⑴ 怎样评价一篇英语作文
谈如何写好英语作文评语。然而，在当前的英语教学实践中，存在这样一种现状：教师重内视英语写作训容练，但却忽视对学生作文的反馈，未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色。总之，教师只有把评价学生的写作自始至终放在发现学生字、词、句、段、文方面的优秀之处和可取之处，并时而通过评语与他们促膝谈心，表达特别的关注和爱护，学生才能从遭遇失败到尝试成功，从惧怕写到乐于并善于写，进而全面提高自身的英语写作能力。
⑵ 英语作文评价大全
说真的，我很讨厌淅沥的小雨，它们是那么的缠绵，总会使心烦涌入心头，惊涛拍浪，挖心的难受．因此在这样的雨天我没有在雨中漫步的情怀．但在北方由于在黄河以北降雨量少，注定淅沥的小雨会是夏天的常客．于是我也有些厌恶夏天，好在夏天还有一位代言人——暴雨，使我对夏天有了一丝的眷恋．
我喜欢暴雨有种近似痴迷的程度，因为暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，给人一种亲切感．下暴雨时我喜欢将窗子开到最大，将手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨点落下时针扎般的痛，那时却感觉不到疼，有的只是毅力的考验．张大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一种久违的香气，它会使我想起曾今那充满鸟语花香的大自然．
今天又一场暴雨过后，我遥望天际发现天空是那么美，头顶的一片天是那么的湛蓝，蓝的没有一丝杂质，它又是那么的飘渺，好像是七仙女抛下的一件蓝色的薄纱在空中飘舞．不远处还是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黄色，那种颜色给人一种压抑的感觉．于是我寻找蓝灰的交界处，那里本应是逐渐的过度色，而大自然却巧妙的嵌进去一朵还未完全舒展的云，刹那间我感受到了活力，那是生命的诠释．突然明白再阴的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出现的那一刹那．
那是一幅美丽的油画，是大自然给予人类的享受，更是自然给我们敲响的警示钟，如果没有人类保护大自然，恐怕以后连那雨过天晴的后的一丝感动也会一去不复返，至少我们会失去对生命的另一种诠释
⑶ 英语作文 一部电影的评价 用英语写一篇 关于一部电影的评价
Titanic
A precious stone which called "The Heart of Ocean"brought a love story between Rose and Jack.
They met on Titanic and fell in love with each other.On the way to love,they came across many obstacles but surmounted.Four days after the Titanic set out,a very big iceberg floated towards her.The ship was holed by an iceberg.Many people cannot be saved besides Rose and Jack.Death is the biggest obstacle for love to surmounte.In other to save Rose,Jack lay down his life.
In this movie,when teh ship suffered the unexpected,some people would rather help other people than save themselves,such as the sailors and the musicians.They moved me the most.This movie made me thought a lot in some fields,such as relationship of the people around you.For example,when we are facing love,how to express our feeling to our lovers and deal the problem about love with them;When we are facing the social problems,how to settle them perfectly?Let's suppose we are on the Titanic and taking different positions,what we should do when the unexpected coming?In my opinion,diferent people take the different positions and we do different things in society,but the most important thing is that we should assume our responsibilities.
As a whole,this movie not only has a wonderful plot but also provide food for thought.(发人深思)
⑷ 怎样评价一篇英语作文
首先，应当理解题意；其次，应善于谋篇布局，而不是生硬得翻译，在每个论内点开始时最好要有一定的容连接词，比如first,second,third;first
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all,then,in
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more,finally；再者，应当善于运用高中阶段所学的各种句型语法，比如定语从句、同位语从句、动名词的符合结构等等还有一些常用的句子，应善于积累；最后就是整体的事了，段落安排是否合理、书面是否工整、尽量减少语法错误和拼写错误、字数在80到120之间。
⑸ 对一篇很难的英语作文的评价（不少于50个单词）用英文
Response Paper of The Alchemist
The Alchemist narrates a story of a Santiago who has a reoccurring dream that he can find his treasure near the Pyramids. Santiago, a shepherd, is guided by the king of Salem. Then he sells all his sheep in order to follow his dream. On his trip, he suffers many hardships as he loses all his money three times; he crosses the sea of death Sahara and even his life is in danger many times. Each danger he faced was worse than the one before. But under the guidance of the alchemist he overcomes all the obstacles in his heart. Therefore he always lands on his feet, and finally gets to the Pyramids. At the end he knows where his treasure is.
From The Alchemist we can see that the way is rough for Santiago to pursue his dream. He gives up the way his father arranged to be a priest in order to travel. He gives up being a shepherd which he knows everything a shepherd should know. He also gives up being a crystal merchant’ assistant which is promising. Afterwards he leaves Fatima who he loves. All he has done is only for one purpose – his dream. When we stand before our dreams, perhaps we will try to grab it. But how many of us can stick to the end? It turns out to be not enough that we just possess dreams and ideals. When we face our dreams, should we be as fearless, resolute, and perseverant as Santiago? Or should we be like the crystal merchant who regarded his dream as a reason to go on living? Or even should we be the robber, who met with the boy next to the Pyramids who doesn’t believe his dreams at all. The answer is without any doubt. Our life is finite. If we waste time sighing about life’s unfairness, our dreams will eventually become our imaginations. Santiago gives us an example of his achievements by his personal legend no matter how hard and dangerous the trip was, it cannot sway his determination.
Do we really follow our heart when we are on the way to pursue our dreams? In the book of The Alchemist, the boy asked the alchemist, “Why do we have to listen to our heart?” “Because, wherever your heart is, that’s where you’ll find your treasure,” the alchemist answered. “You will never again be able to keep it quiet. Even if you pretend not to have heard what it tells you, it will always be there inside you, repeating to you what you’re thinking about life and about the world.” That’s why we have to be clear what our hearts tell us. “You will never be able to escape from your heart. So it’s better to listen to what it has to say. That way, you’ll never have to fear an unanticipated blow.” Living in this diversified and changeful society, sometimes we ignore the voice from deep in our heart. Most of the time, we hear it. However we don’t have the courage to believe it and accept it.
Those words from Melchizedek, the king of Salem, are echoing in my mind while I am reading the book. “When you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.“ “At a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what’s happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate. That’s the world’s greatest lie.” Indeed, any dream can be realized in this world, but it depends on whether the person possesses a heart of tenacity. When we focus on conquering the difficulties, our fate is controlled by ourselves.
Through this book the author is trying to tell us a truth. It’s that our lives will be brilliant and meaningful only when we to be a person who follows one’s heart, who believes in oneself, and who is dauntless to move forward to approach one’s goal. Santiago is not only a role of The Alchemist, but he also is a guide that leads us to see the beauty of life.
我自己写的，是一本书的观后感，行不？？
⑹ 评价别人的英语作文
Li Hua is my seatmate and we are friends,too.He is much cleverer at studying English than I am.He is able to recite the an English passage after reading it over once as if he had a camera eye.Li Hua not only studies hard himself but also can be ready to help others.when I have any troubles in English,he is always very patient to lend a hand to me.Besides,Li Hua thinks a lot of our friendship and never say anything to go against his friends.I must learn from him.
⑺ 如何用英语评论英语作文
先写一下文章总体内容，说说哪里好哪里不好，然后说说文章的现实意义。
⑻ 英语作文评语大全
依式行文,文笔素源朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
⑼ 朋友对我的评价英语作文
“如何作自我介招？”这个问题看上去似乎很简单，人人都会。其实并不然，也有说的不是很理想的。主要的现象有几下几点： 1、 不知从何说起。有很多同学当听到老师问：“Can you make a self-introction”时，首先迟疑几秒，然后怔怔的看着：“老师说什么呀？”这一类算是“无准备型”。自我介绍是你与人打交道，参加各类口语考试，职场面试不可或缺的一部分，同时也是非常重要的一部分。作为口语测试，测试的老师其实重点考查的是你运用语言的能力，而不是对你的背景的了解。所以想把口语学好的同学不妨大胆的秀一下。 2、缺乏逻辑性。还有一些同学在作自我介绍时，要么只说两句话名字，年龄；要么夸夸其谈但缺乏逻辑性。别看简简单单的一个自我介绍有时也能反映出一个人的逻辑思维和做事态度。 3、缺乏幽默感。幽默的开场除了可以营造出活泼和睦的气氛外，还能给对方留下深刻的第一印象，即使对象是以建立了朋友关系或同事关系的外国人，在酒会或聚餐等各式场合，同样可以用诙谐的方式来表现自我，使你和他们之间的关系达到更圆满的程度。 初学英语的各位人士，可以学着用一下；对于自认为用英语作自我介绍已经易如反掌的英语高手，不妨在平时也试试使自我介绍增添一些新意:) 1、 以星座为话题作自我介绍 I’m an Aries. Arians are supposed to be courageous leaders but troublesome followers. Half true. I’m definitely a troublesome. follower. (我是牧羊座的。 牧羊座的人据说是很有胆识的领导人物，但同时也是很会惹麻烦的部属。说对了一半，我的确是个麻烦的部属。) I’m a Leo. Some good Leo traits are: broad-minded, loving, faithful. Bad traits are: bossy, patronizing. I’m a typical Leo. I’m faithful but patronizing. 6park.com (我属狮子座。狮子座的优点是心胸宽阔、有爱心，以及忠诚；缺点则是专横、自以为是。我就是典型的狮子座，忠诚却又自负。) 2、I’m a person of principle. I do NOT compromise. Because I don’t smoke , I do NOT wear a T-shirt with a Marlboro logo, even if somebody gives one to me free. 我是个有原则的人，绝对不会妥协。因为我不抽烟，所以我也不会穿印有万宝路字样的T恤，即使有人免费送给我。 I’m a great salesman. I could sell a knockoff Windows 2000 to Bill Gates. 我是一个很棒的推销员，我能把盗版的Windows 2000卖给比尔*盖茨。 3、I love shopping! My mom(friends) says, I should become a legislator ‘cause I bring so many bills into the house. 我酷爱买东西！所以我妈（朋友）说我应该当国会议员的。因为，我把那么多的bill(账单/请愿书/法案)带进了the house(家里/议院)。 以上一些简单自我介绍只是个参考，希望想学英语的同学或是想把英语说得更漂亮的人士能够举一反三做出更具魅力符合自己个性的自我介绍。 Sweetness of your name fills my heart when I forget mine — like the morning sun when the mist is melted.
⑽ 对英语评价英语作文80词带翻译”
2010 will be end ,and 2011will be come .In the new year ,we must be have much wishes ,because new year means that things end and another things start.So we need to make a new year"s resolution in order to the second year will be better.I want to share my new year"s resolution with you. Firstly,i decide to try my best to learn english .because my english so poor that it affects my other subject.I willface many differences ,such as broadening my vocabulary, training my listening ,improving my write and so on. I must work hard because i don"t want to behind the times. Secondly ,i will give up watching football games because every time it takes me two hours ,which makes me not finish my homework .As a student ,study is our ty ,so i wii focused more on study and less on playing . In order to my future ,i will work hard！ 2010年将结束，2011即将到了。在新的一年，我们必须有很多的愿望，因为新的一年意味着事情结束和另一个东西开始.所以我们需要作出新的一年“的计划，以便在第二个今年将是更好的新年与你分享。首先，我决定尽我所能地学习英语。因为我的英语很差，它会影响我的其他的科目.都有不小的差距，如扩大我的词汇，我的听力训练，提高我的写作等。我必须努力工作，因为我不想落后于时代。其次，我会放弃，因为每看一次我花了两个小时，这使我无法完成我的作业足球比赛作为一个学生。，学习是我们的职责，所以我的将会更注重学习和玩少一点。为了我的将来，我会努力的！ 请采纳！（中英兼有）