Ⅰ 求一篇能得5分的英语作文
中国梦！我的梦
Ⅱ 英语作文！高分，5分钟内回答给你200分
In regard to this matter, students from the affirmative side deem that the old style of wild-beast cage let them have a chance to observe wild animals in person. Otherwise, people can hardly get a close look on those lovely wild animals. Others in favor of the wild-beast cage believe that it helps to bring up people's love to animals and nature. Also it can protect animals from dangerous natural surroundings.
Students from the negative side reckon that putting animals in cage is very labour-consuming and is a waste of resources. Also, those animals lost their liberty.What's more, it destoryed the ecological balance.
In general, putting-animals-in-cage zoological gardens have both its pros and cons. In my opinion, it should depend on the animal. A tigar,for instance, would belong to it in a wild state for it has powerful abilities to protect itself and seek enough food.While those little animals should be taken care by man and be given more protection.
亲爱的编辑:
关于这件事,赞成的同学认为动物园里用笼子养动物可以让他们有机会亲眼目睹野生动物,否则人们就不能很方便的看到那些可爱的野生动物.另外有一些同学认为这样做有助于培养对动物和自然的热爱,而且能保护动物免受处于野生环境中的未危险.
不赞成的同学认为这样做浪肥费了人力物力,而且使那些动物失去了自由,更严重的是破坏了生态平衡.
总的来说,这种做法有好处也有坏处.按我的意见,我希望能看情况而定,让那些有能力保护自己和寻找食物的动物自己生活.而那些需要保护的幼小动作就可以由人工来饲养了.
Ⅲ 英语作文，急需！（最好五分钟内给我）
To editor of the journal of Green School,U.S.A:
In order to help the students enlarge their horizen,our school opened the optional courses which could offer the knowledge and skills out of the textbooks.The optional courses include music,sports,computer ,art and the American and British culture.The optional courses are arranged from 4:30pm to 5:00pm on Monday,Wednesday and Friday.Among the optional courses,art,computer and American and British culture are welcome by the students.Personally I think,most of the students are interested in the optional courses ,and they also think that they can get much knowledge out of their classes and textbooks.
Ⅳ 求一篇英语作文 在线等五分钟！！
I have a classmate called Lihua,whose father is always working outside.So he has to look after his mother who is ill frequently at the moment study hard !,he fell down and hurt his legs yesterday.The doctor asked him to relax at home for two weeks!
As far as I am concerned,what a good boy he is!as classmates,help ling him is a certain .
In learning,I will tell him what I know to the fullest ,and Iam gland to discuss problems with him . As to the housework ,I will help him do some cleaning as well as other ity things .
I am sure we will be good friends.
Ⅳ 英语作文很不好 每次作文十五分,我总被扣五分.怎么提高英语作文
其实考场上英语作文拿高分说简单也不简单,说难也不难.英语作文扣个回2、3分是正常的,批卷老师一答般先看看开头,然后大体扫一下内容,最后再看看结尾就可以给分了 因此作文时,卷面十分重要,这是给老师的直接印象,如果有时间最好先打一遍草稿,再抄写.其次一定要注意不要在开头和结尾犯致命的错误,那样你的成绩是不会高得.最后内容上,现在的作文一般都会给提示词,你一定要把提示词全部用上,不要漏写.还有写的字数一定要多,每个单词之间不要太密或太窄.我觉得这就是英语作文考试的一些小技巧 ,你不妨试一试!
对了,如果你英语学得不错,你在写作文时,可以将一些简单单词换得的深一点,这样显得你更有内涵.这一点你要慎用,如果不会就不要硬扯,最后反而会弄巧成拙 .
这就是我的经验了 希望可以帮到你!
Ⅵ 英语作文很不好每次作文十五分,我总被扣五分.怎么提高英语作文
其实考场上英语作文拿高分说简单也不简单,说难也不难.英语作文扣个版2、3分是正常的,批卷权老师一般先看看开头,然后大体扫一下内容,最后再看看结尾就可以给分了
因此作文时,卷面十分重要,这是给老师的直接印象,如果有时间最好先打一遍草稿,再抄写.其次一定要注意不要在开头和结尾犯致命的错误,那样你的成绩是不会高得.最后内容上,现在的作文一般都会给提示词,你一定要把提示词全部用上,不要漏写.还有写的字数一定要多,每个单词之间不要太密或太窄.我觉得这就是英语作文考试的一些小技巧
,你不妨试一试!
对了,如果你英语学得不错,你在写作文时,可以将一些简单单词换得的深一点,这样显得你更有内涵.这一点你要慎用,如果不会就不要硬扯,最后反而会弄巧成拙
.
这就是我的经验了
希望可以帮到你!
Ⅶ 我写的这篇英语作文能得5分吗
朋友 一般来说 写英语作文 无论怎么写 只要字数够了 总会有五分的保底分 但若是你把英语的专基本五个句型掌握属好 我相信你会得到更多的分 至少也是十六分左右 若加一些新颖的句子 或许能够得十八十九分 当然 这是英语作文满分是25分
Ⅷ 悬赏5分，英语作文
dear Mary,
how are you?
Thank you for inviting me to playing table tennis with you ring the weekend, but I have to prepare for the English Exam on Monday, sorry for not being able to come with you. But I'm free next weekend, we can go to see the table tennis match instead, what do you think? Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours
Liming
Ⅸ 总分五分小学英语作文没写going to扣多少分{四句话)
如果表达的是一般将来时，你没有用going to ,那就时态出现了问题，是大问题，题应该要扣2_3分。
Ⅹ 英语作文求助信 5分
Dear friend
How are you doing these days?
Recently I was in bad luck and got into some trouble and I really need your help.When I was riding a bycicle yesterday,I fell down and broke my leg.And I was asked to stay at home for a rest of a whole week.But I really dont want to cut the classes.So could you help me out?Do you have any good ideas to solve the problem?I'd like to receive any suggestion of yours.Thank you!