小学英语作文点评

⑴ 英语作文教师评语

Teachers’ Remarks
In my school,our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after
final exam.And then I have to bring it to my parents.Our head teacher will put our scores of
mid-term exam and final exam on it.And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the
school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct.In order to have a
good winter holiday,I have to make my parents happy.So I always try my best to earn a good
evaluation from my head teacher.In front of him,I am always a good boy.So,I always have a
nice remark.

⑵ 英语作文教师的评语

In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.

⑶ 英语作文点评 谢谢

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⑷ 英语作文请求点评

以下是你的错误：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正确：started
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正确：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正确：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正确：believe

5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建议：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.

6. They are helpful.
建议：They are indeed helpful to me.

7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建议: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.

8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建议：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.

9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建议: I wish I could master this language in the future.

⑸ 英语作文点评

建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结回果冲突。可改为答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)

⑹ 帮我点评一下英语作文

我给12分，六年级写这样已经不错了的。

My
Favourite
Sport

Hello,everybody!do
you
like
sport?If
you
insist
on
it,it
will
be
good
for
your
health.

what
is
your
favourite
sport?
My
favourite
sport
is
swimming
and
it
is
very
interesting.otherwise
I
can
play
water
with
my
friends
in
the
swimming
pool.
I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.

点评：1.注意句子之间的分段，

2.在写swimming的时候，注意可以用it代替的，否则会因为重复觉得啰嗦了。

3.既然可以快慢自如的游泳了（I
can
swim
fast
or
slowly），就不要说我游的不好了（I
can't
swim
very
well
now），所以可以用be
good
at
的短语来说，虽然我不擅长（专业）游泳，但是我非常喜欢它。（I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.）

呵呵，没有改太多，希望你能学到东西哦！！！

⑺ 小学英语作文的评语跟小学语文的评语有什么不同

英语作文的评语一般针对语言方面的多一些，语文的作为不仅有语言，还有构思，布局，思想内容等方面的评价。

⑻ 英语作文评语大全

依式行文,文笔素源朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful

⑼ 关于英语作文的点评，100字左右的英语点评即可

Michael Jackson's death, I am very sorry. I believe that many people like him, will. But like you said, because he is a shining star. His case will affect many people. I believe that many years later, when people mention the name Michael Jackson, he will become a much-told story.

⑽ 如何写英语作文课评课稿

写作思路：来不要平铺直源叙地进行，要注意及时地、不断地变化描写的角度，使描写更加具体，给读者主体化之感。做到条理清楚、自然、明白，不杂乱，要倾注自己的思想感情。

一、教育理念新：

1、 体现了任务性教学以学生为主体，以人的发展为本的教育理念。从这堂课的题目来看，老师与学生的训练很默契，

2、 通过各种各样的课堂活动，注重对学生动机、兴趣、意志、信心等非智力因素的培养。

二、授课方法活

1、 运用现代化的教学手段，给学生创设了良好的语言交际环境。

2、 学生参与面广。据我统计，整堂课有30位左右的同学站起来发言。

3、 课堂互动频繁。师生之间的一问一答，生生之间的pair work、group work使课堂动了起来，活了起来。

三、组织能力强

1、 运用多种教学手段。能用不同手段完成不同任务。

2、 有亲和力。上课时老师始终面带笑容，平等待人，对学生耐心启发，循循诱导，课堂气氛轻松和谐。在这种氛围下能充分发挥学生的积极性和能动性。

3、 应变能力强。能妥善解决课堂上出现的随机问题，并与教师设计的课堂进程以及提出的各项要求同步。