Ⅰ 初中英语作文写作技巧有哪些
一、注意来审题
小作文的源审题(即审读材料)很重要,决定着文章的成败.因为一个小作文的材料中,往往隐含了若干个写作要求,如不细心审读,抓不到这些隐含的要求,就很容易出现错误。
二、注意语言的简洁
这一点体现在两方面.其一,小作文字数一般是100┄300字,受篇幅限制,语言要求简洁明了.其二,如果是写应用文,则语言也一定要简洁,因为语言简洁是应用文写作的最基本要求.
三、力求结构完整
小作文是片断性作文,而非篇章.虽如此,但不能一味忽略结构的完整性.一篇小作文如果能够做到结构完整,则效果会更好。
四、注意表达方式的运用
受文体的制约,一篇文章总以某种表达方式为主,同时兼用其他表达方式为主.小作文也应注意这一点.如江西省2002年中考语文小作文题为二选一,(1)通过某一情景或场面,描写你最喜欢的色彩.(2)就你最喜欢的色彩,发表议论.无论选哪一题,或描写、或议论,总得以一种表达方式为主.但如果能兼用其他表达方式,如兼用议论和抒情,表达自己对某种色彩的某中看法和喜爱之情,则能使短文大为增色.
Ⅱ 初中英语作文写作技巧
初中英语作文高分秘诀
1. 动笔之前,认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
3. 语言通顺,表达准确
(1) 避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2) 多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3).注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1) 语态、时态要准确无误。
2) 主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4) 注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如:
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。 .
B. 省略号 …… …
C. 顿号 、 无
(4) 描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
1) 外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2) 服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3) 内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4) 感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5) 动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5) 上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or …
2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …
3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4) 表示空间关系的过渡词:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5) 表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as …
6) 表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7) 表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8) 表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9) 表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10) 表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11) 表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12) 表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …
13) 表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4. 不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
(1) 迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。
(2) 小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3) 借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。
5. 锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:
(1) 句型多样化,不要I(We)……到底,使人觉得乏味。
(2) 适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。
(3) 进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句。
(4) 适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词。
(5) 偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感。
(6) 适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7) 上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。
6. 书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
7. 写完之后,勿忘检查
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
(1) 格式是否有错。
(2) 拼写有无错误。
(3) 语言是否用错。
(4) 时态、语态错误。
(5) 标点错误。
(6) 人称是否用错。
【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动,以免顾此失彼,影响全局。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。
Ⅲ 初中英语作文范文
2013年英语七年级上册作文,请同学们熟读下列范文,然后仿写:
1. My Friend(我的朋友)
I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is 12 years old. Her telephonenumber is 87634966 Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English andChinese. She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening tothe music. Her hobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl.We often help each other. We
are good friends.
2. 假设你是李枚,下面的照片是你的全家福,请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。Hello, everyone! I'm Li Mei. Look! This is myfamily photo. This is my grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is ateacher. He is 36. and my mother is 36, too. Who’s that boy? Oh, heis my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are students.
3. 假设这是TOM的房间,请你用80词左右介绍他的房间。
Look! This is Tom’s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on thebed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. Thecomputer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s baseball? Oh, It’s under the bed. Whatis on the floor? They are Tom’s shoes, socks and computer games. What do youthink of Tom’s room?
4. 介绍你的一日三餐。
Hello, everyone! I don’t like sports, but Ilike eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk,eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I likeFrench fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinner, I like fruits,vegetables and rice.
5. 以My Favorite…为题,写一篇短文
My favorite subject is English. I like itbecause it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a littleEnglish. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk inEnglish. I can see the English movies and read English books. I think it isuseful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
6. My English Teacher(我的英语老师)
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looksvery young. She's about thirty years old, and she wears glasses. She's funny .But she is strict with us. She wants us to study hard, Her lessons areinteresting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons. She isa good teacher, and we all like her.
7. 自我介绍
My name is Wang Ming. My birthday is June 5th.I am Chinese. I am a student. I study very hard. My favorite subject isEnglish. I like it because it is interesting. I can play the piano and thetrumpet, but not very well. I love swimming and I am good at it. Of all kindsof movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. I’m one of thebest students in my class. My teachers all say I am a good student. They alllike me and I like them, too.
七年级英语(下)书面表达
Unit 1
1. 写作话题:本单元以能力为话题,谈论自己或他人的能力。如会干或不会干…….
2.写作题目:假如你们学校幼儿园在暑假期间要招聘临时业余辅导员,请你写一则50词左右的招聘广告。要求:(1)喜欢孩子;(2)会唱,会画,会电脑;(3)工作时间:暑假。
参考作文 Help Wanted
Are you goodwith children? We need help for summer holiday . Can you help kids with sports? Can you help kids with music ?Can you paint ? Can you play computer games ?Come and join us ! Please call Wang Ping at 6367786 . Our e-mail address is [email protected].
Unit 2
1. 写作话题:本单元以日常生活习惯为话题,描述自己或他人的日常生活习惯。
2. 写作题目:根据下面提示写一篇50词左右的短文,介绍自己一天的活动安排情况。
参考作文
I usually getup at 6:30 . Then I have breakfast . At7:10 I go to school . We have fourclasses in the morning ., and three classes in the afternoon . At 4:30 p.m. Igo home . After supper I do my homework . I usually watch TV from 8:00 to9:00.in the evening . Then I go to bed at 10:00 .
Unit 3
1. 写作话题:本单元以如何到某地为话题,描述请某地的方式。
2. 写作题目:根据下面提示写一篇70词左右的短文,张静是我的好朋友,在青岛上学,她的家距离学校约3千米,她通常骑自行车去上学,大约用20分钟,但下雨时她乘出租车,大约5分钟。她的父母在离家8千米的一家医院工作,每天开汽车上班,大约要10分钟。
参考作文
Zhang Jing ismy good friend. She studies in Qing.Her home is about three kilometers from school. She usually rides her bike toschool and it takes her about twenty minutes .But when it rains, she goes toschool by taxi. It takes her only five minutes . Her father and mother bothwork in a hospital. It’s eight kilometers from their home. They take a car towork . It takes them about ten minutes.
Unit 4
1. 写作话题:本单元以规则话题,以祈使句表达规则。
2. 写作题目:根据下面提示写一篇60词左右的短文。Tom 正和他的一个朋友Jim 谈论他所在的学校。Tom 很不喜欢这所学校,原因是这所学校的规章制度太多。要点:(1)保持安静(2)不准吃零食(3)不准乱扔垃圾(4)不准打闹(5)按时上课(6)做好课前准备
参考作文
Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim hedoesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules forus.
1. Keep quiet in the classroom,please.
2. Don’t eat snacks in theclassroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.
3. Don’t throw around.
4. Don’t fight and chase aftereach other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.
5. Please arrive at the class ontime ,don’t be late. Or our teachers will be unhappy.
6. Get ready before the class. Don’tlook for anything after the class begins.
If we break anyone of them, we will be punished.
Unit 5
1. 写作话题:本单元以动物话题,描述自己喜欢的动物及原因。
2. 写作题目:根据下面表格的内容,以A Trip to the Zoo写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下动物园新来的两只动物。
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参考作文
A Trip to theZoo
Welcome to the zoo. There are two newanimals. The panda’s name is Feifei .She is from China .She likes eating bamboo. Sheis lovely and shy. She is only two years old. The other animal is a lion .Hisname is Karl. He is from Africa. He likeseating meat. He is very dangerous and strong. He is three years old .We all like them.
Unit 6
1. 写作话题:本单元以人们正在进行的活动话题,用现在进行时描述自己或他人正在进行的活动。
2. 写作题目:假设你叫魏梅,根据下面提示给你的朋友Helen 写一张明信片,介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么,不少于60词。提示: 现在是星期三晚上八点,你的爷爷和爸爸在下象棋,奶奶和妈妈在看电视,姐姐在房间看书,哥哥在玩电脑游戏。你们很开心。
参考作文
Wednesday
Dear Helen ,
How are you? It’s eight o’clock in theevening now. What are you doing now? People in my family are doing differentthings. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing gamesvery much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my motherare watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having agood time.
See you soon.
Love,
Wei Mei
Unit7
1. 写作话题:本单元人们在各种天气里的活动话题,描述天气情况和人们正在进行的活动。
2. 写作题目:你家乡的气候怎样?你喜欢什么样的气候?以The Weather in My City 为题,写一篇介绍天气的短文。
参考作文
The Weather in My City
Hello, everyone! I’m from Shengyang. Do you want toknow what the weather is like here? Let me tell you!
Shengyang is in the northeast of China. In spring, the weather ischangeable(多变的).Sometimesit’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold.. Insummer, it’s hot.. But I like it very much because I like swimming. The autumnin Shengyang is very nice. It’s neither too hot nor too cold .In winter, it’svery cold. You can see heavy snow everywhere. I like snow. I like to makesnowman with my friends.
Unit8
1. 写作话题:本单元以问路指路为话题,向他人问路或指路。
2. 写作题目:假设你叫李雷,这个星期天是你的生日,你准备在家举办一个生日聚会,聚会在六点钟开始。你邀请了你的一些朋友参加,Susan 也在其中, 可她不知道去你家的路。你家住在Bridge Street,乘坐六路或八路公共汽车在Bridge Street站下车,下车后直走,然后在第一个十字路口右拐,左边有一个邮局,你家就在邮局的对面,房子是红色的,很容易找到。请根据所给信息给Susan写封邮件。
参考作文
Dear Susan,
ThisSunday is my birthday. I’ll have a birthday at my home. It starts at 6p.m..Would you like to come? I’ll ask some of my friends to come. My home is on Bridge Street. Youcan take a No.6 or No.8 bus, and get off on Bridge Street. Go straight ,and then turnright at the first crossing .You can see a post office on your left. My home isacross from the post office. It is a red house. You won’t miss it..
Yours,
Li Lei
Unit9
1. 写作话题:本单元以外表为话题,描述人的外貌爱好服饰等。
2. 写作题目:根据以下信息用英语写一则寻人启事。Peter,今年四岁,今天在商店和妈妈走散。中等个头,短头发,小圆脸,大眼睛,上身穿白色的T恤,下身穿白裤子,脚穿一双黑色的运动鞋,还背着一个蓝色的小背包,请看到他的顾客把他领到广播室。
参考作文
Ladies and Gentlemen, we are look forPeter. Peter, a four-year-old boy, was missing in the shop. He is of mediumheight, and he has short hair. His face is round, and his eyes are big. Hewears a white T-shirt and white trousers, and a pair of black sports shoes. Andhe has a blue bag. If someone finds him, please bring him into the BroadcastingRoom. His mother is there. Thank you .
Unit10
1. 写作话题:本单元以买东西服务用语为话题,谈论价格数量等。
2. 写作题目:根据以下信息为朱老大饺子屋( Zhu Laoda Dumpling House )写一则广告。提示:(1) 本店饺子品种齐全,个大味美(2) 现有两种特价饺子:鸡蛋蔬菜饺子每10
个3元;牛肉饺子每10个5元(3)欢迎光临本店。地址:光明路118号。电话685-8588
参考作文
Zhu Laoda Dumpling House
Would you like to have mplings? At ZhuLaoda Dumpling House ,we have all kinds of mplings and they are all large anddelicious.
Now we have two great specials! Special 1has eggs and vegetables and is just 3 yuan for 10. Special 2 is only 5yuan for10 and has beef and vegetables.
Welcome to our house! The address is No.118 Guangming Road.Our telephone number is 685-8588
Unit11
1. 写作话题:本单元以学校旅行为话题,谈论学校旅行及假期生活,描述过去发生的事情及感受。
2. 写作题目:暑假已经过去,同学们都相互询问时如何度过这个假期的,请你用英语写一封信把你的假期和同学交流一下,向他们描述你的既有意义又充实的假期。提示:(1)坚持运动,锻炼身体(2)多读好书(3)旅游观光(4)当一名志愿者(5)帮助父母。
参考作文
Dear Li Ping,
I had a good time ring my summervacation. Here is my vacation to show you.
First I did sports and learned to ply tabletennis. It’s good for my health. Then I read some books .After that I enjoyedan interesting sight for two weeks. Also, I volunteered to serve in thevolleyball game. Of course, at home I helped my parents do some cooking ,washing and so on.
I think I had a wonderful time ring thevacation . Did you have a nice summer vacation ? P lease tell me !
Tom
Unit12
1. 写作话题:本单元以过去发生话题,谈论学校旅行及假期生活,描述过去发生的事情及感受。
2. 写作题目:根据下面提示写短文:上周星期天,刘明贺他的朋友在山脚下野炊。他们中的一些人正在做游戏,一些在跳舞,他们感到很放松。突然,刘明看到一头山羊正在跑。他对此很感兴趣,平且开始追它跑了很长一段时间。当他想起他的朋友们时,他不知道他在哪儿。他迷路了。在那时,一个农夫过来,在他的帮助下,刘明又找到了他的朋友们。他感谢这位农夫平且向你告别。
参考作文
Last Sunday, Liu Ming and his friends wentfor a picnic at the foot of the mountain. Some of them were playing games, somewere dancing , they felt very relaxed. Suddenly, Liu Ming saw a goat running .He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time . When hethought of his friends again. He got lost. At that time, a farmer came. Withhis help ,Liu Ming found his friends again. He thanked the farmer and said:Goodbye” to him.
Ⅳ 初中英语作文
My Favorite Book
Everyone has his favorite book. My favorite book isThe Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain who is from American。
The stories tell us about a adventures with the Tom Sawyer and his friends. The story takes place in a ST Petersburg Missouri in America. There are six people in the story, they are Tom Sawyer, Polly,Huck Finn,Joe, Becky and Injun Joe. The Injun Joe is the bad man of the story, so I hate him very much. My favorite scene is the Funeral scene, because it makes me move and laugh when I read here.
I think it is a great book in the world and it is worthy of being loved by many people.
Ⅳ 怎样写好初中英语作文
读清楚题意要求,了解作文的时态、规则及具体要求。在平时要多专积累单词,写作属时有利于拓展发挥;记牢语法的结构、用法,及语境等。了解在什么语境下应该用那种时态,减少语法错误。结尾要适度拓展并作出总结。
例文:This
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clean
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voilin.It's
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went
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boy,he
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reading
a
book
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tree.so,I
asked
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reading
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he
said:i'm
reading
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comic
book!
Ⅵ 初中英语作文格式及范文
一、书信格式
1 .信头。指发信人的地址和日期。从信纸的上端中央往右写。第一行写单位名称,第二行写门牌号和路名,第三行写市名、省名、国名,第四行写发信日期。学生写信时第一行写班级名称,第二行写系科名称,第三行写学校名称,第四行写市、省名称,第五行写国家名称,第六行写发信日期。如果是国内信件,国名可以不写。要特别注意英文地址写法顺序是从小单位到大单位。日期的写法有美英之分。英国的写法是:日,月,年,如 10th of October , 2002 .美国的写法是:月,日,年,如 October 10 , 2002 .例如:
Xiangyang Middle School (向阳中学)
No . 120 , Xinhua Road (新华路 120 号)
Cangzhou , Hebei Province 061001 (沧州市河北省 061001 )
P . R . of China (中华人民共和国)
October 20 , 2002 ( 2002 年 10 月 20 日)
2 .信内地址。指收信人的姓名和地址。低于信头 1 — 2 行,从左边开始写。第一行写姓名、头衔,第二行写单位名称,第三行写门牌号及路名,第四行写市、省名称,第五行写国名。写往学校的信,第一行写姓名、头衔,第二行写系科名称,第三行写学校名称,第四行写市名、省名及邮政编码,第五行写国名。商业往来信件及公函必须写信头和信内地址。亲友、熟人之间的信可以不写信内地址,信头处写发信日期就行了。它与信封上收信人姓名、地址完全一样。
3 .称呼。就是对收信人的称呼。信内地址下隔一、二行写称呼,其左侧与信内地址第一行对齐,称呼后面一般用逗号,但正式函件称呼后多用冒号。对不相识的男子,单数常用 Sir , Dear Sir ,或 My Dear Sir ;复数常用 Dear Sirs 或 Gentlemen .对不相识的女子,单数常用 Madam , Dear Madam ,或 My Dear Madam ;复数常用 Madams 或 My Dear Madams .对比较熟识的男子,普通称 Dear Mr .。。即可。对比较熟识的女性,普通称 Dear Mrs (或 Miss )。。。即可。
4 .正文。是书信的主要部分,一般从称呼下方隔一至两行处开始写正文。每段的第一个字母一般要缩进 3 — 5 个字母的空格。正文的内容要表达清楚,语言要简单明了,态度要诚恳礼貌。如果信中涉及的事情不多,可以一段到底,如果要讲的事情多,则可以分成几段,段与段之间常隔 1 — 2 行。
5 .结束语。是写信人对收信人的谦称,写在正文的下面 2 — 3 行处,从信纸中央偏右的地方写起,一般用 Yours (第一个字母大写)。若是亲戚(包括家人),可以写 Your loving son / sister / brother / daughter 等之类的表达法,若是对朋友,可以写 Your friend ;若是对老师,可以写 Your student .
6 .签名。一般写在结束语之下。
二、信封
英文信封的写法与汉语不同。收信人的姓名及地址应写在信封中下部,且先写姓名后写地址。寄信人的姓名及地址应写在信封的左上角,若是普通书信,也可写在信封背面。邮票贴在信封的右上角。在信封上常见的附加说明有“ Urgent (急件), Express (快件), Registered ( Regd )(挂号信), Airm ail (航空信)等”,要根据实际情况选用。下面是信封的格式:
怎么样,同学们?会用英语写信了吗?做一道中考题练练吧。
( 2002 河北省)根据提示和要求完成下面短文。
假如你( Li Lei )在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友 Jim 从英国给你寄来一件礼物—一件红色的衬衫,并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好,他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信( 100 个词左右)表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容:
①向 Jim 问好并对他表示感谢。
②礼物是你最喜欢的颜色,尺寸很合适,你非常喜欢。
③告诉 Jim 你近来很好,上周刚过完生日,生日聚会很热闹。询问 Jim 的近况,并表示希望他能来中国。
注意:①信的格式已经给出。②信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。
65Zhonghua Street
Shijiazhuang 050000
Hebei , China
June 21st , 2002
Dear Jim ,
How are you ? ____________________________________________________
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范文..
Your friend ,
Li LeiMy dearest Mother,
The mother‘s day is coming and I would like to say "Happy mother‘s day" in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day, I will stay away and can‘t give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself, so don‘t worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can‘t be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother‘s day.
Love,
Your so写作知识辅导——记叙文
Hi , dear friends .前几次讲的内容你们掌握了吗?这次我要给大家说说初中阶段常见的几种文体——记叙文、描写文、说明文的写法。咱们先说说记叙文吧。
记叙文是以写人、叙事为主要内容的一种文体,也是英语作文中最普遍、最基本的文体。它一般包括两种:事实记叙文和想象记叙文。事实记叙文是写真实事情,常用一般过去时;想象记叙文是写虚拟的故事,常用一般现在时。它们的特点都是通过对人物、事件和景物的描写,表现文章的主题和作者的思想感情。
记叙文写作的基本要求是什么呢?
①要有明确的中心思想。②记叙要清楚明白。③线索要清晰。④要有恰当的叙事角度。⑤选材要详略得当。
具体地说,记叙文写作要把握以下几点:
1 .记叙文所记叙的事件必须相关连。要有开头( beginning )、中间( middle )和结尾( end )。在必要时加入冲突( conflict ),以使情节曲折,跌宕起伏。一般说来,写记叙文应把握好六个要素: who (何人)、 what (何事)、 when (何时)、 where (何地)、 why (何因)、 how (怎么)。初中阶段多为叙事短文,一般应包括 where , who , what 这三个最基本的东西。
2 .写作时观点的掌握非常重要。记叙文常用第一人称或第三人称两种人称记述。用第一人称的角度记叙,使人感到亲切,读者很容易产生身临其境之感,相信真有其事。这种形式常用在写自传、本人的经历或记叙耳闻目睹的事件;用第三人称的角度记叙,使人感到客观。这种形式常用在对重大事件的客观报导,以及记叙他人的经历或事迹。
3 .常见的叙述方式有:①顺叙。按事情发展的顺序或时间顺序进行叙述。②倒叙。把事情的结局或某个突出的片段提到前面叙述,然后再按照事情的顺序叙述下去。③插叙。在叙述过程中,由于某种需要,暂时把叙述的线索中断一下,插入有关的另一叙述。④夹叙夹议。一方面叙述事情,一方面对这件事情加以分析或评论。
请看下面的例文。要求:写一篇题为 Planting Trees 的文章。
Planting Trees
It was fine on March 12 , 2001 . I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .
We arrived at the hill at eight o'clock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging , planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e . Among us , Wang Lin , our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill , he worked harder . When he finished his task , he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work .“ I must learn from him ,” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees , we smiled happily , forgetting our tiredness .
这是一篇记叙文,记叙了 2001 年 3 月 12 日上山植树的情况。文章主题鲜明,有条有理。 when (何时)、 where (何地)、 who (何人)、 what (何事)等交待的清清楚楚。
描写文是以描写为主要表达方式的文体,所谓描写就是作者用生动、形象的语言对
人物、事物和环境作具体形象的描绘和刻画,描写的主要作用是:①展现美丽的自然景色;②描写人物的外貌和内心世界;③交待人物活动的自然环境和社会环境。 在写作过程中,作者可以按空间位置顺序,由远及近,由上及下,由外到内,由前到后组织材料,也可以按作者视线转移的顺序组织材料,先看到的先写,后看到的后写。描写的基本方法按性质可分为主观描写和客观描写两种。所谓主观描写就是在描写过程中掺入作者自己的感受,寄托自己的主观感情,塑造自己的理想的形象;客观描写就是在描写过程中,作者不带或很少带主观的感情色彩,而只对人物或某物的特征客观地、就事论事进行描写。
请看下面的描述文:
Sunset
In order to see the sunset , I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill .
At that time , the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldn't even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill , the light became a bit yellow . After a short while , it was completely golden , then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud covered more and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back .
本文交待了看日落的时间、地点,详细地描写了日落的全过程。文章主要采用了客观描写方法,语言简洁,描写具体、生动。
下面该谈谈说明文了。
说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的文体。它主要用来说明事物的特点、发展变化规律、分析前因后果,目的在于使读者获得必要的信息,使人们对事物有个清晰、完整的了解和认识。说明文分为三种类型:实体事物说明文,包括说明书、广告、解说词等;事理说明文,包括理论性概念解释、书文简介、教材等;文艺性说明文,即要把说明的对象拟人化,进而编成一个故事介绍给读者。
写说明文要注意以下几点:
1 .要抓准特征。对某一事物予以说明,首先要弄清从哪些方面加以说明才能准确地反映被说明的事物。一般说来,说明事物可以从被说明事物的颜色、形状、形态;性质、性能、习性;原因、原理;作用、用途、功能;危害、影响;结构;操作过程;发生、发展的规律等方面着手。但是,每一事物都有它自己的特征,因而显示出了这一事物与其他一事物的根本区别,因此,在说明事物时,不要面面俱到,要抓住事物的特征,这样才能使读者得到具体而深刻的印象。
2 .层次要分明。说明事物要注意条理,否则就不可能说清复杂的事物。例如说明事物的结构,就要按照构造的顺序来说明,或从上到下,或从前到后,或由外到里,或由主到次。又如说明四季的变化,就要按照时间的顺序( spring , summer , autumn , winter )来写。
3 .解析要清楚。对各种知识所作的解释,对某种事物所作的说明,都要清楚明白。
4 .表现手法要多样。常见的说明文方法有:①下定义。②举例子。③运用比喻、比拟的方法。④做比较。⑤引用数字。⑥分类别。⑦列图表。
5 .用词要力求准确。引用的数据要绝对可靠,文字要简明扼要,一目了然。这是写说明文在语言文字上的要求:
请看下面的例文:
Hello , friends ,
You are warmly welcomed to our school . I'm Wu Dong . I'm very glad to be your guide . First , I'd like to tell you something about our school . It was set up in 1957 . The number of students is over 1200 , and the teachers about 100 . There are altogether 20classes . Besides the teaching buildings , we have a library for different kinds of subjects , and a school-run workshop .
We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon . After classes , we join in various activities , such as ball games , painting , singing and dancing .
Now let me show you around our school . This way , please .
本文是一篇说明文,是由学生接待来访的朋友,向人们介绍本校的情况。本文目的明确,材料准确、详实,语言简练,并能按一定的顺序来写,是一篇较好的说明文。
怎么样?会写这几种文体了吗?试着写两篇吧?
1 .记述一次郊游活动( outing ),包括下列内容:
①时间、地点:上星期六,海边。
②活动内容:去时花了几个小时,到海边后搭帐蓬,在露天生火做饭,讲故事,唱歌,做游戏。
③自己感想:尽管很累,大家玩得很痛快。
要求:用第一人称写,词数 70 左右。
2 .向明中学的“英语角”活动开展得有声有色。请你用英语为一家英文报纸写一篇 80 — 100 字的简讯。
Ⅶ 英语作文带要求的初中
Since I was very small, I like to eat all kinds of candy. My parents always tell me that eating too much candy will do harm to my health, but I never listen to them, because nothing happens to me. But last week, I felt something wrong with my teeth. At first, I did not feel like eating anything, my teeth ached. Then my parents told me to see the dentist, I was so afraid, I knew what the doctor would do to me. Going to see the dentist was a disaster, my tooth was broken and needed to take out, it really hurt me. Since then, I learn that eating too much candy need to pay the price.
Ⅷ 求3篇初中英语作文 题目为《我的3年初中生活》要求要附带中文翻译 字数为60左右
Last term, our school held a singing and dancing contest. Each class had to prepare a song and some students would also dance or give us a performance with their relatives, but I’ve joined in the chorus only. At the first time, we sang a song called “ you are happy”, I think almost everyone knows the song well. It’s just like a children’s song. Our class won the first prize that time. Many classes chose children’s songs like the popular Korean song “Dachangjin” this time, but our teacher, Miss Yuan, is always very wise. She chose the kind of songs that other classes didn’t sing. It’s known as “Molihua”, a folk song. All of us didn’t agree with Miss Yuan when we heard we were going to sing such a song. However, we had to accept the fact. We practiced again and again, at lunchtime, after class or even in class. At the very beginning, we couldn’t help laughing as we sang it because it was so strange. The girls were asked to sing the song in our dialect and wear T-shirt and skirt. The boys were lucky, but they also had to wear T-shirt and trousers in cold winter. When it was our turn tossing on the stage, we trembled so much that we didn’t know whether it was because we were cold or nervous. In spite of this, our show was a great success. Again, our class came first. It’s the second time and also the last time for us to sing songs together on the stage in junior middle school. All of us have done a good job. The contest makes us a happy and satisfied school life.
Ⅸ 初中英语作文
Easy English Club “EEC” —— Easy English, Easy Idea, Easy Future
“EEC”英语俱乐部 欢迎您的加入
Sail to the sea of English, welcome aboard!
您在英语学习过程中遇到过各种各样的困难吗?您是否还在为讲不出话来发愁?或正在为自己的英语学习感到迷茫呢?快来我们的俱乐部吧,我们将为您一一解答这些问题。在这里,有你意想不到的轻松方式体验英语。快乐的说,快乐的用,开心的玩,在不知不觉的交友中巩固和提高您的英语水平!
社团章程 ( Club Principle )
一、社团宗旨:提供大家一个优质且免费的英语会话学习环境。
1. Club Goal: To provide an excellent and free English conversation environment. 二、社团缘起:EEC想为大家提供一个难得的机会,在俱乐部的友好氛围中,
同英语老师和来自各国的英语使用者们自由地交谈。我们每月有常规活动,例如英语电影、歌曲欣赏、校外教学、文化交流、季节性的庆祝活动等。 2. Club Origin: EEC offers a unique opportunity to talk freely to English teachers and
English speakers from around the globe in a friendly club-like atmosphere. There are regular monthly events such as English films, songs, outings, cultural events, seasonal celebrations, etc.
三、社团目标:让每一位莅临EEC的朋友们,都能增进英语会话能力。 3. Club Vision: To improve the English conversation ability of every friend who
comes to our club.
虽然是复制的,但亲请笑纳~
是一篇不错的英语作文呢!
我搜了很久呢~
。。。
O(∩_∩)O谢谢