A. 考研英语作文，求范文～
The increase of private cars has brought more and more serious air pollution and traffic jams in our city, especially in the rush hour.
So I think it’ time to promote the green travel at present. In my opinion, first, we’d better not travel by car unless it’s necessary. Second, people should be encouraged to choose the public transport. They can take a bus or the light rail. They can even go by underground. These ways of travel can save energy and rece air pollution .They can also improve the traffic conditi. Third, we should choose to walk or ride a bicycle if we don’t go far away. Travelling on foot or by bike provide us with a chance to make us stronger and healthier.
In a word , I believe that we can improve the environment as well as our traffic conditi if we all choose the green travel.
B. 考研作文2011年英语（二）的作文：2008,、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图 （望高手批改）
说实话来没有一句通顺，源建议重写。
1. striking contrast？
2.Japanese Car Brands
3.do not use "phenomenon".
4.no comments?
5.So chinglish.
如果真的要找错误的话，我可能会找到至少30个。
C. 09年考研英语小作文~~~
如果你的篇幅不是很长的话，会影响你的得分，如果很长则没事，但是绝对不会零分。
D. 09年考研英语大作文
网络的远与近
本来就是说网络拉近了人们的距离
同时也让人们只关注电脑，图片中每个人身边都隔了一道墙，说明网络让身边的人被墙阻隔，拉远了距离
写的应该是网络的好与坏的
没事，我就是这么写的，我挺你，不得偏题