『壹』 比较出彩的中考英语作文中
hope can keep you free.
strong man stands for himself, stronger man stands for others.
『贰』 高中英语作文如何出彩
今天我们刚刚讲了抄作文
首先是一些非智力因素
比如要写题目
要有段落
最少两段
字数要适当
字的大小要合适
还有高考规定不可以涂改
其实是一些技巧性问题
比如最基础的时态
单复数等不可以弄错
然后不要一路用简单句到底
这样就算全对也没有高分
然后你可以选择使用一些从句啊
复合句
为文章提彩
注意使用一些好的连贯词
这都是我自己的经验
希望被采纳
祝你成功
加油
『叁』 十万火急！写英语作文时候都有什么出彩的句式呢
莱曼英语在多年的教学实践中总结出了一系列的有关英语写作的实战经验，并参阅了大量不同地区的英语试卷，特别是作文课题，认为下列英语作文的目标和要求是学生在写作文时首要要达到的：
1.首段引人：
尽自己最大的可能使得第一自然段引人入胜，做到“语不惊人誓不休”。要想做到这一点，就要求学生要大量地阅读课外书籍，包括中文和英文，做到知识面宽泛，观点灵活，写技高超。
2.词组句型：
在英语作文中，词组和句型的运用可帮助呈现写作者的英语水平。这就要求学生要在基础知识方面进行系统的学习。现举例说明：
prefer doing>enjoy doing>like doing 由此可以看出，不同类型和不同水平的词组句型可表现出写作者不同的观点及英语水平。
3.复合句:
在英语写作中,对于主从复合句的运用也是必不可少的。小学英语作文中可以没有主从复合句，但从初中开始，必须在写作中运用主从复合句（至少1——2个）。因为，只有主从复合句才能表达更为复杂的观点；只有主从复合句才能是阅卷者看出写作者真实的英语水平高度。
4.转联词:
所谓的转联词是指那些用于承上启下的副词，连词以及大量的介词词组等。英语作文中转联词的必要使用，可以使得句子与句子之间更加流畅，避免了各个句子的分割独立，使得文章顺理成章，一气呵成。中国学生在学习中，掌握了大量的此类单词和词组，但除了but,because,等，很少主动使用，使得所写文章颇显干巴和唐突。
5.时态：
毋庸置疑，时态是英语基础知识的重要范畴之一，也是区别于汉语的重要特点之一。而英语作文又是对学生综合能力的考核。因而，在作文中，必须加入时态的准确运用，才能使自己的观点和所叙述的情节更加精准。因为中文中没有时态的概念，中国学生极易在英语时态方面出现失误或忽略事态的运用，这将是所写的英语作文大打折扣。
6.汉译英：
在莱曼英语教学理念中，我们更加强调翻译训练的重要性。无论是英译汉，还是汉译英都是英语学习着必备的基本能力，或者说，都是顶尖级能力。所以，在英语作文中，汉译英技巧的运用，毫无疑问地会帮助写作者更加充分地表达自己的观点。而这种翻译的训练又是大部分教学资料和英语课堂所极为缺乏的。莱曼英语总结了一些特效直观的汉译英技巧，将安排在后续的讲座中进行讲解。
7.书写排版：
尽人皆知，书写排版是人的第二张脸。一篇作文的书写和排版直接影响到阅卷人的情绪，不可避免地会影响到作文的最后成绩。
8.课外阅读和长期训练
课外要广泛地涉猎不同种书籍，特别是对一些精品文章的阅读，以增加自己的信息量。同时，还要通过日记，周记，书信，便条，通知，短信以及命题写作等方式进行长期不断地训练，才能逐渐地提高英语写作水平。
综上所述，英语作文是一种基础知识的输出，是一种综合能力的体现。是一个大量信息积攒的过程，是一个不断修炼的过程。
『肆』 高中英语作文如何出彩
今天我们刚刚讲了复作文
首先是一些非智制力因素
比如要写题目 要有段落 最少两段 字数要适当 字的大小要合适 还有高考规定不可以涂改
其实是一些技巧性问题
比如最基础的时态 单复数等不可以弄错
然后不要一路用简单句到底 这样就算全对也没有高分
然后你可以选择使用一些从句啊 复合句 为文章提彩 注意使用一些好的连贯词
这都是我自己的经验 希望被采纳 祝你成功 加油
『伍』 高中英语作文出彩的句子或词组
. According to a recent survey， four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4 000 000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that ecation does not end with graation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that ecation is not complete with graation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
6. When it comes to ecation， the majority of people believe that ecation is a lifetime study.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However， this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents， who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and drug.越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和吸毒。
10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus， which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。
11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem： the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。
12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。
13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time. In fact， it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes： All work and no play makes Jack a ll boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间。事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。
14. Any government， which is blind to this point， may pay a heavy price.任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。
15.Nowadays， many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately， for most young people， it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。
16. In view of the seriousness of this problem， effective measures should be taken before things get worse.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。
17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills， which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。
19. Although this view is wildly held， this is little evidence that ecation can be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。
20. No one can deny the fact that a person's ecation is the most important aspect of his life.没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。
21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。
22. In the last decades， advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活得时间更长成为可能。
23. In fact， we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。
24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。
25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。
26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。
27. Now， it is generally accepted that no college or university can ecate its students by the time they graation.现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业的时候教给学生所有的知识。
28. This is a matter of life and death—a matter no country can afford to ignore.这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。
29. For my part， I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons：……我同意后者，有如下理由：……
30. Before giving my opinion， I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是很重要的。
31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.这一观点正受到越来越多的人的质疑。
32. Environmental experts point out that the increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。
33. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle， it is not without its problem.尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，它仍然存在一些问题。
34. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。
35. There is a general discussion these days over ecation in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether ecation is a lifetime study.当前高校和研究机构关于教育问题存在着大量争论，其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。
36. This issue has caused wide public concern.这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。
37. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.必须指出学习只能靠自己。
38. As for me， I'm in favor of the opinion that ecation is not complete with graation， for the following reasons：……就我而言，我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点，有以下原因：……
39. Even the best possible graate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an ecated person.即使最优秀的毕业生，要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。
40. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology， and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人们普遍认为现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。
41. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作机会或提升的机会。
42. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望。
43. For the majority of people， reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。
44. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style， it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes： it is never too late to learn.对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老。
45. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.对于大学生或高中生打工这一现象，校园里进行着广泛的争论。
46. By taking a major-related part-job， students can not only improve their academic studies， but gain much experience， they will never be able to get from the textbooks.通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。
47. Although people's lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades， it must be admitted that， shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.近几十年，尽管人们的生活有了惊人的改变，但必须承认，由于学费和书费日益飞涨，资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。
48. Consequently， the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.因此，业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。
49. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can proce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job， which will benefit students and their family， even the society as a whole.通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。
50. These days， people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that， along with the development of modern society， it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.现在，越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会发展的必然结果，无法避免。
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『陆』 如何让英语作文“更出彩”
孩子写英语作文时，明明会用很多单词，但是往往写出来的文章都很平淡。为了帮助小伙伴们的英语写作增添文采，小编推荐一些常用词汇的替代语，希望对大家的写作有所帮助：
普通词汇1:help
典型例句：I"ll help you 。
替代语 accomodate E.g: I"ll endeavour to accomodate you。
普通词汇2: helpful
典型例句：Sth is helpful (to sb)
替代语 concive E.g Sth is concive to sb
time-honored 时代赋予的
do credit to our forbears 继承先辈的优秀传统
普通词汇3:show
典型例句：as it shows in the picture
替代语 betray
普通词汇4:think
典型例句：i think ---- ----
替代语deem
普通词汇5:ugly
典型例句：xxx is ugly
替代语 hideous
普通词汇6:by the way
典型例句：by the way,..。.
替代语 incidentally,..。.
普通词汇7: because
典型例句：xxx because xxx
替代语 in that/in as much as E.g: xxx because xxx
普通词汇8: consider
典型例句： We must consider xxx
『柒』 十万火急！写英语作文时候都有什么出彩的句式呢
开头
1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
2.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
3.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
4.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
5.Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
6.With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
7.A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为．．．
People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,…. If we want to do something… , it is essential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.
很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….
Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.
I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….
在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
hy did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
如何连接
强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.
比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
列举for example, for instance, such as, take …for example. Except (for), to illustrate.
时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, ring, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.
解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.
递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
让步although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately. whereas
原因 for this reason, e to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.
总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
其他 Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,
图表作文常用句型 As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
The graph shows that… 图表显示… As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…The increase of …. In the city has reached to 20%. ….在这个城市的增长已达到20%. In 1985, the number remained the same. 1985年,这个数字保持不变. There was a graal decline in 1989. 1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.
『捌』 如何写一篇出彩的高考英语作文
This si one of the most important/interesting/weird memeries in my life. THere is ong moment in my life that I won't forget in my life forever.
『玖』 英文作文如何开篇才能出彩
记叙文的开篇，可以直接给本次时间或者活动盖一个“帽子”，比如“这是我在内高中阶段做过最有容意义的一件事”之类的话。而且，尽量使用长句。
如果是议论文，那么就是直接提出观点，或者论题。如果有能力的话，可以用从句或者非谓语的方式，把双方的观点简单提出来一下。比如“关于XX话题有两方人持有不同的观点，前者支持...，而后者却认为...是他们的最爱。”
有的句型可以去我的博客上看blog.sina.com.cn/zhangdanada1211
『拾』 高考英语作文怎样写得出彩
如果是20分的话，我想不用强调字迹和语法错误了- -~
另外打草稿很重要。
这五分的差距要在今后版缩小权。书信类语言要得体，议论性的要有层次。
多积累。争取每天写一篇。不过呢，每个老师的想法又不一样= =
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