㈠ 英文文章纠错，急！！
错误多，分值有点少哟！
①题目错：First Swimming in the Sea（注意什么词该大小写）
②Summer holidays has been arriving at改为：回Summer holiday has began ，I had been expecting that day for a long time.
不好意思，后面看不大懂答
㈡ 有没有智能英语作文纠错系统
可以考虑用Google Translate来辅专助属
http://www.google.com/language_tools?hl=en
㈢ 英语作文 纠错 有高级词汇能用上的也帮忙说下
The Spring Festival is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday. Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home. Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and COZY.FinalLy, the fare is low. The boys said that we should travel some places. If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizon.
However the boys said the girls' idea WAS not great , because we COULDN;T go through the naturAl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea WAS too expensive and WAS not easy to PUT INTO PRACTICE.
PersonlLy ,I'd like to stay at home . Because the weather is so bad . I'm afraid of the cold wind . I think the home is the best place to stay . I can do something , like doing homework , watching TV , drawing...
㈣ 英语作文纠错
有错或需要修改的地方有括号括起来，如下：
(As) you (may) see，I'm unhealthy. I don't like vegetables at all. I never exercise. But I want to get good P.E. grades. Who can (help) me with my health(?)
My P.E. teacher (says), we need drink water or milk every day, and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week. It is good for our health. As for sleeping, we must sleep (at least) 8 hours every night. Exercise is interesting. If we want to be strong, we need exercise every morning. (In) (this) way, we can be clever and (stronger).
㈤ 纠错，英语作文纠错。我今年初三，帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有什么错误，谢谢~
1.Because I think it cannot only help us learn what is happening throughout the world,but also help us learn more knowledge. [can not分开来写]
2.Summer is hot and we can felel comfortable when we are simming。抄[feel 拼写错误]
3. And I think it is a waste of time to go to a summer school .[这句话换个位置，放在这段最后很奇怪，跟前面一句话连接不起来]
4.你think重复使用太多次了，可以用 I consider / I believe/in my opinion 等
5.注意连词的使用 可以用 In addition / Moreover 不要总用And
㈥ 英语作文纠错 帮忙看下有无很严重的语法,用词错误
简单纠正一下语法错误，供参考
At present,social pratice has been （playing ）an increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy（ with their study ）and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to( be an active participant ) in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.
㈦ 求英语作文纠错!
My Dream
Every one may be asked a question about his or her dream., just as our teachers do in English class for example.For such a question, I always answer that my greatest dream is to be a famous writer.
In my childhood, I liked reading fairy teals which gave me a lot of fantasies and helped me make my mind to be a writer.I am sure I can also write distinguished novels in my own style in the future though I need a lot of hard work at present.
Life is tough, full of ups and downs. We should face with all kinds of difficulties. Juast as a saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. I believe that I will create a great novel one day. What is more, since I am young, I have more time to practise writing and will make a progress day by day.
㈧ 英语作文纠错.
有些句子我都不知道怎么改啊，很chinese english的感觉～说点语法小错误吧～
disperse us attention--our attention
So this habit will rece our work efficiency may lead to the mistakes .
是什么样的文章？雅思的话最好不要用so,用therefore之类的比较正式。may 前面要加and或that,不然没有主语或是个错误的复句。
use earphone listen to concert to cause hearing for a long time , have loud injury to we student .
这句好难改啊～我是中国人都有点不太明白。we student -严重的错误。也许你可以写成：if students spend too much on listening the conert by earphone,it may effect the sense of hearing of students.
choose some melody in a quick rhythm it will make student feel nervous but choose one song in a slow rhythm will make student asleep in summer and winter .
我觉得choose是多余的，你硬要写的话应该要写成choosing,其实直接写quick rhythm melody就可以吧～make student fall asleep 更好吧～
其他的就是注意句式的多样性，你一直在重复listening to the music while doing homework,3次。
就说这么多！
㈨ 一篇英语作文帮我纠错，谢谢。
If your car (is) park(ed) in a wrong place, a traffic police (officer) will find it.You will be very lucky if the policeman lets you go without a ticket.However, this does not always happen.Last holiday(week,month,year or whatever), I go(went) to holiday in sweden. I found a note on my car."sir,we welcome you to our city,but their(there) is a 'no parking' area,if you remind the street sign ,you will stay here happy,this only a reminder" if you receive a request like this,you can not fail to obey it.
㈩ 帮忙纠错英语作文纠错
1. One day no one will go to shops any more. 这里抄没有at
2. So online shopping doesn't spend lots of time. 这里spend是动词，所袭以不用isn't而用doesn't
3. But we can't see the proct from online shops and it is less fun. 你的原句出现两个动词see和have，语法错误。
基本上就是这样了，已经帮您改正。
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