❶ 英语作文修改
There are four seasons in a year,each of them has its own attractions,but my favorite season is spring.
A year's plan starts when spring comes.In spring,I can do many kinds of activities,such as flying kites,planting trees and so on.Spring is a wonderful season which is full of happiness.There are lots of nice flowers and trees in spring. Spring is so beautiful that I have fallen in love with it.
❷ 改英语作文..
this time........ .
.......... this time.
chong fu~
even de no shi name tong shun, haoeva loushang de people dou help u gai le~
❸ 英语作文修改,英语高手进!
恩。。 第一句的介词，用about不合适，对于一段时间的话，用ring，in 似乎要好一点。 第二句，句子顺序不好，因为提前的是重点，我觉得重要的不是为了完成作业，而应该是你节约了时间。而游戏时间用gaming time会好的多。
第三句，sentence fragment，去掉so。至于in a row我不知道这样好不好，不过我比较喜欢i got up early everyday for the whole week.
第四句，恩。。不知道你要表达的意思是不是你作业做累了，就帮妈妈做家务。。 。。 如果是的话，就改成I helped my mother with some housework, when i was tired to continue homework.
第5句。改成，so i could get physical exercise besides（other then） mental practice.
第6句。i planed and separated my work into pieces. Then i could finish one for each day.
7句：It was bored, but at least i done(finished) my homework.
最后：Time flies. The spring festival is over. I get some lucky money(red pockets) from relatives and friends. I really enjoyed my winter.
我没有做大的修改，不过我觉得文章的构思上还有不少问题。。比如说既然写寒假，在那么短的作文里面，不如不提春节。 或者只写春节。
恩。。 不知道你是几年级的学生了。。单词用的不难。。应该没问题吧。。
❹ 英语作文修改。
你的句子中主要是有许多不native(当地人的那种感觉）
下面是我帮你改的，但是还是参照了你的原文。对了，我改的是基于你的水平哈，不想它变得面目全非。
The way to relax ourself after exam(这里最好用名词，再加个从句） 你的句子其实也没错
it's necessary (for us)...........exam. (so) 注意，这里你这里没转折。........ourself.
firstly, we can travel(to relax ourselves), (which is the good way)如果你学了从句可以用。
because we can (get attached with natural environment.) 与大自然相交流不是face the nature。这有点中式英语
we can (fishing)不是play with fish, ................And we (can)前面用一般，后面也一般时态.......
(secondly),.........such as (listening to music) 应为你的东西修饰的是activity,所以，要用listening,如果不懂你可以去问老师。这叫非谓语动词做名词， 后面watch 也是一样的。
enjoy the time... 不是ourselves.....享受我们自己。。。。。听起有点不对哈。。。。
third,后面还行。
最后还行吧。
❺ 英语作文修改
原文：Last Friday was my most unlucky day of this semester。In the morning ,when I got up to drink water ,i looked the clock in the way.oh my god ! it is already seven o’colck.while i compain ,while getting up as quickly as I can . To my surprise, the room whose my parents was very quiet. I thought perhaps they much too tired. I did not brush teeth as usual,but Ran out of the house with my bag. When I was just across the road, 15 car just drove right away. But I surprised to find Street lights was still lighting. When I go to school, I found that I was the third to arrive. Oh, it must be watch has stopped.In school,I failed Chinese dictation again. I was expreme upset. When I got home, I found I should have forgot to bring Chinese homework…
It was really bad lunck a day!
修改文:
Last Friday was indeed worst day in this semester for me. In the morning, when I got up to drink some water, I looked at the clock at the same time. Oh my god! It was already seven o'clock. Complaining and meanwhile getting up as fast as I can, to my surprise, my parents' room was very quiet. I thought that perhaps they were too tired. I did not brush teeth as usual and ran out of the house with my bag. When I was just crossing the road, 15 cars drove right passed. But I was surprised to find the street lights still on. When I went to the school, I found that I was the 3rd to arrive. Oh, it must be the watch that had stopped. In school, I failed Chinese Spelling again and I was extremely upset. When I got home, I found I should not have forgotten to bring my Chinese homework...
It was really a day of pure bad luck，but wish everyone all the best for tomorrow's mock test.
哈哈，挺有趣的文章，感叹用得不错，已经按照你写的改了所有的语法和拼写毛病，最后那边应该是中文听写，是Chinese spelling, 而不是Chinese diction，原文总体还可以，不过应该加把劲检查语法，很多地方以你的能力应该是可以避免的，比如过去是等等, 已经加上了对大家的祝福。
谢谢，希望可以帮到你。
❻ 修改英语作文尽量改到完美，切记抄袭其它作文语句
（。）或句点（抄．）是用于陈述句末尾的标点。文章内使用时机：“陈述句末尾的停顿，用句号。”“语气舒缓的祈使句末尾，也用句号。”1“用在直述式文意已完足的句子。”在有些时候，句号也可以用在语气舒缓的反问句的末尾。句号表示一句话的结束，新一句话的开始，提示读者该句的表达意思已结束。西式的句号“.”（Period）也被称作“句点。。
❼ 英语作文改写
作文的改写其实就是句子的改写，意思不变，那么改的肯定是他的表专达，一般从属词语的替换入手，尤其是一些关联词，同意词组，例如文章中如果有lead
to
那么我们就可以改成give
rise
to
,result
in
等等表示导致意思的词语。有些我们就要改写句子的结构。例如有些时候我们可以改成形式宾语的形式，例如文章中有这么一句话English
is
so
hard
for
me.我们就可以改成I
find
it
hard
to
learn
English.当然我们不能为了改写而改写，改的时候要保证句子正确与漂亮，尽量避免相同的句式，也不要出现很多I
,I
,I什么的。你可以先从改写句子着手。希望对你有所帮助
❽ 要不要改约用英文
Please consider it whether you will change the hotel where you meet Mr.Han or not.
❾ 英语作文修改
Life likes weather.（生活应该像天气，不应该像天空）It may be sunny or rainy sometimes,but it will never be continuing for a long time.So how can we do when we are in trouble ande how to deal with it
First,when you find you have made a mistake.这里既然用完成时，过去分词就应该有Do not ask for help to others at once.You should try to deal with by yourself which can make you grow up and learn someting new quickly.(这里我给你改了用定语从句这样更好，分数会更高)
Second ,if you find it is difficult to you to solve the problem .Don't hesitate turning (犹豫做某事应该用动词ING形式) to your friends for help.It is a easy for them to help you out of trouble.Don't be shy(基本上没有说FEEL SHY 的 都是 BE SHY.) and you can help others when they are in trouble .
Everyone has different ways( 不同的方式，方式用复数） to solve the problem.The theory depends on themselves .So,find a way which is suitable(这里应该用适合的形容词形式） for you and keep a brave heart everytime（这是我给你改好了的，若是还有疑问就请再问我，以后有什么困难也可以找我，我会尽力帮你解答的）