Ⅰ 英语作文Today is Children'day
你可以自己写一篇中文的,再去找网络翻译吧。。。
Ⅱ children's day英语作文带翻译
June ,the beautiful month come again. It is a hot wire to children,because it also means Children's day is coming. That day was a special day. All the things was unusual. Many beautiful snoopies was put up on the wall,and students come to school with good tempers. After class the world becomes the children's world. You could see children every-there. Some children went tu the park with their parents,some went to the zoo,and some went to swim together. All the children's are very happy I feels children's day is the most beautiful day.
参考翻译:
六月,美月再来。这是孩子们的热线,因为它也意味着儿童节的到来。那天是个特殊的日子。所有的东西是不寻常的。许多美丽的斯努皮贴在墙上,和学生来到学校的好脾气。下课后,世界成为孩子的世界。你可以看到每一个有孩子。一些孩子去了公园,他们的父母,有些去了动物园,和一些去一起游泳。所有的儿童都很高兴我感觉儿童节是最美丽的一天。
6月,美丽的月再来。它是一个热丝来的孩子,因为这也意味着儿童节来了。那一天是一个特殊的日子。所有的事情是不寻常的。许多美丽的snoopies被张贴在墙上,学生来学校有良好的脾气。下课后世界成为孩子们的世界。你可以看到孩子们每天那里。一些孩子去公园和父母涂,一些去了动物园,和一些一起去游泳。所有的儿童都很开心我觉得儿童节是最美丽的一天。
6月,美丽的一个月再来。这是一个热丝的儿童,因为这也意味着儿童节即将到来。那一天,是一个特殊的日子。所有的东西,是不寻常的。在墙上,搭起许多美丽的snoopies的学生来学校,好脾气。下课后,世界变成了孩子们的世界。你可以看到孩子每有。一些孩子们与他们的父母涂公园,有的去了动物园,有的去游泳,一起。所有的孩子都非常高兴,我觉得儿童节是最美丽的一天。
错误修改:
分数评语:
69.5
评语: 作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
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1.1
English is a internationaly language which becomes importantly for modern world.
[名词错误] 冠词缺失,建议将modern world 改为the modern world 。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范,建议将internationaly改为internationally。
[介词错误] 介词误用,建议将for modern world改为in modern world。
[词语错误] 词性错误,建议将becomes importantly改为becomes important。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: word, vocabulary, language, term, lexicon 均有“文字,词,语言”之意。
2.2
In China, English is took to be a foreigh language which many student choosed to learn.
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范,建议将foreigh改为foreign。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范,建议将choosed改为chose。
[名词错误] 单复数错误,建议将many student改为many students。
[动词错误] 建议把 is took to 改成 is taken to/is taking to (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[低频警示] is took to be 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
2.3
They begin to studying English at a early age.
[动词错误] 语法错误,建议将begin to+doing改为begin to+do。
[名词错误] 冠词误用,建议将a early改为an early。
[低频警示] begin to studying 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: begin, start, commence, initiate, inaugurate 均含有“开始”之意。
2.4
They use at least one hour to learn English knowledges a day.
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将use...hour to改为spend...hour in doing。
[搭配错误] 搭配不当,learn...knowledge在本族语中很少使用,建议修改。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识,学问”之意。
[批改提示] knowledge (知识)是不可数名词,一般情况下,不采用复数形式。
2.5
Even kids in kindergarten have begun learning simple words.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...word 在教材中出现过 226 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: foolish, silly, stupid, simple, ll 都可表示“愚蠢的,笨的,傻的”之意。
2.6
That's a good phenomenan, for English is essential nowadays.
[拼写错误] phenomenan 拼写错误,可替换选项为:phenomenon, phenomena, phenomenal
[学习提示] 易混词汇: basic, essential, fundamental, radical, vital 均有“基本的,基础的”之意。
3.7
In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese.
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将superior than改为superior to。
[介词错误] 固定用法错误,建议将in addition to改为in addition。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。
[批改提示] people表示“人,民族”。查看与person的区别。
[批改提示] 注意Chinese和the Chinese区别。
3.8
In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language.
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将in me opinion 改为in my opinion 。
[连词错误] 语法错误,连接词though和but在同一个句子中不可同时使用。
[词语错误] 用词不当,建议将in+代词+opinion改为in one's opinion。
[低频警示] after all a foreign language 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。
3.9
it is hard for people to see eye to eye.
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: difficult, hard 均有“困难”之意。
[高分短语] see eye to eye意为:看法完全一致,属于四六级经典高分短语,用得很棒!
3.10
English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 read...works 在教材中出现过 113 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: creative, original, imaginative 都可表示“有创造力的”之意。
[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。
[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid
3.11
Only by characters Chinese literature can send off its brilliance.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。
[批改提示] 注意characters和character区别。
3.12
Learning a country's culture, especially its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language.
[动词错误] 语法错误,建议将is learn改为is learning/is to learn。
[动词错误] 语法错误,建议将be learn改为be learning/be to learn。
[搭配错误] 搭配不当,建议将classic...culture改为classical... culture。
[动词错误] 语法错误,be learn不规范,建议修改。
[低频警示] its classic culture 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语
3.13
Because of we are Chinese, why do we give up our mother tongue and learn our owne culture through a foreign language?
[中式英语] 表达不规范,learn...culture在本族语中很少使用,建议修改。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范,建议将owne建议改为own。
[句子错误] 句子错误,建议将because of改为because。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: e to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。
[批改提示] through的近义表达有across,in term of,via。
提示:中式英语指的是在英语母语用户很少使用的表达,如一些中国特色的表达“改革开放”等,不一定就是错的 。
Ⅲ 以my favourite children day写一篇英语作文
My favourite festival is Children's Day.Because this is the day which established to children , this's my day.During this holiday,I have one day to choice play or relax by myself.
I think this holiday is an opportunity to relax and enjoy free time with friends at home.Although traveling anywhere inside of China ring this holiday is a big hassle and often makes a trip difficult,we still have many choices for spending our holidays.In my case, I an just going to stay right here at home where I can see and experience first hand the different in everyday life ring the holiday.
Ⅳ children day英文作文
In schools, besides the National days like the Independence Day and Republic Day, many other important days are also celebrated. For example, Teachers' Day is celebrated on 5th of September every year to honour the teachers as 5th of September happens to be the birthday of former President Dr. S. Radhakrishnan who was a world renowned teacher. Children's Day is celebrated every year in all schools in our country on 14th of November. Do you know why? Because Children's Day is associated with the birthday of Pandit Jawaharlal Nehru, our first Prime Minister, which falls on 14th of November every year. Pandit Jawaharlal was born on November 14, 1889 and he died on May 27, 1964. As desired by him, his birthday is being celebrated as Children's Day after his death. Jawaharlal Nehru was very much fond of children and he is called 'Chacha Nehru' by all children.
Schools all over our country celebrate the day in different ways. In our school the celebration starts with the unfurling of the National I lag. The photo of Jawaharlal Nehru is garlanded and many speakers including some selected students speak on the importance of the day.
In the evening all the students meet once again and the day ends with a cultural show and distribution of prize。
在学校,除了国家天像独立日和共和国的一天,许多其他重要的日子也庆祝。例如,教师节定在每年9月5日纪念老师9月5日正好是前总统的生日博士是美国Radhakrishnan世界著名的老师。儿童节是每年庆祝在所有的学校在我们的国家在11月14日。你知道为什么吗?因为儿童节的生日有关潘迪特贾瓦哈拉尔·尼赫鲁,我们的第一个总理,落在11月14日每年。贾瓦哈拉尔·潘迪特出生在1889年11月14日,他死于1964年5月27日。根据需要通过他,他的生日是庆祝儿童节在他死后。贾瓦哈拉尔·尼赫鲁非常喜欢孩子,他被称为“Chacha尼赫鲁的所有儿童。
学校在我们的国家以不同的方式庆祝这一天。在我们学校庆祝活动始于展开全国我滞后。贾瓦哈拉尔•尼赫鲁的照片是和许多演讲者包括装饰一些选定的学生讲一天的重要性。
晚上所有的学生再次见面的那一天,结束于一个文化展示和分布的奖。
Ⅳ 英语作文my children's day
Today is Children's Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals,the tigers, the pandas,the lions, the elephants,the giraffes and the bears. They are different from each other ,some are shy, some are beautiful, some are interesting , some are friendly, some are so cute. But i think these animals are unhappy, they should live in the forest,because the life in the zoo are different from that in the forest.
Children‘s Day is coming, it falls on the 1st of June, every year. This coming children day my father has promised to bring me to the theme park. I will ride my favourite ride, which is the ferris wheel. Besides thai i shall ride on the merry-go-round and magic teacup as well. I will ask my dad to buy me a big toy and some cotton candy as well. I believe that i will have a lots of fun on that day.
Today is June the first.I'm very happy ,because today is Children'sDay.I'm in the Ranbow Park with my family.We are walk on the path between the lawn.And there are some benches on the path.I have a rest on the bench.l't twelve o'clock now.We have a picnic on the lawn.After picnic,we are back home.We all have a good time.
My favourite festival is Children's Day.Because this is the day which established to children , this's my day.During this holiday,I have one day to choice play or relax by myself.
I think this holiday is an opportunity to relax and enjoy free time with friends at home.Although traveling anywhere inside of China ring this holiday is a big hassle and often makes a trip difficult,we still have many choices for spending our holidays.In my case, I an just going to stay right here at home where I can see and experience first hand the different in everyday life ring the holiday.
June first, it was Children`s Day. I love children`s day, it make me happy. But the children`s day in this year was diffrent, because this was my last children`s day! So I was excited in this children`s day.
In the morning, we were very excited, and we all happy. In the afternoon all of us looked for the show together, I showed in this day too. Then we went to playground, there were many intersting things, and I play with my friends. First we fliedthe dart, I couldnot play it very well, but Lily couldfly it better than me! She got many gifts, I was sad and angry……I wanted a good gift too!
We were very happy this children`s day, I will not forget it.
这里有五篇,你看看
Ⅵ My children's day英语作文四年级
四年级的,复简单点好吧制
看我的(同龄人)
Today is June the first.I'm very happy ,because today is Children'sDay.I'm in the Ranbow Park with my family.We are walk on the path between the lawn.And there are some benches on the path.I have a rest on the bench.l't twelve o'clock now.We have a picnic on the lawn.After picnic,we are back home.We all have a good time.
没那几位大哥的好,但至少是自己写的,没抄袭任何。我写的简单,是符合四年级的。求采纳
Ⅶ Chidren' s Day 英语作文 带翻译
Today is Children'Day.Children are happy.They are dancing.They are singing.They're shouting.They are laughing.They are making a cake.They are eating some fruit.
Ⅷ children'sday 写英语作文五句话
Children's day
Children's day is a holiday for the children. children are very happy on this day,they can ask for candies, they can play with others. everyone looks very friendly on this day. Children don't have to go to school. they are the angles
Ⅸ 英语作文“My Children's Day”
Today
was
children's
day
,My
parents
took
me
to
the
park.
今兲
是(is的过去式)
儿童节,
我的爸爸妈妈带我去公园玩,
(也可以写成:I
went
to
the
park
with
my
parents.我和爸爸妈妈去公园玩.)
(After
we
got
to
thr
park可省略)we
played
Roller
coaster
first.
我们到达公园后,
我们
玩
过山车
首先
It
was
exciting.Then,we
played
at
seesaw
.
狠刺激.
然后
我们玩
跷跷板
In
fact,the
park
was
very
beautiful.There
was
many
flowers
and
事实上,
公园非常漂亮
那里有
很多
花朵
和
butterflies.
蝴蝶
How
fun
today
was!
今兲真是有趣啊!