『壹』 書面表達英語作文假如你是李華,進入高中後你覺得你的學習……一封電子郵件
Dear Mr Lin,
I』 glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.
When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it quite different from what I learned in junior middle school and I almost lost heart. Later I realized the importance of English, so I got up early to read Englisn text every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.
Now I』m improving English greatly.And I』m getting much interested in learning it.Thank you so much for your great help.
Wish you all the best.
『貳』 高一入學考試,英語作文, 主題:即將步入高中的打算及想法
範文一:
the plan for the new term
Another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.
firstly,i descide to finish my homework more carefully than before.And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didn't know it clearly.
secondly,i will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge.and try to combine thoery to practice.
Finally,i will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.
That's what i plant to do in a new term.
範文二:
I will be a high school student and the entrance examination is coming soon, there is a great need for me to make a precise plan of my studies.
From September to November,I will follow the teachers in the new lessons learning, and after class , the contemporary exercises are necessary.
Before the end of the first term, I will review all the lessons from beginning again.
From March to April, review all I have learned a second time.
Beginning from April, models tests should be the all.Several days before the exam, I will go over all the mistakes in the papers and have a good rest for the exam.
I hope this plan can further my studies.
範文三:
It is a new term now, and I hope I can do the best, so I make a plan for my English learning.
First, I will pay attention to listen to the teacher on the class, and if I don't do it, I will recite a passage for the class.
Second, I will do my homework carefully and hand it in on time. If I don't do it, I will write a whole passage 3 times.
Third, I will do the dictation on time and finish it well.If I don't do it well, I will do what the teacher want to.
Forth, I will try my best in the exam, and I will make a progress. If I fail in the exam, the teacher could call my parents.
哈哈,這三篇給你啦~~~!祝學習進步~~!
『叄』 英語作文 你給你的進入另一所高中學習的好朋友寫封信,,描述一下你的近況帶翻譯
Dear xxx,
Time is flying. Long time no see.Since I started my high school study, I have been missing you very much.
時光飛逝,好久不見。自從我開始高中的學習以來,一直在思念你。
My class have 46 students,most of them are from rural places.There are many extra-curricular activitieshere,and I have been making some new friends through these activities.My class tutoris one of my favorite teachers. He was very strict,but his lessons was so interesting that he gives my a very strong impression.What's more,now I study harder than before.How about your life?
我所在的班級有46名學生,他們多數來自於鄉村地區。這里有豐富的課外活動,通過這些活動我結識了許多新朋友。我的班主任是我最喜歡的老師之一。他很嚴格,然而他的課是如此的有趣令我對此印象深刻。並且,現在,我學習更加努力了。你的生活怎麼樣呢?
Althoughwe are in two different places now, we are still together, because we arealways heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again.
雖然現在我們在兩個不同的地方,但我們依然在一起,因為我們總是心連心。我相信我們還能再次見面。
Take care.
注意身體。
Yours,
xxx
『肆』 寫一篇升入高中後的感受英語作文
My life turns another page as I enter into a new school. My new
school has a big cafeteria, a place for us to have meals. There are
residence halls for students to live in. The school is not so large,but
the teachers and students in the school are very kindy .There are many
activities on campus, such as basketball club, science club, badminton
club and disciplinary team. Ithe school is not so large,but teachers and
students in the school are very kindly . am so excited to be a part of
this new student body since I love to play basketball. I will join the
team and be an active member and contribute greatly to the team. I love
my new school. I cannot wait to start my new life.
『伍』 進入高中讓你最難忘的事 英語作文
I still remember that thing a few years later and feel afraid. It happened on my way to play. It was Sunday. I would like to Maggie』s home for a visit. However, when I passed a river, I saw three children at my age playing in the river. How happy they were! At that time, I had a idea that I would like to ask Maggie to go swimming with me in the river. Suddenly, something scare happened. One the three chiledren slipped and the other two wanted to help him. Unfortunately, all of them were struggling. I was shock. And then I rushed to the river bank immediately. However, I saw nothing but the peaceful river. I knew what happened. I was frightened. A few hours later I heard the death of them. I was so frightened and sad that I have never go never any river since then.
多年後我仍然記得那件事,仍然感到害怕。它發生在我出去玩的路上。那是一個星期日。我想去瑪吉家。然而,在我路過一條河的時候,我看到三個與我年紀相仿的孩子在河裡玩。他們是多麼的開心啊!在那個時候,我有一個想法,我要叫瑪吉和我一起到河裡游泳。突然,發生了一些恐怖的事情。其中一個孩子滑倒了,另外兩個想去幫他。不幸的是他們三個都一起在水裡掙扎。我呆住了。然後我立刻沖到河邊。但是,除了平靜的河面我什麼都沒看見。我知道發生了什麼事。我嚇壞了。幾個小時後,我聽到他們死亡的消息。我很害怕很傷心以至於從那以後我從來沒有走近過任何河流。
『陸』 英語作文《進入高中後對英語的學習情況和感受》
Learning English is an very painful experience for me.At the very beginning,it is very harsd for me to express myself in English.Whenever I tried my best to speak English in class, i would be laughed by my classmates. After that I had no cofidence to speak English any more.I suffered a lot in the class because I did not want to lose face in front of my friends.Graally, I found it had nothing to do with my English study.I had made a fool of myself.I realized that the best way to prove myself is to study harder and caught up with others.So I seized every chance to speak English in class as well as in free talk.What's more,I did morning reading every day.I continued working till now.To my great joy, I can speak beautiful English now.The experience is painful but also helpful.
『柒』 以第一次進高中時的感受為主題的英語作文
The first English learning experiece in high school When I step in the senior high school, I feel that the study of every subject will be more complex.including English,we will learn a more standard English than before besides the increasing of English vocabulary.I feel a little nervous at the English study in high school because the words are getting harder to remember,what's more,the passages are longer and more difficult to understand.I have a strong feeling of challege.thinking that more work and pracice are needed in my future English study.I hope I will make it .with my efforts
『捌』 英語作文 關於新高中的學習生活
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hav got your letter today. Thank you for your concerning about my new life in my new school.
I am new a student of a high school. I have got to know many new stable-companions, who I am getting well along with. We are studying togerther and playing together. With the their help,, I have soon got used to the new life here.
My major subjets are Chinese, English and maths. There are six classes for both of Chinese and maths, five for English and the rest of them for other subjects in a week. The teachers who give lessons to us for the majors are all of ripe ages. The are strict with us in class, so they make deep impression on me.
To be kept healthy, we are arranged to do exercises after class. Besides, I enjoy most of the activities as our tasties, such as the groups of aeromodelling, drawing, reading and so on.
How about you? Could you be kind enough to let me know all about you and your school?
I am looking forward to your reply soon.
Yous,
Jim
Beijing
The warmest regards!
『玖』 高中英語作文評分(請高中英語教師進)
It was Grandpa`sbirthday party. Children ignored their grandpa, playing their mobile phone allthe time,① grandpa signed and hearing② their laughter, walked ③to his room lonely. (描述事件)It is we children who are often doing our business at parents` or grandparents`s④ parties. There is no denying that we ignore chat⑤ with our grandparents. (分析現象)What they need is a warm talk, so how should we do atthat party? here⑥ are some tips.
Firstly, never play your mobile phone ring a party, if possible, shut it off.Next, trying to talk with our grandpa isof great significance. Nevertheless,you`d better not talk them with some short words, which will hurt their minds, too.Futhermore,⑦ we ought to drink ⑧with our grandparents, it is a symbol oflove. Lastly, smiling to our grandparents is good.(提出建議)
Such being this case, we will never make our grandparents lonely.
首先是評分問題:(本人參與過高考作文閱卷,按13年標准)
高考作文25分共5檔;初次閱讀後給我印象在四檔(16-20分)
本文謂語及非謂語使用錯誤2處,扣1分;拼寫錯誤兩處,扣1分;語法、大小寫、用詞不當各一處,扣1.5;另外字數方面多餘或少於規定字數20個也在總分中扣去2分;綜上,本文得分16—17分。
一、審題:三個要點:描述事件、分析現象、提出建議,作者在三方面均有涉及,基本分可以拿到。(14分)
遺憾的是,分析欠深入,建議著墨稍多。
二、結構:明顯頭重腳輕,影響閱卷人第一印象。應將篇幅布局勻稱化。
三、扣分點:
①:此處缺連詞,銜接不當,補上 in the meanwhile
②應用heard
③應用walking 非謂語的運用要邏輯縝密
④多了一個s
⑤ignore doing sth.
⑥大寫
⑦拼寫錯誤,應為furthermore
⑧drink 用的不夠恰當
四、亮點
強調結構、同位語、高級詞彙significance,知道用nevertheless替換however 也很不錯,這也是本文可以進入四檔作文的原因。
五、建議:
①分析深入些
②合理布局結構
③修正基本語法錯誤(閱卷時一處扣0.5)
④嘗試使用倒裝、定語從句,有能力的可考慮獨立主格
⑤將銜接詞換的新穎些:如 to commence with ,on top of that, additionally,等等