A. 高一的优秀英语作文
奥运火炬作文
Olympic Flame
Now the 26th Centennial World Olympic Games are in full swing in Altanda. The Olympic flame is burning red and bright in the torch at the center of the Olympic square. Earlier before the official opening of the games it had been relayed one by one through the hands of runners, among them, students supported by the Chinese hope project. Thousands of people lined the struts to watch the relay.
The relay of the Olympic Flame is the symbol of the continuity between the ancient and modern Games. During the ancient Olympics a sacred flame burned at the altar of Zeus. A modern version of the flame was adopted for the Berlin Games in 1936, and the tradition has been observed ever since. The torch used to kindle the flame is first lit by the sun's rays at Olympia in Greece, and then carried to the site of the Games by relays of runners. Ships and planes are used when necessary.
The runners are specially chosen, All of them are hard working and as a result become overacbievers. The flame kindles the fire in everyone's heart to encourage people to go on and on and bring the Olympic spirit into full play.
翻译
奥运圣火
第26届世界百年奥运盛会正在亚特兰大举行。奥运圣火火炬在奥运广场的中心燃烧得火红明亮。在奥运会正式开幕之前,火炬通过长跑运动员的手一个一个往下传,传递者中有受中国希望工程资助的学生。成千上万的人排在街道两旁观看。
奥运火炬的传递象征着古代和现代奥运的继续。古代奥运圣火在宙斯圣坛点燃。现代奥运圣火于l936年在柏林开始采用,其传统一直延续至今。火炬在希腊奥林匹亚用阳光点燃,然后由运动员传递到会场。必要时用船或飞机运送。
传递者通过精心挑选,都是些艰苦奋斗且卓有成就者。圣火点燃了每一个人的心,鼓励人们发扬奥运精神永远前进。
夏日的农村
【内容提示】
夏日的农村,郁郁葱葱,繁花盛开,莺歌燕舞,一派美景。请你用英语将这样一幅夏日图描写一番。内容要点如下:
①夏天伴着它那温暖的明媚阳光而来,使我们想起了各种美好的事情:在农村的度假,野餐活动,还有那翻晒干草时节的聚会……
②春天到来的时候,乍暧还寒,大地空旷,草木未长;而夏季到来之时,世界成了另一番景象:是一片绿的世界——绿的树叶,绿的草地,树篱间植物葱郁,鲜花到处盛开。
③白天长了,夜晚短了;在明媚的六月里,太阳早早起床,很晚才入睡。这是一年里最美好最有生机的一个月。鸟儿从太阳升起一直唱到太阳落山以后才停息。
④当别的鸟儿静下来之后,传来一阵柔和的叫声;再过一会,声音大了起来,很快,夜莺尽情地唱起它那奇妙的歌。
【作文示范】
The Countryside in Summer
Summer has come, with its warm sunny days, making us thing of all sorts of nice things, such as holidays in the country, picnics and haymaking①parties.
When Spring came, she found the earth cold and bare, but she soon changed all that, and by the time Summer arrives, the world is a very different place. It is a green world now, green leaves on the trees, green grass in the fields, green plants crowding in the hedges②, and flowers opening everywhere.
The days are long and the nights are short, for the sun gets up early and goes to bed late in sunny June. It is one of the best and brightest months in the year. Birds sing from sunrise till long after sunset.
As night falls, one after another the birds stop their singing, and after a few last sleepy sounds, put their heads under their wings to rest for an hour or two before beginning again. They do not all sleep, however. When other birds are silent, comes a soft cry, then, after a few moments, another, louder this time; and soon the nightingale③ pouring out his wonderful song.
Not only at night does the nightingale sing. On almost every warm day in early June, the little brown bird sings away in the roads and woods, but, as all the other birds are also singing at the same time, we do not notice his voice so much. It is at night, when he has the field all to himself, that we hear the nightingale at his best.
(选自《英语学习》1984年第7期)
【词语解释】
①haymaking [’hei?meikiR] n.制备干草
②hedge [hedN] n.(矮树的)树篱
③nightingale [’naitiRgeil] n.夜莺
【写作指要】
1)本文作者抓住“绿的世界”和“歌的昼夜”从视觉描写到听觉描写给读者描绘了一幅生机勃勃的夏日农村的美景。
2)第二段里“green”一词的多次重复使“绿的世界”深深留在人们的心里。在第三、四、五段里,作者把“歌声”这一概念用不同的词表达出来,如“sing”,“song”,“sounds”,“cry”,“pouring out”,“singing”,“voice”等,如此同义照应,使语义上下连贯,同时也加强和突出了“夜莺歌唱”的主题。
3)本文作者使用了拟人(personification)手法,文章显得格外生动:第二段Spring和Summer两个词首字母大写,用“she”指代“Spring”;第三段中的“gets up”和“goes to bed”,“birds sing”;第四段中的“sleep”,“cry”;第五段中的“his voice”,“he”和“himself”都是拟人用法。
4)为了使描写生动优美,作者使用了分词短语“making us think of…”,独产主格结构“green leaves on the trees…flowers opening everywhere”,省略句法“then, after a few moments, (comes) another (cry),(which is) louder this time”,以及传神的短语“all to himself”和“at hisbest”等。
B. 10篇高中优秀英语作文
直接点击用户名,去高中英语博客看,里面有高中英语作文
C. 高中英语作文如何拿满分
有啊·
1.写作文一般要分3-4段(一定要分),不要一写一整段
2.字迹一定要工整,一般来说越到考试最后心情越急躁,自己也会变得潦草,但这无疑会给阅卷老师留些不好的印象,如会想:这人肯定水品不咋地,字都写成这样了·
3.注意运用一些比较新颖的单词,词组
4.句子主语别总用 I/We/she/he/they 等 也可用被动或Ving 作主语
有时会启动意想不到的效果
5.注意别老写简单句,毕竟·不是初中了,不能老停留在那水平,不是么?可以用些定从,状从以及一些名词性从句如主从(比较好用)等,句子套句子,一般来个1-3句就好了,不必太多,多了容易出错就得不偿失了
6,在老外写作文时,一般都喜欢用物作主语,遇到动词尽量把它变为n,遇n
可变为相应的短语,这样更生动,例如
The bus stopped
The bus came to a stop
尽管两句话意思一样,但第二句明显比第一句要好得多
7。就是懂得运用比喻。排比等(不要以为只有汉语有,语言是相通的)
8.中间段主要写题目中给的提示句,但切忌逐句翻译,这是要不得的。如题目中的提示有1,2,3 但你千万写的时候别分123条,
做到以上的基本就是A 类文了,但我想主要的功夫还是的下在平时,多读读英文周刊等,有专门的为高中生的报纸,买来看看,考试时注意文章时态别一会用
一般现在时,一会儿又用一般过去时,写句子注意 用合适的连词,表转折的词,但别老用那一个,适当的换换
D. 高中的英语作文部分可以做到满分吗
有的,你网络一下高考英语满分作文就可以找到历年的满分作文。
E. 高中英语作文,高分,急急急!!!!!
我的原创,引用敬请注明原处哈。嘻嘻。
注:看到( )意味着我不知道前面这个词儿你们是否学过,如果没有,就用括号里的词代替。例如:pursue (look) --> 如果你们没学过pursue 这个词,就把pursue 去掉,换成look。
小朋友还是要读读姐姐的样本文哈。不要一点都不学就不好了哦。还是要做点假,改错几个地方哈,免得你们老师一下子就看出来了。没办法,谁让我那么厉害涅。吼吼!强烈要求加分!
文一(148词)
It is very common to find that some people are satisfied with what they have, while others want to pursue (look) for something they do not have. My view (thought) is that people should be practical and flexible (open-minded).
What do I mean by being practical and flexible? If what you have now is what the reality allows for, then you should be happy with whatever you have got. However, on the other hand, what you own is not really what you enjoy, then I suggest that you should make efforts to get what you really desire for instead of settling down with what is offer to you.
My attitude is that people should be both practical – i.e. set your mind on something that is within your ability – and flexible in the sense that we need to adjust (change) our goals in accordance with (following) the life reality.
文二 课余活动?(246 词)
It seems every student is in front of a choice – to be a bookworm (good student) or to be a well-rounded student but not super good at studies; to be a traditional (“old-style”) good student or to be a modern student with strong points as well as shortcomings; to have a personal life or not.
Of all the good students at school – since I don’t believe that there exist “bad” or “poor” students as everyone has his or her strength and weakness – one has to decide which way they want to take. Traditional (“old-style”) students tend to spend all their time studying and doing exercises. As a result (therefore), they don’t have a personal life. They know which university they want to attend, which major (subjects) they want to study, but they don’t have other knowledge and experience outside school.
On the other side of the coin, some modern students are not very good at book knowledge. They go to parties, they play sports, they watch many movies or cartoons and some of them even make their own videos or cartoons. They are not the top students at school, but they have a life. They may get confused (lost) as to which university they should go to or which major (subject) they want to study, but they do well in other areas of life. They usually have great interpersonal (communication) skills.
Which kind of student do you want to be? – It is surely a personal choice.
文三 看书vs 旅游 (184词)
There are at least two ways of accumulating (building) knowledge and experience: to read and to travel. Which works better if one wants to know more about the world and the human culture? I believe that everyone should do both to get a full understanding of the world and the human.
Books differ from travelling in that the former (first) is static (quiet) while the latter (second) is dynamic (ever-changing). Book knowledge is dead until one really experiences it. Let’s say that you read many books about Africa, not only the nature, the people, but also the politics, the culture. However, all the book knowledge does not make sense to you until you go there in person to listen, to watch, to appreciate, to feel what is going on. The first-hand experience from travelling in Africa has a deep impression and impact (influence) on you. It stays with you for your lifetime. You will never forget what you have heard, seen and experienced there. I will always share your ideas and thoughts with others. That travelling experience completes what books fail to show you.
文四 朋友 (169 词)
No matter we realize it or not, we all attract (know) two kinds of friends in our life – who are like us or who are opposite to us. Some people choose to only hang out (make friends) with people who are like themselves, others are more open-minded. They want to make friends with people who are different from them. What do you do – to only meet and make friends of “your kind” or to meet and be-friend with “other kind”?
It is really an indivial (a personal) decision to make, isn’t it? I personally do not think that one way is better than the other. Every coin has two sides – some good, some bad. What is more important in my view (eyes) is that one should be aware of (careful with) the way we choose friends and what we learn from them. As the old saying goes, out of three, there must be one teacher. If we watch what we pick up from a friend, either way is fine.
F. 怎样写一篇满分高中英语作文
高中英语作文在英文考试中占据着非常重要的地位,听力、阅读的题目都是客观题,有标准答案,而高中英语作文却仍需要老师进行批卷,这也就意味着要拿到高分就要“取悦”阅卷老师的眼睛,让他们感到眼前一亮。
大家往往知道要多看往年历届的满分优秀高中英文作文,多背诵名篇名句,但你总结过一篇好的高中英文作文到底有哪些写作技巧么?
1、善用名人名言和谚语:
高中英语作文和语文一样,如果能够善用名人名言与谚语,不仅可以展现你的英语水平和阅读量,而且还能升华文章主题,一定能够让你的作文增设不少。
例如,对于生活的感悟:
Life is like the box of chocolates. You never know what's going to happen.
生活就像是一盒巧克力,你永远不知道你将会得到什么。——《阿甘正传》
例如,关于时间:
Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. But today is a gift. That is why it’s called the present.
昨天是历史了,明天还是未知,但今天是礼物,所以今天才叫present(present有“现在”和“礼物”两个意思)。
这些有深度的语言需要平时不断地积累和总结,不妨在看电影或者美剧的时候,将喜欢的句子摘录下来时时品读一番,在写高中英文作文时自然能够下笔如有神。
2、高级语法、时态及修辞手法:
一些高级语法比如,双重否定表示肯定、倒装句等等,我们往往原本把它们作为一个语法知识点进行学习和记忆,其实在写高中英文作文时,不妨也用上它们,绝对能让你的文章增色不少。
双重否定表示肯定
It is hardly unusual for children to tell lies.
孩子们说谎并不稀奇。
倒装句(含虚拟语气)
Nothing did Mary say before she left.
玛丽什么都没做就走了。
Had I seen Jack yesterday,I wouldn't go to his home now.
如果我昨天见到杰克了,我现在就不去他家了。
3、收集万能句
在文章的开头、中间过渡和结尾处往往会出现一些“万能句”,做个有心人收集这些可以在文章中套用的万能句,绝对可以让你的高中英语作文加分不少。
开头的万能句
As far as … is concerned 就…而言
【例句】
As far as technology is concerned, I believe Huawei is among the best in the world.
就技术而言,我相信华为在世界上名列前茅。
What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
【例句】
What calls for special attention is that money is not everything, virtue is priceless, especially to the young children.
需要特别注意的是,钱不是一切,尤其对于年轻的小孩来说,美德才是无价的。
As the proverb says 俗话说,常言道
【例句】
As the proverb says, good wine needs no advertising.
俗话说,酒香不怕巷子深。
中间过渡的万能句
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
【例句】
As stated in the previous paragraph, it is a virtue to stick to one’s promise.
如前段所述,遵守诺言是一种美德。
Further, we hold the opinion that… 此外,我们坚持认为…
【例句】
Further, we hold the opinion that all work and no play make Jack a ll boy.
此外,我们坚持认为,只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
结尾的万能句
Overall 总而言之
【例句】
Overall, honesty is a virtue.
总而言之,诚实是一种美德。
学完了以上的技巧,相信你也能写出一篇让阅卷老师“大跌眼镜”的完美高中英文作文。
G. 如何写出一篇满分的高中英语作文
1.仔细审题是关键,立意鲜明效果现。
英语书面表达中,只有正确审题,理清要点,才能把握写作方向和要求。要分析情景,弄清体裁,透过图画、图表、提纲、文字描述等情景呈现形式看到内容。如看图作文中,不能单纯地望'图'生义,一味地重视图示内容。应将图示内容与写作背景几所学知识结合起来,由图内看到图外,排除无用信息,扣紧文章主题。
2.减少语病,尽量使用熟悉句型。
句子结构的好坏直接影响意义的表达和文章的质量,在平时的写作练习中,考生经常会犯一些错误,如句子残缺不全,缺乏主语、谓语或其它必要成分;必须要牢记掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达,避免中文式英语,在实践中不断养成用英语思维写作的习惯。如:Is it a good thing or a bad thing? Different people have different viewpoints, In my opinion, we should……
3.确定时态及人称,内容连贯,结构紧凑。
高考书面表达评分标准明确规定,如人称错误要扣分,不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情,多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时,通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后,句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如:
(1)表示承接、递进用语,besides(并且)、what's more(并且),moreover(而且),firstly,secondly,finally(最后),from now on (从此),afterwards I after that(后来),to make things worse/ what's worse(使事情更为糟糕的是),the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。
(2)表示转折关系用语。but bowever,otherwise,though,despite,in spite of...(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面),as(尽管),all the same(尽管如此)。
(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of......for(因为),owing to (由于),thanks to (由于),e to (由于),so that (结果)。
(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之),in short/in a word(简而言之),on the whole(从总体看),generally speaking(一般说来),in my view(我的观点),in conclusion(总之)。
H. 求短篇高中英语作文(100字左右),40篇
写信篇:
Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some
Best wishes,
自我介绍:
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
话题作文:
Freedom for many children is the coming day when they could improve myself in their own way to use my 24 hours. They can study language by watching film instead of working on boring grammar and multiple choices.
Freedom is as simple as my playing piano all night without worrying about disturbing my 14-year-old neighbour who has to go to school the next day for my house is specially made.
It also could be freedom in my dream that one day, political democracy becomes true. Freedom in my life is the name of all kindness and happiness.
People have common desire under the sun. For mankind, freedom commonly means respect, love, blessing and dignity. For some people, freedom is that some day, he can give up his own interests to guarantee others’ rights. It is no wonder that so many people fought for freedom even didn’t hesitate to give up their lives when necessary .
I would like to be a freedom fighter for human rights some day in future.
环境问题:
The world is not only hungry, it is also thirsty. This may sound strange, since nearly seventy percent of the earth's surface is covered with water. But about ninety percent of this is sea water. Man and most of the animals can only drink and use the remaining percent of water——fresh water.
The need for water is increasing day by day. Only steps are taken to deal with this problem immediately can we avoid a severe world wide water shortage later on. One of the first steps is to develop ways to reuse it.
Experiments have already keen carried out in this field. The used witer has been pumped to a water purifying plant. There, it can be separated from waste matter and treated with chemicals so that it can be used again, just as if it were fresh water from a spring.
书面表达001
某对外发行的英文报纸对中国群众体育现状进行了调查,请根据下列图表和所给提示,用英语写一篇报道,以便向该报投稿。
说明:1.体质下降;
2.应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性;
3.采取措施,提供人们锻炼的场地和器材(facilities );
4.字数:120 — 140. 报道的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over half of the people say they haven’t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9 percent of them complain they don’t have places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some of them even don’t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.