Ⅰ 英語作文點評【七年級水平】
the Great Wall.Wall大寫,是打錯了吧.
I am second. am改成was
They were so clelicious.我沒見過這么拼delicious的......
And some people talked with our about Great Wall.應該加the 吧......
know 的過去式專是knew
think 的過去式是throught
我也屬7年級^-^
Ⅱ 英語作文點評 謝謝
功底是有但是少些套路，建議背些模板和常用句型如議論文一般採用三段式模板好點正反對立觀點分類闡明最好終結表達自己觀點·····
Ⅲ 初中英語作文，求老師糾正點評下~， 謝謝~
I make my mind to study harder for going to Peking University. "下定決心做某事"應該是make up one's mind to do.在原句中加個up.
I'll study harder at school ,read more good books at home,and to make my brain runs more quickly 從語法的角度說，這句有問題。因為回and 是並列連詞答，前後要連接相同的結構。要麼把 and 後面的to 去掉。要麼把and 及前面的逗號去掉。在"at school" " read more good"中間加and.
Ⅳ 英語作文評語大全
依式行文,文筆素源朴,結構嚴謹.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
內容豐富,結構嚴謹,體系完備,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
簡潔流暢,層次井然,結構嚴謹,文字生動,頗富幽默,筆調輕松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
Ⅳ 點評一篇英語作文
1.They thought it was not good for me to watch TV too long.此句應該把too long改成for long time
2.I was angry,I thought they didn't understand me at all.逗號後邊應該加and
總體上來說語法沒有多少錯誤 但是句法過於簡單 單調
Ⅵ 英語作文點評
建議
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被動不合適)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有兩個謂語動詞，there be 和主系表結回果沖突。可改為答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名詞放feel後不合適)
Ⅶ 英語作文教師評語
Teachers』 Remarks
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after
final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of
mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the
school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a
good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good
evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a
nice remark.
Ⅷ 英語作文請求點評
以下是你的錯誤：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正確：started
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正確：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正確：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正確：believe
5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建議：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.
6. They are helpful.
建議：They are indeed helpful to me.
7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建議: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.
8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建議：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.
9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建議: I wish I could master this language in the future.