初中英語作文分析

㈠ 初中英語作文滿分是多少分

按照中考的標准來看，初中英語作文滿分是20分。

其中給分的標准為：

1、整內篇作文滿分20分，容其中內容8分，語言8分，結構4分2、內容貼切，句子流暢，用語准確，加整體印象分1分；不滿60個詞，少1——5個詞扣0.5分，6——10個詞扣1分。

2、所有給出問題涉及的三項內容，每少一項扣3分；每個拼寫，大小寫，標點符號等錯誤扣0.5分；同一的拼寫錯誤不重復扣分，扣分總和不超過2分；語法錯誤每項扣1分，同一錯誤不重復扣分，扣分總和不超過2分。

(1)初中英語作文分析擴展閱讀

注意切勿出現中式英語：

翻譯錯誤的出現不僅是因為水平有限，而且往往出於思維的惰性。把漢語原文的詞語都變成英文詞語，按一定順序串成句子，確實已經讓初學者費了不少腦筋。

這時尤其要認識到，寫作過程遠遠沒有結束。你還需要注意:詞語是否譯得恰當，要避免虛假對應，詞語間搭配是否合適，要避免照搬漢語搭配，句子結構是否自然，要避免中式英文和翻譯腔。

需要說明的是，有一類常見錯誤這里沒有列舉，那就是英語單詞的拼寫問題。因為它屬於英語學習的基礎內容，與漢譯英本身沒有直接關系。但大家還是要充分意識到正確拼寫的重要，勤查詞典，避免此類錯誤的發生。

㈡ 關於初中英語作文

1、你得單詞過關。
2、語法你得理解。
3、多背一些經典的好的句子。
4、多看一些好的寫作文章，把大體的輪廓記住，然後寫作時進行套用。

㈢ 常考的初中英語作文

我是幫你從文庫找的。比較全面，第一份是熱點話題，第二份是經典類型。
但是我這些太多了，你郵箱留下我發給你電子稿吧。

第一份：
突發事件問題是中考書面表達的熱點話題，從非典到雪災，從地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都頻頻出現在各地中考試卷中，因此必須重視。但這類文章的寫作有一定的難度，掌握基本句式和寫作技巧非常必要
典型例句
1.one +of + 形容詞最高級+ 名詞復數
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in Wenchuan.
2. It』s our ty to do sth It』s our ty to help them.
3.As….as possible We should help them as much as possible.
4.here be….. Here are lots of things we can do.
5.We should keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb+ 形容詞 It makes many people homeless.
7. too …..to They are too young to look after themselves
1、汶川大地震:5月12日，四川省汶川地區發生了罕見的大地震，那裡的人們痛失親人和家園。全國人民眾志成城，抗震救災。作為一名中學生，請你談談你的做法和感受。
要求：文章語言流暢，邏輯清晰，用詞准確，80—100字左右；詞彙參考：地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感動be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自願做某事volunteer to do sth
參考範文：
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sad. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I』m deeply moved by these people. So I』ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪災
去年春節期間，我國大部分地區遭受雪災，特別是南方，室幾十年未遇。公路、鐵路、機場都被迫關閉，電網癱瘓，數百萬人不能回家過年。部分山區人民生活異常困難，在各級政府的帶領下，人民群眾、解放軍戰士英勇抗擊雪災，涌現出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中學生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改變這種狀態？
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn』t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
從電視上看到美國正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分學校停課你為你正在美國上學的筆友Mike的健康與安全擔心。請立即給他寫一封email詢問他的情況，並給他提出防護建議。
要點：一．詢問: 1.他的健康狀況；2.他們學校有無甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他們是否還上學。
二．建議: 1.盡量呆在家裡，少去人多的地方；2.勤洗手；講衛生3.多開窗，保持空氣新鮮；
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I』m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you』d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you』ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、「5.12」汶川大地震後，某校將開展「人人為災區孩子獻愛心」的主題班會活動，現在請你以學生會的名義寫一份倡議書，內容要點如下：
1.許多孩子地震後不能上學 2.。沒有足夠的學慣用品和衣物 3.每個孩子都應該有上學的權利
4.我們應該作一些力所能及的事情去幫助、他們，比如…… 5.希望他們能盡快重返校園…….
注意：1.可根據要點，適當發揮，（參考詞彙：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can） 2.詞數：70詞左右
參考作文：
Dear students，
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless. Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don』t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
Students』 Union
健康問題是中考常考的話題，出題形式多樣。典型例句
1. It is very important to keep healthy。 2. How can we keep healthy?
3. We can』t go to sleep too late. We can』t get up too late。
4. We should eat the food healthily。 5. We should do more exercise。
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。
7. I didn』t feel like eating anything。 8. I decided to see the doctor。
9. In the doctor』s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
例文： 簡要介紹一下如何才能保持健康，並展開想像，適當發揮。要求：詞數80左右。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考答案：
All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep ring the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don』t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
2.衛生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以「關愛健康」為題的主題班會,請根據內容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。
保持健康的重要性 保持健康的方法 保持健康的結論 (你的看法?)
1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強體;3.鄙棄不良習慣
How to stay our health /fit?
範文1: Dear boys and girls :
I』m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle school student, first you』d better do more exercise such as playing ball games, running ,swimming and jumping rope. Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don』t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy. Last you mustn』t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thanks!
範文2:Dear boys and girls:
I』m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food don』t have enough time to sleep. If we want to keep fit, we must keep taking exercise every day .Eat lots of fruit and vegetables .Sleep for about 8 hours a night. Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品 .Early to bed early to rise/get up .Breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air. Keep happy every day. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
3、根據中英文提示，寫出內容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯的稿件。（字數不少於60詞，英文提示詞供選用） . 有寫學生不愛吃學校的午飯，常到校外去吃他們所喜歡吃的食物。但有些食物並不利於他們的身體健康。「英語角」打算針對這個問題展開討論。請你准備一篇討論稿，談談你的看法和建議。
參考詞彙：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
範文：
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn』t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I』m afraid it』s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn』t healthy enough.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
關於環境保護問題: 環境保護問題是中考熱門話題，出現頻率高，難度較大，必須掌握。
典型句子
1. It』s our ty to save waste. 2. As we know , water is very important to man,
3.we can』t live without water. 4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. 5.But some people don』t care about it . 6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution
7. It』s our ty to protect our environment。 8. It is very important to take care of our environment。 9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a stbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。 15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It』s everyone』s ty to love and protect the environment.
例文
1.假如你是新華中學的學生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日，我國已經禁止使用塑料袋，你對此有何看法和什麼好的建議?
I』m Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don』t like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their proction. And they can』t decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people can』t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It』s good for our environment.
So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment.
Let』s make our world more and more beautiful.
2 、 6月5日( June 5)是世界環境保護日， 我們周圍的環境變得越來越糟糕，污染越來越嚴重……。假如你是學生Jone.，你校要進行「如何保護我們的環境?」專題演講比賽，要求：1、舉例說明環境存在的問題1—3方面;2、如何保護好我們的環境，採取怎樣的措施，舉例1—3方面進行說明，字數80左右。
Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:
I』m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I』m a bit nervous as I』ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we can』t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment ? For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.
「There is only one earth」, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!

㈣ 初中英語試卷分析

一：考試基本情況
本學期我總共擔任四個年級的英語老師，其中五六年級學習的是人教版的第三冊，即都是五年級的英語課程。雖然，五六年級的學生已經接觸英語學習有兩年半的時間了。但是，由於他們的底子不好，對英語的學習態度不夠端正不夠積極。再來就是平常也很懶的記單詞，上課的過程，也不主動獲取知識，狀態不好，所以，這次的考試的成績很不理想。五年級參加考試人數為28人、及格率21.4%，平均分41.6分。六年級參加考試人數有28人、及格率比五年級稍微好點46.6%、平均分55.5分。
二、試題分析
本次試題只有讀寫部分。試題緊扣教材，貼近學生實際生活，很好的考察了學生的運用能力和交流能力，並兼顧了對學生的實踐創新能力的考查。題型中有對詞彙、句型結構的考查，又有對日常交際用語及初步語法知識的考查。筆試部分沒有了純單詞拼寫的題目，而是結合實際生活，注重學生對單詞在句中運用能力的考查；不同的題型結構有不同的考查目標，各題型的比重適度，賦分合理，保證了在整體上體現考查目標突出語境，照顧知識覆蓋面。
三、試卷答題情況分析
通觀學生試卷答題情況，學生對於單詞的認比句子的應用好。可以看出平時學生在應用句子上下的工夫及少，課堂句型的訓練還是不夠。因此，學生在選擇單詞這一項完成的比較理想。但是在涉及到語法點的時候，學生就很容易犯錯誤了，特別是第三大題的指出一項錯誤並加以改正。對於上游的學生來說是比較得心應手的，但是中下游的學生基本上不能判斷出來，即使是知道哪個地方出現了錯誤，也不能改正。因此，這是失分率最高的一道題了。第五大題的連詞成句，是平時訓練最多，但也是學生最容易犯錯誤的體型了，即使是上游的同學也不容易拿滿分。第七和第九道題都屬於閱讀判斷、選擇。 從答卷的情 況來看，大部分的學生，都能基本理解文章提供的信息，進行正確的選擇，完成的還算不錯 。總的來說，就是學生在學習上還不夠主動，積極。從另一個方面說也是知識的掌握不牢靠。這也說明了我在教學上還必須做很大的改進，學習運用更多有效的教學方法，幫助學生更好的獲取知識，鞏固知識。
四、改進措施
1、 教學中要繼續突出學生的主體地位。小學五年級還處於英語學習的起始階段，所以一切教學活動的設計和開展應符合學生的心理和生理特點，遵循語言學習的規律，用多種手段激發學習興趣，力求使學生在生動活潑的課堂活動中掌握英語基礎知識，提高聽、說、讀、寫能力
2、繼續加強語音、詞彙及句型教學訓練。在起始階段教師一定要使學生過好語音關，使他們牢固掌握音標和英語字母的讀音規則，以提高獨立學習單詞的能力。在詞彙教學中教師應靈活多樣地運用情景教學法、詞義對比法、動作演示法、形象介紹法等方法，使學生將單詞的音、形、義有效結合起來，活學活用，在輕松的氛圍中學好詞彙和句型，為今後進一步的學習
3、 在教學中，把交際能力的培養放在十分突出的位置。小學生模仿能力強，記憶力好，但是活潑好動，教師要利用這一特點，努力激發學生的學習興趣，採用角色表演、游戲、情景對話、教唱英文歌曲等直觀形象的教學方法，結合圖片、簡筆畫、動作表演等教學手段，培養和發展學生的英語
4、深鑽教材，充分利用教材，把握教學內容的深度與廣度，培養學生的參與意識和語言交際能力;適當進行知識拓展,積累知識，及時鞏固，強化訓練，有效提高成績，在積累知識的基礎上提高學
5、 教學中尊重學生的個體差異，不放棄任何一個學生，實行分層次教學，根據不同的學情因材施教，在抓兩頭帶中間，使成績差的學生有信心能「吃好」，尖子生有提升能「吃飽」。
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㈤ 一篇初中英語作文

My Favourite TV Programme
Nowadays the 26th Olympic Games are being held in AtLanta. It is the most popular program all over the world and also my favourite progamme.
In 1992 I was watching the 25th Olympic Games on TV with my schoolmates in China. We cheered at every success the Chinese athelets had. As the Chinese national flag was rising and the national anthem ringing in my ears I was moved to tears just as the medalists. It is the happiest moment for them and for me. I am proud of being a Chinese.
Now that I am in America, things are different. I am so near to the games yet so far away emotionally from those watching around lite. Whenever the Chinese made a mistake, the Americans cheered, which angered me greatly. Each country wants every gold medal. That is understandable. The problem is that they have so much prejudice against our motherland.
I admired Wang Yifu's courage and stamina. He lost his gold medal because of his illness. As soon as he regretfully put down his gun, he fell unconscious and was earried away on a stretcher.
Mo Huilen also lost her gold medal painfully. The young girl was not satisfied with a silver and braved for the gold at the risk of losing it. She showed the true spirit of sportsmanship. I sing in praise of them even if they lose. In my opinion we should praetice what we preach and stick to the Olympic creed that the most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the triumph but the struggle. The essential thing is not to have conquered but to have fought wen.
我最喜歡的電視節目
第26屆奧運會正在亞特蘭大舉行。這是世界上最受歡迎的節日，也是我最喜歡的節日。
1992年，我和同學在中國看了第25屆奧運電視節目。我們為中國運動員的每一成就而歡呼。當中國國旗升起、國歌在耳邊奏響時，我和獲獎者一樣激動得流淚。那是我們最幸福的時刻。我為自己是中國人而驕傲。
現在到了美國，情況就不同了。我離比賽那麼近，可在感情上卻與周圍觀看的人離得那麼遠。每當中國人一出錯，美國人就叫好，這使我很生氣。每個國家都想得金牌，這是可以理解的。問題是他們不應對我們的祖國抱有如此的偏見。
我敬佩王逸夫的勇氣和毅力。他因病而痛失金牌。他遺憾地一放下槍，就暈倒了，被人們用擔架抬走。
莫慧蘭也痛失金牌。這個年輕的姑娘不滿足於已到手的銀牌，而冒著可能失去獎牌的風險勇敢地去爭奪金牌，表現了真正的運動員風格。
我贊美他們，盡管他們沒有成功。在我看來，我們應實踐奧運精神，重在參與，就像在生活中最重要的不是成功而是奮斗一樣。關鍵不是打勝而是打得好

I like the program"Animal World" . First of all, I like animals, especially small animals. Secondly, the host is able to make the program lively and interesting. Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I haven't known before. I gain some knowledge about animal life, such as, different lives of various kinds of animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the importance of animal protection.
I want to say that animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans. We must keep nature in balance.
Please give your love to animals. Stop killing them.

我喜歡「動物世界」這個節目。首先，我喜歡動物，尤其是小動物。第二，主持人把節目辦得既生動又有趣。另一方面，通過這個節目，我知道了許多以前不知道的關於動物生活方面的事情，例如不同動物的不同生活習慣，人與動物之間、人與自然之間的關系，還有保護動物的意義。
我想說的是，動物是自然的一部分，它們與人類不可分割，我們必須保持生態平衡。
請把你們的愛給它們吧，不要殺害它們。

"Animal World" is my favorite program. First of all, I like animals,especially small animals. Secondly, the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting. Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I haven't known before. I gain some knowledge about animal
life such as different lives of different animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the meaning of animal protection.
Now I understand animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans. We must keep nature in balance so that we will have a good life in the future.
Let's love animals. Never do any harm to them.

「動物世界」是我最喜歡的電視節目。首先，我喜歡動物，尤其是小動物；第二，主持人把節目辦得既生動又有趣；第三，通過這個節目，我知道了許多以前不知道的事情，獲得了一些動物生活方面的知識。例如，不同動物的不同生活習慣，人與動物之間、人與自然之間的關系，還有保護動物的意義。
現在我懂得了，動物像我們一樣是自然的一部分，它們與人類不可分割。我們必須保持生態平衡，才能使我們將來的生活更好。
熱愛動物吧，不要再傷害它們。

Sports in Our School
Everyone in our college goes in for sports. Every morning after we get up we do morning exercises and we do exercises again ring the long break. We only have one P.E. class a week, but we do physical training every afternoon. The most popular sport seems to be basketball. Another popular game is football. The girls like playing badminton. And volleyball is also liked by many of us when the weather is warm.
Besides ball games, many of us are keen on track and field events. Every term we hold a sports meet.
We have school teams of basketball, volleyball and football. We often have friendly matches with teams from other schools. Whenever there is an important match at the Nangchang Stadium, you 』 re sure to find many of our schoolmates and teachers among the spectators. In short, we all love sports, and we train regularly to keep fit for work, study, and the defence of our country.

第一個：Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention
近來，...的問題已經成為人們注目的焦點。

第二個：Along with the rapid growth of ...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.
隨著...的快速增長，...在日常生活中已經變得越來越重要。

第三個：From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that...
綜上所述，我們能得出如下結論...

第四個：In summary, we can draw the following conclusions ...
考慮到所有的因素，我們意識到...

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㈥ 初中英語作文格式及範文

一、書信格式

1 .信頭。指發信人的地址和日期。從信紙的上端中央往右寫。第一行寫單位名稱，第二行寫門牌號和路名，第三行寫市名、省名、國名，第四行寫發信日期。學生寫信時第一行寫班級名稱，第二行寫系科名稱，第三行寫學校名稱，第四行寫市、省名稱，第五行寫國家名稱，第六行寫發信日期。如果是國內信件，國名可以不寫。要特別注意英文地址寫法順序是從小單位到大單位。日期的寫法有美英之分。英國的寫法是：日，月，年，如 10th of October ， 2002 .美國的寫法是：月，日，年，如 October 10 ， 2002 .例如：

Xiangyang Middle School （向陽中學）

No . 120 ， Xinhua Road （新華路 120 號）

Cangzhou ， Hebei Province 061001 （滄州市河北省 061001 ）

P . R . of China （中華人民共和國）

October 20 ， 2002 （ 2002 年 10 月 20 日）

2 .信內地址。指收信人的姓名和地址。低於信頭 1 — 2 行，從左邊開始寫。第一行寫姓名、頭銜，第二行寫單位名稱，第三行寫門牌號及路名，第四行寫市、省名稱，第五行寫國名。寫往學校的信，第一行寫姓名、頭銜，第二行寫系科名稱，第三行寫學校名稱，第四行寫市名、省名及郵政編碼，第五行寫國名。商業往來信件及公函必須寫信頭和信內地址。親友、熟人之間的信可以不寫信內地址，信頭處寫發信日期就行了。它與信封上收信人姓名、地址完全一樣。

3 .稱呼。就是對收信人的稱呼。信內地址下隔一、二行寫稱呼，其左側與信內地址第一行對齊，稱呼後面一般用逗號，但正式函件稱呼後多用冒號。對不相識的男子，單數常用 Sir ， Dear Sir ，或 My Dear Sir ；復數常用 Dear Sirs 或 Gentlemen .對不相識的女子，單數常用 Madam ， Dear Madam ，或 My Dear Madam ；復數常用 Madams 或 My Dear Madams .對比較熟識的男子，普通稱 Dear Mr .。。即可。對比較熟識的女性，普通稱 Dear Mrs （或 Miss ）。。。即可。

4 .正文。是書信的主要部分，一般從稱呼下方隔一至兩行處開始寫正文。每段的第一個字母一般要縮進 3 — 5 個字母的空格。正文的內容要表達清楚，語言要簡單明了，態度要誠懇禮貌。如果信中涉及的事情不多，可以一段到底，如果要講的事情多，則可以分成幾段，段與段之間常隔 1 — 2 行。

5 .結束語。是寫信人對收信人的謙稱，寫在正文的下面 2 — 3 行處，從信紙中央偏右的地方寫起，一般用 Yours （第一個字母大寫）。若是親戚（包括家人），可以寫 Your loving son ／ sister ／ brother ／ daughter 等之類的表達法，若是對朋友，可以寫 Your friend ；若是對老師，可以寫 Your student .

6 .簽名。一般寫在結束語之下。

二、信封

英文信封的寫法與漢語不同。收信人的姓名及地址應寫在信封中下部，且先寫姓名後寫地址。寄信人的姓名及地址應寫在信封的左上角，若是普通書信，也可寫在信封背面。郵票貼在信封的右上角。在信封上常見的附加說明有「 Urgent （急件）， Express （快件）， Registered （ Regd ）（掛號信）， Airm ail （航空信）等」，要根據實際情況選用。下面是信封的格式：

怎麼樣，同學們？會用英語寫信了嗎？做一道中考題練練吧。

（ 2002 河北省）根據提示和要求完成下面短文。

假如你（ Li Lei ）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友 Jim 從英國給你寄來一件禮物—一件紅色的襯衫，並附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什麼。請你給他寫一封回信（ 100 個詞左右）表示感謝。回信要包括以下內容：

①向 Jim 問好並對他表示感謝。

②禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

③告訴 Jim 你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問 Jim 的近況，並表示希望他能來中國。

注意：①信的格式已經給出。②信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。

65Zhonghua Street

Shijiazhuang 050000

Hebei ， China

June 21st ， 2002

Dear Jim ，

How are you ？ ____________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________
範文..
Your friend ，

Li LeiMy dearest Mother,
The mother『s day is coming and I would like to say "Happy mother『s day" in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day, I will stay away and can『t give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself, so don『t worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can『t be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother『s day.
Love,
Your so寫作知識輔導——記敘文
Hi ， dear friends .前幾次講的內容你們掌握了嗎？這次我要給大家說說初中階段常見的幾種文體——記敘文、描寫文、說明文的寫法。咱們先說說記敘文吧。

記敘文是以寫人、敘事為主要內容的一種文體，也是英語作文中最普遍、最基本的文體。它一般包括兩種：事實記敘文和想像記敘文。事實記敘文是寫真實事情，常用一般過去時；想像記敘文是寫虛擬的故事，常用一般現在時。它們的特點都是通過對人物、事件和景物的描寫，表現文章的主題和作者的思想感情。

記敘文寫作的基本要求是什麼呢？

①要有明確的中心思想。②記敘要清楚明白。③線索要清晰。④要有恰當的敘事角度。⑤選材要詳略得當。

具體地說，記敘文寫作要把握以下幾點：

1 .記敘文所記敘的事件必須相關連。要有開頭（ beginning ）、中間（ middle ）和結尾（ end ）。在必要時加入沖突（ conflict ），以使情節曲折，跌宕起伏。一般說來，寫記敘文應把握好六個要素： who （何人）、 what （何事）、 when （何時）、 where （何地）、 why （何因）、 how （怎麼）。初中階段多為敘事短文，一般應包括 where ， who ， what 這三個最基本的東西。

2 .寫作時觀點的掌握非常重要。記敘文常用第一人稱或第三人稱兩種人稱記述。用第一人稱的角度記敘，使人感到親切，讀者很容易產生身臨其境之感，相信真有其事。這種形式常用在寫自傳、本人的經歷或記敘耳聞目睹的事件；用第三人稱的角度記敘，使人感到客觀。這種形式常用在對重大事件的客觀報導，以及記敘他人的經歷或事跡。

3 .常見的敘述方式有：①順敘。按事情發展的順序或時間順序進行敘述。②倒敘。把事情的結局或某個突出的片段提到前面敘述，然後再按照事情的順序敘述下去。③插敘。在敘述過程中，由於某種需要，暫時把敘述的線索中斷一下，插入有關的另一敘述。④夾敘夾議。一方面敘述事情，一方面對這件事情加以分析或評論。

請看下面的例文。要求：寫一篇題為 Planting Trees 的文章。

Planting Trees

It was fine on March 12 ， 2001 . I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .

We arrived at the hill at eight o'clock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging ， planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e . Among us ， Wang Lin ， our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill ， he worked harder . When he finished his task ， he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work .「 I must learn from him ，」 I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees ， we smiled happily ， forgetting our tiredness .

這是一篇記敘文，記敘了 2001 年 3 月 12 日上山植樹的情況。文章主題鮮明，有條有理。 when （何時）、 where （何地）、 who （何人）、 what （何事）等交待的清清楚楚。

描寫文是以描寫為主要表達方式的文體，所謂描寫就是作者用生動、形象的語言對

人物、事物和環境作具體形象的描繪和刻畫，描寫的主要作用是：①展現美麗的自然景色；②描寫人物的外貌和內心世界；③交待人物活動的自然環境和社會環境。 在寫作過程中，作者可以按空間位置順序，由遠及近，由上及下，由外到內，由前到後組織材料，也可以按作者視線轉移的順序組織材料，先看到的先寫，後看到的後寫。描寫的基本方法按性質可分為主觀描寫和客觀描寫兩種。所謂主觀描寫就是在描寫過程中摻入作者自己的感受，寄託自己的主觀感情，塑造自己的理想的形象；客觀描寫就是在描寫過程中，作者不帶或很少帶主觀的感情色彩，而只對人物或某物的特徵客觀地、就事論事進行描寫。

請看下面的描述文：

Sunset

In order to see the sunset ， I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill .

At that time ， the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldn't even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill ， the light became a bit yellow . After a short while ， it was completely golden ， then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud covered more and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back .

本文交待了看日落的時間、地點，詳細地描寫了日落的全過程。文章主要採用了客觀描寫方法，語言簡潔，描寫具體、生動。

下面該談談說明文了。

說明文是以說明為主要表達方式的文體。它主要用來說明事物的特點、發展變化規律、分析前因後果，目的在於使讀者獲得必要的信息，使人們對事物有個清晰、完整的了解和認識。說明文分為三種類型：實體事物說明文，包括說明書、廣告、解說詞等；事理說明文，包括理論性概念解釋、書文簡介、教材等；文藝性說明文，即要把說明的對象擬人化，進而編成一個故事介紹給讀者。

寫說明文要注意以下幾點：

1 .要抓准特徵。對某一事物予以說明，首先要弄清從哪些方面加以說明才能准確地反映被說明的事物。一般說來，說明事物可以從被說明事物的顏色、形狀、形態；性質、性能、習性；原因、原理；作用、用途、功能；危害、影響；結構；操作過程；發生、發展的規律等方面著手。但是，每一事物都有它自己的特徵，因而顯示出了這一事物與其他一事物的根本區別，因此，在說明事物時，不要面面俱到，要抓住事物的特徵，這樣才能使讀者得到具體而深刻的印象。

2 .層次要分明。說明事物要注意條理，否則就不可能說清復雜的事物。例如說明事物的結構，就要按照構造的順序來說明，或從上到下，或從前到後，或由外到里，或由主到次。又如說明四季的變化，就要按照時間的順序（ spring ， summer ， autumn ， winter ）來寫。

3 .解析要清楚。對各種知識所作的解釋，對某種事物所作的說明，都要清楚明白。

4 .表現手法要多樣。常見的說明文方法有：①下定義。②舉例子。③運用比喻、比擬的方法。④做比較。⑤引用數字。⑥分類別。⑦列圖表。

5 .用詞要力求准確。引用的數據要絕對可靠，文字要簡明扼要，一目瞭然。這是寫說明文在語言文字上的要求：

請看下面的例文：

Hello ， friends ，

You are warmly welcomed to our school . I'm Wu Dong . I'm very glad to be your guide . First ， I'd like to tell you something about our school . It was set up in 1957 . The number of students is over 1200 ， and the teachers about 100 . There are altogether 20classes . Besides the teaching buildings ， we have a library for different kinds of subjects ， and a school-run workshop .

We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon . After classes ， we join in various activities ， such as ball games ， painting ， singing and dancing .

Now let me show you around our school . This way ， please .

本文是一篇說明文，是由學生接待來訪的朋友，向人們介紹本校的情況。本文目的明確，材料准確、詳實，語言簡練，並能按一定的順序來寫，是一篇較好的說明文。

怎麼樣？會寫這幾種文體了嗎？試著寫兩篇吧？

1 .記述一次郊遊活動（ outing ），包括下列內容：

①時間、地點：上星期六，海邊。

②活動內容：去時花了幾個小時，到海邊後搭帳蓬，在露天生火做飯，講故事，唱歌，做游戲。

③自己感想：盡管很累，大家玩得很痛快。

要求：用第一人稱寫，詞數 70 左右。

2 .向明中學的「英語角」活動開展得有聲有色。請你用英語為一家英文報紙寫一篇 80 — 100 字的簡訊。

㈦ 如何分析英語作文初中

英語作文初中的很簡單吧。
一兩個短句加三四個長句。
一般按照總分總
不要語法錯誤就行了

㈧ 初中英語作文題目

我的初一的所有作文題目：
教科書上和老師布置的，絕對符合你現在的水平。難易適中。

初一上：
1.my favourite star:介紹一位你喜歡的明星（成龍、貝克漢姆、布蘭妮）
2.my partner:介紹你的搭檔（一般是好朋友）
3.our school:描述你的學校（用寫信方式）
4.my family:談談你的家庭（有多少人，幾個兄弟姐妹，他們的名字，性格.....）
5.Food and drink:make a food and drink poster(寫一些健康/不健康食品，還有你喜歡的不喜歡的 蔬菜水果...）
6.self-introction ：自我介紹
7.my weekend :周末做些什麼
8.my school day :在學校的一天
9.介紹家庭中的一員
10.my favorite animal
11.my birthday :write about what you usually do for your birthday.

初一下：
1.寫一張明信片（格式注意）
2.寫一封信告訴你朋友你怎麼過節日（格式注意）
3.計劃你下個周末
4.my dream school（時態）
5.介紹一個城市
6.my favourite Olympic sport

★7.介紹XX地 到 XX地 的旅程（寫乘什麼交通工具去的，是否舒服、有趣、流行，票價多少，所用時間。還可以對比 不同交通工具 的「性價比」）——這個比較難。

8.my partner's past life
9.寫精衛填海的故事
10.寫你祖父母小時的生活
11.a hero
12.write an email to your friend about your holiday.

還有很多可以從上面的基礎題目想開去。
這是我的教科書上的。
over.

㈨ 初中英語作文感受

我的感受：初中英語作文能把句子寫對就行了，最好多用點短語，至於句型有文采方面，高中作文，大學作文才突出強調！！

㈩ 初中英語作文範文

2013年英語七年級上冊作文，請同學們熟讀下列範文，然後仿寫：
1. My Friend（我的朋友）
I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is 12 years old. Her telephonenumber is 87634966 Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English andChinese. She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening tothe music. Her hobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl.We often help each other. We
are good friends.
2. 假設你是李枚，下面的照片是你的全家福，請你寫一篇文章介紹你的家庭。Hello, everyone! I'm Li Mei. Look! This is myfamily photo. This is my grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is ateacher. He is 36. and my mother is 36, too. Who』s that boy? Oh, heis my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are students.
3. 假設這是TOM的房間，請你用80詞左右介紹他的房間。
Look! This is Tom』s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on thebed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. Thecomputer is on the desk. Where is Tom』s baseball? Oh, It』s under the bed. Whatis on the floor? They are Tom』s shoes, socks and computer games. What do youthink of Tom』s room?
4. 介紹你的一日三餐。
Hello, everyone! I don』t like sports, but Ilike eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk,eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I likeFrench fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinner, I like fruits,vegetables and rice.
5. 以My Favorite…為題，寫一篇短文
My favorite subject is English. I like itbecause it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a littleEnglish. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk inEnglish. I can see the English movies and read English books. I think it isuseful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
6. My English Teacher（我的英語老師）
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looksvery young. She's about thirty years old, and she wears glasses. She's funny .But she is strict with us. She wants us to study hard, Her lessons areinteresting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons. She isa good teacher, and we all like her.
7. 自我介紹
My name is Wang Ming. My birthday is June 5th.I am Chinese. I am a student. I study very hard. My favorite subject isEnglish. I like it because it is interesting. I can play the piano and thetrumpet, but not very well. I love swimming and I am good at it. Of all kindsof movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. I』m one of thebest students in my class. My teachers all say I am a good student. They alllike me and I like them, too.

七年級英語（下）書面表達
Unit 1
1. 寫作話題:本單元以能力為話題，談論自己或他人的能力。如會干或不會干…….
2.寫作題目：假如你們學校幼兒園在暑假期間要招聘臨時業余輔導員，請你寫一則50詞左右的招聘廣告。要求：(1)喜歡孩子；（2）會唱，會畫，會電腦；（3）工作時間：暑假。
參考作文 Help Wanted
Are you goodwith children? We need help for summer holiday . Can you help kids with sports? Can you help kids with music ?Can you paint ? Can you play computer games ?Come and join us ! Please call Wang Ping at 6367786 . Our e-mail address is [email protected].

Unit 2
1. 寫作話題:本單元以日常生活習慣為話題，描述自己或他人的日常生活習慣。
2. 寫作題目：根據下面提示寫一篇50詞左右的短文，介紹自己一天的活動安排情況。
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I usually getup at 6:30 . Then I have breakfast . At7:10 I go to school . We have fourclasses in the morning ., and three classes in the afternoon . At 4:30 p.m. Igo home . After supper I do my homework . I usually watch TV from 8:00 to9:00.in the evening . Then I go to bed at 10:00 .
Unit 3
1. 寫作話題:本單元以如何到某地為話題，描述請某地的方式。
2. 寫作題目：根據下面提示寫一篇70詞左右的短文，張靜是我的好朋友，在青島上學，她的家距離學校約3千米，她通常騎自行車去上學，大約用20分鍾，但下雨時她乘計程車，大約5分鍾。她的父母在離家8千米的一家醫院工作，每天開汽車上班，大約要10分鍾。
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Zhang Jing ismy good friend. She studies in Qing.Her home is about three kilometers from school. She usually rides her bike toschool and it takes her about twenty minutes .But when it rains, she goes toschool by taxi. It takes her only five minutes . Her father and mother bothwork in a hospital. It』s eight kilometers from their home. They take a car towork . It takes them about ten minutes.
Unit 4
1. 寫作話題:本單元以規則話題，以祈使句表達規則。
2. 寫作題目：根據下面提示寫一篇60詞左右的短文。Tom 正和他的一個朋友Jim 談論他所在的學校。Tom 很不喜歡這所學校，原因是這所學校的規章制度太多。要點：（1）保持安靜（2）不準吃零食（3）不準亂扔垃圾（4）不準打鬧（5）按時上課（6）做好課前准備
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Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim hedoesn』t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules forus.
1. Keep quiet in the classroom,please.
2. Don』t eat snacks in theclassroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.
3. Don』t throw around.
4. Don』t fight and chase aftereach other in the classroom. Of course, you can』t make any noise.
5. Please arrive at the class ontime ,don』t be late. Or our teachers will be unhappy.
6. Get ready before the class. Don』tlook for anything after the class begins.
If we break anyone of them, we will be punished.
Unit 5
1. 寫作話題:本單元以動物話題，描述自己喜歡的動物及原因。
2. 寫作題目：根據下面表格的內容，以A Trip to the Zoo寫一篇60詞左右的短文介紹一下動物園新來的兩只動物。

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A Trip to theZoo
Welcome to the zoo. There are two newanimals. The panda』s name is Feifei .She is from China .She likes eating bamboo. Sheis lovely and shy. She is only two years old. The other animal is a lion .Hisname is Karl. He is from Africa. He likeseating meat. He is very dangerous and strong. He is three years old .We all like them.
Unit 6
1. 寫作話題:本單元以人們正在進行的活動話題，用現在進行時描述自己或他人正在進行的活動。
2. 寫作題目：假設你叫魏梅，根據下面提示給你的朋友Helen 寫一張明信片，介紹一下你和你的家人正在做什麼，不少於60詞。提示： 現在是星期三晚上八點，你的爺爺和爸爸在下象棋，奶奶和媽媽在看電視，姐姐在房間看書，哥哥在玩電腦游戲。你們很開心。
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Wednesday
Dear Helen ,
How are you? It』s eight o』clock in theevening now. What are you doing now? People in my family are doing differentthings. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing gamesvery much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my motherare watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having agood time.
See you soon.
Love,
Wei Mei
Unit7
1. 寫作話題:本單元人們在各種天氣里的活動話題，描述天氣情況和人們正在進行的活動。
2. 寫作題目：你家鄉的氣候怎樣？你喜歡什麼樣的氣候？以The Weather in My City 為題，寫一篇介紹天氣的短文。
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The Weather in My City
Hello, everyone！ I』m from Shengyang. Do you want toknow what the weather is like here? Let me tell you!
Shengyang is in the northeast of China. In spring, the weather ischangeable(多變的).Sometimesit』s warm, and sometimes it』s cold.. Insummer, it』s hot.. But I like it very much because I like swimming. The autumnin Shengyang is very nice. It』s neither too hot nor too cold .In winter, it』svery cold. You can see heavy snow everywhere. I like snow. I like to makesnowman with my friends.
Unit8
1. 寫作話題:本單元以問路指路為話題，向他人問路或指路。
2. 寫作題目：假設你叫李雷，這個星期天是你的生日，你准備在家舉辦一個生日聚會，聚會在六點鍾開始。你邀請了你的一些朋友參加，Susan 也在其中， 可她不知道去你家的路。你家住在Bridge Street，乘坐六路或八路公共汽車在Bridge Street站下車，下車後直走，然後在第一個十字路口右拐，左邊有一個郵局，你家就在郵局的對面，房子是紅色的，很容易找到。請根據所給信息給Susan寫封郵件。
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Dear Susan,
ThisSunday is my birthday. I』ll have a birthday at my home. It starts at 6p.m..Would you like to come? I』ll ask some of my friends to come. My home is on Bridge Street. Youcan take a No.6 or No.8 bus, and get off on Bridge Street. Go straight ,and then turnright at the first crossing .You can see a post office on your left. My home isacross from the post office. It is a red house. You won』t miss it..
Yours,
Li Lei
Unit9
1. 寫作話題:本單元以外表為話題，描述人的外貌愛好服飾等。
2. 寫作題目：根據以下信息用英語寫一則尋人啟事。Peter,今年四歲，今天在商店和媽媽走散。中等個頭，短頭發，小圓臉，大眼睛，上身穿白色的T恤，下身穿白褲子，腳穿一雙黑色的運動鞋，還背著一個藍色的小背包，請看到他的顧客把他領到廣播室。
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Ladies and Gentlemen, we are look forPeter. Peter, a four-year-old boy, was missing in the shop. He is of mediumheight, and he has short hair. His face is round, and his eyes are big. Hewears a white T-shirt and white trousers, and a pair of black sports shoes. Andhe has a blue bag. If someone finds him, please bring him into the BroadcastingRoom. His mother is there. Thank you .
Unit10
1. 寫作話題:本單元以買東西服務用語為話題，談論價格數量等。
2. 寫作題目：根據以下信息為朱老大餃子屋（ Zhu Laoda Dumpling House ）寫一則廣告。提示：（1） 本店餃子品種齊全，個大味美（2） 現有兩種特價餃子：雞蛋蔬菜餃子每10
個3元；牛肉餃子每10個5元（3）歡迎光臨本店。地址：光明路118號。電話685-8588
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Zhu Laoda Dumpling House
Would you like to have mplings? At ZhuLaoda Dumpling House ,we have all kinds of mplings and they are all large anddelicious.
Now we have two great specials! Special 1has eggs and vegetables and is just 3 yuan for 10. Special 2 is only 5yuan for10 and has beef and vegetables.
Welcome to our house! The address is No.118 Guangming Road.Our telephone number is 685-8588
Unit11
1. 寫作話題:本單元以學校旅行為話題，談論學校旅行及假期生活，描述過去發生的事情及感受。
2. 寫作題目：暑假已經過去，同學們都相互詢問時如何度過這個假期的，請你用英語寫一封信把你的假期和同學交流一下，向他們描述你的既有意義又充實的假期。提示：（1）堅持運動，鍛煉身體（2）多讀好書（3）旅遊觀光（4）當一名志願者（5）幫助父母。
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Dear Li Ping,
I had a good time ring my summervacation. Here is my vacation to show you.
First I did sports and learned to ply tabletennis. It』s good for my health. Then I read some books .After that I enjoyedan interesting sight for two weeks. Also, I volunteered to serve in thevolleyball game. Of course, at home I helped my parents do some cooking ,washing and so on.
I think I had a wonderful time ring thevacation . Did you have a nice summer vacation ? P lease tell me !
Tom
Unit12
1. 寫作話題:本單元以過去發生話題，談論學校旅行及假期生活，描述過去發生的事情及感受。
2. 寫作題目：根據下面提示寫短文：上周星期天，劉明賀他的朋友在山腳下野炊。他們中的一些人正在做游戲，一些在跳舞，他們感到很放鬆。突然，劉明看到一頭山羊正在跑。他對此很感興趣，平且開始追它跑了很長一段時間。當他想起他的朋友們時，他不知道他在哪兒。他迷路了。在那時，一個農夫過來，在他的幫助下，劉明又找到了他的朋友們。他感謝這位農夫平且向你告別。
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Last Sunday, Liu Ming and his friends wentfor a picnic at the foot of the mountain. Some of them were playing games, somewere dancing , they felt very relaxed. Suddenly, Liu Ming saw a goat running .He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time . When hethought of his friends again. He got lost. At that time, a farmer came. Withhis help ,Liu Ming found his friends again. He thanked the farmer and said:Goodbye」 to him.