㈠ 〓修改作文（英语）〓急！！！
1\my friend is mary, we are both outgoing . I'm taller than her,hers hair is longer then mine. I like to do the same things as me .we both like go to the movie.
My friend is Mary,we are both outgoing.I'm taller thanher,her hair is longer than mine.I like to do the same things with her.We both like to go to watch the movies.
2\on friday i'm go fishing with my parents,can you go fishing with us?
On friday,I will go fishing with my parents,can you go with us?
3\he is a 中学生(middle student???)
He is a middle school student.
4\his parents teach english,and both of them like english.
english应改为
5\写请假条，你是tony，你昨天（星期天）感冒了，星期一不能上学，写请假条给mr.li请假休息一天，说明原因。
sick leave
Dear Mr.Li:
I am sorry I can't go to school today.Because I have a cough yesterday.And I'm still ill.So I want to have one day's sick leave.When I come back school,I'll work harder!
yours
Tony
6\对话，你想邀请露西星期六下午一起去看电影，他同意了，打算起自行车区
Your:Hello!
Lucy:Hi!
Y:Saturday afterday I will go to watch a moive,can you go with me?
L:How can we go there?
Y:By bike.
L:Ok.See you.
Y:See you.
7\暑假打算，提示：早起，作运动，帮妈妈作家物，做作业，去野营，探望祖母，上钢琴课。
In the morning I will do some exercise,and I will do some housework for my mother.I will have the piano classes.Sometimes I will go on a picnic with my friends,sometimes I will go to see my grandmather.
8\写一封感谢信。昨天你参加了露西的生日晚会。完的很高兴，晚宴很棒，家人很友好
Dear Lucy:
Thank you for having me to your brithday.I had a good time.The dinner is very delicious.And your prients are very friendly to me!
Yours
(Name)
很--详细！要谢的，要谢的！
㈡ 英语作文修改
Success has been an important motivation in the progress of human work. There is no doubt that success can encourage us to work harder. As a matter of fact ,the consequence of success can bring faith.in our mind .
But what qualities contribute to be successful in work ?However,most people are confused about it. I hold the opinion that honesty plays an important role in it..For example when we are students ,our teacher always tell us never to cheat in any exams even if you can not pass the exam. What matters most is whether you are an honest and reliable man.As a matter of fact, a leader always thinks highly of those people who are honest. What is more., honesty dramatically narrow the gap between people, which is impossible happening to dishonest people. On the contrary,being dishonest does do great harm not only to others but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example.The reason why so many babies get sicks there is that all of them drink the fake milk,which contains harmful substances that badly affected their health. To our great relief ,the procers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end..
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㈢ 英语作文修改
第一句话image 应改为imagine ，后面是宾语从句，应用陈述句语序，即：what our life will be like...
㈣ 修改作文用英语怎么说
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请问你这句句子想表回达什么意思呢?我不太理解答.
㈥ 英语作文修改
cause great改成greatly 很大程度的改变比你产生了巨大的影响更贴切一些。
save up改成save save up 是储存的意思，节省时间版用save就可以。
technique can cause problem too. problem加上s，变成复数权。
We human indeed us改成Our human。
and not lose要表达的是“而不是”的意思，所以改成“，rather than”
㈦ 英语作文修改
But my teachers are serious and responsible work, amiable attitude of students.
这一句有问题，my teachers are serious and responsible work，把修饰语serious and responsible去掉是my teachers are work，不搭配可修改为：my teachers are serious and responsible to work. 后一句，犯同样的毛病，可改为：take amiable attitudeto students
2. Although I am a negative person.
negative和 person不能搭配，改为：inactive
3. I joined in an army of activities. 这一句看不懂。
4. I will wait for your letter. 改为：waiting for you early reply. 符合英文书信的结尾用语。
其它没有任何问题，用词和句子结构都符合一个大一新生的英语标准。
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㈧ 英语作文修改（怎么改如下）
I want to read a book ring the winter holiday because books are very important to us. I usually read 【改成enjoy】a book in my spare time. For example【可以改为for instance，同样的意思，明显这个词汇更高级】, when I have nothing to do, I will read【改为appreciate，有欣赏的意思】 it.
{ I also read a book before I go to bed， which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}这整句话前面那句是在不咋的，和你后面所用的词汇完全不是一个档次的，话说你几年级，后面的词汇到高中（turn out to be adj.)才会教。所以我决定全部改掉。。As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.
㈨ 修改英语作文（英语高手或老师请进）
写得还不错，略微修改了几处
Butterfly Effect
Butterfly, a lovely creature with colorful wings and slender cirrus, dances elegantly in flowers. What a beautiful picture! However, when a butterfly flaps its wings in Brazil, it may cause a hurricane in the USA. What a terrible a picture! This is called “butterfly effect”. It means that a tiny deviation will lead to a huge difference in the future. It may be hard to imagine, but it does happen.
Tony is a 12-year-old boy who is very naughty and sometimes behaves ridiculously. One day, Tony did a terrible thing with his so-called friends, which they thought would be funny. They put a lighted detonator into a postbox waiting for the explosion. But unexpectedly, a mother who had a baby in her arms was walking towards the postbox. At this moment, Tony had two different choices:
1. Tony may leave his friend who had put the detonator there and ran away. In such a case, the friend may become schizophrenia after the accident. Even worse, Tony may loose his friend forever and spend his rest life blaming on himself.
2. Tony rushed out timely and saved the mother and the baby, but his may loose his legs in the powerful explosion. In this scenario, Tony has to spend his rest life on a wheelchair but with no guilty feelings.
Two different behaviours may lead to two completely different lives. This is the power of “butterfly effect”. So be careful with your every act and every move. It may decide all your life.