❶ 托福小作文題型有哪些
新托福由四部分組成，分別是閱讀(Reading)、聽力(Listening)、口試(Speaking)、寫作(Writing)。每部分滿分30分，整個試題滿分120分。閱讀(Reading)：
有三篇文章, 每篇文章對應有12-14道試題，均為選擇題。除了最後一道試題之外，其他試題都是針對文章的某一部分提問，試題的出現順序與文章的段落順序一致。最後一題針對整篇文章提問，要求考生從多條選擇項中挑選若干項對全文進行總結或歸納。新一代托福閱讀文章的篇幅比老托福閱讀文章的篇幅略長，難度也有所增加。這部分持續時間為1小時。聽力(Listening)：
由兩篇較長的校園情景對話和四篇課堂演講組成，課堂演講每篇長約5分鍾。由於是機考，考生在聽錄音資料之前無法得知試題。在播放錄音資料時，電腦屏幕上會顯示相應的背景圖片。考生可以在聽音過程中記筆記。考生不能復查、修改已遞交的答案。這個部分持續大約50分鍾。 聽力水平無疑是新托福成功與否的關鍵，除閱讀外，無論哪一部分都離不開「聽」。對於中國考生來說，聽力卻正是薄弱環節。目前中國考生提高聽力的其中一條有效途徑是「聽寫法」，即把相關聽力材料拿來精聽，並把聽到的內容逐句寫下來。也有專門用來練習新托福聽寫的軟體，如新托福聽寫王軟體。「聽寫法」提高聽力的一個缺點是，剛開始練習時可能比較費時。 口試(Speaking)：
把TSE(Test of Spoken English)融合在新托福中。然而與現行的TSE相比又有較大改動。這個部分共有6題，持續約20分鍾。 第一、二題要求考生就某一話題闡述自己的觀點。 第三、四題要求考生首先在45秒內閱讀一段短文，隨後短文隱去，播放一段與短文有關的對話或課堂演講。最後，要求考生根據先前閱讀的短文和播放的對話或課堂演講回答相關問題，考生有30秒鍾的准備時間，然後進行60秒鍾的回答。例如，短文中描述了對學校體育館進行擴建的兩種方案，對話中一位同學闡述了自己的立場，即贊成哪種方案，反對哪種方案，並列舉了若干理由。要求考生敘述對話中同學的立場並解釋他/她列舉了哪些理由支持這一觀點。第五、六題要求考生聽一段校園情景對話或課堂演講，然後回答相關問題。考生有20秒鍾的准備時間，之後進行60秒鍾的回答。例如，先播放一段市場學課堂演講，演講中教授列舉了兩種市場調查的方法，然後要求考生使用課堂演講中的觀點和例子描述教授列舉出的兩種市場調查的方法。 考生可以在聽音過程中記筆記以幫助答題。在准備和答題時，屏幕上會顯示倒計時的時鍾。寫作(Writing)：
要求考生在1小時內完成兩篇作文。 其中一篇類似於老托福的寫作，要求考生在30分鍾內就某一話題闡述自己的觀點，字數要求為300字以上。另一篇則要求考生首先閱讀一篇文章，五分鍾以後，文章隱去，播放一段與文章有關的課堂演講。課堂演講列舉了一些論據反駁文章中的論點、論據。隨後要求考生在20分鍾內寫一篇作文，總結課堂演講的論點、論據，並陳述這些論點、論據是如何反駁文章的論點、論據的，字數要求為150字到225字之間。在寫作時，文章會重新顯示在屏幕上。這篇作文不要求考生闡述自己的觀點。 加試：
一般實際考試中，考生往往會在聽力或閱讀部分碰到加試試題，也有可能閱讀、聽力兩部分同時被加試。加試部分不算分(有人說會算分,說是抽幾題給分)，但考生事先並不知道哪一部分是加試部分(有的時候經典加試是能判斷出來的)，所以應該認真對待。 題目可以去留學黨論壇找一下。
❷ 托福185作文練習題 10~20題 的 例子
給你幾篇高分範文，希望有一定啟發
Topic: 10
There is a humorous saying in English – 「The grass is always greener on the other side of the
valley」. The saying is used ironically to point out that there is a temptation in us all to insist that
others are more fortunate than we are. This is nowhere more true than on the question of luck and
hard work. When faced with the 「bad times」, we often find comfort in the idea that we are
special in our degree of misfortune. I feel that such an attitude is negative, and that it can bring
only further misfortune.
Many famously successful people have begun from small origins. Mao was the son of a (modestly
prosperous) peasant; the explorer Captain Cook was so poor that, as a child, he had to work by
day and study by night; many of the affluent Americans of today are the children of the poor
immigrants of yesterday. Beethoven, it should be remembered, became deaf before the end of his
career. There are many, many more people who have also made genuine, though Jess spectacular,
successes against the odds.
Within his own terms, a person who is born into poverty in India is a great success if he manages
to own a house in later life. Poverty cannot be reced by merely complaining and blaming
others: no matter how guilty other people are, each indivial must reach out to success for
himself. Indeed, some economists believe that the world operates by what they call 「the rule of
the jungle」. They believe that in economics a person a1ways attempts to gain profit from his
neighbor: that given the chance the poor man would quickly make himself rich by trading to his
own advantage.
Also, it is presumptuous to judge another according to his or her apparent fortune. No man can
ever truly understand the sufferings of his neighbor. A man who appears comfortably rich may
have suffered elsewhere in his life - through the death of a loved one, for example. Retired
businessmen have often worked long hours in their youth. Surely, it must be wiser to respect
achievement than to deny that anyone has achieved good in the world.
To rely on notions of luck - to believe that life is a kind of lottery - is an attempt to escape reality.
Paradoxically, the only time a person can claim that luck is more important than work is when he
reflects on his own success. Because of that modesty, the great man then becomes even greater.
Topic: 11
Both libraries and sports activities are welcome in the universities. Students could study in the
libraries to build up their knowledge. They could get the information that they cannot get in the
class. But knowledge is not all for the students. They are willing to have sports frequently.
Anyone cannot go on his study without a healthy body. Unfortunately, if we have limited
resources to put on the construction and operation of libraries or sport activites, how could we
make a decision? I disagree with the statement that universities should give the same amount of
money to sports activities as libraries.
The librarie is necessary part of a university. We cannot imagine a university without any library.
Student would like to find books in the library to facilitate their study. The time in the class is very
limited. So they could get more academic information in the library. On the other hand, students
could enjoy sports outside the campus. Many people just like running, which doesn't need any
investment.
Considering the operation of the establishments, we should certainly pay more to run a library
than the sports activities. With the developement of the informationalization of the world, more
and more books are published. In order to possess those books, universities must pay a lot money
on them. While running a stadium is much more easier.
Because university is a place to study, it is natural that more students go to the library. Whenever
you go to the library, you will see diligent students studying there. Especially in the examination
period, you can hardly find a vacant seat.
To sum up, sports activities are very important to students health, but if there is limited money, we
have to spend more money on libraries than on sports activities. Because libraries are necessities
of a university, which need a large amount of money to run, and many students enjoy them.
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 12
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. By visiting museums, one can learn
as much as possible about those places where one visit in a shout time.
First of all, one can learn about the history of the places in museums. Today, almost every town in
the world has realized the importance to set up their own museums to exhibit historic items which
belong to their past. When we visit a new place, we can get almost everything we need about its
history in the museums. Last summer vacation, I and several classmates traveled to the city of
Taian. At the foot of Mount Tai located a museum about General Feng Yuxiang. After visiting it,
we knew a lot about Mr. Feng and what he did to the local people. He was respected by there
people, and so did us.
Second, visiting museums gives information about local culture. After a long exhausting journey,
what a good thing to sit in the museum theatre watching a performance about local culture. When
we travel to a new place, especially for a limited time when you cannot go everywhere, so you
can get as much information as possible about local culture by visiting museums.
What is more, visiting museums gives us a good chance to make new friends. Surely, there are a
lot of people will visit museums like us. We can chat with them about what we see and what we
hear. At the end of visiting, we sit together to have a cup of coffee and we become good friends.
By exchanging telephone number, we can also keep in touch with each other late. What a good
experience!
In a word, more and more people visit museums when they travel to new places because they
want to get more pleasure from their journey.
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 12
Do you like to visit a museum when you visit a new place? I'd love to. Because it's an easy way to
know the history, the custom, the people, the culture and natural environment there.
When you arrive at a place, ask which kind of museum they have. To do this you can know what
the people there like. For example, if there are a lot of are museums, the people must like art very
much. So you can enjoy an atmosphere of art there.
If there is a history museum, it's the best way to know the history of this area. It can tell you when
the area was built, whether it has a long history, who came here first, what happened in this
area—maybe a revolution or a war, what changed the people's life there, and so on. If you want to
know the people there, you must know the history there. Because it's history what affect people's
behavior, emotion and custom. If there is a special festival, maybe it's related with a historical
affair.
Want to visit a nature museum? It's a good idea. There must be introction about the natural
environment there. Why to know that? We can get information about why people there eat this
kind of food, maybe it's because of the weather. And where is the best place to visit in this area.
Go to visit an art museum. Which kind of art you find there? Modern art? Then it may be a
modern place. Classical art? It may be a city with a long history. Maybe you can enjoy an old way
of life there.
Don't forget the science museum. It can tell you how the people developed their technology,
whether the science there is well developed. Do people use new technology to develop this area?
If not, it's the best explanation to the question why people there fall behind with people in other
areas.
So go to a museum, it can tell you about a new place more than you think.
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 13
In the modern life now, more and more people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. They
think that will save time so that they can have enough time to do their jobs. But I still prefer to
prepare and eat food at home.
There several reasons. First of all, you can save money if you eat at home. In general, to get
profit, the restaurants ask for more money on the same food you cook at home. That is the waste
of money. To save money, you may prefer to prepare you food at home with less money.
The second, usually, the food in the restaurants is not what you are expecting. you may dislike the
way the restaurant cook the same dishes as you do at home. For example, the other day, I asked
for potato in a restaurant. After the first bite, I thought it was so awful. My mom never cooked
such potato for me! The bad lunch even destroyed my mood in that day.
The third, if you prepare food by yourself, you will have a happy mood when you eat it, regardless
of the real savor of the food. It goes a saying well "labor brings happiness".In addition, you can
change your method of cooking considering your taste on that day.
The reasons above may can answer why I prefer to eat food at home. Cooking even has become
my hobby now. Come back and have your delicious food, I'm sure you will like it!:)
( This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 13
Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food for themseves, but others have a
negative attitude that they prefer to eat out side in restaurant or at foodstands. As far as I am
concerned, it is better to eat at home. There are numerous reasons why I hold on, and I would
explore only a few primary ones here.
I t cannot be denied that there is some advantage to the first points. Firstly, the condition of the
restaurant is more comfortable and the food of there is more delicious usually. Then eating in
restaurant become a good choice of getting together with friends. In addition, eat out side take
people convenience and shortcut. For the people who are busy on working, prepare food for
themseves will make troubles and waste time. For the young person who are not able to cook for
themseves, eat at foodstands resolve the problem.
The main reason for my propensity for eating at home is that eat at home and prepare food for
themseves can enhance the emotion among the member of family and bring pleasure to everyone.
In modern society, everyday, parents are busy on working and sociality, and children are busy on
study and playing. For convenience and saving time, they offten chioce eat out side. Then there
left so few time of them to share. Sharing the dinner at home is not only eating but also provide a
chance to talking, making joke and exchange feeling with each other. Maybe someone think that
make dinner is a heavy burden. But I believe prepare food with family is also a happy, likely have
dinner with family is a pleasure. With your sisters and brothers help your mother do a meal in
weekend, and enjoy the food ,and you will feel everything is so nice.
Another reason is that I think that eat at home is more economical than go to restaurant and save
money. Using the same number of money you can buy more and better food from shop than from
restaurant. You can do nourishing meal for your children rather than the junk food from
foodstands. And you can spend the saved money on many the other way, such as buy new clothes
and see a movie.
General speaking, eat out side is comfortable and convenience to our live, while eat at home can
share happy with family. Taking into account of all these, I prefer to prepare food for ourseves
and eat at home.
Topic: 14
Nowadays, it becomes a heatedly debated topic whether a student should be required to attend
classes or not. Some people hold the opinion that the university students should be required to go
to classes. However, others have a negative attitude. If I were forced to agree with one of the two
positions, I would stand behind the latter. My Arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that going to classes should be optional for university students without
reservation since I believe a student is supposed to attend those classes he or she is interested in.
Naturally, interest is the mother of study. When attracted by a wonderful class, you will attend it
unforcedly and immediately. Nevertheless, not all classes are so popular in reality and no one has
interest in every class. Consequently, you should select the classes you like to attend for a higher
efficiency of studying. It can be given a good example, in current universities, many excellent
students almost have the record of skipping some boring and undesirable classes.
Another reason that can be seen by every one is that it contributes to build a university student's
ability of learning by himself or herself. Obviously, by choosing good and meaningful classes,
giving up those undesirable, or studying these classes you can not attend somehow by yourself,
you will learn how to distribute your study time and acquire the capability of learning by yourself,
which is tremendously important to modern university students. Many celebrities, such as Bill
Gates, have such powerful ability by not attending some classes when they were in university.
Admittedly, being required to attend classes has advantages of disciplining the student, however,
considering most university students can discipline themselves on their own, I believe it is
sagacious to agree with that going to classes should be optional for college or university students.
Topic: 15
Neighbours are the people who live near us, and their behaviour influence our daily life. Good
neighbours can make us feel comfortable and give us many help, and everyone will benefit from a
good relationship among neighbours. In my point of view, these are three conspicuous aspects of
the qualities of a good neighbours.
One of the most important characteristic of good neighbours is that they have a good living habit
and are friendly to others. A person with bad habit will affect your daily life. For example,
children are most likely to be influnced by bad neighbors and carry on bad habits. On the other
hand, being friendly is also an important nature of good neighbors. If neighbours are unfriendly,
they are hard to approach and difficult to get along with.
Another important aspect of of good neighbors is that they should be willing to help others. In our
daily life, emergency situations may happen, and we may encounter difficulties which can not be
resolved by ourselves. At this time, the quickest help we can get is probably from our neighbors.
To some degree, neighbours are as important as relatives to us, because they could provide the
immediat help. In the same way, a neighbour who likes to help others will get help in return. Help
each others can form a friendly and harmonious relationship among the neighbours.
All in all, a good neighbour is someone who have a good living habit, is friendly and is willing to
help others. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that a good
relationship among neighbours need the maintenance from us.
Topic: 16
I can see both advantages and disadvantages to having a new restaurant built in our neighborhood.
I'm worried about traffic and how it will affect our neighborhood. However, I think that it will
benefit local businesses and increase appreciation for our neighborhood. Overall, I think it is a
good idea.
Traffic congestion is always a concern when you build something new. Our streets are narrow,
with parking on both sides. More cars traveling through the neighborhood could cause a lot of
congestion. Traffic means parking problems, too. Our neighborhood has very few garages
attached to the houses. Most of us depend on finding a space to park on the street. If the new
restaurant is built, we'll be competing for those spaces with the restaurant's patrons. Plus, if the
restaurant offers valet parking, it'll be even worse. Valet parkers work in teams to grab every
possible space available on the street.
I'm also concerned about the type of patrons this new restaurant will bring into our neighborhood.
A family restaurant wouldn't be a problem. However, if it's going have a bar and dancing, then
there could be problems. The restaurant would stay open later, and people leaving the restaurant
might be drunk. Who wouldn't worry about rowdy customers staggering around our neighborhood
in the early morning hours, looking for their cars?
I have to admit, though, there are advantages to a new restaurant. Our neighborhood could
certainly use the jobs the restaurant would provide. Not only that, the money neighborhood
residents would earn there would likely be spent at other neighborhood businesses. This would
give a boost to those businesses and make our neighborhood more prosperous.
A new restaurant would also attract a lot of people to our neighborhood. They could see what a
nice area this is to live. That might attract new residents to the neighborhood. That would be a
good thing, because we've been losing residents to the suburbs the last couple of years.
There are a lot of details to consider, but all in all, I support the idea of this new restaurant in our
neighborhood.
❸ 托福作文怎麼練啊
被描述的對象可能是極其普通的，比如一個事件，一個人或是一個動物，也可能是虛構的事物。對於這一類型的文章，寫的時候應該講求生動，注意挖掘平凡事物中的有趣的，新奇的地方，選取一些特別的東西來寫，給出足夠確切的描述性細節。如果描述一件事情，你就要「看見」他們在動，「聽到」他們在說，這樣會讓你的描寫栩栩如生。組織結構要清晰。介紹部分應從總體到細節，最後以主題句收尾。用幾段來開展和描述你的主題，結尾再次點題或結束這件事。
解釋事物是什麼的文章就是定義文。有些事物有具體明確的意義，例如玻璃、書本或樹木。 但有一些文章就很抽象，比如城市，尊敬，愛等等，不同的人會有不同的觀點。這樣的主題就比較適合新托福考試你可以按照以下步驟定義：功用----解釋它能做什麼，或者它怎樣做；結構----它是怎樣構成的；分析----將它與其他事物做比較，說明他們的不同之處。
類比文和對比文開篇討論兩個觀點或兩個事物那些方面是相似的，然後討論兩個觀點和兩個事物為何不同 對於這一類的文章，可以按照以下步驟來寫：第一段：引入；第二段：哪些相似；第三段：哪些不同；第四段：結尾；先說明第一個觀點，然後說明第二個。首先將兩種觀點進行對比和比較，然後再完整地解釋第一個觀點，然後是第二個。這也是很多學生首先嘗試的寫法。
議論文旨在發表一個觀點，然後運用論據去論證這一觀點使讀者信服。同時，駁斥對立觀點使讀者相信你的確說的有道理。議論文可以是理性的論證，也可以是感性的呼籲。但這兩個方面不應該混淆，全文要保持統一的論述風格。你的所有論證都應得出一個符合邏輯的結論。 如果你論證的主題倡導做一些改變，就提供一些可行的解決方法。論點就是你的個人觀點，長度為一句話。 它是你這篇文章的基礎，引導你的全篇文章，並引領讀者去理解你的文章。在沒有清晰的主題之前不要動筆。 將所有可能的論證方法都考慮到，並按照重要性和與文章主題相關性進行排序。
❹ 托福寫作題目大概有幾種題型呢
托福寫作題目大概有兩種題型：Agree/disagree的類型或者是prefer的類型。
1）Agree/disagree的題目特點：
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement?
Itis often not a good thing to move to a new town or a new county because of thelost of old friends.
Usespecific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
這類題目包括三部分的要求：①是否同意以下觀點（文章要表明觀點）；②題目的主要內容要表達出來（切題）；③文章要解釋原因，並且有充分的論據支撐。
2）prefer類型的題目特點：
Somepeople think to watch a movie in a cinema (theater) is better, but others thinkat home is better, which one do you prefer?
這樣的題目其實是一種對比的類型，想要突出自身的正確性的話，可以從突出自身有點出發，或者是突出對方的缺點。
❺ 托福寫作怎麼進行練習
1.托福寫作中必會出現「某某某事很重要」的句子，然而很多同學在描述時，卻只能想到important....
原句中「It is inevitable for .... to do sth.
」的形式主語句式真的再簡單不過了，初中我們都學過，但卻一定比你用important高大上了很多~
2.這句話中的inevitable還可以換成如下形容詞：
significant， indispensable，crucial.... 它們都是用來表示重要性的~
3. 給到大家兩句仿寫的句子，一個是關於環保的，一個是關於溝通的，這都是托福寫作熱門話題：
A. It is crucial for people to take steps to keep theenvironment from
deterioration, like taking public transportation instead ofdriving
cars.(人們必然要採取些措施來防止環境惡化，如多乘坐公共交通工具而不是去開小汽車)
B. It is inevitable for the old to havegeneration gap with their
children.(對老年人來說，不可避免的會和他們的孩子之間有代溝。)
Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on adesert
island.
(許多人對在荒島上的生活產生了不合實際的看法。)
1.這樣簡單的句子，當我們看過後翻譯成中文自然是手到擒來，而若給你這樣一個漢語，你是否能夠想到如此翻譯呢?
該句中，用picture一詞顯得十分生動形象，這點是我們可以運用到今後寫作中去的~
2.仿寫的時候我們直接將 of 後面跟的名詞換成我們所寫作文的主題相關詞即可~
也可將unrealistic換成恰當的形容詞
❻ 我想練習托福作文，smartpigai的托福作文練習怎麼樣
獨立寫作和綜合寫作部分smartpigai都提供了不少題目，有推薦的，有自選的。
❼ 托福作文題目
. Some people think that parents should plan their children's leisure time carefully. Other people believe? that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.
2. People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree? with the statement. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
3. People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or? something different Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your choice.
4. Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young alts. Other people think? that friends are the most important influence on young alts. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to) support your position.
TOEFL（The Test of English as a Foreign Language，簡稱TOEFL），是由美國教育測驗服務社（ETS）舉辦的英語能力考試，全名為「檢定非英語為母語者的英語能力考試」，中文音譯為「托福」。TOEFL有三種，分別是：紙考、機考和網考，新托福滿分是120分。托福復習主要資料為托福機經（又稱民間托福答案題庫）。TOEFL考試的有效期為兩年（從考試日期開始計算）；例如：2003年1月18日參加考試，這次考試成績的有效期是從2003年1月18日到2005年1月18日。2014年4月5日，英國內政部與美國教育考試服務中心（ETS）合約到期後，不再續約，而英國大學也不將承認其機構下托福和托業的英語語言成績。
TOEFL，Test of English as a Foreign Language，由美國教育測驗服務社( ETS, Ecational Testing Service)在全世界舉辦，是一種針對母語非英語的人進行的英語水平的考試。TOEFL是出國留學(美國、加拿大)的必備考試成績，美國和加拿大已有超過2400所大學和學院承認這項考試成績，規定了申請者的最低TOEFL錄取分數線。TOEFL成績與獎學金的成功率是相關的。
TOEFL
國外許多政府部門，私人或機構獎學金計劃，執照證明機構等也是依據TOEFL成績來評審接受人的英文程度。在中國，TOEFL亦是英語水平的一種證明，有一些單位(特別是三資企業)採用它衡量應聘者的英語水平。從一九九八年七月起，托福考試在許多國家從傳統的紙筆方式轉變成電腦方式。但亞洲一些國家，如中國大陸、台灣和香港澳門地區等仍採用原來傳統的紙筆方式，暫時不作改變。預計2002年下半年實現計算機化考試。
紙筆考試是由正確答案的數量總和來決定成績總分，而不管問題的難易。電腦考試則不同，它根據回答問題的質量來給出下一個問題，如果考生回答得正確，電腦將提高問題的難度；如果考生回答錯誤，電腦將降低問題難度。因此成績是由正確答案的難度來決定得分，而不是由正確答案的數量。電腦考試的寫作一項，考生可以選擇打字或書寫。 電腦考試的費用：美國及其屬地和加拿大為USD，所有其它國家為USD。
❽ 練習托福綜合寫作的材料
我自己托福考過兩次89 和 107
我可以負責任的告訴你總和寫作只需要按照OG上那專篇範文，MEERCAT（MEERKAT)那樣寫，屬絕對是GOOD。
綜合寫作的聽力已經很簡單了，如果你綜合寫作的聽力你聽不懂那你聽力怎麼做？我第一次聽力21分，我都覺得我聽綜合寫作完全沒有障礙。去做聽寫吧，每天90分鍾聽寫老托福的段子，20天你就會有很大的飛躍。
聽力的時候筆記是要記的，但是按點記就可以，真的，相信我模仿OG範文就足夠了。聽力材料肯定是反駁閱讀的，按點寫，加些關鍵詞就OK了
至於材料，Barron是用來做閱讀和聽力的，口語寫作不要理他。其他材料主要用老托福原來的題。托福不是做題的考試，提高自己英語能力是正道。
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❾ 自己寫的一片托福的獨立寫作，TPO1上的題目，求改！
我沒事給你評評吧。
首先，第一段的作用是點題，這個題就是在考什麼，sport和social activity是否也需要財力支持，和其他的一樣重要，說白了就是sport和social activity很重要，學校要重視還是不重視。
你要做的讓考官明確你的觀點，其次要簡略的說一下為什麼，其實就是後面幾個小的支持論據的總括。
上來之後可以廢話一句引入正題，然後很快說你認為大學應該給學生什麼，打個比方，讓學生成為一個全面發展的人啦，讓學生以後好就業啦，等等。
接著亮自己觀點，選擇應該用財力支持運動和社會活動，你不需要詳細闡述為什麼，來個兩句就夠，比如社會活動可以給學生增加社會閱歷，運動對健康有益，這些和classes以及圖書館一樣重要，然後總括，學校支持運動和社會活動才會讓學生全面發展，或者學習的更好，以後好就業，之類，所以我支持。
評價：說的不客氣點，你這個第一段，繞來繞去，基本都是廢話，考官看完第一段不知道你要說啥，When people enjoy the benefits brought by the strong financial support of classes and libraries, isn't it necessary that they give some consideration to the disproportionate financial support of sports and social activities? 打那麼多字都佔用時間，托福考試作文爭分奪秒，每一句話都要成為刀子和武器。
第二段大體沒什麼，就是你寫從social facilities中得到健康（直翻），不知道你是筆誤還是什麼，social facilities是公共設施的意思，我不知道你想說什麼，運動館？還是什麼？你要寫出來，游泳館啊，網球場之類的詞可以用啊，social facilities范圍太大，包含郵局醫院銀行超市等等，當然也包含運動館，但是你這里應該是在說學校建立運動場地吧，所以還是直接說的明白點，一目瞭然了。
後面你在寫因為健康所以支持，然後說健康很重要啊，缺少運動設施就怎麼樣啦……在前面補充一下，學校這么做，是對學生好，是提高學生的健康，不是we should pay more attention in ourselves，是學校應該關注學生的健康，給投資，然後說一下，學生健康就怎麼樣了，學習更有效率，做運動更開心，等等等，扣住題。
第三段，你說什麼公共設施是可以提高學生的交流能力社會能力，你你要說public facilities就得說有什麼，還是跟上面那一段的毛病，圖書館也是public facilities，也是social facilities。
然後你要說的是sports和social activity，social activity不僅是社交活動，也是社會活動的意思，范圍很廣闊，校外實習也算是social activity， 參觀圖書館也是social activity，舉辦晚會也是。
你要說學校建立廣場給了學生social activity的場所，也可以，說明白，不要直接寫什麼Without available places, many passionate events could not be put into effect，然後人家要看你的例子才知道你要說啥，考官閱卷很快的，不看你的例子你這段就廢了。
回來，其實這一段最開始，你得先說學校為什麼要幫助學生提高這些交流或者social skill？記住，後面的三個小段是用來支持你的觀點的，你說了一大堆好處，沒有這些設施，學生就學不到，但是一直沒說，為什麼要提高交流能力社會能力啊？作為中國人你肯定覺得說為什麼是廢話，因為這不明擺著么，但是寫作文，你要有邏輯，你不說就等於沒有，學校幹嘛要幫助學生提高這些啊，加一句學校支持社會活動可以讓學生提高交流的能力，讓他們畢業後更有競爭力，更好在職場和人溝通，或者這樣幫助學生交到更多朋友，使他們生活更好，或者什麼，隨便，你自己想，然後說，這對學生來說最重要，所以支持這個和圖書館之類的一樣重要，扣題，扣題，一定要繞回中心。
最後一段不說啥了，你這個有點單薄，可以再加一段，用讓步來說，在最後一段和第三段中間加一段，說假如學校不給予這些東西財政支持，假如一個學校沒有這些東西，只有class和圖書館，那麼，學生會變成什麼樣，比如身體不好，影響學習，比如沒有活動場所，鴨梨很大，心情不好，這里可以扯點，最後來一句，沒有投資這些既然這么不好，所以投資這個是必須的，為了學生的健康成長balabala……
我覺得，你的寫句子能力基本是沒有問題的，可以說比一般托福學生的句子還強，基礎應該是不錯的，也會用連接詞和例子，但是你的作文明顯是沒有邏輯主線，你還不太懂怎麼扣題，抓題，怎麼寫主線。
慢慢來吧，真心的推薦你，直接去拿機經作文練習，TPO上的題目有點過時，有問題還可以問，當然不接受我的評論也是可以的～