雅思大作文開頭段

❶ 怎麼寫好雅思大作文開頭段

雅思大作文開頭要素一： Restatement of the Topic
大作文的題目都會給出相關情景或話題，在首段中應先對題目中的情景或話題進行展開。
方法一 : 改寫。即按照題目所給的內容，用不同的表達方法重新寫一遍，千萬不能抄襲。
注意 ：改一兩個詞不算改寫，一定要將整個表達方式改掉。
方法二：自己展開。即根據題目所談到的話題內容適當展開，簡單談談目前社會中的情況怎樣。
注意： 不要談的太多，更加不能偏題，與題目話題毫不相干。
雅思大作文開頭要素二： Express Your Opinion
大作文的題目中一般會問你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等，因此必須與之相對應的在首段中表明你的觀點。
方法一：中立觀點(即辯證表達)。即可以說某種做法既有好又有壞;對某種觀點又有人同意又有人不同意等等。
說明： 比較好的表達如：I partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
不要說：some people agree while others don'nt agree.這可不是中立地表達自己的觀點。
所謂中立，其實是辯證的關系!老外看問題比較辯證，一般不會一棍子打死。
方法二：一邊倒觀點。即直截了當的說贊成某個觀點或不贊成某個觀點等等。
方法三：不表觀點。即不在首段明確的表達自己的觀點，但必須有引出下文之類話來作銜接。
說明： 方法一在考試中用的最多;方法二適中;方法三用的比較少(不表觀點，但必須表明要先分析一下，在最後一段表明觀點)。
雅思大作文開頭要素三： No Excessive Background
大作文首段中只要涵蓋以上兩要素即可，不要寫過多不相乾的展開內容，更不要將理由(即主體段的分論點)寫進去，否則主體段就沒內容寫了。

❷ 關於雅思大作文開頭段模板

大作文a類和g類基抄本上是差不多的，都是議論文。
我認為用問句是沒什麼問題的，只要切題。
大作文要做到四點：1切題（包括不少於250字、回答所有題目所涉及的問題、要有論據論點論證）
2多用連接詞保證句子的連貫性
3詞彙要豐富，多用不同的單詞表達同一個意思
4語法要正確

❸ 干貨，如何寫好雅思大作文開頭段

在雅思寫作中，一個好的開頭段不僅抓住讀者的注意力，引起閱讀興趣，亦要點明中心論點，統領全文， 其重要性可見一斑。在雅思大作文的寫作中， 開頭段一般由general statement，argument， thesis statement兩部分構成。每個人的情況不同，也可以登錄文都國際教育官網進行一對一的咨詢。
1General Statement
General Statement的主要作用是介紹寫作背景，引入話題。
但是值得注意的是：不能照抄題目，應用同義詞、近義詞替換題目中的相關詞語，
並用不同的句子結構來改寫題目中的句子結構。例如：
Example 1:
It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than
fathers. It is therefore more important for mothers to spend time with
children than fathers. Others think fathers make equally good parents.
What is your opinion?
在這個題目中，首先我們可以看到題干表述用了三個句子，首先我們要區分哪句是general statement， 哪句是arguments.
其實很容易發現，通常句中間有明顯闡述觀點表達的，就是arguments, 而做客觀陳述的就是general
statement，其位置一般是題目的第一句。上題中 It is widely believed that mothers are by
nature better parents than fathers，
就是我們要拿來做同義改寫，放到我們開頭段作為背景的句子。同義改寫可以採取以下技巧：
1 同義句型轉換。
如 It is widely believed that… 這個句套表達某事情是眾所周的，它有很多同義句型，如 It is generally assumed that…, Common knowledge is that…, 等。
2 同義詞，近義詞，同義結構轉換。
如by nature 這個介詞片語表達的含義是，自然天性上的，在原句中作為be動詞的表語，我們可以改寫為一個同義名詞片語，nurturing instinct，自然天性的意思。相應的，前面的謂語動詞要發生變化，搭配have。
3 造並列結構。
有的時候我們可能發現原題中的表述無論詞語還是句型都不是很輕易的可以找出同義結構出來，那麼我們可以採取並列結構，即並列兩個近義詞語義，或者反義詞再加否定結構。
上題中的better parents than 可以改為 better or less dispensable parents than
通過上面的三個步驟，我們就可以成功的將原題的背景句改寫為我們開頭段的general statement。
原題：It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers.
改寫完後：It is generally assumed that women have a 『nurturing
instinct』that somehow makes them better or less dispensable parents than
fathers are.
General Statement常用句型：
With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in…in the past few years. (雖常用，但已被濫用，建議減少使用)
Along with the increasingly rapid _____________, more problems are brought to our attention.
The issue of whether or not __________ has been widely/ heatedly/ debated currently/recently.
When it comes to whether …, some… are strongly against it, claiming….
It is generally accepted/ It is indeed the case that most countries have seen an increase in _______ over recent years.
2Argument(爭議)
Argument即為題目表述的觀點的立場，不同題目的立場表述大有不同。
(1)有的題目中只有一個立場
e.g. Countries with a long average working time are more economically
successful than those countries which do not have a long working time.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
在我們寫的開頭段，在寫完general statement後，直接用One point is that…把原題的立場(countries
with a long average working time are more economically successful than
those countries which do not have a long working time) 同義轉述即可。
值得注意的是，這個題目本身沒有背景句，所以寫general statement的時候，需要我們根據題目的argument進行總結。
亦或者可以general statement 和argument這兩個部分合並為一個部分，
這個題目可寫成：The issue of whether or not countries with a long average
working hours are more successful in terms of economic development than
those countries which do not have a long working time has been heatedly
debated currently. As far as I am concerned, …
(2)有的題目中包含兩個互相否定或者相關的立場
e.g. Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be
more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive
development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss
both views and give your own opinion.
e.g. Some people think the best way to rece crimes is to give
longer prison sentence. Others,however, think there are better
alternative ways to rece crime. Discuss and give your opinion.
這樣的題目，在開頭段寫完general statement後，要把題目雙方的立場都轉述，不可減少或刪除一方立場。
如 Some people think it is a positive development, while others think
it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
可以轉述為：Quite a few people claim that it has brought great benefits. On
the other hand, those who think differently argue that it inevitably
would has negative influence.
3Thesis Statement (總論點)
Thesis Statement簡單來說就是作者對某一寫作話題所持的明確觀點。例如：
1 In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned/ To my mind, students should wear uniforms in school.
2 While the majority may like to live in a large family, I prefer to the small one.
在雅思寫作中，文章的立場，也就是全文的總論點，
主要分兩種：有傾向性立場和兩邊支持
有傾向性(一邊倒)
有傾向性的立場一般在文章的開頭即表明本文的立場，同意或者不同意，或者多大程度地同意和不同意。
在劍橋雅思的考官範文中，有一個題目涉及對教育免費的商榷：All ecation,primary, secondary school
and further ecation, should be free to all people and paid for by the
government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
考官在範文的開頭段中即明確表明自己的立場：I certainly agree with the statement that this should be the case.
當然，有傾向性的立場還包含讓步的觀點，這種立場的文章多見於以to what extent do you agree or disagree?提問的論題。
如：Environmental problems should be solved by the government instead
of indivials and private companies. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
在考官範文的開頭段中，立場是這樣表明的：I concede that the government should lead the
efforts in addressing the environmental problems. Nevertheless,
cooperation and participation from the cooperations and indivial
citizens are essential as well.
讓步的立場並不需要糾結於在句子中回答到底agree 或者disagree沒有, 清楚的說明自己的觀點即可。
值得注意的是，觀點有傾向性並不代表思路有局限性。在辯論中，作者既要證明自己的觀點，同時也要回應對方的觀點，也就是說能夠站在不同的角度看同一個事情，並且能看到各自的優劣。
兩邊都支持
這種文章立場一般常見於discuss both view and give your opinion這種提問方式的題目。立場一般建議在結尾段點明，並且要在結尾段明確題干兩者之間的關系。
(4) 開頭段的兩種常用寫作方法
將以上三個部分組合起來，我們步難得出開頭段的以下兩種寫法：
A. General Statement – Positive+Negative Idea – Thesis Statement
The issue of whether or not students should take a part-time job has
been widely/ heatedly debated currently/ recently. Quite a few people
claim that it would not only widen their horizon but also help shape
their personalities. On the other hand, those who think differently
argue that the task of a student is to make good use of his limited time
and acquire necessary knowledge and skill for the future career. As for
me/ As far as I am concerned/ In my opinion, I believe that part-time
jobs play a positive role in the development of university students.
這種方法的一個變形形式是：
General Statement – Opposite Idea – Thesis Statement
Nowadays the incomes of many sport stars are truly astounding. Some
people claim that the salaries of athletes are too high and the athletes
themselves attract too much attention. Yet, in my opinion, such
benefits are well deserved.
B. General Statement – Concession – Thesis Statement
When it comes to whether students should be allowed to work outside
the school hours, some ecators vote against it, claiming that
part-time work may have a negative influence on their study. Obviously,
too large amount of time a student is employed may contribute to a poor
academic performance. However, if they do a part-time job over
reasonable hours, it is extremely beneficial for them, providing
financial support for their study and broadening their horizon.
When evaluating a job applicant, most companies would place much
weight on one』s ecational certificate. Of course, one』s ecational
certificate does tell something about the applicant. However, it is not
the only means through which we can judge whether the applicant is
qualified or not.

❹ 雅思大作文如何寫好開頭段

雅思寫作如何在一個小時內快速完成兩篇文章還要保證質量。在雅思大作文中，很多同學只注重主體段的練習和論點論據的提煉，很少有精力關注開頭段。作為文章給考官的第一印象，其實雅思作文的開頭段更為重要。如何寫好開頭段，雅思小編為大家詳解。
大作文開頭技巧：
1) 拋棄冗長模板
"使用模板，一律四分"的說法或許有些誇張，但也在一定程度上反映了考官對於模板的深惡痛絕。其實模板套句並不是不能用，而是要運用靈活，不留痕跡。在很多文章中，開頭結尾的兩個復雜到爆炸的長句在通篇簡單句和基礎語法錯誤的映襯下格外醒目，這種稍微有些英語知識的人都會識破的小聰明，更不可能逃過考官的眼睛。
建議學生們積累一些簡單實用的基本套句，如：
我們的生活已離不開…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我們隨處都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成為一個不斷增長的趨勢。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越來越多的人選擇…/傾向於認為…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已經不再罕見
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人們開始意識到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在幾十年前，…很少有人會想像到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 開頭具體化
具體化的開頭是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特點，即 "要讓考官覺得你這個開頭是完全針對題目寫出來的"，要做到這一點，就必須緊緊圍繞話題展開。比如下面這道題目：
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(開頭段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(開頭段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(開頭段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
開頭段一為典型的模板式開頭，廢話多，與話題關系小，毫無疑問會引起考官的反感。開頭段二雖然也使用了模板句， 但運用較靈活，不足之處是背景句沒有緊扣話題，雖然談到科技影響生活但沒有具體到'relationship'。開頭段三語言雖簡單但緊緊圍繞話題'relationships'展開，靈活的使用了一些簡短的小套句，而這樣具體化的開頭最受考官青睞。
3) 簡單即是美
雅思作文考的不是文學修養而是學術寫作能力，即如何運用語言有效的表達觀點證明觀點，因此，簡單明了的開頭會給考官留下效率高的好印象，而且簡單的開頭段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也節省了時間。
例：
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最後，寫作重在練習，所謂熟能生巧，開頭段的構思亦是一樣。

❺ 雅思大作文開頭段的寫法當中 背景怎麼寫

無論是大多數考生備考雅思的過程中，還是從歷年來雅思考試四項的中國考生平均分，都可以反映出中國考生在雅思寫作方面的薄弱。因為寫作是最能體現個人的語言運用能力和水平的，所以不像其他課程可以通過短期的特訓得到很快的提高，而是要求考生花時間對詞彙，句型，語法等等內容的整理，記憶，以及運用。
在具體寫作的過程中，考生要遇到的第一步事情應該是引言段的寫作。俗話說，萬事開頭難。很多考生不知道如何開頭，浪費時間，導致無法在規定時間內完成250個單詞的大作文。其實，引言段可先通過對background 的描寫來引出話題。
II Background 方法介紹
總結歸納Background的寫作，認為應該從內容同句型上同時做到補充。下面先介紹下擴充背景句的方法：
1）. 追根溯源法。即從題目給出的話題中找出這個現象產生的原因來擴展背景句。這種方法適合大多數的話題，考生要盡量在考前做練習，這樣在考試就可以得心應手了。
請看下面的例子：
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (高分範文P76)
這個題目中給出的話題是mobile phone，所以考生可以從它產生的原因來考慮，就是科技的繁榮，而科技的繁榮，手機的廣泛使用是在20世紀末，這樣背景句就有內容可寫了。當然要通過相應的句型來寫了。如
… (time) witnessed …
這個背景句就可以寫成： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.
再看一例：
Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?
這題要求大家討論大學是提供職業技能還是傳授知識。那從傳統觀點來看，大學是傳授知識的地方，為什麼會提出要傳授技能呢，所以這里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下，大家肯定可以想到是由於找工作已經成為當今教育的目的之一了，所以很多大學就轉移到以傳授技能為主了。那當然還是要結合句型，這里可以用as 引導的原因狀語從句。
參考：As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university ecation, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.
2）. 重述法。即對關於這個話題的當前現狀的重述。
請看一例：
Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。
本題的話題關於壓力，那考生可從當前社會現象來考慮這個問題，考生不難想出當下對壓力這一現象的情況，即很多人都在承受著或多或少的壓力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主語的句型。
參考: It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.
再看一例：
Environmental problem is too big for indivial countries and indivial people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本題話題為環境問題，考生也可用重述法對當前環境問題進行重述，這時，可以用In modern society/ At present, 等表時間的介詞短語來引導一個敘述句型。
參考：In modern society, environment related issues have confronted ecological scientists, government agencies and the general public. (引自雅思高分範文p16)
3）. 定義法。即通過對話題詞的定義的介紹，這種方法有一定難度，考生需要有淵博的知識，才能做到對名詞的解釋，但對特別明顯的詞語，考生可借鑒這種方法。
請看一例：
The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本題中的話題詞為圖書館，可以解釋的詞也是圖書館比較方便容易。那麼到底如何解釋呢，比如說圖書館在傳統意義上來看，是收藏書的地方，而現在因為科技發展，使得圖書館的意義發生改變，從而引出話題。這里同樣可以用形式主語：
It is generally believed that public libraries are places with a large collection of books; however, the digital time has given it a new means of storing and retrieving information.
III Background 句型介紹：
從以上的分析，內容上是有方法了，不難從內容上找材料，可是如果句型積累不多的話，寫出來的句子也是無法得到高分的，所以接下來，介紹下常用的高分句型。
1）. It is … that …
It is … who … 強調句型
Eg It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists.
下面是考官範文里的句子：
It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person』s personality and dictates how that personality develops.
2）. It is generally believed
It is the case that …
It is apparent that … 等形式主語
Eg It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collar workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.
3）. 狀語前置
下面是劍6的高分範文中的句子:
In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.
Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
4）. 時間引導的敘述句型
Lately, the problem of unemployment has been brought to popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.
你可通過這兩個方面來做到背景句的描寫，從而在開頭就吸引考官的注意力，好的開始是成功的一半，有了好的開始，在寫作中做到思路清晰，以及節省時間都打了堅實的基礎

❻ 雅思寫作大作文開頭段應該怎麼寫

寫好雅思大作文開頭段要素一：現象句

雅思寫作考題中會出現一個社會現象，考生的任務就是在自己文章的第一句話將之改寫，重述這個社會現象。 E．g．1
Nowadays we are procing more and more rubbish．Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help rece the amount of rubbish proced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family proces a large amount of waste every week．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結——套句+同義詞替換：more and more= a large amount of E．g．2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old．Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible． What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結——
主被動之間的轉換：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同義詞的替換：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven E．g．3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies．Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this．
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying 。
個人覺得，自己看書不如找老師點撥一下，可以省很大的力氣，愛預科老師點撥專業，雅思也有很多年的經驗了。

❼ 雅思寫作大作文開頭段應該怎麼寫

在一篇文章里，一定要注意條理，文章不能文不對題，雜亂無章，最好的辦法專就是列提綱，腦子里有這么一屬個輪廓，再細細描繪。描繪過程中，要現實，不能寫什麼「公雞下蛋」之類的，否則會鬧笑話。還要注意標點，不能亂點，標點也有標點的規律，該停頓就停頓，該省略就省略。

❽ 雅思 作文 開頭段

ielts essay 的寫法，第一段5－6句．
第一句，HOOK（在你要寫的中心的基礎上內，去找一個更高容的話題來寫．比如：你要寫工作年齡變化，可以寫社會的變化）
第二句－－倒數第二句，用來連接HOOK和你的TOPIC SENTENSE．社會怎麼怎麼變，然後導致．．．總之就是從大到小．最後扯到你的TS．
最後一句，就是TS．這句是你全文的中心．不要寫得太復雜，用簡單，又明了的句子，讓別人一看就懂．可以用IT開頭的強調句．

最後一句，不一定要用連接詞，外國人的習慣，最後一句就是TS．如果要用的話可以AS THE RESULT，然後TS．