do, making outstanding contributions to the development of our country and bringing help and happiness to others is success.

㈧ 怎样点评高考英语作文

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?

㈨ 英语作文点评，请高人指点

没有太大的问题，句子基本都把意思表达出来了

但是可能时态不是很清楚，过去时间段里专又掺带了属一般现在时，这个要改一下。

有一些词看起来像是你直接查的字典就写上去的，不是很恰当，用之前最好多看一下例句，模仿例句其实没什么坏处

有两句话我画了很长的线，实话讲不是正确的句子，一个句好里面用逗号连接了好几个完整的句子。要是先让句子看起来很高级就好好用从句，用不好不如直接写成正确的短句。写东西首先要是能表达清楚意思再是读起来好听

我试着尽量不改你的原词，修改了前几段，你可以参考一下。