⑴ 英語作文開頭優美句子
要留心觀察身邊的人、事、景、物,從中獵取你作文時所需要的材料:你回要對一些看似不大實則很有意義答的事情產生興趣,注意觀察起因、過程和結果;你要留意校園花壇里的植物一年四季如何變化它的顏色,學會刨根問底,弄清這些變化的來龍去脈;你要走向社會,同更多的人接觸,觀察他們的一言一行,要思索一些東西,隨時將它們匯入自己思想的長河.這就是觀察的過程,觀察過程中要注意以下幾點:
(一)觀察決不要僅僅局限於「用眼看」.廣義的更有實際意義的觀察是指要將人的五官全部調動起來:用耳朵去聆聽,用身體去感受,更重要的是要用心、用腦去思索,這樣的觀察才會更加細膩、深刻.
⑵ 英語作文的好開頭好結尾
英語作文好的開頭和結尾莫過於運用一些美文名言,譬如:⑶ 請寫一篇英語作文,開頭為
There are disabled people in every society and there are always a lot of places for volunteers to help. The disabled normally have physical disabilities and need help achieving daily goals that many of us take for granted, such as grocery shopping and taking out the garbage, doing washing and so on. We can all make a difference by volunteering our help with these everyday chores. As a volunteer to work with the disabled, I would like to go to their homes to help them with whatever I could do. I could to washing the cloths, help them to get dressed, cooking, playing with them, reading books or newspapers to them etc, basically everything they need help with.
I also would like to contribute something to their lives. I would like to bring some things such us music or games. I could play violin to them, teach them to play a game. These would entertain them and make their lives more interesting. I hope that my work can help them and make their living easier and more enjoyable.
⑷ 英語作文開頭部分
一篇文章通常可分為三個部分,即開頭、正文和結尾。這三個部分安排是否得體,直接影響到文章的質量。
文章的開頭一般來說應盡量做到開門見山,用簡單明白的敘述引出文章的話題,使讀者了解文章要談論什麼,一下於引起讀者的興趣。
作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種:
1.開門見山,揭示主題
文章一開頭,,就交待清楚文章的主題是什麼。如「How I Spent My Vacation」(我怎樣度假)的開頭是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是題為"Honesty"(談誠實)一文中的開頭:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2.交代人物、事情、時間或環境開頭
在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅遊)的開頭:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回憶性的開頭
用回憶的方法來開頭。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的開頭是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4.概括性的開頭
即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如「The Happiness of Reading Books」(讀書的快樂)的開頭:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5.介紹環境式的開頭
即開頭利用自然景物或自然環境引出要介紹的事物。如「An Accident」(一場事故)的開頭是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6.交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什麼問題等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的開頭:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
⑸ 求英語作文的開頭和結尾
1.Our life should safe and healthy。.....so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?.......now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。.....let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。....we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。...I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。....i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。.....I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。...i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。....let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。.....my classmates are very kind of me。
有些編不出來了
⑹ 求幾篇英語作文的開頭段
一般來說應該背一點精彩的句式放在開頭用以吸引閱卷老師的注意力,
讓他對你有一個比較好的第一印象,
在最後結分的時候把你的分數向上靠
(不要小看這一靠,有時候1分就是天壤之別!)
但總體基本以簡單句為主,
不要顯得太過於注重華麗的詞藻,
當然如果你的水平足夠隨意使用復合句的話就沒有這點條條框框,
主要是因為如果你的水平不到家,
容易出現語法或句式的錯誤更加令閱卷老師討厭。
樓上的兄弟說的完全不正確!
英語的作文也是和語文一樣按評分標准打分的,
不是只要語法對就好,
舉一個高考評分標准為例:
1. 本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最後給分。
3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的,從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時,應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面,評分時,應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達,對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分:(0分)
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息:內容太少,無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
可能是你用的開頭是已經用爛的那種啦,What's Happiness
What's happiness? It is a question asked by many people all over the world for centuries. As for me, there is happy issue I will never forget.
網上找找很多很好的開頭的。。。
⑺ 英語作文開頭
樓上抄的襲嚴重錯誤
let me 不是let's(=let us) me
Mary,our teacher, is a very nice person.she is kind to everyone,so we love her much.
⑻ 英語作文開頭怎麼寫(通用版)
是寫信么
⑼ 初二英語作文- -作文開頭已給出
Welcome to Radio 972! I`d like to introce our new program——『 English for You and Me 』 to our schoolmates.This is a program that can help you with your English. First,Mr Zhao can introce some English sentenses that are useful and easy to understand.That will give you some inspiration. Some students think that it's a difficult thing to learn English.But if you master other students' good learning skills,English must be easy for you.Sandy will interview students who have effective English learning skills and they can help you a lot. James is waiting for you!If you have any question about English homework,please call the hotline 000-123-456.He will help you to solve it. Come on,we are waiting for you!詞可能有點多,你可以再修改一下。可能會有錯,畢竟是自己寫的。還是建議你自己寫呀,英語作文很簡單的。 ——初三學長