㈠ 劍橋7 Test1 大作文求修改
Do they like banana?
㈡ 劍橋7 test1 大作文,求大神改一改
One of the burning problems facing our society is whether some children are born with talent while others are not or any child can be taught to be good at something. Different opinions will be showed as follows.
Some people support that talent (is) given randomly and it has nothing to do with the later ecation. Actually our character is designed by our gene to some extend (so) different people have unique advantage(and disadvantages) . But gene never speaks. If we want to know the secrete of ourselves, we need a special tool, which is now called ecation. Therefore later ecation is just a method to find out what children are really good at.
Then other people hold a view that practice makes perfect. Sometimes hardworking can make up for your shortcomings and even help you become outstanding. And the purpose of ecation is to make people better trained and skilled.
(However,) in my opinion both sides have convincing reasons. We are born with (strong points) and disadvantages and some will keep company with us for our whole life. But (it) doesn』 mean we have no chance to change (them). In other words, we can make efforts to make up for what we are not satisfied and (strengthen) our advantages. I (think) great people (are those) with innate talent and continuous hardworking.
All in all, the issue is still （arguable) and we can』t figure out (which) is more resonable. Although we can』t choose our talent, we can be serious about the later study and try our best to be more talented.
㈢ 劍10 test1 小作文什麼意思
劍10test1
小作文，家用能源和氣體排放
The above two charts depict the Austrilianhousehold energy use and the corresponding gas emissions of each type of energyuse.
From the first pie chart we could see thatwater heating and heating are two major types of energy use, which occupies 30%and 42% of all the energy used in one household. Other appliances use 15% ofthe energy, and then refrigeration, lighting and cooling, which share the left13% of energy.
Figures in the second chart are quitedifferent from that of the first chart. Heating, which consumes 42% of a household』senergy, only emits 15% of all the gas that one household proces. But the gasemission and energy use of water heating are pretty even, at around 30%. Costs only7% of all the energy, refrigeration proces 14% of all the gas, which goes forthe condition of other appliances and the figures are 15% and 28%, and for thecondition of lighting, 4% and 8%. Cooling consumes 2% of energy and contributesto 3% of gas emission.
To sum up, water heating and heatingconsume 72% of energy and proces only 47% of gas. Refrigeration and otherappliances, though only use 22% of energy, emit 42% of gas.
大作文， 教小孩是非觀要不要從小時候就開始教， 要不要punishment
Indeed, children need to learn how to tellright from wrong as they grow into alts. But as far as I am concerned, it isbetter for us to teach this ability to them when they are older rather than atan early age. Moreover, certain punishments are required to make sure childrencould behave themselves.
For starter, it would be easier for us toteach children about the difference between right and wrong when they becomeolder. Young children, e to their lack of life experience, have difficultiesin understanding moral lectures. However, after they grow up a little, theycould better digest the meaning of what is right and wrong based on their pastexperience, thus will grasp the notion of right and wrong more easily andthoroughly.
Similarly, older children tend to know moreabout punishment, and will be able to learn from the punishment caused by theirfail to recognize the distinction between right and wrong. Punishment mighthave long-lasting influences on younger children for they are too fragile. Olderchildren, on the other hand, could handle punishment more with ease and couldfigure out the reason they got punished. Therefore, they could gain betterunderstanding about right and wrong than younger children do.
The sort of punishment for parents andteachers to use whey they are trying to teach children about good behavior is asubtle issue. But the function of punishment is undeniable. It is necessary topunish a child because of his or her wrong acting. I suggest to use criticizeor physical training, such as asking children to do cleaning, as punishment.
To conclude, teaching children about rightand wrong should be waited until children become older. Accompanied by certainways of punishment, the teaching process would be more proctive.
㈣ 雅思劍橋5test1小作文中,1940年到2040年老人持續增加,這句話應該用什麼時態
用現在完成進行時,have /has been doing .表示動作從過去某一時間點開始,一直持續到現在,現在還在進行,沒有結束.
㈤ 麻煩各位高手幫我修改一篇雅思小作文 題目是劍橋雅思5 Test 1 Task1
Both 改成All，三個以上用All
especially Japan change id biggest.?
這句改成，base on data which from the chart, year 2020 is the burst point of Japanese aged population. 會比較好（個人觀點）
第二段可版以把in this period if time去掉，權在句首放上 ring the 1940 to 2040,
㈥ 雅思劍橋7 test 1 小作文 幫忙批一批 看看幾分
1`As it can be seen, spending on different ....
2`spending可數吧
3·時態有問題，應該用過去式。
4·結尾不版該用therefore，換成權in total或者totally
㈦ 幫我改一下這個雅思小作文是劍5 test1的小作文
The graph illustrates changes in the proportion of the population aged 65 and over form 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and USA. （介詞in用的沒錯，但要加上逗號。）
In 1940,JAPAN was the least in amount of population aged over 65,which was 5%. While the American population was the most proportion,which was double of Japanese about 9%，furthermore，Swiss population was 7% in between.
---In 1940, Japan was the one which has the least amount of population aged 65 and over(5%), while America consists of the largest proportion, which amounts to 9%, doubling that of Japan.
During 100-year period,proportion of Swiss and American had a upward trend,which increased to 25% and 27% respectively.but there was a slight decline in the number of Swiss population from 2010 to 2030.
However,the proportion of Japanese population witnessed a downward trend from 1940 to 1990,which reached the bottom (about 3%), after which, we can see a highly upward trend that the population increased to 27% in 2040.Furthermore, it even overtook Swiss and America in 2030.
Overall,the graph shows the proportion of three country』s population aged 65 and over has increased dramatically in 100 years.
㈧ 劍橋雅思4，TEST1的小作文範文，有一處語法求講解。。
a 【higher than average】proportion of 【X】中
這個【X】才是決定謂語動詞的關鍵。
a 。。。 proportion of 【households】 were living in poverty。。。
。。。高於平均比例的【家庭】生活在貧困當中。。。
當語句的意思被理解的時候，語法的辨析也變得豁然開朗。
㈨ 劍橋雅思1 TEST1 的小作文里how the cost of each course should be shared是什麼意思呢
就是每個課程的錢應該誰來出：個人，納稅人，還是老闆？
㈩ 請高手批改雅思作文！ 題目：task1,test3,劍橋5
應該說語言的應用應該算是成功的。但文章的解題思路有些亂，這也是流程圖的大忌。此圖應從S1和S2周邊的基礎設施分類來分析，不用特別涉及到哪個具體城鎮來，否則就會失去整體感。因為凌亂。所以本文是5.5 分
The map illustrates the two possible locations for a new planned supermarket(S) for the town of Garlson whose population is 65,000.
It can be seen clearly from the map that the Garlson town is made up of four parts. In the middle is the town centre,surrounded by the housing part at each the north and south side of which is an instrial part./這句話很混亂，可以調整為：situated in the middle, the town center is surrounded by an instrial part in both north and south side.All of the above three parts are surroundede by the countryside as a whole.
Both the two possible sites for the new supermarket,S1 and S2,have a railway nearby.The difference of the two locations are as follows.S2 is in the town centre and it has access to three main roads to three places(Hindon,Bransdon and Cransdon) with a total population of 54,000.However,S1 located in the countrside with only one main road available to Hindon(population,10,000).
It is easy to draw a conclusion from the map that, in comparison with S1,S2 is relatively better in terms of transportation available and the number of people the new supermarket may serve.