⑴ 高中英语作文指导:如何用英文写信(1)
高中英语作文要求学生在充分领会“提示”的前提下,用自己的语言组织成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的短文。但由于各种原因,学生们在写作的时候经常会出现审题不清、论证无效、思维混乱、结构松散等问题,因此,除了以一定的词汇、句式、语法结构为基础,在写作时学生还应该掌握一定的方法,深思熟虑、精心构思,最终成文。下面以一篇作文为例谈谈笔者在作文教学中的一些想法。 -作文要求: 假如你是某中学学生李博文。最近,你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报组织的一个讨论。话题为:“父母有没有必要陪读?”请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信,客观介绍讨论情况。 70%的同学认为: 1.父母不该陪读;2.父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯,不利于自控能力的培养,不利于培养良好的学习习惯;3.父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息。 30%的同学认为: 1.父母应该陪读;2.父母陪读能使我们腾出时间专心学习,使我们身体更健康;3.父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标,督促我们完成学业,鼓励我们独立解决困难,培养我们养成良好学习习惯。 一、分析要求 写作的要求尽管都比较简洁扼要,但却包含着不少的信息,比如说文体、格式、中心等,所以同学们在写作时必须通过仔细阅读要求,找到中心词以明确任务,在本篇作文的开头要求中,可确定: 1)以书信格式给报社写信 2)父母要不要陪读(中心话题) 3)客观介绍(客观结果的叙述,无须主观的论证) 二、分析材料本篇材料以表格形式出现,内容还是比较丰富的,所以同学们应就表格内容进行分析和梳理。可得到以下信息: 1)双方观点对立,具有辩论性(表格第1点) 2)各自理由的陈述(表格2、3点) 三、组织结构 对材料进行了一定的分析后,同学就比较容易确定所写文章的结构组织。以本篇为例: 1.关键句式 引入句:i’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had about… i’m very glad to write to you about… 过渡句(第一段与第二段):there have been different opinions. opinions are divided on the question. it is certain that we do have different opinions on this matter. 不同观点引入:……同学认为(赞同/反对) …students think… students hold(the belief)that …students have argued that …students are against the idea …students don’t accept the idea …students feel strongly about the idea …students are in favor of 2.中心词汇 陪读:accompany sb.studying at school 养成依赖的习惯:form/get into /fall into the habit of dependence 自控能力:the ability of controlling ourselves 对……有所影响:have a…effect(influence)on,affect 腾出时间spare more time 督促urge 鼓励……做……encourage sb.to do sth. 独立independently/by oneself/on ones own/alone
⑵ 求2篇书信类型的高中英语作文(80-----100字)
一.假如你是李华,一名叫Jim的美国学生参加夏令营活动将在你家住两周,请你给他写一封信,介绍你的家人和基本情况。再加上英语
⑶ 高中英语作文书信格式
Dear Mercy,
亲爱的梅斯,
How is everything going! Last time you said you are anxious now because you find it hard to learn English well. Don’t worry. I think you have to improve your English step by step. And I will right behind you. In my view, you should develop you interest on English first. According to my experience, I think watching English movie, listen to some wonderful English songs and talk in English on the Internet would be helpful. Secondly, you have to prepare lessons before class that will help you understand what the teacher says in the class. I know you feel bored in the class, but you have force yourself to be concentrated. A few days later you will feel it a little easy to learn English. The left steps I will tell next time. By the way, we have not seen each other since your family move to Hunan a year ago. Have you ever thought about going back to visit me and learn English together in the coming Summer vacation. Looking forward to your reply.
过得可好。上次你说你现在很焦虑因为你觉得很难学好英语。别担心。我觉得要提高英语你得一步步来。我会帮你的。在我看来,首先应该要培养你对英语的兴趣。根据我的经验,我认为看英文电影,听美妙的英文歌曲以及在互联网上与他人用英语交流会有很大的帮助。其次,你要预习,这样可以让你理解老师在课堂上说的东西。我知道你觉得上英语课很无聊,但你必须强迫自己聚精会神的听。一段时间后,你会感觉到学习英语变得容易些了。剩下的步骤下一次我会告诉你的。顺便提一下,自从一年前你们家搬到湖南后我们就没见过面。你有没有想过暑假的时候回来看看我,我们可以一起学习英语。期待你的回复。
Best wishes,
Li
⑷ 英语书信作文120词高中
It is first day of school, and I am excited. I am excited to attain new knowledge. I am excited to obtain new goals. I am excited to meet new friends, and I am excited to see fresh faces, and beautiful girls.
The school was great, The big front door, the beautiful girls in the same class as I, the nice teachers whom I met on the first day, and the gigantic building that entered my eyes - everything is as good as I thought they would be. I like the school here, and I believe I will have a good year learning in high school.
⑸ 高一英语作文写信不少于60字
Helloe:
We have received your letter,I heard that you will come to Beijing on vacation. I am sure you know before departure with a visa is necessary, but also the best application in advance, because it takes some time to process visas 3 Beijing winter cold, a little more than the clothes are wise, of course, is also a good idea to carry much cash with me ring the holidays, it will take you everywhere around Beijing, visiting the Forbidden City, the Great Wall. now go! While in Beijing will ensure holiday fun!
⑹ 求一篇高一的英语作文。书信类的。
Dear wanggang, i am writing to tell you somrthing about my new school. this is a beautiful area.there are a big playgound and a Electronic reading room.all of this are very enjoyable.and i like the English teacher best,he is the first male English teavher.he has his different teaching ways.it is not make us feel embarrassed.my classmates are all friendly and study hard. i know my middle school life is begin.i will do my best .that is all.i am looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours, Liyong
⑺ 高中英语作文信件类作文带翻译10篇
Dear Robert,⑻ 高一英语作文‘写给朋友的一封信’
hi,dear friend:
how are you?what's going on right there?
l missed you for a long time.you know how l yearn you,my friend.Everythings is ok here about me. l had a good job about study in an alien land.l hope you can contact with me about the Christmas Day and New year Eve,also, l wish you can be happy and beaming in Christmas and Happy New year.
love,xxx
xx xx xx
⑼ 英语范文高中100词左右写信
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua,from Jinan,Shandong province.I'm writing to put up with some advice on how to use spring.
It is known Jinan is famous for springs,such as Baotu Spring.These springs are not only provide necessary water for us,but also add color to our city and people's daily life.Therefore,we should protect them.First,I think we should limit the visitors everyday so as to decrease pollution on water.Second,it is essential to develop new technique to recycle the water.
In brief,every citizen should devote their efforts in protecting our enormous but not unlimited springs,so that we can take full advantage of them.
Best regards.
Li Hua
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⑽ [英语]高中英语作文指导:如何用英文写信
作者:金陵中学 高级教师 许鹰高中英语作文要求学生在充分领会“提示”的前提下,用自己的语言组织成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的短文。但由于各种原因,学生们在写作的时候经常会出现审题不清、论证无效、思维混乱、结构松散等问题,因此,除了以一定的词汇、句式、语法结构为基础,在写作时学生还应该掌握一定的方法,深思熟虑、精心构思,最终成文。下面以一篇作文为例谈谈笔者在作文教学中的一些想法。作文要求:假如你是某中学学生李博文。最近,你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报组织的一个讨论。话题为:“父母有没有必要陪读?”请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信,客观介绍讨论情况。70%的同学认为:1.父母不该陪读;2.父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯,不利于自控能力的培养,不利于培养良好的学习习惯;3.父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息。30%的同学认为:1.父母应该陪读;2.父母陪读能使我们腾出时间专心学习,使我们身体更健康;3.父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标,督促我们完成学业,鼓励我们独立解决困难,培养我们养成良好学习习惯。一、分析要求写作的要求尽管都比较简洁扼要,但却包含着不少的信息,比如说文体、格式、中心等,所以同学们在写作时必须通过仔细阅读要求,找到中心词以明确任务,在本篇作文的开头要求中,可确定:1)以书信格式给报社写信2)父母要不要陪读(中心话题)3)客观介绍(客观结果的叙述,无须主观的论证)二、分析材料本篇材料以表格形式出现,内容还是比较丰富的,所以同学们应就表格内容进行分析和梳理。可得到以下信息:1)双方观点对立,具有辩论性(表格第1点)2)各自理由的陈述(表格2、3点)三、组织结构对材料进行了一定的分析后,同学就比较容易确定所写文章的结构组织。第一段:介绍写信目的第二段:70%同学的观点及理由陈述第三段:30%同学的观点及理由陈述第四段:结尾 简单收尾四、关键句式及词汇对文章结构了解清晰之后,同学们应对在文章中需要运用的一些句式和词汇进行整理,这样在用词用句上就更有把握,同时还可以避免一些词句上的错误。以本篇为例:1.关键句式引入句:I’m writing to tell you the discussion we've had about…I’m very glad to write to you about…过渡句(第一段与第二段):There have been different opinions.Opinions are divided on the question.It is certain that we do have different opinions on this matter.不同观点引入:……同学认为(赞同/反对)…students think…students hold(the belief)that…students have argued that…students are against the idea…students don’t accept the idea…students feel strongly about the idea…students are in favor of2.中心词汇陪读:accompany sb.studying at school养成依赖的习惯:form/get into /fall into the habit of dependence自控能力:The ability of controlling ourselves对……有所影响:have a…effect(influence)on,affect腾出时间spare more time督促urge鼓励……做……encourage sb.to do sth.独立independently/by oneself/on ones own/alone五、完成全文完成了所有的准备工作,大家就可以胸有成竹地进行写作了。六、注意点在写作当中有一些要点同学们应谨记在心:1.不要将文章处理为三句翻译的集合体。有些同学在处理这类信息类的作文时只是简单地将所给三类信息进行翻译,这是不可取的,应将所给信息进行处理和丰富。2.句句之间逻辑联系的确立和正确的词与词组的选择。好的逻辑联系可以使作文内容连续,结构清晰,所以要正确使用一些表示逻辑联系的词和词组。3.避免句词的多次重复,可选用多种表达形式。有些相同或相似的内容应尽量避免重复,使作文句式更灵活多样。作文训练并非一朝一夕的事,只有在长期的练习中,认真构思、细心体会、不断总结,才能有所收获,做到处变而不惊。本文范文:Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.It is certain that we do have different opinions on this matter.Most of us hold that our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence,so that we won’t form the good habit of studying.What'smore,it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.At the same time it affects our parents' work,studies and rest.While the rest of the students think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school,which may let us have more time to spare for our studies.Besides,we shall be much healthier for their concern.On the other hand,our parents canhelp us set up our aim,urge us to finish our task,totell the truth,it is our parents that en-courage us to overcome difficulties in life and get us into the good habit of studying.Hopefully,we may get some advice from your newspaper,from which we can really benefit a lot and have a clear mind about it.Thank you very much.Yours truly,Li Bowen