A. 写一篇短文。 (求英语作文)
Last Saturday mary's 13th birthday. The mother took her to a big store, ready to buy her a new dress. But mary do not like the new dress she wants to eat, so her mother bought two kilograms of apples. mary also want a picture book and colored pencils, and her mother bought her.
B. 写一篇英语短文
If I have a robot, I want him to do many things, you can rece the burden on the people, so that people can have a rest period will not be tired.
Robot for workers to build the housing, housing decoration, people let him do more than the beautiful house, workers no longer tired.
Nanny robot can do much to help his mother with household chores so that her mother was not home tired, so tired home sick.
A robot for astronauts for space exploration was done to rece the work of the astronauts, but also be able to fully replace the human work.
Into a robot to the police, arrested the first time when the bad guys will be a problem, and sometimes the police have Qiqingliuyu, perhaps by the police to seize the bad guys, bad guys beg for mercy, police may take him, and the robot will not do, whether bad guys are down , Or beg for mercy and will not let go of. Police also easy to work with robots, human might be easy for some.
如果我有一个机器人,我想让他做许多事,可以让人减轻负担,让人们能有休息时间,不会很累。
机器人能为工人建房屋,装修房屋,让他做得比人做得更漂亮的房子,工人不再劳累。
机器人能为人做保姆,帮妈妈做家务,让妈妈不再为家中劳累,为家累得生病。
机器人能为一名航天员,为人们做太空探测,减少宇航员的工作,而且能完全代替人类工作。
机器人能成警察,第次抓坏蛋时都会遇到难题,有时警察有七情六欲,也许被警察抓住坏蛋,坏蛋求饶,也许警察放了他,而机器人不会这样,不管坏蛋跪地也好,求饶也好,也不会放过的。警察也会工作轻松,有了机器人,人类也许会轻松一些。
C. 英语作文怎么写
With the continuous development of economy, our life is better, a lot of people live in the city, with tall buildings, the speed of a speeding car and fly in the sky planes, enjoying the advanced science and technology brings convenient, but some people prefer the countryside, in the countryside, we have clean air, static grace environment, fresh vegetables and fruits, but also have a small animal companions, enjoying the nature bring us comfort. I like the countryside very much. Everything here is beautiful. I prefer the small animals in the countryside to the cold machines in the city.
D. 写一篇英语小短文
Different ways of travelling
As is known to all, airplanes, trains and ships are common vehicles for travelling.The following are some of my views.
There are many advantages for travelling by plane.For instance,it is so fast that you only spend couple of hours travelling to the other side of the world.
I prefer to travel by train.Because I can appreciate the scenery along the trip.Although it costs me longer time to reach the destination, I think it's worthy.
Sometimes we also travel by ship.As I'm always sick on the ship, I'd rather not choose ships even if it's a good chance to feel the sea wind.
In my hunble opinion, 楼上写得很好,但不适合应试,阅卷老师不能很快找到给分点。
E. →怎样写英语小短文
英语小作文1《Lovely rabbit》
The rabbit is a kind of lovely again kind animal.It can run very quickly.It likes most the turnip and green vegetableses.Many persons consider as the pet to it to bring back a hello to keep.I also kept a rabbit, but it died.In fact, the rabbit is also more difficult to keep.We had better let rabbit return to in the great universe, letting it grown by itself, the oneself just seek the food to eat to.Still have, let us also protect other animals together.
2Who is she?
I have a friend. She is my best friend. She is a girl. She is ta11. She has two big eyes and a big mouth. She is a beautiful girl. She likes singing, and she is good at it. Who is she? She is Chen Jie.
3It is a big day for us
Today is a sunny day, I am very happy because my mother and I went to a library in the morning. I read a lot of books. We went home at 5 o'clock.
It is a big day for us!
4My Teacher
I like English class very much, because I can see my dear teacher-----Miss Liao.
Miss Liao is very beautiful. She has two big eyes , a small mouth .She is a good teacher. She is very clever .She play games with us in the class and we learn English happier and faster.
5Meet my mother
One year ago, my mother came back from Wuxi. My uncle, my aunt, my grand- mother, my father and I went to the airport to meet my mother. In my uncle’s car, I wanted to sleep, but I wanted to see my mother too. Finally, I fell to sleep. When I woke up, my mother sat next to me, we were very happy.
6The Concert
The forest will have a concert tomorrow. The snake, the lion and the elephant will play together. The snake will sing, the elephant will play the drums, and the lion will dance. The tiger will not play in the concert, but he will go to it!
7Cheng’s Climate
I live in Cheng, I like Cheng very much , because ChengDu’s climate is very pleasant .
In spring, It’s always warm in March and April . It often rains in May.
In summer, It’s always hot in June , July and August . The sun shines everyday.
In autumn, It’s always warm in September, October and November, and it rains sometimes, I like autumn best.
In winter, It’s often cold in December, January and February. I like this season too, because my birthday is in winter.
like Cheng and I like ChengDu’s climate too, Dear friends, welcome to Cheng!
8My winter vacation
I had a happy winter vacation. In the vacation I went to panda base with my parents.
There were many giant pandas and lesser pandas. The giant pandas were very nice .Their eyes and ears were black, the arms and the legs were black too. But their face and body were white. The giant pandas were fat very much .
I saw three baby pandas drank milk by themselves. One of them lie on the grassland, the other two pandas sat on the grassland. Every one of them had a milk bottle in their hand, they drank milk happily. When I saw them drank milk, I felt that milk was so delicious and I wanted to drink milk too.
But bamboo was the pandas’ main food .The giant pandas can eat 30 kilograms bamboo every day .
I was very happy in my winter vacation and I liked giant panda very much .
9I have nine little goldfish .Eight goldfish are all orange and one is black .I like the black one best. We call it Xiao Hei .Its body is black .It has two big and round eyes, a small mouth ,and a big tail. Though it’s very small ,it swims fast .
I often feed them and change water for them. We are good friends
10My favourite season
My favourite season is summer. I often wear my shorts and T-shirt. Sometimes I wear my jeans. In summer it is often sunny and hot. Sometimes rainy in summer. I usually swim with my father. Sometimes I eat ice-cream at home.
11My Chinses Teacher
I have a Chinses Teacher. Her name is Lui Xiaohong. She is from Lanchang. She’s very active and strict. She has two big eyes. She’s very nice.But she is short. She like to smile. I don’t know what season she like. Because I don’t know her very well. Her class is very funny, I like it.
In a word, I love my Chinese Teacher
12Father’s Day
Yesterday was Father’s Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn’t remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
13When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) instries. "Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology instry to make contributions to the cause of national computer. But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT instry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills
14China Sea listening to the story of the East China Sea Grandpa stresses. It is aware of the East China Sea using miles apart, can not be described in a vast sea, with 1000 960 high enough to describe the depth of the sea. It is very envious of the East China Sea. Therefore, it asked the East China Sea grandfather : "Grandpa East. Why then has the vast East China Sea so deep? "East grandfather told it :" I also another little drop of water, I and many partners around the clock to muddy pool together a small partnership, it becomes a small stream. But we do not stop pace, the United States is continuing to pour forward, and then became rivers. Finally many rivers come together, it becomes a sea, the formation of the East China Sea. "small drop asked : "We really have so much power? can be turned into a stream, into a river into the sea? "East Grandpa replied : "Of course not! can not become small rivers flow, so you can become the sea. Also, into the sea, Do not forget the existence of small water droplets, not to overlook the power of small water droplets, but it is the source of our life! Without it, We would not. "small drop in the East China Sea remember his grandfather, finally became the famous South China Sea.
15happy day
Today I’m very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.
It’s a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I’m singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what’s a happy day!
16Mothers Day
母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。今年母亲节那天,我为母亲买了一件毛衣和一束鲜花作为礼物,感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。母亲收到礼物后,非常高兴。
Mother’s Day comes on the second Sunday in May each year. On that day this year, I bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work for me. Receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.
17Do you like me?
Hello! Everyone. I’m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Look! I’m very lovely. My eyes are red. My ears are long. My hair is white. My tail is short. I like carrots very much. I have a good friend. She’s my little master. Her name is Zhou Xun. We always play games together. I like her very much and she likes me, too.
18Save Water 保护水资源
Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us. At home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it?
A poem:
Water has no taste at all.
Water has no color.
Water’s in the waterfall.
The pump.
The tap.
The well.
Water is everywhere around us.
Water is in the rain.
In the stream.
In the pond.
And in the river.
And in the sea again.
There isn’t much water on the earth. we must to save it. It is not inexhaustible.
It is very valuable.
19Dogs-狗
I like dogs.Many people like dogs.Dogs and people are friends.Some dogs also do different linds of work.Dogs are used to keep watch.They tell people when dangeris coming.Some dogs are used to keep people safe.They sre also used to move animals like sheep or goats.Some dogs are used for different kinds of hunting and some dogs help the police.
20Happy Holiday
May Day is coming. I’m so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday.
In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.
My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!
I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday
F. 英语小作文怎么填
一、分年段层层推进。
1、三年级——练说句子
语篇是由句子构成的,造句能力直接影响着写作能力。所以,加强造句训练显得尤为必要。在实际教学中,我在课内外有意识地让学生结合所学句型结构进行口头或书面造句,经常为学生提供一个结合实际生活的情景或语境,避免注重语言形式,忽视语言内容,脱离一定的情景或语境。三年级是英语学习的起始年级。三年级教材中很多话题是关于家人的,这样的话题比较能够引起学生的共鸣。作为学习英语的起始年级,我们重点要保护孩子学习的兴趣和信心,培养他们大胆说英语的习惯。毕竟英语不是我们的母语,要想写些什么,必须要知道用英语该如何表达。如在教授新版教材My family一课时,就可以训练学生用This is 来介绍自己的家人:This is my father /mother/ brother...
2、四年级——仿写句子
三年级到四年级是一个跨越。从单词到句子的书写,对于很多刚上四年级的学生来说很不适应。这是一个需要规范的年级——规范地书写一句话:开头大写、单词空格、字母占格准确、标点符号的使用。正确使用标点符号对正确表达思想十分重要,它也是写作基本功之一。由于中英文之间的标点符号有一定的区别,学生在实际使用中经常出现一些错误,常见的错误主要集中在句号、逗号、顿号、省略号、书名号等标点符号。在英语写作教学中我从学生的问题出发,把各种常见的标点符号的意义与使用规则对学生讲解清楚。
四年级的每个单元都有要求学生掌握的四会句型。教师在教授的过程中,可以依托四会句型,让学生进行仿写练习。如4AUnit 4 I like...这一课的重点就是用I like来表达自己的喜好。三年级的时候学过类似的内容,但是要求不一样。当时只要求学生能够用这个句型进行口头表达。在本课当中,要求学生能够书面表达这个句型。那么老师在教授的过程中就可以让学生进行仿写训练。用这个句型表达自己的爱好,可以是食物、水果、颜色、运动、动物等,把这些句子组合在一起,就可以成为一篇小短文。
我曾经让学生用4B教材中的There be句型来写自己的房间。有一个学生这样写道:Look, this is my bedroom. There is a desk near the window.There is a bed near the desk.There is a lovely doll on my bed . There are a lot of books in the bookcase. I love my bedroom. Do you like my bedroom?这篇小短文很生动地介绍了自己的房间,而且没有语法错误,句子通顺。这是学生模仿课文介绍我们的教室来写的。其中有一些并不是四会单词,但是因为不是考试,所以我允许他们看书来写。最后一句她还用了一个问句,使文章更显得有趣味性。后来我问这名学生,你怎么想到用一个问句来结尾的?她说:“我看了一篇英语短文上就这样写的.......”我想,如果我不布置这篇写作的练习,也许她就不会去阅读先关的文章。可以说写作训练也让部分孩子拓展了他们的学习渠道,从而更主动地去学习英语。
3、五年级——改编对话
经历了三、四年级的句子训练,五年级的教材内容主要以对话出现,同时每篇对话前面还有一个交代背景的引言。我们在教学的时候可以依托引言,进行对话改编练习。在课文学完后,给学生一些重点词句,让学生根据这些重点词句进行对话的改编。这个作业的设计可以分层进行:对于基础薄弱的学生可以是完成课文内容填空,这样相对来说降低了难度。而对于一些语言掌握比较扎实的学生,可以是在课文的基础上进行改编,用第一人称或第三人称进行转述。如在教完At the weekends一课后,可以让学生用第三人称介绍课文中的任务的假日活动;或者老师也可以提出更高要求:写一些自己和好朋友或家人的假日活动。
4、六年级——素材重组
到了六年级,学生相对来说词汇已经比较丰富,学过的话题也比较多。这个时候老师可以结合每个单元的主题,有针对性地设计一些作文的练习。如6A Ben's birthday 学完后,可以让学生写My birthday. 第六单元Holidays学完后,可以写My favourite holiday.我曾经让学生以这个为主题写过短文。有一个同学大约写了有200个词,高考的要求也不过如此。而且该生写得相当生动。不仅将这个单元的句型运用其中,更是综合了三、四、五年级的相关内容。如I usually do...on that day. My father likes doing.... 文章的最后她还用感叹句来抒发了一下感情:How happy we are on that day!
在这一系列有层次的训练中,学生的语言水平提升很快。而且学生为了写得更好,会主动阅读一些英语读物。对于一些英语水平本就比较高的学生来说,更是让他们得到了提升的空间。
二、多途径扎实训练
1、同义句转换训练。在小学生的英语作文中,句型单调重复是一个普遍现象。小学高年级学生已经学习了一定数量的句型,进行同义句转换训练的时机也已经比较成熟。比如,‘My favorite class is English.’可以用‘I like English best.’转换,‘I’m going to take a bus to Shanghai.’可以用‘I’m going to Shanghai by bus.’转换,等等。
2、中英文互译。虽然我们提倡学生写作时用英语思维进行表达,但是受到母语思维的影响和干扰,所以在学生作文中出现的所谓“中国式英语”还是很多的,这是一个现实问题。比如,学生常把“我喜欢的食物是面包。”翻译为“I like the food is bread.”,把“我有时和妈妈一起购物。”翻译为“I sometimes with mother together go shopping.”等等。面对这样的问题,除了继续大力培养英语思维外,对学生进行适当的中英文互译训练是有益处的,能让学生更好地理解母语和英语在表达方式上的差异,从而更好地用英语表达。
3.看图写话式写作训练
这种方式,中文课上经常用,可以拿来主义用在英语课上。教师出示与所教课文有关的单词图片和任务对话挂图,让学生发挥想象写成短文并在班级交流。如笔者教5Aunit 9 Shapes 这篇课文后,老师出示了一些图,全由图形组成(汽车,木头人等)让学生运用课文上所学的内容写一段话,学生能把抽象的图形综合运用,并自如的运用了课文句型What shape is it?It’s a ….The nose is a…The head is a…
4.连环画式写作训练
小学生最爱看幽默的图画,或有连续性的故事连载,教师可巧妙地把每篇课文的小短文Reading PartE部分改成连环画式的插图,让学生在会读的基础上,给连环画配英文注解,这是非常受学生喜欢的一种方式。如笔者在教6Aunit 1 Mr Smith takes a walk in the park 这篇小短文时,机械性教学跟读学生并不积极参与,老师把这段改成连环画式插图,让学生用英语作备注,学生大多都能进入故事情节中,自然而然地把这篇小短文的重点难点掌握了。这种方式又称为插图式写作。
5、半框架式写作训练
这种方式称为大纲式写作,常常用于概括课文中的重点情节。如笔者教5AUnit 3时课文中出现了许多学生以及他们的爱好,学生读完课文后,笔者安排如下框架让学生完成小作:Ben’s hobby is________.His brother’s hobby is _____________.He likes________ stamps. Yang Ling likes__________.But Helen likes__________.Mike likes________They have good hobbies.这种写作在课上就能完成。更有利于巩固课文。
6、阅读式写作训练
小学高年级段的学生要有一定的阅读能力,但是小学生的阅读材料选择有点难,很多学生反映买了课外读物看不懂。其实教师可利用学生写的内容,作为校本课程,互相传阅并帮助修改。这种方式比纯粹修改病句好多了,所以又称修改式写作。
7、听写式写作训练
6A和6B安排有听力训练(Part D)学生听完后填词,并不能完全听懂这一段,学生可以在老师讲解帮助的基础上完成听力小短文的写作,同样每个单元的歌曲,有些老师并不教,其实老师可以和学生唱歌,并让学生填歌词,有些学生喜欢流行歌曲,老师就和他们一起欣赏和演唱,熟练时,学生填歌词,如《take me to your heart》 《big big world》《I wish you merry Christmas》等。
8、采用案例分析,及时纠正语言错误。
学生的作文中出现错误是难免的,应该允许学生在作文中犯错,关键是让学生学会从错误中学习。对于学生作文中的错误,应该指出并及时纠正,给学生一个正确的语言规范。在实际教学中,我经常结合具有典型错误的学生作文案例进行分析,及时纠正。下面这篇作文是学生的原文,里面划线部分的错误是典型的,有标点使用错误,有大小写错误,有用词错误,有动词时态错误,有动词语态错误,有单复数错误,还有句子结构错误等。
实践证明,反复指出并及时纠正学生作文中的语言错误,有利于减少学生作文中的错误,更有利于学生形成正确的语言规范。
三、巧评价,激发学生的写作内驱力。
要激发学生写作的兴趣,增强学生写作的自信心,不断提高学生的写作能力,让学生体验写作的快乐感与成功感,就需要教师合理地运用评价方法,充分发挥评价的导向、激励、调节等功能,激活学生的写作内驱力。在写作教学中,我主要采用了以下三种方法:第一,展示学生作品。定期把所任教班级中的优秀作文打印出来,并装订成作文选,每位学生一本,要求学生认真阅读同学的作文,也要求学生带回家与父母分享。第二,评选写作优秀之星和写作进步之星。对学生的每次作文进行等级评定,根据评定的等级评选出一定数量的写作优秀之星和写作进步之星,并把结果公布在英语家校联系单。第三,英语测试增加“作文”项目,并且作为基本题出现。以前的英语测试卷上没有“作文”项目,或是仅把“作文”作为附加题,这样的试卷没有给学生一个明确的写作上的评价导向,或者说是评价的随意性比较大,这样就导致学生在思想上不重视写作,也导致学生的写作能力发展滞后。
小学生英语写作能力的培养不是一蹴而就的,需要教师坚持不懈地用心培养,需要教师采用合理、有效的写作训练策略,包括教材资源的开发利用,语言输入与输出并举,开展写作基础训练,改变学习方式和评价的介入等。笔者以为,只要教师坚持长期进行写作训练,不断创新写作训练策略,小学高年级学生的写作能力必定会有一个质的飞跃。
G. 用英语写一篇作文
Nowadays, there appears a phenomenon that the western customs are spreading into the east countries step by step, thus making many inhabitants who live in big cities enjoy themselves on these western festivals such as Christmas Day, April Fool’s Day, etc. Such phenomenon shows us that the world people are getting close graally and the world is becoming smaller and smaller as well. Therefore, in my opinion, it’s a normal phenomenon s well as a necessary trend.
First of all, it shows that we Chinese have become much opener rather than clinging to some very old customs, which are opposite our living. Looking back on the history, we can find the answer to why our China was very poor and weak in the 1800’s. Yes, the answer is that we closed ourselves not to let other countries know about us, and this led us to a very hard road on which we suffered many wars that many European countries launched. So I think it is more than necessary to accept other customs instead of closing ourselves. Of course, festivals are just the beginning.
What’s more, the Open and Reform Policy results in this. So I want to say it is a great achievement for the policy. Since we took the policy into practice, our country is developing with a rapid speed. No doubt it is an essential trend.
Last but not the least, we may get closer and closer not only to our home friends but also to many foreigners. We can never feel embarrassed for not knowing the other’s customs and manners. And more misunderstandings can be avoided as well.
To sum up, the trend has its great advantage to a certain extent. However, if we admire the western customs too much, it will be a disadvantage because China is our own country, all of us should enjoy a patriotic heart. Wish in the near future, we can see the situation that westerners are enjoying themselves on the Spring Festival.
参考资料:英语作文网
H. 英语作文怎么写啊
思路:
审好题
仔细审查所给的内容提示(包括文字和图表等),明确要求写的内容,确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等,理顺思路,确定主旨。
看要点,写片段
对于易于表达的内容,一次成句;对于一时难于表达的内容,写出词组。此时,既注意不遗漏内容要点,也不要随意添加任何内容。
步骤:
定句型,连词成句
这个环节是成文的关键,一定要注意做到:
(1)选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上,鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。
(2)写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。
(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话,用变通的方法,以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话,表达起来似乎很难,但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.
(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”,不可写成:Shesleptvery late.应该写成:Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”,不可写成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反,表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.
连词成句,添减相宜
单句写出后,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。
即:文章的开头(Introction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中,还要注意以下几点:
(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题,也是个逻辑思维方面的问题,这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点,你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。
(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等,表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。
(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套,给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要,与整个文章浑然一体。
尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。
检查,修改,定稿,誊写
检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序,这时要对照题目要求,认真检查以下几点:
(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。
(2)体裁格式对不对。
(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。
(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯,是否达意。
(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。
经典题例
下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例,谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。
原题介绍
目前,扬州正在创建(create)全国文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity)。作为一个中学生,我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢?我们又如何为这个活动作贡献(makecontributionto)呢?请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。
Nowadays,________________________________________________________________
解题步骤
第一步:认真审题,明确写作体裁、提示要点、文章的时态、人称和词数。
分析:
这篇作文的体裁是倡议书。文章主要有5大提示要点,考生可以用笔将这些要点圈出来。1.扬州正在创建全国文明城市。2.作为一个中学生在学校怎么做才能称得上是一个文明的人?3.作为一个中学生在家怎么做?4.作为一个中学生在公共场所怎么做?5.我们又如何为这个活动作贡献呢?
这篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。人称用第一人称。词数100个左右。
第二步:分析提示要点,用简明的英语写出要点。
分析:五大提示要点只有第一要点是限定的,考生可以直接翻译。其余四大要点都是半限定的、半开放性的。考生需要根据文章主题的需要联系实际生活进行适当发挥。不同的考生会有不同的答案。这部分既是写作的重点也是难点。考生可用简明的英语写出要点。如:Atschool: keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home : helpparents dosome housework. In public places: obey the traffic rulesdont maketoo much noise . make a contribution to this event: giveoutleaflets to make people understand the importance ofthisactivity.
第三步:列出写作提纲,并将要点扩展成句。
开头(Introction):Yangzhouiscreating a National Civilization City. As middle schoolstudents,weshould try our best to become civilized persons.
正文(Mainbody):
At school, we should keep our classroom cleanandtidy every day. We shouldnt throw about rubbish.
At home, we should help our parents dosomehousework.
In public places, we shouldnt make much noiseinpublic places. We mustnt cross the road until the trafficlightsturn green.
We can make a contribution to this event bygivingout leaflets to the citizens to make them understand theimportanceof this event and take part in it.
结尾 (conclusion):Iam sure Yangzhou will become a National Civilization Citysoon.
第四步:组句成文。
分析:根据文章内容和要求,可以适当调整以上句子的先后顺序。为了使文章连贯自然,表达准确,适当加一些表达并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词,然后组成文章,这时如果发现文章词数不够,可把短语变成句子,也可增添一些与表达内容有关的短语或句子。如:表达“在家”,不用“athome”.而用“When we areathome.”如果发现文章词数超过要求,可以将句子变成短语或两句并一句。
第五步:计划时间,认真检查、修改。
分析:
中考英语作文一般要求在20分钟内完成。因此,考试时间有限,必须合理安排。成文后必须认真检查修改。特别注意以下几点:
1.内容是否符合要求,要点有无遗漏或误解。
2.句子是否符合英语习惯,句型是否正确。
3.是否有语法错误。特别是冠词、名词的复数、代词、主谓一致、时态、语态等方面。
4.是否有拼写错误。
5.书写是否有不清楚或不易辨认之处。
6.大小写和标点符号是否使用得当。
7.词数是否符合要求。
第六步:认真誊写。
分析:
注意书写清楚、规范,卷面整洁。中考20分作文,有两分卷面整洁分。
下面是修改过的作文:
Yangzhou is creating a National CivilizationCity.As middle school students, we should try our best tobecomecivilized persons.
First, when we are at school, we should keepourclassroom clean and tidy. And we shouldnt throw aboutrubbish.Second, we should help our parents do some housework athome.Third, we shouldnt make much noise in public places. Besides,wemustnt cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.Whatsmore, we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order tomakethem understand the importance of this event and take partinit.
If everyone makes a contribution to thisevent,Yangzhou will become a National Civilization City soon.
I. 英语短文写作应该怎样写比较好
英语写作是语言应用的一个重要方面,也是语言能力测定的重要手段,衡量写作水平的标准便是看其是否能用学过的语言材料,语法知识等用文字的形式来表达描述.
书面语言表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达.先是思维,把要写的东西在脑中思考,这往往是个别的,孤立的一些素材,很凌乱琐碎;因此要对此进行组织,把这些思维作出整理,使其条理、系统化,但这还是较粗糙的,可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误;最后才是表达,把组织过的材料仔细推敲,确无问题了再落笔成文.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等,这就是写作.上述的三个过程,最难的就是第三个过程,这需要我们有较好的语法知识,掌握一定数量的句型,习惯用语,熟练的写作技巧,这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来.
总之,要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
那么,究竟怎样才能写好作文呢?
阅读优秀范文
首先要搞好阅读.阅读是写作的基础,在阅读方面下的功夫越深,驾驭语言的能力也就越强.所以要写好英语先要读好英语,在语言学习方面狠下苦功,教科书要读透,因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文,文笔流畅,语言规范,精彩的一些课文段落要背诵.再就是要进行大量课外阅读,并记住一些好文章的篇章结构.
加强练词造句训练
其次,要加强练词造句的训练.词句对作文相当于造房的材料,无好材料就造不出好房子.平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累,把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记.平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录,再对照正确句子,使地道的英语句子如同条件反射,落笔就对.
了解英语写作格式
还有,要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式.可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书,对英语写作有一个初步的概念,如怎么写议论文,如何提出论据,如何展开,如何确定中心句;又如,英语信的格式,如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等,然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习.
用英语写日记
要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯.经常用英语记日记,等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法.在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等,使文句更优美生动.还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔.写好后对照范文,找出差距,然后再练习,这对提高英语作文也很有帮助,在游泳中学会游泳,只有多练习才能练好.
总之,平时学习语言素材积累多了,体裁格式记住了又经常练习不断提高,到作文下笔时就会得心应手,水到渠成