Ⅰ 劍橋雅思7test2大作文題目意思
備考雅思寫作，烤鴨們可以利用雅思寫作模板去進行，小編想要告訴烤鴨們，在寫作的時候有兩個要點需要你們去注意，就是必須要涵蓋題目的所有要求，二就是在寫作的時候必須要做到結構清楚合理。
涵蓋題目所有要求
舉個例子，有兩幅圖分別顯示的是1985年到1995年日本民海外游的數量變化，以及還有其中去澳大利亞旅遊的人數的變化。在寫這篇文章時，建議考生應先將十年來日本民海外游的數量變化趨勢以及去澳大利亞的人數變化趨勢概括出來，然後再去進行細化，看其趨勢的變化到底有沒有起伏、如何表現等，然後再對兩組數據進行比較，後再去進行總結，這樣的話才能充分涵蓋題目的要求。如果只是進行簡單的羅列堆砌，不做任何的分析、概括和比較，那麼扣分就顯得難以避免了。
因此，考生在復習備考階段，切記不要去盲目地練寫文章，要多的是要去訓練提高信息歸類和概括能力，當然雅思寫作模板也是少不了的。
二、結構清楚合理
結構清楚，其實從文章整體來說是講篇文章起碼要有開頭、中間和結尾，另外每個中間段要有句主題句總整段，下面依次展開，後必須要有句話收尾。結構合理其實主要是指文章的論證結構合理，特別是針對作文，立場定要做到非常清晰。在備考雅思時，考生必須要注意文章結構的建立，力求能夠做到結構清楚、以及還有論證比例合理。
想要拿到雅思寫作的，那麼烤鴨們必須學會利用雅思寫作模板去進行備考，同時還要注意以上所講的兩個要點。
Ⅱ 請高人幫我分析一下劍橋雅思7 Test 3 （大作文）考官範文 （從詞彙，內容和語法）
簡單的用詞 流暢的語句 很地道 中國人很難做到的........
Ⅲ 劍7作文求意見和修改，哪怕大致看下給個分也好，不剩感激。
首先，結構方面是沒有問題的，開頭，body段，結尾都很完整。不過建議你把There are plenty of factors contributing to job satisfaction. Moreover, to different type of people, the dominating factors vary from one to another. Several factors are quite common to the majority and shared by large amount of workers. 這幾句話放到第一段去，做一個比較完整的開頭背景介紹。
語言方面，大的問題沒有，可小問題也不少。你可能自己還需要再看一看，修改一下。
說幾個比較明顯的吧：
1.另外有些地方是不是太絕對了呢？People enjoy working only when they like talking and cooperating with team members. 把only換成almost time...會不會好一點呢？？
2.有些句子是有問題的。Ideally, everyone would like to have a job with high salary, least pressure and working time, and highest reputation,which is not realistic. ...which指的是什麼？this thought or this kind of job?
整篇看下來..洋洋灑灑一大篇...寫得還不錯...應該是5.5左右。
不過好像現在雅思的作文很少考這種形式了...一般都是agree or disagree吧..
Ⅳ 劍橋雅思7寫作範文
Nowadays, examinations and tests seem to be pushing students and their teachers harder than ever. As a consequence, there has been an idea suggesting that emphasis on similar tests in schools should be lessened. However, I believe that it's inevitably necessary to rethink about whether we are overestimating the importance of examinations, though proper attention paid to them could be of great assistance to teachers and students themselves.
Complaints are often made by students about negative effects of tests and examinations, which, as they've usually described, are obstacles in their way to successfully completing their academic objectives. Therefore, a student's overall academic performance should not only be judged on their scores but also in many ways such as their average performance ring the whole year. But such complaints are not only from students but also a number of teachers who think that examinations would put a restriction in terms of their way of teaching. For example, in an exam-oriented country, teachers in schools wouldn't usually be expected to teach anything other than that set by the standard curriculum, which could narrow the views of the students and the way they think about the world.
But are we confident to say that there should be no tests? The answer is clearly negative. As no way of examining one's abilities more objective than exams is yet invented, exams, however,remain an important role in the process of ecation. What is now needed to be done is that a balance should be made between exams&tests and general learning, where exams can bring the most benefits and the least adverse effect.
In conclusion, I generally agree with the idea that emphasis on testing today is way over their expected extent and that it should be lessened. However, proper emphasis is definitely necessary and could have a positive influence on students and teachers.
無憂雅思網上有下載 另外，建議你還是看滿分或者考官範文比較好。畢竟7分不是完美作文，而且我們不可能完全模仿。萬一學到的剛好是被扣分的地方怎麼辦？？？
Ⅳ 關於劍7作文的參考價值
我建議你不要一上來就看劍7··畢竟這書剛出來··又只有四篇TASK··要好好利用這寶貴的最新真題
首先我覺得LZ應該去買本稍便宜的劍4來做或者更便宜的劍1··雖然題目老，但畢竟是曾經的真題··做完這些老題至少就對雅思考題有個初步印象了··然後再來做劍7
既然是真題，那麼一定要按雅思正式考試的時間標准來做，就拿寫作來說一定先自己一小時內把真題大小作文都寫完，然後趁自己的思維還熱乎趕緊看後面的範文，看看考官的範文到底好在哪裡，跟自己的文章思路做下對比，揣摩下考官為什麼要這樣寫，這樣的行文思路有什麼好處，自己以後能不能這樣寫。這是思路。
然後看考官的用詞，你會發現所有劍系列的範文用詞都很簡單，偶爾一個大詞那也要仔細研究·然後掌握（其實這樣的詞很少），關鍵是要掌握考官用詞的准確度，這個才是精髓，時間長了你會發現其實有時候考官是在刻意用簡單的詞彙，但妙就妙在簡單的詞彙被用的恰到好處，這個是最需要學習的
最後是句型，我想這是整篇範文最出彩的地方，拿自己的文章跟範文比，真的會覺得自己句型的幼稚，範文都是精挑細選出來的，好多句型都太巧妙了，最精煉簡潔的句子表達出最完整准確的意思，這是一個好句型的標准，然而範文畢竟很少，我們要做的就是用這些範文來激發我們的思維，舉一反三，自己沿著範文的思路來創造自己的文字。
其實不管你要考多少分，實在的講劍系列這套書就足夠了，能把這套書消化好，多少分都沒有問題
Ⅵ 劍橋雅思7系列第一模塊大作文，麻煩給了修改意見，帶中文翻譯
1：語法錯誤就太多了啊。。。if a person does not work hard.:2：還有句子表達也很不清晰。這個第二段沒看明內白要表達啥。容。:3：With thedevelopment of society,more and more folks take part in a kind of activitieswhich are sports and music.這個句子忠實英文口味太重了。建議可以該為Economic development provided more opportunities for people to enjoy sports or music after work.(或者這句不是你想要表達的意思)
上面只是大概掃了一眼，這篇作文還有很多要潤色的啊
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Ⅷ 誰寫過雅思劍7tast4大作文跪求！
IELTS劍橋雅思劍4劍5劍6劍7內容：
需要說明是：劍一到劍六是按出版時間命名的版，劍權一最早，劍六最新，至於劍七稍後介紹。
劍一：模擬題，且出版太老，基本無實際指導意義。
劍二：真題，但體型比較老，如聽力長句填空這樣的題型已經不考，但是仍然有很多經典題型，可以不買，但如果准備時間長推薦購買。
劍三至劍四：真題，題型基本對於雅思考試有所指導。
劍五至劍六：真題，切題型最新，有很強的指導意義，認真練習研究。
劍七：並非真的是劍橋大學ESOL考試委員會編著，而是環球雅思，最多算是模擬指導書，千萬別當真題花太多時間研究。
Ⅸ 劍7作文題目翻譯，how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers』怎麼譯
1.如何落實所有工人對工作滿意度的期望？