英语作文评论

⑴ 英语作文评语大全

依式行文,文笔素源朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful

⑵ 英语作文点评

建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)

⑶ 关于评论电影的英语作文

第1篇 英文：
Although Lei Feng left in a hurry, but leave us precious wealth. -- "
Lei Feng, the shock of universal name! When it comes to Lei Feng, my heart is always filled with respect and gratitude, especially after watching the movie "Lei Feng", this move is particularly strong.
No smoke of the battlefield on the screen, but each picture was so touching story; no extraordinary, plot twists and turns, but every detail was so exciting......
The movie "Lei Feng" tells the story of Uncle Lei Feng put one's heart and soul into serving the people's story. Was this a seemingly ordinary things, make Lei Feng in the hearts of the people to establish a very tall figure.
"No matter what position, I will do everything in my power, tried in every way to serve the people." This, Lei Feng -- a good son of the people! Outstanding member of the Communist party!
Each plot in the film is deeply moved me, however, the most let me unforgettable is Lei Feng for the victims.
Once, Lei Feng and his comrades driving transporting flood control materials to the disaster areas, to unload supplies, Lei Feng do not eat rice will return. Before he left, he took the opportunity to sneak an envelope was ready on the table, the envelope marked "with one hundred yuan donated to the disaster areas the people's Liberation Army soldiers". Beam director of the flood control headquarters after know, hurried to catch up, want to put the money back to Lei Feng, Lei Feng would take? Then, the beam director to see Lei Feng fall down an old pair of socks have mixed feelings, said: "you, you're wearing the socks, has donated one hundred dollars!?" He turned, the presence of people said: "comrades, this is not the one hundred dollars and a pair of thousands of joint million patch socks, this is a tremendous spiritual wealth!"
As you can imagine, this "one hundred yuan" was how huge amount! This can not but let us ponder: with only six yuan monthly allowance, save one hundred yuan of money is how not easy! However, who knows, Lei Feng's life is very simple: thirsty, refused to drink a bottle of that only five cents of soda; heat, even a sweat towel also did not carry...... But put those old socks, fill fill...... However, the people in the disaster areas have a difficult time, but he had no scruples, loosen one's purse strings generously, this is such a huge contrast!
At this time, the screen where everyone was excited; now, I had tears off screen. Who is not for Lei Feng's noble deeds and moved?
What is this spirit? This is work hard and perseveringly, thrift revolutionary spirit. Lei Feng's good qualities of this selfless dedication, sacrifice oneself to protect others is proud of the Chinese nation, is the pride of the Chinese people!
"A man's life is limited, but service to the people is limitless. I will dedicate my limited life to infinite serve for the people."
The film ended, Lei Feng's voice still echoes in my ears, my heart is not quiet for a long time -- although Lei Feng left us too early, however, he has left us with a very great wealth. This wealth, for you, I, he, the benefit of the whole society. I believe, this precious wealth will forever be handed down from age to age!
翻译中文：
雷锋虽然匆匆地离开了，然而却给我们留下了宝贵的财富。——题记

雷锋，这个震撼环宇的名字！每当提起雷锋，我的内心总会充盈着崇敬与感激，特别是在观看了电影《雷锋》之后，这种感动尤为强烈。

银幕上没有硝烟弥漫的战场，可是每个画面竟那么感人至深；故事里没有离奇、曲折的情节，可是每个细节竟那么扣人心弦……

电影《雷锋》讲述的是雷锋叔叔全心全意为人民服务的故事。竟是这一件件看似平凡的小事，使雷锋在人们的心中树立起无比高大的形象。

“不管在什么岗位上，我都要尽一切力量、想一切办法去为人民服务。”这，就是雷锋——人民的好儿子！优秀的共产党员！

影片中的每个情节都深深地感动了我，然而，最让我难以忘怀的是雷锋为灾区捐款的事。

一次，雷锋和他的战友驾车给灾区运送防洪物资，卸下物资后，雷锋饭也不吃就要返回。临行前，他趁机偷偷地把早就准备好的一个信封放在桌子上，信封上面写着“内有一百元捐给灾区人民解放军一战士”。防汛指挥部的梁主任知道后，急忙追出来，想把钱还给雷锋，雷锋怎肯收下呢？这时，梁主任见到雷锋落下的一双旧袜子，百感交集地说：“你，你就穿着这样的袜子，却捐出来一百块钱！？”他转过身，对在场的人说：“同志们，这不是一百块钱和一双千缝万补的袜子，这是一笔巨大的精神财富！”

可以想象，这“一百元”在当时是多么庞大的数额！这不能不让我们深思：凭着每月仅仅六元钱的津贴费，积攒下一百元钱是多么不容易啊！然而，又有谁知道，雷锋的生活是多么俭朴：渴了，不肯喝一瓶当时仅仅一毛五分钱的汽水；热了，就连一条擦汗的毛巾也不曾携带……却把那双年久的袜子，补了又补……然而，在灾区人民有难的时候，他却毫不顾忌，慷慨解囊，这是多么巨大的反差啊！

此时，银幕里在场的人都激动万分；此刻，银幕外的我早已热泪盈眶。谁不为雷锋的高尚行为而感动呢？

这是什么精神？这是艰苦奋斗、勤俭节约的革命精神。雷锋的这种无私奉献、舍己为人的优秀品质是中华民族的自豪，是中国人民的骄傲！

“人的生命是有限的，可是为人民服务是无限的。我要把有限的生命投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”

影片放映结束了，雷锋的声音却一直在我的耳畔回响，我的心更是久久不能平静——雷锋虽然过早地离开了我们，但是，他却给我们留下了无比巨大的财富。这财富，惠及着你、我、他，惠及着全社会。我相信，这宝贵的财富将世世代代相传下去！

⑷ 英语作文点评，请高人指点

没有太大的问题，句子基本都把意思表达出来了

但是可能时态不是很清楚，过去时间段里专又掺带了属一般现在时，这个要改一下。

有一些词看起来像是你直接查的字典就写上去的，不是很恰当，用之前最好多看一下例句，模仿例句其实没什么坏处

有两句话我画了很长的线，实话讲不是正确的句子，一个句好里面用逗号连接了好几个完整的句子。要是先让句子看起来很高级就好好用从句，用不好不如直接写成正确的短句。写东西首先要是能表达清楚意思再是读起来好听

我试着尽量不改你的原词，修改了前几段，你可以参考一下。

⑸ 怎样评价一篇英语作文

首先，应当理解题意；其次，应善于谋篇布局，而不是生硬得翻译，在每个论内点开始时最好要有一定的容连接词，比如first,second,third;first
of
all,then,in
addition,what
is
more,finally；再者，应当善于运用高中阶段所学的各种句型语法，比如定语从句、同位语从句、动名词的符合结构等等还有一些常用的句子，应善于积累；最后就是整体的事了，段落安排是否合理、书面是否工整、尽量减少语法错误和拼写错误、字数在80到120之间。

⑹ 写一篇电影的评论的英语作文60词左右

Harry Potter series are my most favorite books.There are seven books in total.Last year,my father bought them for me as the new year gift.When I first read them,I liked them inmediately.The stories about Harry Potter are so exciting and adventurous.Harry Potter is a kind,brave and strong kid that he is never afraid of any difficulties.Besides,I admire him having two good friends.They always help him and never leave him,no matter how bad the conditions are.I am happy to see Harry Potter overcome all difficulties and live a happy life in the end.

⑺ 评论说英语作文的格式

评论性的作文最重要莫过于两点，1观点，你要对自己的观点，或者说立回场一定要明确，无论答是从反面评价一个事物或是以正面评价一个事物，你可以通过反向或正向推理来佐证你的观点。2则是总结自己的感想，这也是很重要的，这是你文章的一个可以使你的文章凝聚升华的部分，其重要性不言而喻，我建议你你可以通过举例来证明自己的感想，比如要写关于善良的文章，你就可以举一些历史上很善良的人物。希望我的一些经验可以帮到你。

⑻ 英语作文 一部电影的评价 用英语写一篇 关于一部电影的评价

Titanic
A precious stone which called "The Heart of Ocean"brought a love story between Rose and Jack.
They met on Titanic and fell in love with each other.On the way to love,they came across many obstacles but surmounted.Four days after the Titanic set out,a very big iceberg floated towards her.The ship was holed by an iceberg.Many people cannot be saved besides Rose and Jack.Death is the biggest obstacle for love to surmounte.In other to save Rose,Jack lay down his life.
In this movie,when teh ship suffered the unexpected,some people would rather help other people than save themselves,such as the sailors and the musicians.They moved me the most.This movie made me thought a lot in some fields,such as relationship of the people around you.For example,when we are facing love,how to express our feeling to our lovers and deal the problem about love with them;When we are facing the social problems,how to settle them perfectly?Let's suppose we are on the Titanic and taking different positions,what we should do when the unexpected coming?In my opinion,diferent people take the different positions and we do different things in society,but the most important thing is that we should assume our responsibilities.
As a whole,this movie not only has a wonderful plot but also provide food for thought.(发人深思)

⑼ 成绩不能评价一个人的英语作文

Many parents like to use the results to evaluate their children's good or bad, all like good grades, high scores, poor grades of children to criticize ecation, scolding children, this is unfair. Each person's starting point is not the same, the good children only represent the cultural advantages, but people are all aspects of development, sports, morality, culture, light culture is not good, some children are poor, but other aspects do well, they are more able to accept our praise.

许多家长喜欢用成绩来评价自己孩子的好坏，都喜欢成绩好的，分数高的，对成绩差的孩子进行批评教育，打骂孩子，这是不公平的。每个人的起点不一样，学习好的孩子只代表在文化方面有优势，但是人是全方面发展的，体育，道德，文化，光文化好也是不行的，有的孩子成绩差，但是其他方面做得很好，他们更有能力去接受我们的表扬。
谢谢。

⑽ 英语作文评价大全

说真的，我很讨厌淅沥的小雨，它们是那么的缠绵，总会使心烦涌入心头，惊涛拍浪，挖心的难受．因此在这样的雨天我没有在雨中漫步的情怀．但在北方由于在黄河以北降雨量少，注定淅沥的小雨会是夏天的常客．于是我也有些厌恶夏天，好在夏天还有一位代言人——暴雨，使我对夏天有了一丝的眷恋．
我喜欢暴雨有种近似痴迷的程度，因为暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，给人一种亲切感．下暴雨时我喜欢将窗子开到最大，将手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨点落下时针扎般的痛，那时却感觉不到疼，有的只是毅力的考验．张大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一种久违的香气，它会使我想起曾今那充满鸟语花香的大自然．
今天又一场暴雨过后，我遥望天际发现天空是那么美，头顶的一片天是那么的湛蓝，蓝的没有一丝杂质，它又是那么的飘渺，好像是七仙女抛下的一件蓝色的薄纱在空中飘舞．不远处还是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黄色，那种颜色给人一种压抑的感觉．于是我寻找蓝灰的交界处，那里本应是逐渐的过度色，而大自然却巧妙的嵌进去一朵还未完全舒展的云，刹那间我感受到了活力，那是生命的诠释．突然明白再阴的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出现的那一刹那．
那是一幅美丽的油画，是大自然给予人类的享受，更是自然给我们敲响的警示钟，如果没有人类保护大自然，恐怕以后连那雨过天晴的后的一丝感动也会一去不复返，至少我们会失去对生命的另一种诠释