① 英语作文修改
But my teachers are serious and responsible work, amiable attitude of students.
这一句有问题，my teachers are serious and responsible work，把修饰语serious and responsible去掉是my teachers are work，不搭配可修改为：my teachers are serious and responsible to work. 后一句，犯同样的毛病，可改为：take amiable attitudeto students
2. Although I am a negative person.
negative和 person不能搭配，改为：inactive
3. I joined in an army of activities. 这一句看不懂。
4. I will wait for your letter. 改为：waiting for you early reply. 符合英文书信的结尾用语。
其它没有任何问题，用词和句子结构都符合一个大一新生的英语标准。
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② 英语作文修改（怎么改如下）
I want to read a book ring the winter holiday because books are very important to us. I usually read 【改成enjoy】a book in my spare time. For example【可以改为for instance，同样的意思，明显这个词汇更高级】, when I have nothing to do, I will read【改为appreciate，有欣赏的意思】 it.
{ I also read a book before I go to bed， which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}这整句话前面那句是在不咋的，和你后面所用的词汇完全不是一个档次的，话说你几年级，后面的词汇到高中（turn out to be adj.)才会教。所以我决定全部改掉。。As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.
③ 英语作文免费修改
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times. It was the season of light, it was the season of darkness. It was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. We had everything before us, we had nothing before us. We were all going direct to heaven, we were all going direct the other way ——in short, the period was as far as the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.
In my a opinion, the beginning of the “Tale of Two Cities” was not only the portrayal of modern society, but was also a warning of an era. Charles Darnay, anephew of Marquis St. Evremonde , gave up his knighthoods and property to become a successful teacher of French in London. He tried his best to become a ordinary citizen to obtain the recognization of French civic.Then he fall in love with Lucie Manette whose father suffered persecution for Marquis St. Evremonde, what a funny joke of fate!
I believe the love could dissolve hatred, a matter of fact Dickens had the same viewpoint with mine. “It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to, than I have ever known.” The end of the story give a nice ending for Charles and Lucie, they live together with harry for ever.
Equality and fairness are what people seeking, which led to the French Revolution. But these so-called "patriots" would like to see more and more innocent prisoners going to the guillotine, was that true? How many innocent person have died in democracy?
改了一些， 你照着对一下就看出来了。
没看过那电影或者电视剧，所以也不知道你写的是什么，不过改一改也是可以的。
你是上大学的还是高中的。。。 在我这边高中好多英国人都没你这好文笔，我更是写不出来了！
④ 英语作文求修改
写得不错，段落分明，格式规范，如果20分，最少可以得12-13分。
几处语法错误及不妥内：
1. 第二段的by Chinese不妥，by没有容必要啊(不是被动)。
2. 它下一句的倒装不对。
3. 比较级more cheaper不对。
4. thriving和innovative不准确。
5. 结尾的最后一句不妥。结尾是用两到三句重申第二部分的观点，上面没有提及的内容(哪怕是真的)不合适出现在这里。
⑤ 免费修改英语作文
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请问你这句句子想表回达什么意思呢?我不太理解答.
⑥ 英语作文修改
Success has been an important motivation in the progress of human work. There is no doubt that success can encourage us to work harder. As a matter of fact ,the consequence of success can bring faith.in our mind .
But what qualities contribute to be successful in work ?However,most people are confused about it. I hold the opinion that honesty plays an important role in it..For example when we are students ,our teacher always tell us never to cheat in any exams even if you can not pass the exam. What matters most is whether you are an honest and reliable man.As a matter of fact, a leader always thinks highly of those people who are honest. What is more., honesty dramatically narrow the gap between people, which is impossible happening to dishonest people. On the contrary,being dishonest does do great harm not only to others but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example.The reason why so many babies get sicks there is that all of them drink the fake milk,which contains harmful substances that badly affected their health. To our great relief ,the procers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end..
你自己对照一下，按原文意思更改。不当之处，请谅解！能力有限。
⑦ 英语作文修改
cause great改成greatly 很大程度的改变比你产生了巨大的影响更贴切一些。
save up改成save save up 是储存的意思，节省时间版用save就可以。
technique can cause problem too. problem加上s，变成复数权。
We human indeed us改成Our human。
and not lose要表达的是“而不是”的意思，所以改成“，rather than”
⑧ 英语作文修改
第一句话image 应改为imagine ，后面是宾语从句，应用陈述句语序，即：what our life will be like...
⑨ 一篇英语作文如何修改
是该自己的作文还是批改别人的？
作文可以以下三个方面来改
整篇文章逻辑的修改。作文的专目的是属为了表达东西，所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的，如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了。
语法的修改。篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构，说仔细了就是语法的修改。
就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了。
以上只是大的修改方向，顺序也不是一定的，可以根据个人喜好灵活处理的。以上都是个人的一些看法，希望对你有帮助。
⑩ 英语作文怎么改
换用一些不同句子结构或者更高级的单词和短语，慢慢改写吧。提高写作水平可以每天用英文写日记，或者练练英语范文然后给老师评改，慢慢提升自己，然后把好的范文背下来，就自然有感觉了，慢慢培养语感就ok 了。希望有所帮助。加油哦！