『壹』 "批改作文"英文怎么说
春天，百花齐放，争奇斗艳；夏天，到处充满了生机；秋天，金风送爽，到专处一派丰收的景象；而冬天属白雪皑皑，粉妆玉砌，是我最喜欢的季节。
冬天，我最喜欢下雪，因为学可以使世界变得粉妆玉砌，犹如一位披上银装的妙龄少女，十分美丽.下雪时，晶莹洁白的雪花飘飘洒洒，漫天飞舞，像一个个蒲公英飞来飞去，随风起舞；宛如一只只银色的蝴蝶随着风从天空中跳着华尔兹来到了人间；又似一位位白衣少女在为大地母亲点缀……这景象是多么美丽，多么令人喜爱，多么令人心旷神怡啊！
一场大雪过后，世界的每个角落都变成了银白色，分外美丽。校园里，到处是白茫茫的一片。孩子们欢天喜地地打雪仗，一阵阵愉快的笑声在校园里回荡着。
田地里，雪姑娘为庄稼盖上里厚厚的棉被，使他们在睡梦中度过一个美好的冬天。
树林里，雪姑娘压在光秃秃的树枝上，为大树裹上了一层银装，使大树不再显得光秃秃的，不再单调。
『贰』 手机批改网批改英语作文收费了，还有什么别的软件可以推荐啊
网络APP下载全能批改英语作文，他是智能自动批改英语语文作业。你要是开补习班的老师或者是学校的老师，使用这种原件给学生批改作业，也是极其不负责任的行为，对学生，对家长，是一种应付了事的态度。
『叁』 批改点评一篇英语作文！！！
文章的主体框架复还是不错的制，但是你好像犯了一个大错！全文的时态应该用过去式，而你在第三，四段却用了一般现在时，好像不太合乎情理。另外，像precious ， attitude的词可以多用一些，增加亮点！你的文章中也有许多的名言警句，这会增强老师对你的关注，会得到高分的！只是美中不足的，你文章中的复合句不是很多，基本上都是简单句，这样的话会使一些心情不好的老师不愿意再往下看，这可是写作的一个技巧(⊙o⊙)哦！！！！！！
『肆』 求批改 英语作文
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Should college ecation focus.....
At first,one’ imagination dominates one’s creativity
改成：At first, imagination nurtures one’s creativity
Where you can stay depends on where you think you can
改成：your mind decides where you are
Imagination is a ladder which leads us to the peak of our life.
改成：imagination is THE ladder that leads us to the pinnacle of life
如果你使用which，前面要用逗号隔开
In China, many colleges just focus on the basic facts and knowledge, neglecting what the society really needs, which is a critical reason that Chinese always lack masters and world-famous scientists while in China there are numerous talented teenagers.
改成：In China, many colleges just (focus on the basic facts and knowledge and neglect what the society really needs), which is a critical reason why Chinese still lack masters and world-famous scientists while talented teenagers are not in shortage.
( )内的句子，让后面的which修饰
Therefore, I made the conclusion that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward the hot issues for students and leave everything else for college students to investigate and create. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should take their charge in valuing students’ work and giving constructive advice to students.
改成：Therefore, I conclude that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward hot issues to students, and let students improvise their own conclusions. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should only asses students’ work and provide constructive advice to students.
『伍』 求批改一篇英语作文 谢谢
1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover
[句子错误] 请检查Do，确认主谓一致。
1.2 Welive in a complex world.
[句子错误] 请检查句中谓语动词。
1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.
[词语错误] 请检查terriblethings，确认拼写正确。
1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.
[词语错误] 请检查andcriminal，确认拼写正确。
[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击
1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.
[词语错误] 请检查twosides，确认拼写正确。
1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.
[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的区别。
1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
[词语错误] 请检查distingushing，确认拼写正确。
[批改提示] 查看clearly与clear的区别。
2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.
[句子错误] 请检查do，确认主谓一致。
2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.
[词语错误] 请检查asimilar，确认拼写正确。
2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.
[其他] 请检查a data in library，本族语中很少使用。
[词语错误] 请检查myuniversity，确认拼写正确。
2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.
2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.
2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.
2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.
[词语错误] 请检查wasold，确认拼写正确。
2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!
2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!
2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
[词语错误] 请检查itscover，确认拼写正确。
3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.
3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.
[词语错误] 请检查peopleeasily，确认拼写正确。
3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.
3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.
[词语错误] 请检查onlyby，确认拼写正确。
[批改提示] all kinds of的近义表达有a great variety of。
3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
[词语错误] 请检查itcompletely，确认拼写正确。
4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
[动词错误] 请检查spend enough timeand energy to understand，确认动词用法正确。
[词语错误] 请检查timeand，确认拼写正确。
你可以搜索句酷批改网，很不错的，上面内容均为那个网站上的。
『陆』 批改我的英语作文
Nowadays, more and more children prefer eating meat better than green vegetables。第二个eating太多余了。
declivous应为delicious
a fifteen year old 应为 a fifiteen-year-old；
And应该小写前面改成逗号,或者改成What's more, vagetables...。
lots前面加上since/because连成一句比较好。
如果要用are made ill，后面最好用by,这句话最好说lots of people become ill because of ...
后面的on有点嫌疑。。保险起见把on them 删掉吧。
即：What's more, vegetables can be dangerous since lots of people are become ill because of the pesticides the farmers use. So I like meat.z注意每个句子不要太独立，用点so这类的连接词，会比较连贯。
it is not quiet right。。quiet应该是quite。这句话是病句，纯中国式英语。。。太绕了，直接说However，that's not right.
Always eating meat 也是中国式英语。always 表示的可能性特别大，接近百分之百。改为：eating meat too much can also be dangerous！
heart attacks表示心脏病发作，最好改成heart disease。我印象中plenty修饰不可数名词。can only find 改为can only be found.
A lack of vegetables is a lack of proteins.我觉得有点问题，但说不出问题在哪里，你可以查一下lack 的用法。
On the one hand...on the other hand 要配套使用，同时只适用于相反的两个方面（这点和多人不知道，会乱用）
and so do me不好，要用也是so do I
还有，你这篇作文的结构有点乱，缺乏条理，既然后面还要讲吃太多菜不好，就前面就不要用Sally说了，直接总-分-总。
我一直搞不懂为什么就冒出个Sally来了。。。
从你的作文看得出阅读量有点不足，英语语感有待加强。平时多阅读一些文章，21世纪报不错。。。
呃。。。如果你是初中生，这篇作文很不错。如果你是高中生，建议你不要只写一些简单句，高中的作文适当增加复杂句型（不多，一两句就够了，但是前提是要写对。。）可以给作文增色不少，毕竟高中的作文要求会比较高。。。
我说话有点直，别介意。。。如果生气，5分我不要就是了。。。就这样啦~再接再厉~
『柒』 求批改英语作文
with percentages of 18.80%, 16.36% and 15.77% in sequence.
要么把percentages of 去掉 要么把百分号去掉否则就是重复
in sequence去掉，因为前面已经有followed by了 这里意思又重复了
To talk about Clothing/Footwear, story is different.
显然用Talking about/of 结构更为规范，story前面的定冠词也漏了
Italy was the leading country with a rate of 9.00%, while Sweden was lagged behind with a relatively low percentage of 5.40%.
【rate】的用法不能这样用，应该改成 at the rate of 9:100 这个：号可以换成to
lag是不及物动词不能用被动 pecentage的问题不再说了。
The other three countries was in between with rates at around 6.50%.
这句话的表达无法理解。between后面有对象的话则必须是A and B. 你的between后面只有一个对象，已经错了。
Turkey was ranked No.1 the second time with a rate of 4.35%.
建议the second time的the改成a. 表示“再”的意味可以更明确
rank是不及物动词，用被动，错。
To draw a conclusion from the table
这个表达很不地道。直接In conclusion干脆舒服。
percentage is different in each column,
每个竖条百分数据不同。根据这个表达意思。建议改成percentages vary from column to column更好。你的原句少定冠词就不对，多了又感觉不舒服。
one thing was similar. It’s that consumers in all five countries spent most of their money on the item
可以去掉句号和it's改装成同位语从句。更为简洁和有语感
『捌』 批改英语作文 英语怎么说
批改英语作文
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check是检查，不是批改
有不会的可以再问我
『玖』 批改英语作文
craftsmanship，是针对一个人而言的手工艺技巧不能用，第二次用influence拼错了，society前面加冠词，cloning才是克隆内原型是clone，cloning作为一种容技术可以看做专有名词前面不建议加冠词，pay的是钱pay for的才是花钱的东西，regular作名词时指人，想说宇宙规律说universe不就好了吗，life time 是线性的lengthen它会更好，societ不存在的，改成social吧，最后的better没写完。整篇语法和词汇都很低级啊，最好用一些高级一点的词汇，不一定要很难的，比如both sides就比two sides好得多impact就比influence好得多。第二段第二句整句语法错误，可改成it is so helpful for medical treatments that mankind can live a longer life.(so that 和so ... that意思是分别是以便和如此...以至于，medical不能用作名词)
『拾』 如何批改英文作文
在批改时，不一定需要每篇作文都进行逐词逐句的修改，可以参照已有的回常用批改符号（correction? symbols）或自答行设计一套自用的符号系统，如在错误处画一底线并写上 sp（=spelling），vb（=verb form），agr（=subject—verb agreement）等，对那些学生能自己改正的错误则要求他们自行改正。但对这种批改方式也有不少学者和教师持异议，他们认为单靠使用vague或incoherent这样简单的评注，对学生帮助不大。这一点已为我国许多英语写作课教师所认识。美国学者路易斯·米利奇（Louis Milic）指出，有些句子中出现的错误必须超越语法层次来分析