1. 2014年高考英语作文跑题了，他会给多少分总分30分
15分以下 30分的总分，有15分是你的语句通顺无明显语法错误，而你跑题的话也就最多15
2. 2014年高考英语作文范文150词 看图写作文
词典小生·英语行·
2014
高考英语各地作文及范文
1
新课标
I
假定你是李华，
计划暑假间去英国学习英语，
为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意，
请给
该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）
注意：
1
．词数
100
左右；
2
．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
．参考词汇：住宿
-accommodation
范文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school ring The
vacation.
I’ve
seen
your
ad,
and
I’d
like
to
know
something
more
about
your
six
-weekEnglish
course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there Per week? Besides,
wish there would not be too many student in a class, ’d also like t
o knowHow much I have to pay
for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would There be host family or university
dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
新课标
II
一家英语报社向中学生征文，
主题是
“十年后的我”
、
请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、
1
、
家庭
2
、
工作
3
、
业余生活
注意：
1
、次数
100
左右；
2
、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.
开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
范文：
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in
ten
years.
I
will
be
twenty-eight
years
old by
then.
I
will
have
my own
family.
Probably
with
a
词典小生·英语行·
2014
高考英语各地作文及范文
2
lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work
and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will
continue
to
take
regular
exercise,
such
as
swimming,
running
and
various
ball
games.
On
my
holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
安徽卷
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了
HEART-TO-HEART
专栏。假设你是该栏目的
编辑
Jamie
，收到一封署名为
Worried
的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了你自己的困扰；近
日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1.
表示理解并给予安慰；
2.
提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1.
词数
120
左右；
2.
信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3.
信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
temper
n.
脾气，情绪
Hi Worried,
I’
m sorry to know that you
’
re having such a bad time at the moment.
_________________________________________________
Yours,
Jamie
范文：
Hi Worried,
I’
m sorry to know that you
’
re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone
will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you
don’t
have to worry
so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say
anything you
’
ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger
out
without
hurting
others
or
yourself.
Second,
go
outdoors
and
play
team
games
with
your
friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic
about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you
’
ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
北京卷
第一节
(15
分
)
你给英国朋友
Chris
写一封信，内容包括：
1.
你们原计划
7
月份一同去云南旅游；
2.
由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.
表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到
8
月份。
注意：
1.
词数不少于
50.
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
词典小生·英语行·
2014
高考英语各地作文及范文
3
3.
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Joe
第二节（
20
分）
假设你是红星中学高三（
1
）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语
园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意：
1.
词数不少于
60.
2.
短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
范文：
第一节
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I
cannot go with you as planned.
I
’
m
sorry
about
it.
Can
I
suggest
that
we
put
it
off
until
early
august?
I
wish
you
could
understand.
I’
m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Joe
第二节
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance
词典小生·英语行·
2014
高考英语各地作文及范文
4
was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then
we
went
to
meet
the
schoolmaster
in
his
office
and
gave
the
report
to
him.
He
accepted
our
suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy
to park our bikes there.
福建卷
如何理解“成功”
，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语
( quotation)
，按要求用
英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go fr
om one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."
- Sir Winston, Churchill
内容要求：
1
．你对该引语的理解：
2
．你的相关经历：
3
．恰当的结尾。
注意：
1
．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：
2
．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：
3
．词数：
120
左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that__________________________
范文：
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after
failures.
Rather,
we
should
keep
trying
with
enthusiasm.
Success
consists
in
the
ability
to
continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait
to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and
difficult
to
control.
Worse
still,
I
took
many
falls
off
the
bike.
I was
about
to
give up
when
my
father
came
and
encouraged
me
to
keep
going.
With
more
practice,
I
did
better
and
better.
Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stic
广东卷
第一节
基础习作
你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。
［写作内容］
请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（
Richard Avis
）
出生日期：
1974
年
12
月
1
日
时间：
2011
年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息：
·
借助当地媒体寻找
·
迄今找到
32
名，其中男性
17
名，女性
15
名，来自
13
个国家
·
职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
·
计划
40
岁生日前找到
40
位同年同月同日生的人
词典小生·英语行·
2014
高考英语各地作文及范文
5
·
打算根据此经历写一本书
＊
同年同月同日生的人：
time twin
［写作要求］
只能用
5
个句子表达全部内容
［评分标准］
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Richard
Avis,
a
British,
was
born
on
December
1st,
1974.
In
order
to
understand
the
meaning
of
successful
life
in
different
cultures,
Richard,
from
2011,
began
to
seek
time
twins
around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13
countries,
of
whom
there
are
17
males
and
15
females.
Their
positions
include
government
officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before
his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.
第二节
读写任务（共
1
小题；满分
25
分）
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇
150
词左右的英语短文。
Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other peopl
e’s clothes. As a
laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her
rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University
of Southern Mississippi.
The money
was
I
me
savings.
She
could
save
such
a
large
amount
of
money
because
she
lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she
just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation
（捐助）
，
and in 50 years she had been
out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last
uncle
left
her.
Only
after
she
became
known
in
America
did
she
begin
to
travel
all
over
the
country.
Since
then,
she
had
been
the
subject
of
many
interviews
and
articles
and
was
even
invited to the White House.
Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in
the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of
helping somebody’s child go
to college gave her much pleasure.
[
写作内容
]
1.
用约
30
个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.
用约
120
个词就
Miss McCarty
的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（
1
）
你如何看待她的捐助行为；
（
2
）
你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；
（
3
）
如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。
[
写作要求
]
1.
作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接
引用原文的句子。
2.
作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[
评分标准
]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
范文：
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3. 2014年辽宁省高考英语作文评分标准
高考英语高考作文评分标准
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
4. 2014年高考英语作文热点话题
一、雅安抗震救灾 2013年4月20日，四川省雅安市芦山发生强烈地震，造成很大损失。学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一个发言稿，在学校捐款动员大会上使用。发言稿主要内容应包括： 1. 对灾区情况的简单介绍（包括地震发生时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等）； 2. 捐款的意义（帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建）； 3. 如何捐款（自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位，收齐后交到学校红十字会） 注意： 1. 不要逐条翻译； 2. 可适当增加细节；以使文章连贯； 3. 词数至少100词。 参考范文： Dear teachers and students, As we all know, a terrible earthquake happened in Lushan, Sichuan Province on April 20, in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured. In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown, the school has called on everyone in our school, including both teachers and students, to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area.This donation is voluntary. You can give away however much you want to. The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school. We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellow men out of the difficulty. Thank you. 二、中国梦 最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下： 1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解； 2.你谈到了自己的梦想； 3.如何实现自己的梦想。 注意： 1.总词数不少于100。 2.不可逐条翻译。 3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考范文： April 8 Monday Fine Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by（受启发）President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they aredoing a respectable（值得尊敬的） job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge（专业知识）. To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately（充分） for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.
5. 2012.2013.2014年宁夏高考英语作文及翻译
“妈妈，当我长大的时候，我也要成为他们中的一员！”在我三岁看了凯皮特舞蹈公司的表演后，我说道。这是我的梦想第一次以一种重要的，充满激情的方式促使我开始训练。当我长大后，接触了的东西，我对舞蹈世界的兴趣自然发生了变化，但是我从未抛弃过那时属于我这个小女孩的的梦想，渴望着有朝一天能成为该公司的一位舞者。2005年的夏天，那年我18岁，我接到了一个电话，终于美梦成真。我终于成为这家历史直追溯到1925年的公司一员。现在当我回顾那一天时，对这一切都依然觉得不可思议。直到第一天彩排进行到一半的时候，我还确信自己正处在那种莫名的快乐中，我无法相信这是真的。我从未期冀过能得到这个职位。但是当我真的做到的时候，我完全震惊了。我记得我因为兴奋而全身不住发抖。尽管我对于这种改变非常兴奋，却不得不承认它同时带来挑战。舞蹈每周六天的严格训练让我明白，用全部的注意力迅速掌握舞蹈的要旨是如此重要。正是对细节的一丝不苟和练习的孜孜不倦把我们和旁人区别开来。这些高强度的彩排之后是一连串多达一天五场的表演安排，让我发掘了“勤奋工作”的又一层含义。我知道了我的体力极限被训练得远超我想象中的可能。我体会到每一场演出都要比上一场更好。今天，当我看着这家我能有幸成为其中一员，作为不仅仅是一个员工而是一名舞蹈队长的公司，我看到一种传统，一种流传着的激励了不仅仅是一代代小女孩，更是这家公司去不断进步，不断发展，不断激励着人们每天去追求他们梦想的东西。
6. 2014天津市高考英语作文范文
Dear Chris,I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I have heard that you are to come to our school as exchange students., and I, on behalf of our class, welcome you warmly and sincerely. Now, I’d like to introce some details about the weather , food and our class. The weather in fall is very pleasant. It is neither too hot nor too cold, and neither too dry nor too humid. The temperature here is at about 20 centigrade. Moreover, the food in Tianjin is delicious, including the Eight Great Bowls and the Four Great Stews, and some snacks such as Goubuli , a kind of steamed bun with filling. I am sure you will enjoy them.Our class is a very warm family. There are 55 students in our class, containing 30 boys and 25 girls. You will find it easy to join us since we all want to make friends with you. Then, you needn’t worry about the life here, because the girls and boys in our class are very friendly and helpful. Whenever you get in trouble, they are ready to lend their hand to you.At last, I personally advise you to learn some basic Chinese, in order to communicate with local people and it is much easier for you to get on with teachers and classmates by speaking Chinese. We are looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Li Jin您的采纳是我最大的动力~谢谢
7. 2014年高考英语作文《十年后的我》范文
In ten years,I think I‘ be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone.
I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.
On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.
8. 历年的高考英语作文题目
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书
3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
9. 近几年高考英语作文
2009年高考英语作文猜想
一、作文猜想
关于奥运方面的作文。
二、猜想理由
近几年来，高考英语书面表达试题出现了一些变化：1.写作内容的多元化。从外事活动到青少年多姿多彩的课余活动；从单一说事到发表个人看法与评价；从介绍国外文化到介绍国内文化、名胜与人文传统等；选题的特点表现在文化性、地方性和多元性三个方面。2.命题形式的多样化。目前命题形式有汉语提纲、图表提纲、直方图配汉语提示、图画与汉语提示、汉语提示、标题配汉语提示、标题配画、标题、英文提示等。3.写作形式的去叙事化。近三年的主流写作形式有三种：议论性质，陈述性质+混合性质（陈述+议论或叙事+议论），但本质而论只有两种，即议论性质和陈述性质的文体。且标题性作文与命题性作文已露端倪。鉴于这几种变化，同时随着奥运的临近，写有关奥运的作文是很有可能的。
三、内容举例
“鸟巢”介绍
假如你是一名导游，请你根据所给的提示，向来北京观光的外国游客介绍2008年北京奥运会主体育场——“鸟巢”。
场馆名称：国家体育场（鸟巢）
建设地点：奥林匹克公园
建筑面积：258，000平方米；长330m；宽220m；高69.2m
座席数：91，000
赛时功能：奥运会开幕式和闭幕布式；田径、足球
赛后功能：体育比赛和文化、娱乐活动中心
开工时间：2003年12月24日
完工时间：2007年底
评价：中国十大新建筑奇迹之一
注意：
1. 不要逐条翻译；
2．字数：100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：开幕式和闭幕式 Opening and Closing ceremonies
娱乐活动 entertainment
平方米 square metres
Welcome to Beijing!
That’s all! Thank you!
四、写作指导
1、引导学生认真审题，读懂题目要求，所给的表格及文字说明材料，理解解题要求并按要求答题。
2、重视文章篇章结构的指导训练，如没给开头、结尾，要求学生精心写好文章的开头和结尾，段与段之间、句与句之间恰当使用连接词、过渡词（句）提高书面表达的档次。
3、努力杜绝文中出现低级错误（如时态、主谓关系、基本搭配、常用词的拼写等）。
4、重视书写训练。 由于高考作文批阅速度很快，所以整洁的卷面、美观工整的笔迹是给阅卷老师留下的积极信号。重视书写是英语拿高分的关键之一。
5、基本达到词数要求（100左右）。但也不要过长．，越长的作文越可能呈现错误。
6.所给的提示性的词汇要都用上，但可以不按顺序使用。
五、参考范文
Welcome to Beijing! I’d like to introce you to the Beijing National Stadium, also known as Bird’s Nest. The stadium is located in Beijing Olympic Park , covering 258,000 square metres. It is 330 metres long, 220 metres wide, and 69.2 metres tall. The construction began on December 24,2003, and was completed at the end of 2007. The splendid Opening and Closing ceremonies are to take place in Bird’s Nest, which will hold the main track and field events as well as football matches ring the games. Afterwards the 91,000-seat stadium will serve as the center of sports events, cultural activities and entertainment. It has been honored as one of the latest wonders buildings in China.
That’s all! Thank you!
10. 10年到14年山东高考英语作文题目及范文，
某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括： 该谚语的含义； 2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. ②Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 注意： 1.词数：120-150； 2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：谚语 proverb
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【解析】2014山东高考写作一改沿用多年的书信形式，以英语中常见谚语“患难见真情”和“有志者，事竟成”作为话题二选一进行夹叙夹议，在近五年高考中实属大刀阔斧改革的一大步。考生首先要了 解两句谚语的基本意思，其次要用短短150词将说明+记叙+议论结合起来，衔接流畅，有理有据，确实对考生的英语知识素养，思维能力和表达能力有着很高的要求。创新固然有之，但究其内容，仍然是“新瓶装旧酒”。在我们二轮复习中，给大家详细讲解过了“个人价值观念”话题素材和常用的写作句型, 谚语的意思在语法课上也作为例句多次提及。考生在保证了 “说明含义-回忆往事-总结议论”这一基本的逻辑分段清晰之后，只需结合“价值观“中的素材，非限制性定语从句、使让、非谓语动词、无灵主语、倒装、强调等常用句型，以及一些常见写作词汇的高 级替换，就可以轻松的冲击高分档次。 【逻辑分段】 解释谚语意思（20词） 记叙个人经历（80词） 议论升华主旨（50词）
【例文】 Where there is a will, there is a way. My favorite proverb is “where there is a will, there is a way.”, which means we will be able to get over all kinds of challenges if we can stick to our dreams and never give up. Memories rushed to my mind when I saw this topic. When I was in high school, I had great enthusiasm for English and intended to take part in an English speech contest. However, when preparing for it, I found it very challenging to collect information and use language correctly. I was about to give up when my Dad noticed and offered this proverb to me. Encouraged by it, I spared no effort to solve every problem with confidence. If it hadn’t helped me，I couldn’t have won the prize finally. In a word, not only does this proverb enable me to face up to the difficulties bravely, but also it contributes much to keeping confident all the time. Therefore, keep in mind--- where there is a will, there is a way. Success comes to those who never give up.