A. 对英语的看法，英语作文（带翻译的）
Nowday , some students don’ like learning English because learning English is hardwork. I think it’s necessary for us to learn English in our daily life. We should have good ways of learning English and spend much moren time on it.
Here is my some advice.
First ,we should read English as much as possible and talk with your parents and friend. Don’t be afraid of make mistakes when you talk with other people . Because everybody makes mistakes . What is more, we should write as much as possible. We spend much time doing practis.We also try to listen to English more. We may listen to English music, some tapes.
Last ,but not least .It’s important for us to listen to teacher and take notes carefully in class. We should do our homework carefully. We also should believe ourselves.I believe if we work hard, we are sure to learn it well.
Nowday,有些学生不喜欢学习英语因为学习英语是勤奋。我认为我们有必要学英语在我们的日常生活中。我们应该学习英语的好方法,moren花太多时间在这上面。
这是我的一些建议。
首先,我们应该尽可能地多读英语,跟你的父母和朋友。不要害怕犯错误,当你与他人交谈。因为每个人都会犯错。更重要的是,我们应该尽可能地写。我们花太多时间在practis。我们还试图听英语。我们可以听英语的音乐,一些录音带。
最后,但并非最不重要的。重要的是我们听老师在课堂上认真和做笔记。我们应该仔细地做作业。我们也要相信自己。我相信如果我们努力工作,我们一定要学好它。
B. 英语作文评论 ，我写的不是很好。
Shopping on the Net
Nowadays, more and more people become lazy and rich【个人倾向于rich but lazy】; in addition, surf【surfing，后面已经有is】 the Internet is become【becoming】 more and more【建议换个表达方式，尽量不要连续重复使用】 popular. So that some people like shopping on the Net.
People hold different opinions on that. Some think that shopping on the net is very convenient. First of all, we haven’t【此处用作实义动词，don't have】 to go to the market tiredly and then the service staff will send 【前文没有指代商品，最好还是写清】to your home with present like a star【这个我没看懂……】. Secondly, on the net have【用there be表达】 all kinds of goods, you can go shopping with reckless abandon. Last but not least, the goods prices online is cheaper than market.
However, some other people hold that shopping `on the net is harmful to people. In the first place, people look at the goods【建议改为goods people see】 online may be is【已经有be了，is就是be动词，去掉】 not really【改为形容词，real】, in other worlds【words= =】, it is picture【可数名词，要不加a要不改复数】 and may be quality is not good【the quality may not be good】. In the second place, on the net have a few frauds【第二次出现该错误，对于物应用there be】. You give him or her some money for your goods【有点罗嗦，用pay即可】 that pitch on the net. But you don’t gain it【这里存在不确定性，原语义不通】. As a result, shopping on the net is not safe.
In my opinion, this question should be probed in depth. But form what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the most important thing for us shopping on the net 【is （that）】the advantages 【are】far outweigh the disadvantages, because now more and more website【复数】 are more comprehensive for shopping on the net.
以上存在几个问题
1，动词。LZ去复习下几种动词的区别吧
2，物所有用there be表达，不能用have
3，用词重复。像more and more就出现了三次，出现这种情况要尽量替换，尤其是开头结尾不要出现连续的重复用词。可以背一些常用的替换词，写作文会用得到
4，从句。从文中可以看出LZ是硬着头皮用从句，弄巧成拙了。建议收集相关从句自己分析比较仿写（参考书也是好物口牙！）
5，写作文的时候要考虑翻译成中文是否通顺，是否能表达出完整的意思。写完最好多读几遍，错误能免则免
LZ加油=v=
C. 我对英语的评价英语作文
Many students to a special examination on the tension, I think, first of all candidates in the test must establish a strong self-confidence, it is necessary that "there must be Tianshengwocai", the study is not the only way to become useful, good only become useful to learn a Only factor. The day before the test to calm down, so a buffer among us, so that more clear-headed examination will be able to play well. Parents will have to continue to give comfort to the children and not ratio of students still tense, the task of parents is to create a comfortable environment for a child more confidence. Second, the candidates can and parents, friends and family, such as consultants to give vent to their pressure, to seek support. Can also have a rhythm to do some things, such as listening to music to ease the mood, dance, painting, to regulate the use of color. If the pressure in particular, can play to the beat of music. Candidates proposed to do some aerobic exercise, or to carry out a deep breath. In addition, the efforts of students to exercise restraint until their basic emotional stability, that is, pay attention to mental relaxation, at the same time I like to think of things scattered about the brain and nervous to come back, the better the outcome will be. Finally, the students believe they have to in order to best deal with the state exam. I hope people will test a success
D. 评论英语作文，英语作文修改。
英语作文修改
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. The new program is to make a beautiful school. We are to make a better place for us to study. I think we must regularly cropped flowers and trees. That will build a concive botanical garden. We intend to build some statues to inspire the students and teachers.
We welcome you to our school..
Yours,
Li Hua
note:I try to keep the originality of your composition by not over correct it.
E. 评论性英语作文怎么写
评论性的作文最重要莫过于两点，1观点，你要对自己的观点，或者说立场一定要明版确，无论是从反面评权价一个事物或是以正面评价一个事物，你可以通过反向或正向推理来佐证你的观点。2则是总结自己的感想，这也是很重要的，这是你文章的一个可以使你的文章凝聚升华的部分，其重要性不言而喻，我建议你你可以通过举例来证明自己的感想，比如要写关于善良的文章，你就可以举一些历史上很善良的人物。希望我的一些经验可以帮到你。
F. 评论英语作文
My mother
My mother is a shop assistant,she is 34 years old.Her name is Sun Huanxia.She has two big eyes,a small nose,a small mouth and long black hair.Her favourite food is noodle,and Her favourite fruit is apple.She likes playing computer games with me.She helps me and I help her too.I like her very much.
注意一下SHE的所有格HER 根据英语国家习惯Her name is Sun Huanxia.这一句专可以删属掉
G. 怎样评价一篇英语作文
谈如何写好英语作文评语。然而，在当前的英语教学实践中，存在这样一种现状：教师重内视英语写作训容练，但却忽视对学生作文的反馈，未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色。总之，教师只有把评价学生的写作自始至终放在发现学生字、词、句、段、文方面的优秀之处和可取之处，并时而通过评语与他们促膝谈心，表达特别的关注和爱护，学生才能从遭遇失败到尝试成功，从惧怕写到乐于并善于写，进而全面提高自身的英语写作能力。
H. 如何用英语评论英语作文
先写一下文章总体内容，说说哪里好哪里不好，然后说说文章的现实意义。
I. 英语作文点评
建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)
J. 英语作文评价大全
说真的，我很讨厌淅沥的小雨，它们是那么的缠绵，总会使心烦涌入心头，惊涛拍浪，挖心的难受．因此在这样的雨天我没有在雨中漫步的情怀．但在北方由于在黄河以北降雨量少，注定淅沥的小雨会是夏天的常客．于是我也有些厌恶夏天，好在夏天还有一位代言人——暴雨，使我对夏天有了一丝的眷恋．
我喜欢暴雨有种近似痴迷的程度，因为暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，给人一种亲切感．下暴雨时我喜欢将窗子开到最大，将手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨点落下时针扎般的痛，那时却感觉不到疼，有的只是毅力的考验．张大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一种久违的香气，它会使我想起曾今那充满鸟语花香的大自然．
今天又一场暴雨过后，我遥望天际发现天空是那么美，头顶的一片天是那么的湛蓝，蓝的没有一丝杂质，它又是那么的飘渺，好像是七仙女抛下的一件蓝色的薄纱在空中飘舞．不远处还是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黄色，那种颜色给人一种压抑的感觉．于是我寻找蓝灰的交界处，那里本应是逐渐的过度色，而大自然却巧妙的嵌进去一朵还未完全舒展的云，刹那间我感受到了活力，那是生命的诠释．突然明白再阴的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出现的那一刹那．
那是一幅美丽的油画，是大自然给予人类的享受，更是自然给我们敲响的警示钟，如果没有人类保护大自然，恐怕以后连那雨过天晴的后的一丝感动也会一去不复返，至少我们会失去对生命的另一种诠释