① 求2009年英語高考滿分作文
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Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over half of the people say they haven』t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9 percent of them complain they don』t have places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some of them even don』t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.
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The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
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Where is my home?
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, 「Where is my home?」 What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy． are divided on this matter．
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence．
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy,teachers will not know how we are getting on with our studies, but if it is too difficult, we will lose heart
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Graation and Moving on
Graation is a time when we move on, from school to university, or out into the real world．
Before graating from school, We usually have a variety of activities, like taking pictures, leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship, or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect．
However, I have mixed emotions about moving on．I want to stay and have more fun with my friends, but I will have to move on．Graation means taking a step forward---moving onward and upward．Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced．
Graation is coming whether we are ready or not．Let's make great efforts so that our dream will come true．
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Different Job Outlooks
Nowadays university graates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed. However, a certain number of graates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances. Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.
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Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year．The college entrance examination is approaching day by day．Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count．
It cannot be denied that they have their own time schele after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room．What』s important，with their morns taking care of them，they can spare more time for studies．However，there exist some disadvantages．For example，sometimes their minds go wandering easily without competitors round．Furthermore，a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily．
In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship，noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10：30 p. m.，leading to a serious lack of sleep，I think．Worse still，they don』t make fullest use of time to study so，from my perspective．I prefer to live in the rented room．
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Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Yuanmingyuan, 「Garden of all gardens」, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860． Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.
Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn』t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What』s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.
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Last month in Paris, a French company auctioned two bronze sculptures ---- a rat』s head and a rabbits head captured from China, which has aroused great public concern in China.
<!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->As is known to all, the two bronze animal heads were made ring the Qing Dynasty to decorate Yuanmingyuan. In 1860, the British and French troops broke into Beijing and burned down the royal garden, taking away millions of Chinese art works, including the two head relics.
The Chinese government is strongly against this auction and has repeatedly asked for the free return of them according to the international laws. At the same time, the Chinese people have taken actions, too. Some people even flew to France, trying to stop the selling. However, the French company just wouldn』t listen.
In my opinion, the auction should be strongly condemned. Not only has it hurt the feelings of the Chinese people but also it brought shame to France. As middle school students, we must study harder so that we can make our country more powerful in the future and stop any such things from happening again.
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Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is 「My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School」.
Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life. They have the same hairstyles as their favorable stars and wear top brand of clothes and shoes. Some use expensive mobile phones.
The reasons why they do so are as follows. Firstly, they hope to look smart and special. Secondly, they want to win others』 admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool .
As far as I am concerned, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life because it is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What』s more , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school to receive normal ecation. Last but not least, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.
Thank you for listening!
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What a Great Olympic Games!
The 29th Olympic Games has been over in Beijing, China on August 24,2008, which has left a great impression on the whole world. About 204 countries and regions attended the Olympic Games. In the Games, our Chinese athletes have won 51 gold medals, while America,36; Russia,23. This is the first time that we, Chinese athletes have won so many gold medals in one Olympic Games, which means our sports games belong to the first class in the world!
It is our athletes』 intelligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for us Chinese all! Days when we were looked down upon have gone forever! From the very Games, we have proved that our government has the ability to hold the Olympic Games successfully! Not only can we hold the Olympic Games well, but also we can perform well. The fact has showed everything to the world! It is the successful 29th Olympic Games that destroys the saying of those who doubted about it days ago! What a great, successful and impressive Olympic Games!
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TVs and Radios
TVs are more useful than radios. From TV you can see and hear what is happening in the world. However, radios are not disappearing. They are still with us. And the number of listeners is becoming larger. Do you know why?
One reason for this is the invention of the transistor. A transistor radio can be very small. It is very easy to be carried. Besides, radio broadcasts are better for blind people. Many old people don』t have good eyesight. They can』t watch TV, but can listen to music or news over the radio. What』s more, a radio is cheaper than a TV set.
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A new park for children has been set up to welcome' the coming of Children's Day,
The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children's Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.
I'm sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year
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A teacher just likes a shining
A teacher just likes a shining star to students. Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
I happened to be in Miss Fu's class when I began my high school years. At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation① were poor. Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to them. For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken English. When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak. First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them. In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise speaking.Little by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before others. Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English contest②.
Whenever I look at the stars in the sky, I recognize the brightest one ---- the symbol of Miss Fu in my heart. Miss Fu will always be a shining star in my life!
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I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom.
I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. "What a pity!" I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at me.I love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.
Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, "Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don't lose confidence. Keep on your study and you will succeed!" I knew it was from the good friend of mine.These words encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.
② 2006年高考作文全國卷一作文試題和滿分作文
材料作文：
閱讀下面的文字，根據要求寫一篇不少於800字的文章。（60分）
一隻老鷹從鷲峰頂上俯沖下來，將一隻小羊抓走了。
一隻烏鴉看見了，非常羨慕，心想：要是我也有這樣的本領該多好啊！於是烏鴉模仿老鷹的俯沖姿勢拚命練習。
一天，烏鴉覺得自己練得很棒了，便哇哇地從樹上猛沖下來，撲到一隻山羊的背上，想抓住山羊往上飛，可是它的身子太輕，爪子被羊毛纏住，無論怎樣拍打翅膀也飛不起來，結果被牧羊人抓住了。
牧羊人的孩子見了，問這是一隻什麼鳥，牧羊人說：「這是一隻忘記自己叫什麼的鳥。」孩子摸著烏鴉的羽毛說：「它也很可愛啊！」
要求全面理解材料，但可以選擇一個側面、一個角度構思作文。自主確定立意，確定文體 ，確定標題；不要脫離材料的含義作文，不要套作，不得抄襲。
兩 棵 花
河北考生
庭內有棵花。之所以稱為一棵花，是因為那是棵高大的槐樹，高高大大地立在藍天下，清清爽爽地撐開一片天地來。清晨的霧太濃，花便一嘟嚕一嘟嚕地擁著、擠著。花氣太濃，濃成馥郁的白，又一絲絲、一縷縷浸潤在澄澈的風中，松疏有致地垂落下來，叮叮當當地搖成陽光中薄的風鈴。?
這樣美的花，每年三月惹起多少孩子的欣悅與嚮往。?
然而，我的小表妹樂樂說：「我也要種棵花。」?
「那樂樂要種什麼花呢?」我逗她。?
她在院中巡視一番後，指著角落裡一個土灰的花盆說：「喏，就它了。」?
我一看，差點笑倒。那是盆半死不活的文竹，被媽媽棄置一旁。且莫說那細瘦綿軟的莖，瑣碎細小的葉和有氣無力的精神，單只文竹能不能開出花來，就夠我的小表妹琢磨的了。?
「不可能。你要知道文竹是文竹，槐樹是槐樹，文竹永遠成不了花。」?樂樂板著小臉，一聲不吭，獨自一人呼哧呼哧地把它搬到自己的「勢力范圍」之內?。?
從此，窗外是妖嬈的槐樹，窗內是病懨懨的文竹。?
春天過去了。楊樹依依，細草茵茵，紙鳶飄飄，孩童笑鬧。只有我的小表妹一人，制定養花計劃，嚴格執行，決不偷懶。?夏天過去了。荷香陣陣，蟲鳴聲聲，處處花繁，枝枝葉茂。只有我的小表妹一人，愛花護花，鬆土澆水。?
秋天過去了。秋風瑟瑟，落葉層層，果實累累，稻香撩人。只有我的小表妹一人，對花談心，望花成痴。?
冬天過去了。白雪皚皚，瓊枝樹樹，萬物寂寂，齊家歡聚。只有我的小表妹，對花相坐，兩相陪伴。?
又是一年春來到。樂樂的花沒養成，人卻病倒了。二媽對我說：「真是的，養什麼勞什子花，文竹要能成花，還不成了笑話?」無語。?
我去看她時，正是那三月槐花盛。我怕她難過，便想拉上簾子。她喊道：「別拉別拉，姐姐，去把我的文竹抱來。」依言而行。?
她指著文竹說：「好看不，我的花?」我心想，哪有什麼花?莫不是燒糊塗了?她又指著剛發的芽尖說：「這不是花?」只見莖尖處將開未開，似綻未綻，一絲絲綠意從中心沁出——真的是花嗎?當真是花！我眼中一熱，抱住她說：「是花，文竹和槐樹，是兩棵一樣美的花。」?
窗外窗內，暗香浮動。?
人生拒絕抄襲
河南考生
考場上，監考老師會諄諄教誨我們：「考試時不要抄襲，因為那是自己在騙自己。」
作文課上，語文老師都會細心囑咐我們：「不要抄襲別人的作文，要寫出自己的語言。」?
看來，許多事都是不歡迎抄襲的，抄襲別人還有可能自己害自己：雖然抄襲別人的試題得了高分，結果自己不會的東西還是不會；雖然抄襲別人的作品發表了，最終卻成了法庭上的被告。?
我們的人生也不歡迎抄襲，因為，抄襲得來的人生，只是別人人生的一種復制，難稱得精彩，更沒有什麼價值。然而，我們中的許多人，卻那麼熱衷於「抄襲」別人，甚至恨不得將自己復製成自己所羨慕的某個人。看到一些歌星一夜成名，不問問自身條件具備不具備，便花大量的時間和精力去練嗓子，練身段，甚至衣著服飾、言談舉止無一不對其進行抄襲，如果有人對他們說「你很像某某人」，便是對他最好的稱贊。他的渾身上下都成了別人，唯獨沒有了他自己。這些人，多像那隻模仿著老鷹去叼羊的烏鴉啊——當烏鴉看到老鷹從高高的峰頂直沖下去，迅猛地叼起一隻羊兒時，它的心裡一定充滿了羨慕，它一定希望自己成為老鷹那樣的鳥兒，否則，它也不會刻苦地練俯沖，然後嘶叫著從樹上沖下去叼羊了。結果怎樣呢?烏鴉不僅沒叼到羊，反而被牧羊人抓獲了；而那些盲目崇拜偶像、模仿偶像、「抄襲」偶像的人，又有幾個和偶像一樣，站在成功的舞台上了呢??是的，我們年輕的心渴望成功。我們不希望自己的一生庸庸碌碌，但是，在為實現理想付諸行動之前，我們一定要先弄清楚自己適合不適合走上那條路；當我們打算成為歌星時，要考慮一下自己的嗓音；當我們立志成為作家時，要考慮自己的寫作天賦；當我們想要成為體育健將時，要先請體育教練對自己的身體把一下關……總之，想要成為我們羨慕的某人時，一定要考慮一下自己是否也具有和他相似的發展潛質。如果沒有，那麼，就讓我們的羨慕僅僅止於羨慕吧。?
是的，這紛繁的世間，能讓我們羨慕的人和事有很多。很多時候，這種羨慕也是我們努力的動力之一。我們羨慕的許多人，也的確值得學習，但這種學習不能是簡單的模仿，低級的「抄襲」。烏鴉一定要學習老鷹的話，它可以學老鷹翱翔九霄的勇敢；它可以學老鷹輾轉空谷的豪邁；它可以學老鷹面對嚴峻考驗的堅毅。它唯獨不要學習「叼羊」——那是缺乏爪力和氣力的烏鴉學不到的，那隻會貽笑大方，只會讓它自己陷入被牧羊人抓獲的困境。?
同樣，我們可以學習別人的寫作技巧，我們可以學習別人的學習方法，我們可以學一學歌星成名前的辛苦，我們唯獨不可以照抄別人的作文，也不可以完全照搬別人的答案，不能一定去學歌星唱歌，更不能完全學他們的穿衣打扮，言談舉止。因為，那不叫學習，那叫抄襲。天上飛鳥，地下螻蟻，各有各的生活，我們不拒絕平凡，但我們的人生一定要拒絕抄襲！
③ 06年高考滿分作文
【一杯白開水】
輕輕地推開窗，你看到了什麼？天地日月，草木精華。一杯白開水，清澈透明，深吸一口熱氣，春之潤、夏之熱、秋之爽、冬之寒，便瞬間全都體會到了。
年輕人喜歡喝咖啡，因為濃郁；中年人喜歡喝茶，因為清香；老年人喜歡白開水，因為可以照見他人。
一杯白開水，極其普通，卻讓你透過它，看到了整個世界。手捧一杯這樣的水，若在清晨輕輕呷一口，淡卻微甜，就像清晨的甘露，滴在葉尖。那是*愛呀，你可看得見？那是如高山上綻放的雪蓮一般純潔，山谷中流過的小溪一樣深沉的愛！是誰在我們最深的心底輕輕呼喚著我們的降臨？是誰在我們的每一寸肌膚上，播種下無私的關懷？
「誰言寸草心，報得三春暉」。
這樣的水，是日月捧出的精華，是花雨釀造的瓊漿。在焦渴中，這是任何飲品都無法替代的。透過這穿越時空的水，還有一雙老師們渴望的雙眼，當一顆幼苗破土而出，便會有千千萬萬的園丁為她忙碌。
沿著校園的青石路，順著熟識的楊柳路，你可看見，初入學的小芽已經長得健壯青翠。 ァ耙恢Х郾剩二尺講台，三句真理。」
一點一滴，滋潤心田。
透過一杯白開水，看到的是整個大千世界。春風夏雨，秋實冬雪，草木蟲魚，飛禽走獸……而自我，多麼渺小！我曾在山坡上放飛風箏，然而卻比不過天上的飛鳥；我曾在山谷中飲用泉水，但魚兒卻更為自由；我曾試著離開家門，卻從未離開過爺爺的視線，奶奶的叮嚀。
這一切，原來是愛。沒有愛，哪有千人萬人為你操勞；沒有愛，你又怎能為千人萬人掛念？
我愛這一杯白開水，所有的人都清清楚楚地站在面前。不要咖啡的渾濁而擾動，不要茶葉的障目而忘己，更不要汽水的沸騰而自大。
就是這樣的白開水，清淡無味，但我卻可以品出千種滋味，是甜、是酸、是苦、是辣，是別人的愛，別人的情，別人的關懷，也是應當付出的回報，應當付出的真心。
狂妄的人，自負的人，都看不到這世界上的其他人。「山外青山樓外樓」，看到別人，才能提醒沉睡中的自我！
白開水，果然是醒人良葯，睜開眼，看世界，關懷自己，關心他人。
名師點評
以「一杯白開水」作為標題，也許並不準確，應該還有更恰當的，但考場作文是「急就章」，不可能仔細推敲，嚴絲合縫，不妥之處在所難免。
通讀全文，你會感到，文章語言優雅含蓄，顯示出一種內在的文采。「透過一杯白開水，看到的是整個大千世界。春風夏雨，秋實冬雪，草木蟲魚，飛禽走獸……而自我，多麼渺小！」讀這樣的文字，如啜香茗，如飲醇醪。還應該看到的是，作者在揮灑才情的同時，行文始 終不忘圍繞主題，如結尾兩段就很好地扣住了話題。
【相遇在夢想與現實的軌跡中】
古往今來，人類生生世世在編織著夢想與希冀。遙望蒼穹，星空閃爍著訴說著先人祈福的呢喃和虔誠的禱告；那夢想是如此真實，又如此遙遠，因為那是心中不滅的追求，是浮於現實的繁華與幻想。
穴鳩的現實是「決起而飛，槍榆方而止」；溪流的現實是在石縫間淺吟低唱著「靡靡之音」；老馬的現實是「眼前飄過一陣鞭影，我只低頭瞧著腳下」。它們早已身陷於現實的泥潭而不能自拔，麻木的心靈早已放棄了擁有夢想遙望天邊的權利。於是夢想的翅膀飄然遠去，現實的枷鎖架在脖項。
收回遐想的思緒，我才發現夢想就是天邊的星辰，永不熄滅地照亮匆匆的人生；現實就是腳下的土地，踏實而厚重地記錄行路的足跡。人，既不能活於華而不實的夢想里，也不要沉湎於現實的喧囂中。在人生的道路中，應是左邊種植夢想，右邊種植真實，隨時采擷，收獲希望。
尋著古人的來路，我聽到了杜工部「安得廣廈千萬間，大庇天下寒士俱歡顏，風雨不動安如山」的呼喚，這是憂國憂民的吶喊，是杜甫心中最大的夢想。收回目光，我聽到了魯迅先生仰望星空的感嘆：「寄意寒星荃不察，我以我血薦軒轅」，「心事浩茫連廣宇，於無聲處聽驚雷。」這是先生「用筆救國」的夢想，他縱然對現實失望，但沒有絕望，彷徨中的吶喊喚起了國人的奮起和努力。
追溯著世界的旅途，我看到了麥哲倫環游世界的夢想，他用廣闊的胸懷迎接波瀾壯闊的波濤，用夢想書寫著生命的厚重與責任。縱使行程中的他遭到土著人的屠戮，現實的殘酷卻沒有將他的夢想抹殺削弱。後人沿著他夢想的軌跡，走向世界。收回目光，我看到了馬丁·路德金的夢想，醜陋而頑固的現實一次又一次打擊著這位「追夢者」，但他的夢想凝集了所有黑人的正義和力量，現實，終於因他的執著而跪拜在這一偉大民族戰士的腳下。我又看到了徐本禹朴實無華的笑容，他沒有像自己的同學一樣追求花前月下香車寶馬，更沒有因現實的殘缺而逃遁，而是傾自己的夢想於偏遠支教之中。他們，都是現實中堅強的追夢者！
尋著古往今來的道路，我探頭仰望天邊的星空。夢想與現實交軌在人的生命中，讓我們用胸懷天地的壯志凌雲擁抱夢想，用虛懷若谷的情懷書寫現實中人生華美的篇章吧！
④ 2006年廣東高考10篇滿分作文
語言是溝通的鑰匙
假如溝通是一扇門，那麼語言就是這扇門的鑰匙。
如果溝通的門通向的另一方是漆黑的深夜，那麼語言的鑰匙便引領著你走向皓月當空，繁星滿天；如果溝通的門通向的另一方是一望無際的沙漠，那麼語言的鑰匙便引領著你走向鳥語花香的綠洲；如果溝通的門通向的另一方是浩瀚無邊的大海，那麼語言的鑰匙便引領著你走向如宗愨般「乘長風破萬里浪」，如毛主席般「到中流擊水，浪遏飛舟」。語言在溝通中是多麼地重要！它是一把閃光的鑰匙，使溝通直接到達人的心坎上。
恰如其分的語言表達，利於親情的溝通。誠然，父母們都「望子成龍，望女成鳳」。然而，當子女跌倒時，是痛斥「沒用的東西，怎麼搞的」，還是送以一句「這次是有點失策，下回努力」，即會收到截然相反的效果。當子女摘吃了早戀的禁果時，父母們是鄭重聲明：「那不行，絕對不行」，還是先說一句「你的心情爸媽能理解」再述之以理，效果更不用提起。盡管溝通的心都如月光般皎潔，但語言的表達卻讓溝通的效果不一樣。可見，親情的溝通，要用好語言的鑰匙。
恰如其分的語言表達，利於友情的溝通。高適的「莫愁前路無知己，天下誰人不識君」與王勃的「海內存知己，天涯若比鄰」，都用優美的語言送走了友人，達到了友情的溝通。李白《蜀道難》一文中勸說友人歸來的語言精闢，達到了友情的溝通。從李白的「上有六龍回日之高標，下有沖波逆折之回川」可知「蜀道之難，難於上青天」，友人便從言語中感受到友人的關懷，溝通也便到了心坎。溝通並不像白居易說的「此時無聲勝有聲」，它需要語言為它傳達彼此的關切。友情的溝通，需要語言的鑰匙。
恰如其分的表達，利於愛情的溝通。文學著作中簡•愛與男主人公羅伯特早期的認識，便因為羅伯特孤傲的語言表達而困難重重。幸好，簡•愛直接而愛憎分明的語言打破了兩人間的障礙，兩顆相愛的心才得以溝通。劉蘭芝被遣回家時對焦仲卿所說的「君當作磐石，妾當作蒲葦」，焦仲卿「誓天不相負」的回答當中，愛情得到了溝通。愛情有時不能像柳永說的「執手相看淚眼，竟無語凝噎」，而需要溝通。愛情的溝通，需要語言的鑰匙。
再看，觸龍說趙太後、魏徵諫太宗，無不以恰如其分的語言表達見稱。
君臣間的溝通，同樣需要語言的鑰匙。
一言以蔽之，請好好運用語言的鑰匙，讓溝通直接到達心坎上。
(按：應是2004年廣東高考滿分作文之一。再提供另一篇，也是當年的滿分作文）
「愛」在心口難開
喝完最後一口牛奶，我默默地把145分的卷子放到父親面前，他抬起眼哼了一聲，簽上大名後又繼續埋頭看報了。我嘴唇動了動，想說什麼，但終究還是作罷，反正我也習慣了。收拾好東西，我順手把門帶上，那輕輕的關門聲，彷彿一聲嘆息似的。我頭也不回，大步向學校走去……
其實，我也想他對我笑一笑，說聲「考得不錯」的話……
我跟我父親好像是天生仇人，從小到大，我們的交戰便沒停過。調皮是男孩的天性，每當我闖了禍，他總一聲不吭，掄起皮帶沒命地抽。大概是遺傳了他的執拗，我也不哭，一陣清脆地抽打聲和媽媽的哭喊聲混戰，最終便以「砰」一聲摔門的巨響——我奪門而出告終。
媽媽常跟我說，其實他是愛我的，只是不知道怎樣表達，我要試著和他溝通一下。溝通？我冷笑，和他這種機器怎麼溝通？他甚至對路邊不相識的掃街大嬸笑一笑，卻吝惜地不肯對我展露分毫，他表達「愛」的唯一語言，便是那無止境的皮帶抽響。而我回報他的愛，便是比說話還多次數的摔門聲……
想著想著，便來到了學校。「嘿！」好友神秘地湊過來，「知道今天什麼日子嗎？父親節！」頓時，冰冷的老臉又浮現在腦海，我厭惡地說：「關我什麼事？」「你不對你父親表示點什麼嗎？我昨晚等不及，已經送了，當我對我爸說『我愛你』的時候，他居然哭了呢！」好友興奮地說，然後不由分說地拉我去了精品店……
拿著一瓶二鍋頭和一盒包裝精美的皮帶，我忐忑地回到家裡。送皮帶，真諷刺，他又要抽我了吧？
「爸，今天是父親節，這是送你的禮物。」我不動聲色道。他愣了一下，慢騰騰地拆開了禮物。出乎意料，他沒有勃然大怒，只重重地嘆了口氣：「今天你媽不在，跟我喝一杯。」也好，壯壯膽。
可怕的寂靜，只有酒杯碰撞聲。兩人都喝得微醺，我望著父親，幽幽地說：「爸爸，我……我……我愛你……」極輕極快地帶過，也不知他聽到沒有，「我沒別的意思，只是你那條皮帶快斷了……」沒等我說完，父親喉嚨里冒出一句：「今天考試考得不錯……」我的眼頓時熱了。他拿起酒杯，仰頭猛地一倒，眼睛閃閃的，紅了。他慌忙掩飾道：「這酒……這酒太烈了……」我笑笑，哽咽著：「是烈了點……」說罷也舉杯一飲而盡，熱淚，流進了嘴裡……有愛的淚，是甜的……
一聲「我愛你」，化解無數情……
該回答在2005-12-05 23:56:07由回答者修改過
⑤ 在追求中認清自己我價值 2006年高考滿分作文(全國卷)
[在追求中認清來自己我價值 2006年高考滿分自作文(全國卷)]
傲然挺立於飛沙走石的沙漠之中的胡楊，創造了「三百年不死，三百年不倒，三百年不朽」的奇跡，它們追求的是與沙漠抗爭的堅強與不屈，卻從不嚮往微風吹拂、細雨飄落的江南水鄉，在追求中認清自己我價值 2006年高考滿分作文(全國卷)。在不屈信念的追求中，它們保持了最真的自我，認清了自我價值的真正所在。
⑥ 英語高考滿分作文(帶翻譯）
Olympics and I
Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an indivial, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
奧運與我
親愛的朋友，我有一個好消息，告知這里。通過長期的努力，北京已獲得申辦2008年奧運會。作為一個在北京居住，我感到很興奮，你想分享我的快樂。 這一成功意味著很多超過我的游戲。首先，本屆奧運會一定會促進我們的經濟發展。據一些專家最近的一項調查，這項比賽將提高約3％的國內生產總值，提供職位約1.0萬。更重要的是，我們的文化將得到廣泛認可和接受世界各地通過奧運會。人們會走過來從世界的每一個角落，體驗中華文化在各個方面。此外， 5 透過游戲，我們的生活環境將大大改善。例如，公共交通系統會過時。此外，據了解，將種植更多樹木，草地將大大擴大。 我的朋友，我真的期待著這個偉大的奧運會的到來。作為個人，我都願意提供我的任何方式我可以提供幫助。我也希望能邀請大家來到這里，觀看2008年奧運會，此致。
Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
中國旅遊
最近幾年，在中國的趨勢，旅遊業增長較快。根據最近的一項調查顯示一些專家認為，約47％城鎮居民定期作出旅行，28％的農村居民，也使他們的全國巡演。該調查還顯示，更多的人在旅遊有興趣，並會在將來加入軍隊。 面對這一趨勢，我們不能不說是負責任的開發一些潛在因素。在第一個地方，隨著改革開放政策，對中國人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他們大多數都不能周遊。更重要的是，它相信，人們現在更積極的態度，旅遊業，把它作為一種生活方式。此外，旅遊設施正在變得越來越好。例如，交通運輸發展迅速，許多景點都已經上市。
What a disaster(災難)!
So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
什麼是災難（災難）！
到目前為止，有報道稱，超過60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡，再加上數百萬人民有成為homeless.And他們在疾病和其他困難的危險之中。無論如何，感謝所有善良的人們，在國內外形勢已經改變well.But我們仍然在努力工作的，特別是為那些無家可歸的人建造房屋和醫治受傷群眾。 現在我們可以做什麼？除了做好自己的工作做好，我們可以捐錢給them.We堅信，有黨和政府的堅強領導，有全國各族人民的援助國，這將是一個抗震救災的勝利！
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
在我們康明城市家庭平均收入從8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期間，平均家庭支出結構也發生了變化。這些圖形顯示了明顯的變化。 而一般家庭開支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每個家庭花費了其對房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，關於住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和飲料是平均家庭開支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大約18％的平均收入是用於這一項目。 2008年，這一數字增長到30％。由於在費用等增加住房和食物，結果在其他項目的費用已經減少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一個結論，隨著收入的增加，人們可以改善他們的生活步驟。但仍是一般家庭要花費很大一部分收入，以滿足基本需要。
⑦ 2006年高考滿分作文(廣東)<<自己就是天使>>的點評
[簡評]本文文題較為新穎，「自己就是天使」先聲奪人，題好一半文，題目給人留下很好的印象內，得高分也就在容情理之中了，此外，作者的構思也很新穎獨到，把「雕琢」理解為磨練成長，很好的切合了題意。第二人稱的敘述方式也顯得比較親切，拉近了與讀者之間的距離，比較容易引起讀者的共鳴。作者的語言功夫很深，在語句的把握上十分出色，表現力強。
⑧ 高考英語滿分作文大全
一
假設你叫王明，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的願望。
英語作文網
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
二
請你根據下面的提綱，以「我的家鄉」為題，寫一篇100—120字的短文。
提綱：
(1) 家鄉的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情況；
(3) 解放後的變化；
(4) 對家鄉的感情。
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
三
健康對於我們每個人來說是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙於工作而忽略了這個問題，你很為他們擔憂。請你以此為話題，並結合提示給他們寫一封信。
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是開車或坐車；
2.每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次，或打球、或游泳；
3.飲食要健康；
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：1.短文結構完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法准確，符合邏輯；
2.80—100詞左右；
3.開頭和結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health. I』m worried about your health all the time. I』d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn』t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You』d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What』s more, it』s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
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Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I』d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.
I』m looking forward to receiving your letter.
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
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隨著陽光體育運動在全國開展，政府對中學生身體素質有所下降這個問題給予了高度重視，提出了這樣的標語：「EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY」。同學們參加了各種體育鍛煉之後，校園里出現了可喜的變化，強身健體，增強了學習效果，校園生活豐富了。請你報道一下學校開展這一活動的情況。
注意：1. 詞數80—100左右。
2. 要求文章結構合理、內容通順、句子連貫。
參考詞彙：build up one』s body strength 強健身體
rece diseases 減少疾病
As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.
Let』s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and rece diseases.
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Doing sport builds up our body strength and reces diseases.
Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.
At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.
The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let』s keep on doing it.
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Career or Family: which is more important?
When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one』s life.
It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What』s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one』s life can become better and better. Therefore, it』s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.中國公務網 2006-5-28 11:34:59
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Olympics and I
Dear friend,
I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.
This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What』s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it』s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.
My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an indivial, I』m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
九
Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.
Facing this tendency, we can』t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people』s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What』s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
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What a disaster(災難)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.
What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
⑨ 2007~2010高考英語滿分作文 10篇（含題目）
北京卷
【試題回放】
第一節情景作文
假設你是李華，要給英國筆友Harry寫封信，介紹你班兩位同學競選班長的過程。請按下圖順序描述。
注意：
1.信的開頭已為你寫好；
2.詞數不少於60。
提示詞：競選班長monitor election
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
第二節開放作文
請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數不少於50。
In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
【滿分範文】
第一節情景作文
滿分文(一)
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between two students really. First, the two candidates, Liu Dong and Wang Hong, gave their election speeches respectively. Then other students wrote a name of the candidate on paper and put it into a box. The teacher counted the number of pieces of paper voting for the two candidates fairly. Finally, Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. So Wang Hong became our monitor. It was an interesting election, isn