Ⅰ 高考满分英语作文
首先来了解一下英语作文的评分标准
各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分)
A.第五档(很好):(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
B.第四档(好):(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。
C.第三档(适当):(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
D.第二档(较差):(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
E.第一档(差):(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。
F.不得分:(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
从上面可以看出英语作文高分的关键因素及高分秘诀:
三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀:
审题,遣词,造句,润色,谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀,我们要如何从这些方面入手呢?
审题的概念
拿到试卷后,首先浏览书面表达的题目,研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题:看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁:确能够定文章的文体,为你写作提供方向。审要点:如果英语作文中,有要求要点的,一般打分时是踩点给分的,准确把握住要点,是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面:
总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲:根据题目的要点,安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识,写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳),这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上,要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
Ⅱ 谁有历年高考各地的优秀英语作文
5月12日四川汶川发生大地震。很多人丧生,大量房屋倒塌,当地工厂、企业遭受很大损失,请你根据下面提纲和要求写一则英语短文。
2004年湖北卷
二班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始?请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为
另一些同学认为
1.应从儿童时期开始学习英语
2.儿童时期记忆力好,可以记住很多单词
3.能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础
1.不应从儿童时期开始学习英语
2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语,易混淆
3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习
讨论未取得一致意见
注意:1.文章的起始句已给出;
2.词数:100左右(不包括已给的起始句);
3.参考词汇:基础—foundation 汉语拼音—Chinese pinyin
2006年湖北卷
受某英文报的委托,你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息,用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。
调查内容:在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中,学生最喜欢哪一种
调查范围:湖北省的10所中学
调查对象:高中生
调查人数:1200
调查方式:访谈
调查结果:(见下图)
浙江卷
第三节: 书面表达 (满分30分)
人们完成工作的方式通常有两种:独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Indivially or Working in a Team”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
1. 独立完成:自行安排、自己解决问题。
2. 合作完成:一起讨论、相互学习
3. 我喜欢的方式和理由
注意:词数100-120,文章的题目和开头已给出(不计词数)。
Working Indivially or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done.
北京卷
第四部分:书面表达 (共两节,35分)
第一节 情景作文 (20分)
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意: 词数不少于60.
提示词: 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡II第一页指定区域内)
第二节 开放作文 (15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.
山东卷
第二节:写作(满分30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入到新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
1、帮他分析原因;
2、给他提出建议;
3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
注意:词数120 ~150
Dear Li Ming,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Zhang Hua
广东卷
第一节 基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者,负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。
写作内容
请根据以下中文提纲,编写射击项目的英语介绍:
背景:射击最初只是生存工具,19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。
1896:第一次成为奥运项目
1904:中断
1928:中断
1932:重回奥运会
1968:第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛
现状:稳步发展,1896奥运会只有三项射击项目,现今有17项。
写作要求
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容
评分标准
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
第二节 读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it---good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way… it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
写作内容
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动,你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后,你准备写一份发言稿,题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”,内容要点包括:
1、以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点;
2、然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,内容包括:
(1)对中学生活的感受;
(2)理想的大学生活;
(3)中学生活和大学生活的差别,以及你打算如何适应。
写作要求
1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
评分标准
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
江西卷
第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
学校计划举行英语作文竞赛,主题为“We Need Advice Older Generations”,请根据下列要求写一篇作文:
你遇到了困难或问题,不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈,后来问题得到了解决。要求写清楚下面三点:
1、当时面临的困难或问题是什么?
2、你获得的指教是什么?
3、结果如何?
注意:
1、作文总词数为100左右;
2、不能在作文中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名,否则本节判为零分。
辽宁卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:
1、乐观的人生态度;
2、努力学习;
3、参加体育锻炼。
生词:态度---attitude
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
安徽卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华。David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣,来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信,主要内容如下:
1、 感谢他的关注;
2、简要介绍相关情况;
3、谈谈你的感想。
注意:
1、词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好;
2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、参考词汇:环保购物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag
关 注 ---concern
June 8
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
重庆卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
学校网站新开设了一个“英语写作”栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括:
1、开设目的;
2、栏目优势:教师在线(online)指导等;
3、作文要求:内容贴近学生生活;
4、优秀作文的鼓励办法;
5、邀请大家参与。
注意:
1、词数100左右;
2、开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数);
3、请在答题卡上作答。
Welcome to the column “English Writing”!
福建卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
阅读下面一则广告,按照要求完成写作任务。
写作内容
假设你是李华,这则广告引起了你的兴趣,请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下:
1、对夏令营主题的理解;
2、根据招聘要求自我介绍;
3、参加夏令营的目的。
注意:1、信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2、词数100左右。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian, _____________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
第四部分:书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该gonsi更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点:
1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;
该产品已售完,无法更换;
型号新,无配件,无法维修。
2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换。
注意:1. 词数为100左右;
2. 参考词汇:配件—— spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
(以下内容不得抄入答题卡)
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr. 2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China….
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
1996年
假设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
姓名: 李华
出生年月: 1977年2月
出生地: 辽宁大连
学历
1984-1990 光明小学
1990-1996 大连市第六中学
所学主要课程
语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑
特长
英语、电脑(去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名)
业余爱好
游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐
注意:1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式;
2. 词数100个左右。
范文: My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graated this summer. The main subjects
Ⅲ 什么样的英语作文 可以在高考时拿高分
作为高考的过来人,英语作文的话就想强调两点:
首先是开头要好,为什么呢?因专为开头好你才能属吸引老师的眼球,而且阅卷容易出现这样一种情况,因为老师想要快点改卷子,所以他们很容易就是关注你的开头,而中间和结尾也就简单看看就完了,那么开头就显得很重要了,建议你拿几年的高考试卷的作文样板看一看,多摘抄点好的句子,多背背,到时候套上去是个人认为挺不错的方法,但是并不代表中间和结尾就不用看了,尽量作文是有头有尾吧,中间的话穿插一些高级句式,老师会多给分的,前提是单词、句子不要出现基本的错误,比如说拼写,或是句式的错误。
然后就是字好了。字要尝试着抽时间去练,如果时间很紧急的话没办法练就只能多把握前面的分数了,如果有时间练的话,可以看看衡水中学的那种字体,并不一定要完全一样,但是或许那种字体可以给你一些启发,练出有自己风格的字体也是很不错的,要知道在高考的考场上让老师有焕然一新的感觉给你的分数可是很不一样的。
Ⅳ 高中生的英语作文。考试时(尤其是高考),英语作文如果写一些唯美的句子有高分吗
可以记一些英语谚语之类地道的英文句子,这样话可以给文章添彩,另外,名著中特别出名的句子也可以运用上。
Ⅳ 10篇高中优秀英语作文
直接点击用户名,去高中英语博客看,里面有高中英语作文
Ⅵ 求15篇高考英语作文
范文:Mrs Wilson ,
I’m going out shopping , and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o’clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
10)全国卷 (2)
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近大学的外籍教师Smith 女生来做评委。请参照以下通知给她写一封信。
英语演讲比赛
主题:人与自然
时间:6月15日下午2:---5:
地点:501教室
参赛选手:10名
联系人:李华(电话44876655)
范文: Dear Ms. Smith ,
I’m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students’ Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university . I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I’m looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes
Li Hua
11) 全国卷 (3)
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需要书面预约,请按下列的要求写一封信:1.本人简介 2.求助内容 3.约定时间 4.你的联系方式(Email: [email protected] ; Phone:12345678)
范文: Dear Sir ,
I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I’m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :[email protected] ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
09)安徽卷 (4)
假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。 内容包括:1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通
范文: Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
10)安徽卷 (5)
假设你将参加某英文杂志开展的一次征文活动,内容要求你在电视,手机和网络三者中,放弃其中的一个并陈述理由。请你以“which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?” 为题,写一篇短文。
范文: Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there’re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .
As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
11)安徽卷 (6)
某校英文报社开设了一个专栏:experience . 本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning” 为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的一些做法。
范文: My approach to difficulties in learning
As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .
However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .
11)湖南卷 (7)
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文:
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
范文: The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
10)湖南卷 (8)
假设你和几位同学成了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为期2个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流,请写一份英语发言稿。1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的活动 2. 谈谈你们开展活动的收获。
范文:
Boys and girls ,
Today I’ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have concted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
That’s all. Thank you.
11) 陕西卷 (9)
假定你是李华,在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。
范文: Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
09)湖南卷 (10)
假设你是某中学新老师李红,请给你的朋友张华写封信,告诉他你第一天上课的情景,主要内容如下:1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介绍你处理该事的方式 3.谈谈你的感想
范文:
Dear zhuanghua ,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
10)陕西卷 (11)
假定你是李华,你们学校和一所美国学校签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英语老师是来自这所学校的Sue Wood 。 不久前她返回美国任教。请根据要求写封电子邮件。1.对她表达感谢之意 2.介绍她离开后自己和班级发生的事情 3.希望了解她的近况
范文:
Dear Sue ,
I’m LiHua ,one of your students in China .It’s almost a month since you left us . We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together .
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The three you planted yourself is growing well ,and the whole class decided to name it Sue wood . Will you come back to see Sue wood ?
How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students . Hope to keep in close touch .
All the best
Liu Hua
09)陕西卷 (12)
假定你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助。请根据以下内容,写作要点和要求回帖。
Grown-up Post at 18-5-2009 20:08
Hi, everyone , I’m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn .But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old . What should I do ?
写作要点:1.告诉Grown-up 要理解母亲 2.给Grown-up 提出解决问题的具体建议
范文: Hi, Grown-up ,
As a student of your age , I understand your situation . The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers . However , it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelings . Here are a few suggestions . First , it’s advisable to talk more with your mom . I am sure that talks must help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things . Second , you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”, it’s even better to share more of the housework , such as cleaning ,washing and cooking .
Hope my idea will work out .
11)江西卷 (13)
假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’s ride bicycles”的英语演讲比赛活动。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容:1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞问题 2.骑自行车的益处,如节能环保,有利健康等 3. 参考词汇 low-carbon life energy saving
范文:
Good morning , everyone ,
I’m Li Hua from Xing Guang Middle school . The topic of my speech is “Let’s ride bicycle” .
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards , cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life .However , they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams .
How can we solve the problems then ? As far as I am concerned , riding bicycles is a good solution .For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy –saving . For another , bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas .What’s more , riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health .
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles . Come on and join us !
Thank you!
11)天津卷 (14)
假设你程光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国的某中学的访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排其在天津的活动。请根据提示,给美国的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动安排并简要说明理由,最后征求对方的意见。 1.上午与我校学生座谈(如校园文化,文化差异)2.中午与我校同学共进午餐(饺子,面条等) 3.下午和我校学生游览海河。
范文: Dear Mr. Smith ,
I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high schoo. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.
In the morning , there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about school life and cultural differences . At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste mplings ,noodles and other Chinese foods .In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the HaiHe river .
How do you like the arrangements ? I hope you will have a nice time in Tian jing
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
10)天津卷 (15)
假设你晨光高中的李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑假到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据提示写给校评选组一封申请信:1.对此活动的认识(如对本人,学生和社会的益处)2.个人优势(如性格,独立生活能力,语言能力等) 3.你的计划(如怎样辅导等)
范文: Dear Sir/Madam ,
I’m lihua from class one ,senior two . I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English ring the summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along well the students and benefit the whole school.
I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests . So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need . Besides ,I ‘ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs ,playing games and so on .
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours Sincerely ,
Li hua
Ⅶ 2015年全国卷1高考满分英语作文
Dear Jim,
are you these days? Recently, I make a plan to take part in a Dragon Boat Training Camp so that I can cultivate my interests, broaden my horizons and enrich my school life.
I want to tell you some details about the camp first. The camp will be held in my school next Saturday. And many other middle school students will take part in the camp as well. Therefore, we can communicate with each other very well.
Well, I have two main reasons why I want to join it. The first one is that the dragon boat race is one of the most important traditions in China. And people treasure it very much. You can know it’s a very funny and wonderful activity. What’s more, I can improve myself in the camp and learn many things that can’t be found in the books.
Would you like to join me? I look forward to your joining very much. Please give me a reply soon and let me know your decision, OK?
Wish you good luck.
Ⅷ 高考英语作文范文(带翻译) 高考英语满分作文(带翻译) 谢谢
Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang’e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe “Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
梦想和现实
嫦娥奔月的美丽传说暗示着中国人民探索月球的梦想。几千年来,我们中国人一代又一代地 为这个梦想努力着。嫦娥一号月球探测器就是以这个神话故事命名的。嫦娥一号的成功发射标志着中华民族实现探月梦想的第一步。
的确,我从这个历史事件中学到了很多。首先,我们的生活需要梦想,因为梦想是一切事情的原动力。然后我们要坚持梦想,永远不要放弃。同时我们必须认识到通往任何成功的路并不是平坦的。然而,不论我们做什么,我们应该相信“有志者,事竟成”,进我们所能使我们的梦想成为现实。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
请戒烟吧
现在我们经常会看到年轻人在公共场所抽烟。他们认为抽烟是一种乐趣。他们多么愚蠢呀!
报道显示全世界每年有几百万人死于吸烟。抽烟会引起许多疾病。
Ⅸ 五篇高考万能英语作文
高考英语作文万能模板
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) オ
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ
3.观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总-分-总"结构)
4."How to"类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、图画类写作模板:
1.开头
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.衔接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.结尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...