高考满分英语作文

⑴ 以下这篇英语作文如果在高考可以打几分，满分25

满分25分，抄不同评分老师对同一篇文章评出的分数不会完全一样。有的相差无几，有的相差较大。这就是为什么高考对书面表达的评卷要求三位老师负责评同一篇作文。
我给你打19分到20分之间，优点：1, 运用了正确的书信格式。2, 用英语按要求正确的表达自己。3, 信中用了状语从句、宾语从句、同位语等从句。4, 非谓语动词也用得较好。
5, 书写工整。

⑵ 跪求20篇简短的高考英语满分作文范文。

2009年广东高考英语满分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can‘t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals ring their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， ring which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文
游客应该给动物拍照吗？
考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。
当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。
如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．

高考满分作文1(1号题)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

高考英语满分作文第二篇
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
高考英语满分作文第四篇

Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?
Yours truly, Li Hua
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

⑶ 英语高考满分作文(带翻译）

Olympics and I
Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an indivial, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
奥运与我
亲爱的朋友，我有一个好消息，告知这里。通过长期的努力，北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住，我感到很兴奋，你想分享我的快乐。 这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。首先，本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查，这项比赛将提高约3％的国内生产总值，提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是，我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落，体验中华文化在各个方面。此外， 5 透过游戏，我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如，公共交通系统会过时。此外，据了解，将种植更多树木，草地将大大扩大。 我的朋友，我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人，我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里，观看2008年奥运会，此致。

Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
中国旅游
最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47％城镇居民定期作出旅行，28％的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。

What a disaster(灾难)!
So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
什么是灾难（灾难）！
到目前为止，有报道称，超过60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡，再加上数百万人民有成为homeless.And他们在疾病和其他困难的危险之中。无论如何，感谢所有善良的人们，在国内外形势已经改变well.But我们仍然在努力工作的，特别是为那些无家可归的人建造房屋和医治受伤群众。 现在我们可以做什么？除了做好自己的工作做好，我们可以捐钱给them.We坚信，有党和政府的坚强领导，有全国各族人民的援助国，这将是一个抗震救灾的胜利！

The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
在我们康明城市家庭平均收入从8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期间，平均家庭支出结构也发生了变化。这些图形显示了明显的变化。 而一般家庭开支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每个家庭花费了其对房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，关于住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和饮料是平均家庭开支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大约18％的平均收入是用于这一项目。 2008年，这一数字增长到30％。由于在费用等增加住房和食物，结果在其他项目的费用已经减少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一个结论，随着收入的增加，人们可以改善他们的生活步骤。但仍是一般家庭要花费很大一部分收入，以满足基本需要。

⑷ 高考英语作文多少分

高考英语作文满分为分。

具体评判打分标准如下：

第五档（很好）：（21~25分）

1、完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2、覆盖所有内容要点。

3、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4、语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

5、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6、完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档（好）：（16~20分）

1、完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2、虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。

3、应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4、语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。

5、应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6、达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档（适当）：（11~15分）

1、基本完成了试题规定的任务。

2、虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。

3、应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4、有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

5、应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。

6、整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档（较差）：（6-10分）

1、未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

2、漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。

3、语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

4、有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

5、较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。

6、信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档（差）：（1~5分）

1、未完成试题规定的任务。

2、明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

3、语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

4、较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

5、缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。

6、信息未能传达给读者。

(4)高考满分英语作文扩展阅读：

英语作文写作技巧：

书面表达是近年高考常选的命题方式之一，而且，所用体裁也相对稳定，以记叙文、应用文、说明文为主，题材多种多样，有书信、日记、介绍、通知等，多数情况下，在提示中明确规定了用何种格式。

所以，考生只需根据表格里的提示内容，确定所要表达的要点，最后运用自己所掌握的句型和词语知识，写出一篇要点全、语句通、条理清、表达明、思路活、书写正的短文。在具体操作时应注意以下两点：

一、要谋好篇，布好局

即在动笔前，一定要根据表格里的提示内容，先确定好所要表达文章的题材，然后根据题材确定好文章的整体结构，先写什么，后写什么，略写什么，详写什么，甚至要用到哪些句型和短语，都要做到成竹在胸。

二、要充分根据表格内容确定要点

因为书面表达最重要的评分依据就是内容要点要全，如果遗漏一个要点，至少要扣3分。

因此，在认真审题、弄清体裁、题材、题意的基础上，应逐个地、完整无缺地把表格中的内容要点找出来，然后再根据不同体裁把要表达的要点表达出来。

如果是记叙文，六个要点缺一不可，即人物、时间、地点、事件、原因和结果。

在这六个要素中，人物、时间、地点通常放在文章的开头；事件、原因通常放在文章的中间，它们是文章的主体；结果作为故事的结局通常放在文章的最后。

如果是应用文，首先是注意它的格式，因为格式错误，要扣2分；然后把要解说的事物的性质、对象、目的、发生的时间和地点等解释清楚，使读者对此事物有一个完整准确的了解。

⑸ 2019高考英语满分作文

2018·全国Ⅰ卷

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 到达时间；

2. 合适的礼物；

3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】

Dear Terry,

How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 全国Ⅱ卷

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1. 短片内容：学校的发展；

2. 放映时间、地点；

3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】

Notice

In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student UnionJune

2018 · 全国III卷

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 学校的体育场馆；

2. 主要的运动项目；

3. 你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】

Dear Peter,

I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第一节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 推荐他上哪所大学；

3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【满分范文】

Dear Jim,

I’m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第二节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

ards
the mountains. 'Don’t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don’t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

注意：

（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：

（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________

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【满分范文】

Paragraph 1

Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

Paragraph 2

We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!

2018 · 天津卷

假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

（1）比赛的时间、地点；

（2）邀请他的原因；

（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【参考词汇】

世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【满分范文】

Dear Chris,

I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers’
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children’s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.

I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.

If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I’m
looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

2018 · 江苏卷

请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。

Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny

Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.

Su Hua 6 July, Sunny

This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名（ratings）进行消费的现象；

2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【满分范文一】

As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.

【满分范文二】

Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

⑹ 高考满分英语作文

首先来了解一下英语作文的评分标准
各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分)
A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。
C.第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
D.第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
E.第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。
F.不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
从上面可以看出英语作文高分的关键因素及高分秘诀：
三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀：
审题，遣词，造句，润色，谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀，我们要如何从这些方面入手呢?
审题的概念
拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面：
总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复

⑺ 高考必背英语作文

01 The Language of Music A painter hangs his or her finished pictures on a wall, and everyone can see it. A composer writes a work, but no one can hear it until it is performed. Professional singers and players have great responsibilities, for the composer is utterly dependent on them. A student of music needs as long and as arous a training to become a performer as a medical student needs to become a doctor. Most training is concerned with technique, for musicians have to have the muscular proficiency of an athlete or a ballet dancer. Singers practice breathing every day, as their vocal chords would be inadequate without controlled muscular support. String players practice moving the fingers of the left hand up and down, while drawing the bow to and fro with the right arm-two entirely different movements. Singers and instruments have to be able to get every note perfectly in tune. Pianists are spared this particular anxiety, for the notes are already there, waiting for them, and it is the piano tuner’s responsibility to tune the instrument for them. But they have their own difficulties; the hammers that hit the string have to be coaxed not to sound like percussion, and each overlapping tone has to sound clear. This problem of getting clear texture is one that confronts student conctors: they have to learn to know every note of the music and how it should sound, and they have to aim at controlling these sounds with fanatical but selfless authority. Technique is of no use unless it is combined with musical knowledge and understanding. Great artists are those who are so thoroughly at home in the language of music that they can enjoy performing works written in any century. 02 Schooling and Ecation It is commonly believed in United States that school is where people go to get an ecation. Nevertheless, it has been said that today children interrupt their ecation to go to school. The distinction between schooling and ecation implied by this remark is important. Ecation is much more open-ended and all-inclusive than schooling. Ecation knows no bounds. It can take place anywhere, whether in the shower or in the job, whether in a kitchen or on a tractor. It includes both the formal learning that takes place in schools and the whole universe of informal learning. The agents of ecation can range from a revered grandparent to the people debating politics on the radio, from a child to a distinguished scientist. Whereas schooling has a certain predictability, ecation quite often proces surprises. A chance conversation with a stranger may lead a person to discover how little is known of other religions. People are engaged in ecation from infancy on. Ecation, then, is a very broad, inclusive term. It is a lifelong process, a process that starts long before the start of school, and one that should be an integral part of one’s entire life. Schooling, on the other hand, is a specific, formalized process, whose general pattern varies little from one setting to the next. Throughout a country, children arrive at school at approximately the same time, take assigned seats, are taught by an alt, use similar textbooks, do homework, take exams, and so on. The slices of reality that are to be learned, whether they are the alphabet or an understanding of the working of government, have usually been limited by the boundaries of the subject being taught. For example, high school students know that there not likely to find out in their classes the truth about political problems in their communities or what the newest filmmakers are experimenting with. There are definite conditions surrounding the formalized process of schooling. 03 The Definition of “Price” Prices determine how resources are to be used. They are also the means by which procts and services that are in limited supply are rationed among buyers. The price system of the United States is a complex network composed of the prices of all the procts bought and sold in the economy as well as those of a myriad of services, including labor, professional, transportation, and public-utility services. The interrelationships of all these prices make up the “system” of prices. The price of any particular proct or service is linked to a broad, complicated system of prices in which everything seems to depend more or less upon everything else. If one were to ask a group of randomly selected indivials to define “price”, many would reply that price is an amount of money paid by the buyer to the seller of a proct or service or, in other words that price is the money values of a proct or service as agreed upon in a market transaction. This definition is, of course, valid as far as it goes. For a complete understanding of a price in any particular transaction, much more than the amount of money involved must be known. Both the buyer and the seller should be familiar with not only the money amount, but with the amount and quality of the proct or service to be exchanged, the time and place at which the exchange will take place and payment will be made, the form of money to be used, the credit terms and discounts that apply to the transaction, guarantees on the proct or service, delivery terms, return privileges, and other factors. In other words, both buyer and seller should be fully aware of all the factors that comprise the total “package” being exchanged for the asked-for amount of money in order that they may evaluate a given price. 01语言的音乐

画家,他或她的成品的照片挂在墙上,每个人都能看到它。 作曲家写完了一部作品,但是没有人能听见它直到它被执行。 专业歌手和演员身负重责,作曲家依赖于他们。 一个学习音乐的人一样,需要经过长期艰苦的训练而成为一名演奏家就像医科学生要成为一名医生。 大多数的训练都是技术性的,因为音乐家们都必须肌肉像运动员和芭蕾舞演员。 歌手每天练习呼吸,因为他们的声带必须没有肌肉的有效控制不足。 弦乐演奏时感人左手的手指上升和下降,而绘画船头来回右臂前后完全不同的动作。

歌手和乐器必须使每个音符完全合调。 钢琴家就没有这烦恼,因为音调早已在那等着他们,钢琴定调音师来调整仪器。 但他们有自己的难点;锤打在琴弦钢琴不听起来像打击乐,还有每个叠音必须发清晰。

此问题弄清楚纹理是困惑学生教导员:他们必须清楚地知道每个音符的音乐和它如何发音,以及在控制这些声音是懂得狂热而无私的权威。

技术是没有用的,除非它是结合音乐方面的知识和理解。 伟大的艺术家是那些语言驾轻就熟的音乐,能演奏写于任何时代的作品。
02上学与受教育

人们普遍认为在美国那所学校是人们受教育的地方。 然而,也有一种说法,认为今天的孩子们上学打断了他们受教育。 学校和教育之间的区别此观点暗示了是很重要的。

教育是比上学内容更综合和全面。 教育是无限的。 它可以发生在任何地方,不管在淋浴时还是在工作中,无论是在厨房或拖拉机上。 它既包括发生的正规教育,在学校和非正式学习的所有领域。 教育的代理人可以是德高望重的老者也可以是广播中辩论政治的政客,可以是小孩也可以是一个杰出的科学家。 上学读书多少有点可预见性,而教育往往能带来意外的发现。 与陌生人偶然的一次谈话可能会使人认识到自己对其宗教所知甚少。 人们从幼时起就开始受教育。 因此,教育是一个非常丰富的词。 教育是一个终生的过程,这个过程的开始,长在进入学校之前就开始的,应该是一种人们整个生活的组成部分。

从另一方面来说,学校教育是一种特定的,正式的过程,一般模式的预设的一点一滴变化到下一个。 在全国,孩子们到学校在大约相同的时间,坐在指定的位置,接受一个成人的教学,使用相同的教材,做作业,考试等等。 的现实生活中的一些片断,无论他们是学习字母或对政府工作的理解,通常都会科目范围的限制被教导。 例如,高中生们知道没有可能发现他们的课程中,他们社区政治问题的真相或知道最新上映的试验。 有一定条件下的过程学校正式教育。
03的定义,“价”

价格决定资源的使用方式。 他们还种的产品与服务在买方中的配给有限。 美国的价格系统是一个复杂的网络的价格所组成的一切产品买卖经济中无数的服务,包括劳力,专业人员、交通运输、公共事业服务。 所有这些价格的关系构成“系统”的价格。 任何特定的价格与产品或服务的一个广泛的,复杂的系统的价格,似乎一切东西都靠或多或少在一切。

如果你问一群随机选取的个人定义“价格”的时候,许多人会回答那个价格一定数量的钱给买方,卖方的产品或服务,或,换句话说,价格的钱的产品或服务的价值约定在市场交易。 该定义就其本身来说自有其去。 对价格的完整理解在任何一个特定的交易的,远不止涉及的金额一定要知道。 买卖双方不仅应熟悉的,但是随着金额的质与量的产品或服务,交流的时间和地点发生并且交易所将付款方式,这种形式的钱被使用,本信用证条款和折扣,适用于交易,保证的产品或服务,交货条件,还权限,以及其他因素。 换句话说,买家和卖家都应当充分意识到所有的因素构成整个“包裹”(“包裹”用于交换所需资金,以便评估一个既定价格。

⑻ 高考满分英语作文30篇及翻译

Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang’e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe “Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
梦想和现实
嫦娥奔月的美丽传说暗示着中国人民探索月球的梦想。几千年来，我们中国人一代又一代地 为这个梦想努力着。嫦娥一号月球探测器就是以这个神话故事命名的。嫦娥一号的成功发射标志着中华民族实现探月梦想的第一步。
的确，我从这个历史事件中学到了很多。首先，我们的生活需要梦想，因为梦想是一切事情的原动力。然后我们要坚持梦想，永远不要放弃。同时我们必须认识到通往任何成功的路并不是平坦的。然而，不论我们做什么，我们应该相信“有志者，事竟成”，进我们所能使我们的梦想成为现实。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
请戒烟吧
现在我们经常会看到年轻人在公共场所抽烟。他们认为抽烟是一种乐趣。他们多么愚蠢呀!
报道显示全世界每年有几百万人死于吸烟。抽烟会引起许多疾病。抱歉只有两篇！

⑼ 近年高考英语满分作文十篇

一
假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
英语作文网

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

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请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情况；
(3) 解放后的变化；
(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

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健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.饮食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2.80—100词左右；

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

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Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

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随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意：1. 词数80—100左右。

2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体

rece diseases 减少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play footb