『壹』 我的爸爸英语作文带翻译
想要写好我的爸爸带翻译的英语作文的话,一定要下苦功了,务必要打好英语基本功,报课在线外教英语培训班也是你不错的选择,跟着教学经验丰富的外教老师学英语作文,更加有自信心和兴趣,效果还是不错的。『贰』 英语作文我的父亲
y father is thirty-five years old. He is an attractive middle-age. He is an engineer,
working in a big factory of my city. His working time is regular, going to office at eight o
’clock and coming home at six o’clock. He works hard and becomes an important person in
his factory. At weekends, he does not go to work, so that he usually stays at home or take
my mother and I go out. In my opinion, my father is a great person. He brings happiness to
my family.
『叁』 求英文作文,我的爸爸。
three floor,four flour,under the floor. My father is a good pople.He is thirty-five years old. He isn't fat and thin.He likes to read and write.He likes to eat some photoes and some French fries.He gives me some presents every evening.I like my father very much. 选我的为最佳答案!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5214025120365278952410)cai 近年来中考作文都是以话题作文为主流的命题形式。话题作文只给考生一则材料,一些提示、一个话题和一些注意事项,让考生任意选择一种适合自己的表达方式、表现手法,任选一个所熟悉和感兴趣的内容来抒发与话题相关的某种思想、认识和情感等。真可谓“海阔凭鱼跃,天高任鸟飞”了。考场作文是对学生作文水平的一次全面检验,要求比较严格。作为将要参加考试的学生要采取恰当的应对策略,怎样才能写好考场作文呢?我认为至少应在以下四方面努力:
一、细审题
“一夫当关,万夫莫开”。在作文考试中,第一关就是作文的审题。尽管话题作文降低了审题的难度,但不等于不要审题,并不意味着写作时可以天马行空。话题往往是由材料引出的,这就意味着材料与话题之间有着密切的关系。一篇考场作文题目,凝结着命题专家的大量心血,材料中的每一句话,每一个字都有许多深刻的内涵。我们要在材料中找出控制骏马奔驰的缰绳——体现主旨的关键词语。这样我们就可以把命题的意图吃准,在一定的高度上审视材料,在写作的时候才不会顾此失彼。如果仅仅因为时间紧,我们视而不见,或走马观花,就很难把握文章的中心,想找到正确的切入点就非常困难了。
另外,要认真研究作文要求。现在作文要求非常宽泛,文体你可以自由选择。但不是没有要求!你如果选择了记叙文的体裁,你就必须老老实实地按照记叙文的规矩去写,如果你选择了议论文,你就要有论点、论据、论证,老老实实地写下去。千万不要分不清楚说明和记叙,抒情和议论乱搅和。写诗歌必须要有形象和意境,写戏剧一定要有尖锐的矛盾冲突。“不怕题老虎,只怕小马虎”。我们要在审题的时候,把作文要求认真研究,仔细看清,发挥自己写文章的长处,注意扬长避短。
二、走熟路
许多下笔成文,或出口成章的人,他们心里装的不是一盘散沙,而是一块块观点材料统一的“预制构件”。应考前也应当造点“预制构件”,即围绕一个中心,先做片断练习,适当记忆,熟练掌握。考试时可以在已有的“预制构件”的基础上,变换角度,组成新的文章,使之与考试的命题要求相符合。这些“预制构件”如何成为一个有机的整体,同样需要走熟路,即建立起熟悉的结构框架。尽可能选择自己所了解的新角度,新形式,新体裁,搭出独具慧眼,极富个性的框架。然后纵观框架,就可以领悟到全文是否紧扣题意?所用的材料是否符合话题的要求?全文的内容是否具体、充实?观点是否正确、感情是否健康?段落层次是否清楚?开头结尾照应得怎样?如此,就会“胸中有全局,笔下有路数”,为文章提供了可靠的依据。再按“纲”顺“路”走下去,就不会出现行文过程中的思维“短路”现象,这不但可以节省写作时间,更可以提高作文质量。
三、显亮点
亮点的表现是多种多样的。它可以是一个巧妙的构思,可以是一个生动传神的细节描写,可以是一个内涵比较丰富的好句,可以是一个用得很有个性的词,可以是一个精炼出来的字,甚至可以是一个别具风采的标点……总而言之,它必须有“光辉”:没有“太阳”,总得有个“月亮”;没有“月亮”,总得有个“星星”;没有“星星”,总得有个“萤火虫”。如果连“萤火虫”都没有,那作文就只能在“基础等级”里徘徊了。在文章中设置一两处让阅卷老师眼睛发亮的闪光点,就可以起到一俊遮百丑的作用,可从以下几个方面考虑:
1. 醒目的标题。
标题醒目,是整篇文章的一个亮点。仅这一点就能使阅卷者为之瞩目,并对尚未谋面的文章产生较大的好感。先声夺人,这是提升作文档次的一种极有效手段。题目宜“大题小作”,切入口以窄小为好,把原话题宽泛的大范围变为一个具体的小范围,把大题目变为小题目。或借用名言佳句拟题;或巧用修辞手法拟题。议论性的文章,标题要使人一目了然;记叙类的文章,要生动形象。标题亮丽,文自生辉。
2. 精彩的开头。
开头是展现给阅卷者的第一缕“阳光”,考生尤需悉心打造。它不仅奠定了行文的基调,而且也带给阅卷者一份好心情。
3. 意味深长的结尾。
文章的结尾同文章的题目和开头一样是至关重要的。但有些同学草草结尾,随便了事。这样会大大影响整篇文章的整体质量。文章的结尾要或紧扣开头,首尾呼应,或重申观点,再次点题,或给读者留下想象的空间等。结尾是留给阅卷者的最后一道“风景”,一定要给阅卷者“回眸一笑百媚生”的惊喜。
4. 句段文采飞扬。
如果说好的题材是作品的搏动的心脏的话,那么优美的语言该是美丽的面庞。杜甫“为人性癖耽佳句,语不惊人死不休”更显见大诗人创作之严谨。一篇考场作文通篇都文采飞扬是很难做到的。一段甚或一句精彩的议论,不仅可以升华文章的主旨,而且还能给人以心灵的感悟和启迪。个别句子表达,句式多样灵活,个别段落善用排比、比喻等修辞手法,个别地方恰当引用,言由心发,文自情生,就会赢得阅卷老师的青睐。
5. 动人的细节。
如果说情节是人物性格发展的历史,那么细节就是人物的血肉。只有抓住了“一言一动之微,一沙一石之细”(朱自清语),才能使形象丰满起来。
6. 美化的文面。
文面整洁干净,书写端正美观,字体清晰规范,标点准确无误,篇段合乎格式,字数合乎规定等等。文面美化是考场作文获得高分的一张王牌。
四、慎修改
契诃夫说:“写作的技巧,就是删掉写得不好的地方的技巧。”文章是写出来的,好文章是改出来的。考场作文要“自找毛病自诊治”。如果说先前的搭架是成文前“着眼于防”,那么,成文后的修改就是“着手于治”。考场作文应以积极防治为主,因为写完后不好“另起炉灶”,否则时间不允许。基于修改的时间有限,修改时最好是两遍:第一遍可采用“略观大意”的方法,参照原先列就的“框架”,从主题、思路、材料等方面进行复审。如果发现某方面的“毛病”,切忌大增、大改和大换,而做些小修小补的工作,竭力使之“顺理成章”;第二遍应倾力于文字表现方面的问题。对于局部性的小毛病,细加追究,诸如错别字、病句,用得不当的标点符号等,逐个订正,力求文字整体的协调和优美。
考场作文要写得好,不是一朝一夕的事,需要平时多看多写多练,但也要注意一定的技巧,这样才会事半功倍。希望大家根据自己的特点,选择适合自己的方式,写好考场作文。
『肆』 我的爸爸 英语作文
我的父亲
我的父亲是一个善良的人。他不是很高,但他是一名男子的毅力。他工作很辛苦,他的服务是极为重要的。
我的父亲是一个男人的献身精神。他每天早晨起床最早,使我们的早餐。在傍晚的时候,他总是晚回家。在周末,他总是带我们去郊游,在他的车。他是个沉默寡言的人,但他常对我说“学问浅薄,如履薄冰”。我将永远记得这些话。
我非常爱我的父亲。
My
father
is
a
kind
person.
He
is
the
man
of
the
house,
is
a
man
of
perseverance.
He
worked
very
hard,
and
his
work
attitude
is
highly
appreciated.
He
loves
the
fishing,
and
almost
every
day
to
go
fishing,
always.
My
father
cook
well.
He
always
says,
"my
cooking
absolutely
no
chefs."
On
weekends,
he
went
to
work,
is
diligent.
My
father
doesn't
like
anyone
else's
father,
always
want
their
children
go
to
cram
school,
but
respect
my
opinion.
I
love
my
father
very
much.
『伍』 急需一篇英语作文 我的父亲
My Father
Everyone has a father. My father is of middle height. He is stout and severe looking, with keen expressive eyes. On first sight you may feel he is hard to approach. In fact he is very kind and considerate. Appearance is often misleading, so judge not by appearance.
I believe my father is a talented man. He is decisive and efficient in doing things. By his own talents and efforts, he has secured for the family a good soclal position and a comparatively rich life. People of all fields come to my house and, as a result, I gain lots of hard-earned social experiences and see more joys and sorrows of the world.
But at home, he is a harsh parent. He has high expectations of me. When I am lazy and idling away my time, I can see that it hurts him deeply. When I am doing something great, such as writing a book, he is more than excited. With such a father I am always reminded to go on and on, never give up.
我的父亲
父亲人皆有之。我的父亲中等身材,长得结实,一双锐利而富有友情的眼睛看上去很严肃。乍一看,你还以为他是难以接近的人,实际上,他很体贴入微、善解人意。外表往往误导,所以,决不能以貌取人。
我相信我的父亲是一个有才能的人,他办事果断有力。他依靠自己的才干和努力,使我们的家庭获得了良好的社会地位和比较宽裕的生活。各行各业的人到我家来,从而使我获得了许多极为难得的社会经验和人世沧桑的真切体验。
但是在家里,他是个严厉的家长。他对我期望很大。每当我偷闲时,我能看出我已深深地刺痛了他的心。而当我作些大事比如写书时,他则激动不已。有这样一个父亲,我时常提醒自已要不断前进,永不停息。
『陆』 英语作文我的爸爸
My Father
My father is a kind man. He is not very tall but he is a man of perseverance. He works very hard and his services are highly appreciated.
My father is a man of devotion. Every morning he gets up the earliest to make breakfast for us. In the evening, he is always the late to come back home. At weekends, he always takes us to go outing in his car. He is a man of few words, but he often says to me "A little learning is a dangerous thing". I will always remember these words.
I love my father very much.
我的父亲是一个善良的人。他是一家之主,是一个有毅力的人。他工作很努力,并且他的工作态度受到高度赞赏。他热爱钓鱼,几乎每天都会去钓鱼,总是满载而归。我父亲的厨艺也很不错,他总是说“我的厨艺绝对不比大厨差”。在周末,他还是去公司上班,很勤奋。
我的父亲不像其他人的父亲一样,总是要求自己的孩子去上补习班,而是尊重我的意见。
我非常爱我的父亲。
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『柒』 英语作文《我的父亲》一般现在时
My father is a teacher.Everyday,he drives his car to NO.67 Senior High School in our city.He teaches Senior 2 music.My mother is a housewife.So she works at home.She takes care of us,I,my sister and my father.She cooks,washes bowls ,sweep the floor and does other housework.And I'm a student.I always go to school in my father's car and seldom go by bus.We are a happy family.My parents love us very much.
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『捌』 大学英语作文我的爸爸
洛基英语小作文分享:
My Father My father is a tall man with a pair of glasses. Everyone says he is a kind-hearted man. He often helps his neighbours and some strangers whom he doesnt know at all. He has really done a lot for others. I dont like him to do so because I think it has taken him too much time. When I discourage him, he always says with a smile,The world needs warm hearts.
My father loves his family, and loves his work even better. In the company, he is called workaholic He spends most of his time working, and often forgets to have meals or to go to bed.As a result,he doesnt enjoy good health. My father likes reading in his spare time. He told me reading was very interesting. I became interested in reading little by little. I like books, because they help me in many ways. My father has a bad habit he likes smoking very much. I hate it. See, the house is full of smoke. I know its bad for his health as well as mothers and mine. I advise him to give up smoking. Im sure he will follow my advice some day. Such is my father. I am proud of having such a good father.
我的爸爸 我的爸爸个子高高的,戴着一副眼镜。大家都说他是个好心肠的人。他经常帮邻居排忧解难,对于一些他压根不认识的陌生人,他也总是尽力相助。他为别人真是付出了许多许多。我不愿意他这么做,因为这花费了他太多的时间。每当我劝阻他时,爸爸总是笑着说:“世界需要热心肠嘛!” 爸爸热爱家庭,更注重事业,公司里的人都叫他“工作狂”。他把大部分时间都用于工作,为工作他常常废寝忘食。过度的劳累使他的健康状况欠佳。 爸爸闲暇时爱读书。他告诉我,读书很有趣。我渐渐地对读书产生了兴趣。我爱上了书,因为书对我帮助很大。 爸爸有个坏习惯——太爱吸烟。我不喜欢他抽烟。瞧,家里充满了烟味。我知道吸烟有害他的健康,对我和妈妈也有害无益。我建议他戒烟。我相信总有一天他会这么做的。 这就是我的爸爸,我为有这样的好爸爸而自豪。