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『壹』 高考英語作文常用增分句式的疑問

only ....could we...
furthermore
in addition
last but not the least

『貳』 如何增加英語作文亮點

加入經典語句,好詞好句

『叄』 怎樣使英語作文有亮點

要想獲得高分就應在「正確」表達的基礎上寫出自己的特色,寫出自己的「亮」點。

一、詞彙選擇——標新立異

在寫作中「較高級詞彙」的使用主要是指使用《大綱》上沒有的詞語、使用通過構詞法變化來的新詞、使用同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。

1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常見詞語,而situates in則是《大綱》上沒有的,屬於高級詞彙。

2)在周末我們做很多作業。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表達時沒有使用過於直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大綱》詞彙end加後綴-less變化來的。

3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表達要點時,B句使用了well furnished,這比good語氣強,也顯得生動。

在造句時,「較高級詞彙」如能運用貼切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一個,也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結構造句——與眾不同

在造句時,既要使句子生動,又要使其簡明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達方式,特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發生過一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數同學使用了there be結構,這是對的,但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另闢蹊徑而使用了「主語+謂語+賓語」結構,且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞彙,更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人使用的方式不同,簡潔)

2.使用一些強勢句式,如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等,增強語句的表現力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(強調句式)

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)

3、句式多樣,復雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型,而應注意句式的變化,如長短句結合,簡單句、並列句與復合句共用,還可使用簡化句等;一些較復雜的結構如獨立主格,分詞結構等也可使用。下面的表達中A句簡單句多,而且多處使用 there be結構,顯得單調、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(請同學們自己分析)。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房,住房裡面有卧室、有洗澡間、有廚房;卧室里有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇——獨具匠心

在寫作中,我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點,同時為使主題突出,結構嚴謹,我們應注意學習和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上,NMET2002範文堪稱典範。請看:

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)該文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,開門見山,隨後兩個段落均使用了主題句(見黑體字部分),使全文結構緊湊,表達嚴謹。

2)在表述要點時範文還對要點出場順序作了調整,如「40%的同學認為應收門票,但不宜過高。」前部分作為主題句放在句首,而後部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急,主題突出,條理清楚。

3)範文使用了and, what is more, however等連詞,在段落之間使用了on the other hand(說明前後兩個觀點是相悖的),這些連接手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯系,使文章表達連貫,渾然一體。

4)範文在第二段為說明不收門票的「原因」時增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等細節,這也是解決句與句之間缺少連貫性的常見方法。

總之,要想使自己的文章有亮點,吸引讀者,在考試中獲得高分,就應在用詞、造句、謀篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一處特長都是「亮」點,都是值得肯定的。

『肆』 高考英語作文亮點短語

就我而言:as far as i concerned
briefly/ in brief 總之
yaccident偶然
onaccountof…因為…,由於…
inadditionto…除…之外
on(the/an)average平均,一般來說
onthebasisof…根據…,在…的基礎上
at(the)best充其量,至多
onbusiness因公,因事
inanycase無論如何,總之
incaseof…假使…,萬一…incase假如,以防(萬一)免得
innocase決不
keep/holdpacewith…跟上…,與…同步
takeplace發生,進行
taketheplaceof…代替…
makesense講得通,有意義
agreat/gooddealof大量(修飾不可數名詞)
influenceon影響
replyto…回答…,答復…
onceuponatime從前onceinawhile偶爾,有時
accountfor…說明…
allowfor…考慮到…
liveon/by…靠…生活,以…為食
referto…參考…,查閱…,涉及…,提到…
serveas…用做…
takefor把……認為是…,把……看成是…
thinkover仔細考慮
dependon…取決於…
devoteto…奉獻…,致力於…
engagein…從事於…,忙著

『伍』 高中英語作文中常用哪些可以加分,有亮點的過渡句要偏難一點的,謝啦

一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分:
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all. Thank you.
三、議論文模板
1.正反觀點式議論文模板
導入:
第1段:Recently we』ve had a discussion about whether we should... (導入話題)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方觀點)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方觀點)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What』s more... In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)
結論:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(個人觀點) オ
2.「A或者B」類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2個B的優勢)
結論:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出結論) オ
3.觀點論述類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (過渡句,承上啟下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)
結論:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照應第1段,構成"總—分—總"結構)
4."How to"類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文:
第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)
結論:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 . This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 . After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化, the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). / It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板:
1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

『陸』 高考有哪些增分的英語作文句子

。記住一些諺語 Times wait for no man 時不待人。 knowledge if power.知識就是力量。it's never too late to learn.學習總不嫌晚。where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
Health is better than wealth.健康勝過財富。Better early than late.寧早毋遲。
二,開頭句子 As we all know /as is known to us all.眾所周知。Every coin has two sides.任何事都有正反兩方面。
Just as the saying goes.正像諺語所說。
With rapid development of science and technology, more and more people ,,,隨著科技的快速發展,越來越多的人,,,
It is common believed that 人們普遍認為,,
Nowadays there is a growing concern over,,,最近,,,引起了人們的關注。
It is universally acknowledged that,,,全世界人都知道,,,
三,結尾句子.In a word /All in all/ 總之。In short /In brief.簡單地說 I believe everything will be better in the future.我相信將來一切都會好起來。
I think/ In my opinion,/as far as I'm concerned 在我看來。
I would appreciate it if you could ,,,.如果你能,,我會感激的。
I am looking forward to seeing you/hearing from you.我盼望著看見你/收到你的來信。
Only by doing sth/ in this way can we do sth.只有通過做某事/用這種方法我們才能。。。
We must take immediate measures to protect our environment.我們必需採取緊急措施來保護我們的環境。
四。記住下面的好句子
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.網際網路在我們生活中正起著重要作用。
People may have different opinions.人們可能各持己見。
It is high time that we did ,,,/should do sth我們早應該這樣做了。
There is no doubt that,,毫無疑問,,
We should spare no effort to do sth我們應該不遺餘力地做,,
It has the following advantages.它有如下優勢。
五。有一些高級詞去替換下面詞
indivials -- person
positive /promising -- perfect
dreadful/poor/ill---bad
quite a few---many
affair/business/matter--thing
beneficial/rewarding--helpful
desire--want
bear in mind that--remember
bearly--only

『柒』 高中英語作文怎麼寫分數高

一、長短句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精闢的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:

As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!

強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主題句原則

國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成「群龍無首」之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊塗!不知所雲!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目瞭然,必會平安無事!

特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句).

Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

三、一二三原則

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點…如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的「標簽」來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用於兩點的情況)

10)for one thing, for another thing(適用於兩點的情況)

建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!

四、短語優先原則

寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發現亮點—精彩的短語,那麼你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎麼辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it.

五、多實少虛原則

原因很簡單,寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:

走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應該說:slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應該說:sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應該說:dance out of the room

老人走出房間應該說:stagger out of the room

所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!

因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然後我主動搭訕,然後我們去咖啡廳,然後我們認識了,然後我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先後順序,先什麼,後什麼,所以然後這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或因果關系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短語:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)

有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。

舉例:This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分:

When to go, Why he goes away…

附加(多此一舉)

如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話裡面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don』t enjoy that book you are reading.

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影響整個句子的構成;定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

排比(排山倒海句)

文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那麼我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢恢宏)

要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、挑戰極限原則

既然是挑戰極限,必然是比較難的,但是並非不可攀!

原理:在學生的文章中,很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鍾的時間看看就可以領會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!

『捌』 怎麼寫出英語作文得分的「亮點」

字跡,短語,詞彙,從句,句式。
短語詞彙背點逼格高的,虛擬語氣最好用用一句,定語從句基本每句話都可以用適當用兩句就行了,句式去網上扒然後背,最後就是字跡流暢,整體美觀。

『玖』 高中英語作文中常用哪些可以加分,有亮點

一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分:
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all.Thank you.
三、議論文模板
1.正反觀點式議論文模板
導入:
第1段:Recently we』ve had a discussion about whether we should...(導入話題)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方觀點)
Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)
第3段:However,the others are strongly against it.(反方觀點)
Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What』s more...In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)
結論:
第4段:Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages,for it will do us more harm than good,so I support it.(個人觀點) オ
2.「A或者B」類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others,however,argue that B is much better.Personally,I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that ...Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)
第3段:Of course,B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2個B的優勢)
結論:
第4段:But if all these factors are considered,A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出結論) オ
3.觀點論述類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
As a student,I am strongly in favour of the decision.(亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows.(過渡句,承上啟下)
正文:
第2段:First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)
結論:
第3段:In conclusion,I believe that...(照應第1段,構成"總—分—總"結構)
4."How to"類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem,but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is ...Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)
結論:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題.The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 .This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 .After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化,the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) .The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 .In the column,we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that (結論).The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因)./ It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板:
1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture,we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know,.../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

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